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IELTS 2: In some nations, citizens favor purchasing a home over renting property for some reasons

2 - Your first paragraph did not accomplish the task of providing a proper discussion overview for the reader. You also...

Writing Feedbackphoebecrazyyy - Jun 14, 2023Holt - Jun 17, 2023
Rising fuel prices as the ideal response to global environmental issues.

2 - While the prompt restatement is accurate, the writer failed to properly address the question as provided. To what extent...

Writing Feedbackshiroia - Jun 14, 2023Holt - Jun 17, 2023
It it easier to have a healthier lifestyle in the countryside.

2 - Task 2 essays do not require the writer to present a time reference in any writing portion. That is...

Writing Feedbackqueenannez - Jun 13, 2023Holt - Jun 17, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - RISKS-TAKING (the advantages of taking risks overweigh the disadvantages?)

2 - The prompt restatement is problematic in the sense that while it does reference fear, it does not accurately represent...

Writing Feedbackkhangdo1712 - Jun 13, 2023Holt - Jun 17, 2023
Children should mix? - IELTS Writing Task 2

3 - There are some noteworthy grammar errors in your essay: "specialities" --> "specialties", "the divergent of" --> "the divergence of"....

Writing FeedbackLeHoa - Jun 11, 2023chloemarles - Jun 16, 2023
WRITING IELTS TASK 2: POSIVITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT OF TECHNOLOGY ON VIRTUAL CLASS AND OFFICE

3 - **Some grammar errors: - techonological development. --> technological - First, virtual working and studying is --> are (because "working...

Writing FeedbackTien Pham - Jun 10, 2023chloemarles - Jun 16, 2023
WRITING TASK 1 The average proportions of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in meals

3 - You must not express your opinion, just report that. (like in intro) In the overview, you should emphasize biggest...

Writing Feedbackcatu155 - Jun 12, 2023thg080206 - Jun 16, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - TEACHERS' ROLE IN BEHAVIOUR OF STUDENTS

2 - While your prompt restatement may be deemed acceptable, it will be receiving point deductions for your last sentence where...

Writing Feedbackchloemarles - Jun 13, 2023Holt - Jun 16, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 2 - REDUCING CRIME RATE

2 - When writing this a response to this type of question, you should avoid doing 2 things: 1. Using a...

Writing Feedbackphgahh - Jun 12, 2023Holt - Jun 16, 2023
Discuss "Globalization: a positive or negative development?"

2 - The original prompt for this essay asks you to remind the public of the negative aspects of globalization. Therefore,...

Writing Feedbackthekaryn13 - Jun 12, 2023Holt - Jun 16, 2023
The use of social media is replacing face-to-face contact for many people

2 - Avoid generalized opinions. This will not receive a good score because you are avoiding a direct response to...

Writing FeedbackNguyen Duy - Jun 11, 2023Holt - Jun 15, 2023
Should governments make tuition free for all students no matter what financial background they have?

2 - The first 2 sentences of the restatement is not related to the given discussion. Points will be deducted due...

Writing FeedbackLmaominh - Jun 10, 2023Holt - Jun 15, 2023
IELTS TASK 2 ON OVERWEIGHT PEOPLE AND ROLE OF PHYSICAL EDUCATION TO TACKLE THE OBESITY PROBLEM

3 - There are some spelling and grammatical mistakes that I noticed: overweight people increasing in number leads => lead (...

Writing Feedbackanialee - Jun 6, 2023phoebecrazyyy - Jun 14, 2023
The obesity among children is becoming an alarming issue in a lot of regions

3 - There are some spelling and grammatical mistakes that I noticed: Recent evident => evidence This essay serve => serves...

Writing Feedbacktragiang060699 - Jun 9, 2023phoebecrazyyy - Jun 14, 2023
Task 2 IELTS: The argument between fixed and individualized punishments. Discuss and give opinion.

2 - Avoid exaggerating the discussion focus in your restatement. You do not need to over emphasize what should only be...

Writing Feedbackyuesheng - Jun 9, 2023Holt - Jun 10, 2023
Many children are opting for technology as a way to relax in their spare time

2 - Your opinion is clear to the examiner. Now what he needs to read are the reasons why you...

Writing Feedbackscarlets - Jun 9, 2023Holt - Jun 10, 2023
The percentage of household with cars in one European coutry between 1971 and 2001

2 - You are using long sentences for reporting the information, but that does not equate to a proper analysis of...

Writing Feedbackmthu - Jun 9, 2023Holt - Jun 10, 2023
IELTS TASK 2 ON equality for women in work

3 - the essay sadly quite short and may result in failing score, you should add 1,2 examples in 2 paragraph...

Writing Feedbackjudy65996 - May 29, 2023chanhthi1506 - Jun 9, 2023
Some people think that when criminals are punished, they will not commit crimes

5 - Your essay quite hard to read due to punctuation and many wrong sentences structure. I think you should check...

Writing FeedbackElenaDiem - May 30, 2023chanhthi1506 - Jun 9, 2023
IELTS Task 2 - University education and attendance to the classes question - optional or mandatory?

3 - Hi @KimieKP You should have 4 paragraphs in your essay. First paragraph is often used to rephrase the question...

Writing FeedbackKimieKP - Jun 7, 2023selenakieu - Jun 8, 2023
WRITING TASK 2: What can be done to encourage exercising in the elderly?

2 - A properly written 40 minute essay should contain no more than 300 words. By writing almost 400 words, you...

Writing Feedbackselenakieu - Jun 8, 2023Holt - Jun 8, 2023
IELTS task 2: What is better for children - life in one place or changing home frequently?

2 - The prompt restatement is quick and to the point. However, the establishing discussion facts, based on the advantage and...

Writing Feedbackchanhthi1506 - Jun 8, 2023Holt - Jun 8, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 2 essay-Advantages and disadvantages of global communication

2 - The essay is over written, not necessarily over-discussed. The length of the essay will not assure it of a...

Writing FeedbackAntherRR - Jun 7, 2023Holt - Jun 8, 2023
Sports sponsorship has become a popular marketing tool used by several corporations

3 - @Holt Thank you for your advices, Sir!!! Sincerely,...

Writing Feedbackhuydeptrai - Jun 6, 2023huydeptrai - Jun 8, 2023
Writing task 1: the proportion of revanue made from seven most popular kind of movies in US cinema

3 - Can you elaborate further on how can I write a more original summary next time?...

Writing FeedbackNgoc Dak - Jun 6, 2023Ngoc Dak - Jun 7, 2023
People should adhere the conventional standards when beginning to live in a new country

2 - The topic restatement will receive a failing score. It has misrepresented the original discussion by creating a controversy where...

Writing Feedbacktthnganh - Jun 6, 2023Holt - Jun 7, 2023
Essay about contacting with intelligent life forms on the other planets

3 - I think you need to state your opinion in the introduction before getting into the body paragraphs. That would...

Writing FeedbackPhuongTrinh - Jun 4, 2023anialee - Jun 6, 2023
Be friends with ex, agree or disagree

3 - I think you did not add in more ideas after the word "First" used to make a sequence, which...

Writing Feedbackthaiha20 - Jun 5, 2023anialee - Jun 6, 2023
Language translation platforms popularity - is learning foreign language still necessary?

2 - Do not explain things below. Your writer's opinion is incomplete as it does not provide the simple reason...

Writing Feedbackhyl - Jun 5, 2023Holt - Jun 6, 2023
The proportion of unemployed persons in England from 1993 to 2012

2 - The trending statement has 2 problems: 1. The writer used actual data for the presentation rather than an estimated...

Writing Feedbackkunnn_1 - Jun 4, 2023Holt - Jun 5, 2023
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