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[IELTS Writing Task 2] Growing concensus on banning children usage of phones in schools

2 - What did you do in the prompt restatement? You changed the discussion foundation so much, the topic you present...

Writing Feedbacktienhao123 - Dec 6, 2021Holt - Dec 7, 2021
The advantages of English spreading as a global language will continue overweight the disadvantages.

2 - There is no reference to dual opinions regarding the topic in the original prompt. The fact that you...

Writing Feedbackdao nhu quynh - Dec 6, 2021Holt - Dec 6, 2021
A concept I find so engaging that I lose all track of time. Who I turn to when I need help.

2 - Science is the all encompassing systematic study of an area of interest based on research and experimentation. It is...

UndergraduateAryan_DT - Dec 6, 2021Holt - Dec 6, 2021
Ielts 1 - The total of British home and overseas scholars learning Computer Science at an University

3 - @Holt thanks for the feedback, and what is your email so I can privately know my score? @Holt...

Writing FeedbackSonny Tran - Dec 5, 2021Sonny Tran - Dec 6, 2021
The Best Version of Me - NTU UNDERGRADUATE

4 - @Holt Oh thank you sir for your response. My apologies, for posting the thread without any prompt. The prompt...

UndergraduateKielChan - Dec 5, 2021KielChan - Dec 7, 2021
Pharmacy (Medicinal Chemistry) - Personal Statement

2 - When you write a personal statement, do not focus on your academic background and community leadership. The personal statement,...

Graduatewhh123 - Dec 5, 2021Holt - Dec 6, 2021
Does the Earth Melt? The pervasive ramification of climate change

2 - There is something missing in the reference point of the first paragraph. It does not make any sense....

Writing Feedbackedsielbernados - Dec 5, 2021Holt - Dec 5, 2021
International sports events - good or bad? - IELTS Writing Task 2

2 - The prompt restatement+opinion is totally incorrect. You failed to restate both public opinions in individual sentences, then offer your...

Writing Feedbacktcheung - Dec 5, 2021Holt - Dec 5, 2021
MSc Data Science UK - Personal Statement; What makes me an excellent candidate for this program?

3 - I agree with @holt that the entire middle part of the first paragraph needs to be removed....

Graduateshellhead - Dec 4, 2021Mehul07 - Dec 10, 2021
LoM - Argument of an engineering student applying for masters in global development policy - EMJMD

2 - Sadly, you have not developed a compelling argument because your presentation takes on a personal statement direction rather than...

GraduateSSS2022 - Dec 4, 2021Holt - Dec 5, 2021
Sharing my passion for food with others. UBC personal profile "What is important to you?"

3 - I love the food part. However, considering that this is part of a larger application that I am sure...

Undergraduatedavinnuhh - Dec 4, 2021SSS2022 - Dec 6, 2021
IELTS TASK 2: Open plan office no walls, no barriers. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

2 - You cannot use a rhetorical question to represent the restatement of the original prompt. Use a direct statement...

Writing Feedbackhaigomenasai - Dec 4, 2021Holt - Dec 4, 2021
'The acquisition of knowledge is a never-ending process' - Motivation letter for Neurasmus

3 - @Holt Thanks for your input! Will make adjustments to my motivation statement....

Lettersrbcandres - Dec 4, 2021rbcandres - Dec 4, 2021
Writing IELTS Task 2: The importance of History vs Science and Technology in school

3 - @Holt Thank you so much!!...

Writing FeedbackSolarni Nguyen - Dec 4, 2021Solarni Nguyen - Dec 4, 2021
[NEED REVIEW] "I find Data Science fascinating" - Statement of Purpose for Master of Data Science

2 - What a lovely personal statement. Too bad it failed to contain any actual reference to the purpose for your...

GraduateKavan14 - Dec 3, 2021Holt - Dec 4, 2021
Enhancing my skills - What is important to me - UBC application

2 - I understand that you are motivated by success because you stated that directly. The problem, is that you are...

Undergraduatetoastedbread7533 - Dec 3, 2021Holt - Dec 4, 2021
Writing task 1 about the percentage of people's coffee & tea drinking habits in 5 Australian cities

2 - The column chart. Help the reader get an idea as to how the measurements are presented in the...

Writing Feedbackminhoang855 - Dec 3, 2021Holt - Dec 4, 2021
Why are you applying to UW Madison and why are you interested in studying the major?

2 - This essay only focuses on the prompt requirement starting from paragraph 5-9. The complete first half of the presentation...

Undergraduategolspants - Dec 2, 2021Holt - Dec 3, 2021
From my point of view, i firmly believe that the merits of Internet far outweight its drawbacks

2 - Okay, you have presented the discussion based on general observations of the given topic. Acceptable, but could have been...

Writing Feedbackpromesus - Dec 2, 2021Holt - Dec 3, 2021
AUSTRALIA - DESTINATION FOR THE JOBSEEKERS

2 - While this reference does indicate the number of years covered by the measurement, it does not accurately portray...

Writing Feedbackdodoyt - Dec 2, 2021Holt - Dec 3, 2021
TASK 2: More and more students choose to study abroad to have a better education and environment

2 - When I give a student advice in an essay to help improve his writing abilities and scoring potential in...

Writing Feedbacknhidinh1231 - Dec 2, 2021Holt - Dec 2, 2021
Task 2: The idea of whether or not to accept the social convention of a host country

3 - It is great since I have found a set of synonyms in your essay. You are good at word...

Writing Feedbackhienpham123456 - Dec 2, 2021nhidinh1231 - Dec 2, 2021
[Need Review] Statement of Purpose - MS in Artificial Intelligence and Data Science (Summer 2022)

2 - Your statement of purpose feels over extended and needs to be whittled down to only 750-1000 words. It tends...

GraduateVJain - Dec 2, 2021Holt - Dec 2, 2021
Ielts writing: Why is global warming a problem? How can reduce the dangers of global warming?

2 - You understood the question, but cast too wide a net in terms of discussion topics. In fact, the discussion...

Writing FeedbackMeilsn8804 - Dec 1, 2021Holt - Dec 2, 2021
Task 1: The maps elaborate on the layout moderations of an art gallery's ground floor

2 - A user cannot dictate specific review requirements unless the user requests for private paid review services. Only general review...

Writing Feedbacknhidinh1231 - Dec 1, 2021Holt - Dec 1, 2021
CSC Development impact statement, How your proposed study relates to development issues

3 - @Holt Thank you for your sincere review....

ScholarshipFamous125 - Dec 1, 2021Famous125 - Dec 1, 2021
It's precisely what I was looking for; europubhealth+ scholarship motivation letter

3 - As ellaborate as it seems, I think you fail to mention most of those thing that have motivated you...

Scholarshipkk12 - Dec 1, 2021Famous125 - Dec 2, 2021
UBC - what my family, friends, and community think of me? A person who they know they can count on.

2 - You are right about the story removing the focus of your statement from the prompt requirements. Actually, the reviewer...

Undergraduatemjanders - Dec 1, 2021Holt - Dec 1, 2021
UGRAD to enrich my skills in communicating, leading people, motivating, and building relationships

2 - This is a good and simple personal statement, but it is not one that follows the Global UGrad guidelines....

Scholarshipgustiayumei - Dec 1, 2021Holt - Dec 1, 2021
Essay about the argument of TV purpose, for entertaining or education and information

4 - When students start looking for help on the Internet. They end up on a lot of writing services. But...

Writing FeedbackKhoahoctunhien - Nov 30, 2021Liana2021 - Dec 7, 2021
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