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The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Summarize the information - 7 stages involved

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Why I want to become an anesthesiologist assistant

2 - Do you have an underlying condition that requires you to have regular check ups? Is this one of...

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'How does this affect Lebron's legacy' - National Merit Essay: Influential Person

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Present your ideas about what you should or shouldn't do to live green

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Commonwealth Development Impact Statement Part 1 - journalism challenges

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My academic journey - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay

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Writing task 1 Ielts: young people's expectations for change in five different areas

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The percentage of time adults spent on different activities in a country in 1958 and 2008

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Artist Statement - SAIC (School of the Art Institute of chicago)

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The charts show the percentage of electricity consumed by different sectors in Eastern Australia

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Reasons why friendship is gradually dying

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Global warming is one of the biggest threaten to our environment. Cause and solution ?

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Goverment should prioritize heathcare instead of orther areas. Do you agree or disagree?

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Construct stadium beneficial or not? IELTS Writting Task 2

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Video Game Essay for English 108

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WRITE A SHORT PARAGRAPH (100-120 WORDS) ABOUT HOW TO KEEP FIT AND STAY HEALTHY.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives.

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Dicussion between putting some strict controls about noise and making as much noise as possible

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Martial arts - supplemental essay on Jiu Jitsu - UNC

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My Father and the Gym - undergraduate admissions

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UndergraduateAryking - Sep 27, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
What is the advantages and disadvantages of using public transport?

2 - Seeing as this is a task 2 essay, you should not be coming to any conclusions or offering any...

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Some people feel that advertising has negative effects on our society

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"From Adversity to Aspiration: My Journey of Passion, Determination, and Cultural Bridging" - GKS

2 - You make a convincing case in this essay except for where your passion to study in Korea comes from....

Scholarshipyetung - Sep 27, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: LOOK AFTER ONE'S HEALTH FOR PERSONAL OR SOCIAL BENEFITS

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Week-long bursts of passion - my Questbridge personal essay

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Town in Sudan - How have the influences in your life shaped you?

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Graduatelokudu - Sep 26, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] GETTING OLD IN THE MODERN WORLD

2 - [quote=cangusocduaaa]This essay shall conduct a thorough assessment of both viewpoints so that a reasoned conclusion can be drawn.[/quoteWhile you...

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[WRITING TASK 1] Percentage of passing driving license of males and females in an Asian nation

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AN ESSAY ABOUT THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF LIVING IN THE MODERN WORLD

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Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination

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