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Good ratings for five main fields of a college - IELTS essay

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Writing FeedbackNgo Dang Viet - May 4, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
Some think that the government should support retired people financially.

2 - This sort of essay requires you to present varied justifications in the reasoning paragraphs. You need to support your...

Writing FeedbackLearn2rite - May 3, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
Having emotions makes me human -

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Writing Feedbackkleo - May 3, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
IELTS QUESTION: People should only buy locally grown food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Writing FeedbackSakuradesu - May 3, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
agree or disagree with people have forgotten the meaning of tradition festivals

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Writing Feedbackjimmy2305 - May 3, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
I wish I could live in Alice's Wonderland

2 - do not use a movie reference in the essay. You should most specially avoid referencing a movie when you...

Undergraduateana03 - May 2, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
1.Talk about benefits for Viet Nam as a member of international organizations.

4 - You should correct some mistakes. "Joining in different international" -> "Joining different international", "WTO" -> "the WTO", "made easier...

Writing Feedbackhuongthu - May 2, 2024Rosecute2k10 - May 16, 2024
TASK 2: it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems

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Writing Feedbackngochuyen312 - May 2, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
All university students should do some voluntary work to help the local community

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Motivation Letter For Kazakhstan Government Scholarship

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Lettersraffyqurtuba - Apr 30, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
ielts writing essay about Should governments give more financial support to local film industries

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Writing Feedbackalieee - Apr 30, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
AAS Statement Purpose - I chose Master of Public Policy and Management

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Scholarshipaisen7725 - Apr 29, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
our contribution to air pollution

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Research PapersAmiles4508 - Apr 27, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
Family interventions are best when finding ways to help a child impacted by parental substance abuse

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Research Paperssammimhmrio - Apr 27, 2024Holt - May 3, 2024
Some people think that shopping has become easier because of modern technology

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Writing FeedbackCandyShays - Apr 27, 2024Holt - May 3, 2024
Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employee

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Writing FeedbackHuongdang - Apr 26, 2024Holt - May 3, 2024
Do you think people in your community are generally happy or unhappy?

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Writing FeedbackRozalin - Apr 25, 2024Sakuradesu - May 4, 2024
Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations.

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Writing Feedbackpnib - Apr 25, 2024Rosecute2k10 - May 16, 2024
Young people commit crimes should be treated same as adults by authorities. Agree or disagree

2 - The prompt restatement is highly confusing. It does not properly restate the original topic. It indicates a totally different...

Writing FeedbackAbby210 - Apr 25, 2024Holt - May 3, 2024
Newspapers are having enormous influence on people ideas and opinions. Why is this the case?

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Writing Feedbackthuylinh2310 - Apr 24, 2024Holt - May 3, 2024
Gks 2024/25 Politics and International Studies

2 - The story of your parents is touching. However, it is not clear how politics and international relations would have...

UndergraduateDamilola christ - Apr 24, 2024Holt - Apr 28, 2024
Waterloo Computer Engineering: Engineering Interests and goals

2 - The response is strong when it comes to your theoretical and academic foundation. However, that strength is weakened by...

Undergraduateakmaster101 - Apr 23, 2024Holt - Apr 28, 2024
GKS U 24/25 - Applying to PNU Business Administration via University Track

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Scholarshipsjkwr - Apr 23, 2024ana03 - May 2, 2024
Being able to communicate with others online is breaking down geographical barriers

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Writing Feedbacklucy8888 - Apr 23, 2024Holt - Apr 28, 2024
Challenges and barriers that you expect you may face in applyins skills and knowledge.

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ScholarshipLayson Manga - Apr 22, 2024Holt - Apr 28, 2024
An animal person - Why I apply for AAS essay

2 - You are applying for a non-undergraduate related course under AAS. Try to explain how a degree in agriculture will...

ScholarshipLayson Manga - Apr 22, 2024Holt - Apr 28, 2024
Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative?

3 - To improve the academic tone of your essay, the usage of pronouns like "we" should be avoided. You can...

Writing FeedbackHuyenle232 - Apr 22, 2024Sakuradesu - May 3, 2024
My proposed course and institution? - Bachelors of Law/BIT (AAS essay)

2 - Limit your response to 200 words maximum. The system will cut off your response at the 200 word count,...

ScholarshipNsimbi - Apr 22, 2024Holt - Apr 28, 2024
What skills should the teenagers have to face stress and pressure?

2 - The format of the essay is not properly presented even though it meets the word count requirement. I am...

Writing FeedbackLinhfgk - Apr 21, 2024Holt - Apr 28, 2024
Many people living in cities these days do not get enough physical exercise.

5 - The use of "..." to present a list of items is not standard in English. Instead, you could use...

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