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Most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. Problems and solution

3 - Your prompt paraphrase is incomplete and lacking one sentence to complete a paragraph. You have not indicated the discussion...

Writing Feedbackaprilmk - Feb 16, 2020Holt - Feb 17, 2020
"Positivity is second to none" - NTU Scholarship essay

3 - @Holt Thanks for the feedback. To clarify, my response to the prompt is based on positivity as a value...

Scholarshipcarcrzy_adhi_123 - Feb 16, 2020carcrzy_adhi_123 - Feb 17, 2020
Ielts Writing Task 1: the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester

3 - To me, you should replace spend most hours for on watching; - had climbing --> climbed as this activity...

Writing FeedbackNguyet Tran - Feb 16, 2020aprilmk - Feb 16, 2020
WRITING TASK 1 - number of graduates of different gender in Canada

4 - "Tree years later" --> I think you missed the typing, it should be "three years later" And again, you...

Writing Feedbackshinxg - Feb 16, 2020Nguyet Tran - Feb 20, 2020
Email to Penpal Friend form Singapore about the studying of English

3 - @Holt Hello Mr Hold, thank you for your presious advice. I will take note all of your comments and...

LettersIAMROSE - Feb 16, 2020IAMROSE - Feb 16, 2020
Writing Task 2 - Education - Higher Education - Both Views

4 - Hi @Holt and @shinxg, Thank you very much for your feedback and comments, which help me so much....

Writing Feedbacktimmy88 - Feb 16, 2020timmy88 - Feb 17, 2020
Tell us about a concept, theory, or topic you have explored. Questbridge Prompt (200 words)

2 - Your response lacks a key element in your presentation. How do you plan to further pursue this concept, theory,...

ScholarshipDubemikael - Feb 15, 2020Holt - Feb 16, 2020
The Disciples of Christ Church - Chapman Personal TRANSFER essay

2 - I believe that you misunderstood the instruction for the discussion. It is not asking you for your path throughout...

Undergraduateaanselmostudent - Feb 15, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
IELTS Writing task 2: High consumption of soft beverages - reasons and solutions

3 - Some grammatical mistakes that you could fix: ... essential part OF ... ... in THE competitive market...

Writing Feedbackduongthao - Feb 15, 2020Gaucho - Feb 16, 2020
The computer provides us with convenience and eliminates manual work

3 - @Holt Thanks for your advice. I will try a mixture of singular and plural ownership pronouns in later writing....

Writing Feedbackshinxg - Feb 15, 2020shinxg - Feb 16, 2020
Crime in two countries comparison. REVIEW MY IELTS WRITING OF LINE GRAPH

2 - Remember to use a space bar to separate a period at the end of a sentence, before you start...

Writing Feedbackbeckycyy - Feb 15, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
What are the causes and effects of global warming? Suggest some possible solutions to this problem.

2 - I will assume that this was written as an English writing exercise and that you were allowed to research...

Writing Feedbackstella52 - Feb 15, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
Describe a film/movie you would like to share with your friends

2 - Spoiler Alert! You were being asked to do a movie review, without telling the whole story of the movie....

Writing Feedbackson2409 - Feb 15, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
My reason for choosing the data science and CFM majors at Waterloo University

2 - Try to open the statement with the factual presentation that you were attracted to the Waterloo curriculum and courses...

Undergraduatealice725 - Feb 15, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
IELTS task 2 - adolescents have to take part in campaigns to contribute to the community

2 - As you only wrote 223 words for this essay, it will be futile for me to review your work....

Writing Feedbackminnadoan - Feb 15, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
Review My Personal Statement For a Master Degree In Data Science at Columbia University

3 - @Holt Thank you for your valuable feedback! I do realize that the Essay was pretty lengthy, I just...

Graduatetangc2 - Feb 14, 2020tangc2 - Feb 15, 2020
Double Degree in France (Motivation Letter)

3 - Actually, I need to know what the double degree you plan to pursue in France is before I can...

Lettersker - Feb 14, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
NTU Scholarship essay - event that have personal importance. The National Service

2 - It would be better if you presented the experience through a transitional phase outlook on your life. By that,...

Scholarshippongjingyang - Feb 14, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
Fulbright essay personal statement - the fight against cyber criminality.

2 - This is not a very strong personal statement for one of the most important scholarships in the world. You...

Scholarshipschulschenko - Feb 14, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
Review my Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Master's In Biomedical Imaging

2 - The letter has committed a major crime. You must never use all caps and parenthesis in your presentation. In...

Lettersdpk111092 - Feb 14, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
Study Plan - applying for a Canadian study permit - letter of explanation

2 - At this point, since you already have two degrees to speak of, you need to provide a solid career...

LettersV184ht - Feb 14, 2020Holt - Feb 14, 2020
English teacher and determination -PTDF UK scholarship: scholarship with this statement of purpose.

3 - @Holt Thank you very much sir. Will redraft the essay, per your suggestions, and post again....

ScholarshipNayaya - Feb 13, 2020Nayaya - Feb 14, 2020
IELTS TASK2 About Spending money on construction of new transportation or improving old systems

2 - This was never an agree/disagree essay prompt. Why did you discuss it that way? The prompt discussion instruction is...

Writing FeedbackRaeeeee - Feb 13, 2020Holt - Feb 14, 2020
Ielts Task 1: Gross Domestic Product including IT and Service industries in the UK from 1992 to 2000

4 - @Holt: Thank you so much for your valuable feedback. I am working on it, that's exactly what I am...

Writing FeedbackNguyet Tran - Feb 13, 2020Nguyet Tran - Feb 14, 2020
Study plan for scholarship undergraduate Program. Business Administration majors

3 - Hi there! It's great to find someone who's applying for the same scholarship as I am. I hope I'll...

ScholarshipRifqi_ismail - Feb 13, 2020alyssa2036 - Feb 14, 2020
What is your main reason to study media and communication? Bachelor Degree

2 - Okay, The first paragraph is a throw away. That means, all it is doing is taking up space in...

Undergraduatehatdenhoxxx - Feb 13, 2020Holt - Feb 14, 2020
Review my SOP for my application to German university in Computational Engineering.

3 - @Holt Thank you for reviewing my essay and your suggestions. Will make necessary changes....

Graduatesankeerthgn - Feb 13, 2020sankeerthgn - Feb 13, 2020
[IELTS TASK 2] About success: Some people are born with talents, however some are taught

5 - You should not add your personal feelings (Example: I greatly admire Messi) in your essays. Try to avoid informal...

Writing Feedbackdienrol - Feb 13, 2020lildaisy - Feb 13, 2020
How you can apply the knowledge and experience gained from your study time in Sweden?

3 - @Holt Thanks so much. I will revise it right away, but the difficulty is cutting it down to one...

Scholarshipeyes - Feb 13, 2020eyes - Feb 14, 2020
Computer technology vs Maintaining public libraries

4 - Some grammatical and spelling improvements: - In the modern life... - ... important part IN our lives. -...

Writing FeedbackDaisyhanoi09 - Feb 13, 2020Gaucho - Feb 17, 2020
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