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General Training - Task 2 - Type: Agree or Disagree - Subject: television, laziness, socialisation

3 - @Holt Thank very much for your feedback, I appreciated it. I will use your suggestions to improve my next...

Writing FeedbackGaucho - Feb 9, 2020Gaucho - Feb 9, 2020
Review My Letter of Motivation for Masters in Finance and Economics in Germany

2 - I believe that paragraphs 4 and 5 have the most required information for a letter of motivation. However, both...

Graduateanjumnavid - Feb 8, 2020Holt - Feb 9, 2020
Global Korea Scholarship - Personal Statement. Medical Doctor.

2 - The essay can be made stronger. Your motivation to pursue this line of study is clear. However, you do...

Scholarshipsheila_lala - Feb 8, 2020Holt - Feb 9, 2020
SOP for MS in Industrial Engineering; to make connections within the field and ultimately land a job

4 - As the major you're applying isn't in line with your undergraduate major (ME -> Industrial Eng), you need to...

GraduateAvenger214 - Feb 8, 2020Ulaai - Feb 10, 2020
Computers are regarded as the most influential invention of the last century

3 - The whole discussion does not follow the required parameters of the original topic. I am not sure why you...

Writing Feedbackdieuthaonguyen - Feb 8, 2020Holt - Feb 9, 2020
(IELTS WRITING TASK 2) Population aging: effects and solutions

3 - This is a task 2 essay. That means the first paragraph should be a paraphrase or restatement of the...

Writing Feedbacktuanhnguyen2611 - Feb 8, 2020Holt - Feb 9, 2020
Ielts task 2. In recent years, people are likely to live alone instead of starting a family

5 - You should replace affect=impact And positive= benefits Negative=drawbacks...

Writing FeedbackMai Nhu Y - Feb 8, 2020corn - Feb 12, 2020
Masters is Security and Information Assurance at KFUPM - Statement of Purpose

3 - Please write a totally new statement of purpose. What you have written above is an autobiography of your academic...

Scholarshipmhxlmx - Feb 7, 2020Holt - Feb 8, 2020
Global Korean Scholarship Study Plan for Improve Language to reach my goals

2 - While your expertise in English writing is probably just as bad as your Hangul at this point, I can...

Scholarshipkarenntz_1097 - Feb 7, 2020Holt - Feb 7, 2020
Eating vegetarian of Vietnamese people

3 - @Holt thank you so much!...

Writing FeedbackBig Boss - Feb 7, 2020Big Boss - Feb 7, 2020
Countries should try to produce all the food for the population and imports

2 - Based on the original prompt for this discussion, it appears that you have cut and paste some references from...

Writing FeedbackEveIssabelle - Feb 6, 2020Holt - Feb 7, 2020
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE OPINION

2 - You are still confused as to how to approach the public point of view with personal opinion essay. The...

Writing Feedbackthanhthanh96 - Feb 6, 2020Holt - Feb 7, 2020
A survey related to studying the purpose of adults and the distribution in their academic cost

3 - Thanks, I really appreciate that....

Writing FeedbackSteve Nguyen - Feb 6, 2020Steve Nguyen - Feb 8, 2020
Scholarship in a center for talented-student of Vinschool school (Vietnam)

2 - I am not sure what question you are trying to respond to with this personal statement. I wish you...

Scholarshiplebaothubn - Feb 5, 2020Holt - Feb 6, 2020
Global Korea Scholarship GKS 2020 - Master of Business Administration - Personal Statement

2 - The only part of this essay that you can use is the reference to the preparations you have made...

Scholarshipbecca9896 - Feb 5, 2020Holt - Feb 6, 2020
Bioinformatics personal statement for graduate school

2 - It sounds confusing, self-defeating, and illogical. The presentation needs a lot of work. Since the course you want to...

Graduateqguo551 - Feb 5, 2020Holt - Feb 6, 2020
Cost of living is rising. Effects and solutions?

3 - foods resources is are becoming scarcely -> you should get rid of "is". I agree with @Holt, you...

Writing Feedbackaprilmk - Feb 5, 2020emailbr - Feb 6, 2020
It is right that university graduates should earn more money than less well educated people

3 - Being a degree discussion essay, your paraphrase will be seen as lacking in addressing the task requirement. You cannot...

Writing Feedbackparviz - Feb 5, 2020Holt - Feb 6, 2020
The comparison on how much the petroleum was produced and consumed in 7 areas in the year of 2002

5 - Thank you for your feedback....

Writing FeedbackEveGreen - Feb 5, 2020EveGreen - Feb 5, 2020
U of T Engineering Supplementary Essay - extracurriculars and developed skills

2 - You don't really need that long-winded introduction at the start. Your essay will be better helped, due to the...

Graduateyellowjello123 - Feb 5, 2020Holt - Feb 5, 2020
Essay Scholarship (NZAID) - Study Relevance

2 - Since you are applying for a scholarship, you need to be a bit more detailed when explaining the skills...

Scholarshipimgiselll - Feb 5, 2020Holt - Feb 5, 2020
Master of Economics - Scholarship statement on choosing the proposed course and institutions

2 - The choice of your proposed course is not very clear in this essay. You are discussing an academic interest...

ScholarshipBJ003 - Feb 5, 2020Holt - Feb 5, 2020
IELTS Writing task 1 - Pie chart about population rate

4 - @Samathan thank you Samathan...

Writing Feedbackthaolinh - Feb 4, 2020thaolinh - Feb 5, 2020
The distance between the rich and the poor is enlarging due to development of technology - Ielts 2

3 - Well, in your introduction, I think you mean the fast-moving of technology has created ? Anyway, come to your...

Writing Feedbackkylie luong - Feb 4, 2020Samathan - Feb 5, 2020
IELTS task 1- The places visited by different people living in Canada.

7 - @Holt Thank you so much. This assurance was so crucial to me. And now it is time to focus...

Writing FeedbackmywritingsTT - Feb 4, 2020mywritingsTT - Feb 6, 2020
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 TOTAL WORLD OIL RESOURCES AND CONSUMPTION

2 - The foremost concern I have with this essay is the fact that you did not bother to spellcheck your...

Writing Feedbackjohnle29 - Feb 4, 2020Holt - Feb 4, 2020
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. Give reasons and solutions

4 - One of the major mistakes that students make when writing these reason and solution essays is that they tend...

Writing Feedbackthanhthanh96 - Feb 4, 2020Holt - Feb 4, 2020
Erasmus Mundus Scholarship - Masters in Models and Methods of Quantitative Economics (QEM)

3 - Thank you for the critique. I actually did write the rest of the parts (parts B and C)...

GraduateIshtiaqurrahman - Feb 3, 2020Ishtiaqurrahman - Feb 4, 2020
Essay on the American identity and fast-food places with image analysis

2 - There are only 2 sections of this essay that I have a problem with. The first, is the introduction...

Writing Feedbackhlatif01 - Feb 3, 2020Holt - Feb 4, 2020
Peer Review Research paper titled: When are people more likely to dream?

2 - The first weakness that I see in this essay is the age of the literature being used. In order...

Research Paperstatalynese24 - Feb 3, 2020Holt - Feb 4, 2020
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