Abrahamlincoln
Oct 28, 2016
Writing Feedback / David Christian ask every audience with one question: How does the Universe make complexity? [3]
Hello Brothers
Let me give you some advices
David Christian asked every audience with one...
... when nothing existsed and suddenly (...) which was small as atom appeared and expanding very quickly.
Overall, you wrote perfectly. However, i think you should try to use variation of grammar on your writing.
good luck
Hello Brothers
Let me give you some advices
David Christian asked every audience with one...
... when nothing exist
Overall, you wrote perfectly. However, i think you should try to use variation of grammar on your writing.
good luck