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[WRITING TASK 2] MOST COUNTRIES WANT TO IMPROVE THE STANDARD OF LIVING THROUGH ECONOMIC DEVELOPMENT

2 - Avoid making claims of truth in a Task 2 essay. That is because there are 2 opposing opinions constantly...

Writing Feedbackkiwisummer - Jun 29, 2021Holt - Jun 30, 2021
Turning Points in My Life - GKS Undergraduate Personal Statement

2 - The scholarship application and appropriate written interview requirements will not be available until September - October. The information requirements...

Scholarshipukh_nisa - Jun 29, 2021Holt - Jun 30, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - registrations of trucks, taxis, and buses in the US between 1970 and 2010

2 - We do not access images that are not located on our seiner due to software and security concerns. As...

Writing Feedbackjiminswife - Jun 29, 2021Holt - Jun 30, 2021
"Is he going to be a theater major?" - Common App Personal Essay

3 - In my opinion, this makes a great essay. However, the quick cut-off to the point that you don't want...

UndergraduateDexterity - Jun 28, 2021techmind20 - Jun 29, 2021
Scholarship application essay for a Masters in Global Health Sc and Epidemiology

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback....

Scholarshipketu2 - Jun 28, 2021ketu2 - Jun 30, 2021
Internet has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated

2 - The writer should not be arguing in this essay as the writing instruction is only asking for an opinion....

Writing Feedbackmina123 - Jun 28, 2021Holt - Jun 29, 2021
[IELTS 1] The graphs show the differences between enrolments of overseas students and local students

3 - In the first line, you should paraphrase the key words and express the information more flexibly. You can replace...

Writing Feedbackcountryno81 - Jun 28, 2021Penelopee - Jul 1, 2021
Entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money for their job

2 - The writer has several spelling (e.g. develelopment= development) and word reference (e.g. with a nation = within a nation)...

Writing Feedbackkhanhlinhhh2000 - Jun 28, 2021Holt - Jun 29, 2021
IELTS TASK 2: Individual sports or team sports is more beneficial? Discuss and give your opinions

2 - The prompt restatement is good but lacking one representative discussion. The writer should not have used a general reference...

Writing Feedbacknancy8510 - Jun 28, 2021Holt - Jun 29, 2021
Driving to shop in large urban malls instead of driving to small town-center retailers

2 - The essay will automatically receive a failing score because of 2 reasons: - Prompt deviation - Response is unrelated...

Writing Feedbacksforz2004 - Jun 28, 2021Holt - Jun 29, 2021
People tend to work and study from home due to the advancements of computer technology

2 - The writer did a very strong representation of the discussion topics. The clear - that created the discussion outline...

Writing FeedbackKainie - Jun 28, 2021Holt - Jun 29, 2021
Essay about Space exploration and arguments about it

2 - The first sentence of the just sentence is nothing more than an excercise in incorrect vocabulary usage and, incoherent...

Writing FeedbackEndy1002 - Jun 28, 2021Holt - Jun 29, 2021
Statement of purpose for Data science course - graduate application

2 - The overall essay is not meant as a statement of purpose. This writing, showing the development of the student's...

Graduateashik_123 - Jun 28, 2021Holt - Jun 29, 2021
IELTS 2 - youngsters are devoting too much time to keep up with the latest fashion trends

2 - This essay does not accurately follow the prompt requirements as the student obviously changed the writing direction to one...

Writing Feedbackhanhngan0907 - Jun 28, 2021Holt - Jun 29, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2_HISTORY OF A HOUSE THAT PEOPLE LIVE IN

3 - Thank you for your comment, I just want to ask you for more detail about the meaning of LR,...

Writing FeedbackSamt Lee - Jun 27, 2021Samt Lee - Jun 29, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Opinion Essay (job gratification vs. job security)

3 - The question requires you to discuss both views and give your opinion. As far as I can tell, you...

Writing Feedbacktrongtin611 - Jun 27, 2021countryno81 - Jun 28, 2021
Information about the percentage of four groups in the total population of New Zealand

4 - Dear nVy1104, Although I am not sure how this will be graded, I felt lost during some portions...

Writing FeedbacknVy1104 - Jun 27, 2021Dexterity - Jun 28, 2021
Starvation still occurs in some of the countries around the world. Why and solutions.

2 - The prompt restatement retains too much of the original discussion keywords for it to be considered the c interpretation...

Writing Feedbackxiaoyuaini - Jun 27, 2021Holt - Jun 28, 2021
IELTS TASK2 Essay about main purpose of school and university

3 - I appreciate the idea of your essay. It's very clear that i can follow your train of thought .However,...

Writing Feedbackmina123 - Jun 27, 2021adelaide1119 - Jun 28, 2021
Some people prefer to help or support directly in the local community for people who need it.

2 - There are 2 methods of charitable help identified in the original statement. Yet, only 1 method is identified in...

Writing FeedbackHuyenNgocThuy - Jun 27, 2021Holt - Jun 28, 2021
Life in Poverty - Personal statement for BBA GKS.

2 - There is too much focus on the family background and parental information. The essay limits its personal motivation in...

UndergraduateSyra - Jun 26, 2021Holt - Jun 27, 2021
People try new dangerous sports such as sky-diving or rock climbing. Should such sports be banned?

4 - In my opinion, you should spend more time on proofreading as there have been some apparent flaws. - first...

Writing FeedbackPassion - Jun 26, 2021uwu_kinn - Jun 27, 2021
IELTS 2 - can prison solve crimes? Crime & education.

3 - @Holt Thanks for the comment and clarification of this topic. The word "online teacher" used here may have caused...

Writing Feedbackkingsleywwj - Jun 26, 2021kingsleywwj - Jun 27, 2021
Ielts Task 1: Causes of worldwide land degradation (over-grazing, deforestation, over-cultivation)

2 - The writer has an incomplete image identification in the sense that the table chart was acknowledged merely as "the...

Writing Feedbackadelaide1119 - Jun 26, 2021Holt - Jun 27, 2021
"The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools." How far do you agree on this?

2 - There is an over writing on the part of the writer who has focused not on the clarity of...

Writing FeedbackChelseamymy - Jun 26, 2021Holt - Jun 27, 2021
The charts illustrate the surveying results of adult schooling. UC prompt

2 - Both images need to be properly identified in the summary paragraph. The first image was properly identified while the...

Writing FeedbackJoy1009 - Jun 26, 2021Holt - Jun 27, 2021
IELTS TASK2: Problem and Solution: ATTENTION IN CLASS

5 - Dear Mya223, Although I have no experience with the IELTS, I do have some feedback. 1. You...

Writing Feedbackmya223 - Jun 26, 2021Dexterity - Jun 28, 2021
IN THE FUTURE, WE WILL HAVE MORE LEISURE TIME AS MACHINE REPLACE MANY OF OUR TASKS.

2 - In the first paragraph, the writer created a mun on first sentence by combining 2 unrelated thoughts in one...

Writing Feedbacklethuydung123 - Jun 26, 2021Holt - Jun 26, 2021
Community service for students, in their free time, should be mandatory

2 - The essay does not meet the discussion requirements as implied in the original presentation. . Based on the topic...

Writing FeedbackATTV - Jun 25, 2021Holt - Jun 26, 2021
Advantages and disadvantages of young people volunteering in community activities

2 - The essay cannot recieve a passing score due to word count issues. The presentation is only 234/250 words. Essays...

Writing Feedbacklinhlk0607 - Jun 25, 2021Holt - Jun 26, 2021
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