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The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations.

2 - The essay is more than 300 words long, This could pose a problem during the actual test if you...

Writing Feedbackphanuyen2156 - Jan 8, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
My Electrical Engineering Motivational letter for Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - Remember that Hngaricum Stipendium is an international scholarship that hopes to have their graduates make a difference in their...

LettersAndern - Jan 8, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
data on expenditure on the needs of older people in Australia

2 - While the essay meets the appropriate number of words to be considered for high marks per scoring section, the...

Writing Feedbackahmad irfan - Jan 8, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
The miniEnterprize Youth Business Conference - UBC Sauder School of Business - Personal Profile

2 - I like the way you approached the discussion. I did not like that you avoided discussing what you learned...

Undergraduatestudent_88 - Jan 8, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Design: an art and a science - Personal statement for GKS-G scholarship

3 - Okay please. Will work on it...

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Financial support for poor countries

2 - I cannot expertly review this essay because you have not met the correct requirements for scoring. You need to...

Writing FeedbackPhammy architect - Jan 7, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Modern technology makes people less creative?

3 - @Holt thank you so much, but can you elaborate on more about anchor topics? i actually find this term...

Writing Feedbackwalk0nastarry9 - Jan 7, 2024walk0nastarry9 - Jan 13, 2024
IELTS what do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

3 - Your introduction is irrelevant to the topic - you are supposed to paraphase the topic in your own words,...

Writing Feedbacknguyendf - Jan 7, 2024Lyth - Jan 13, 2024
Personal Statement GKS Master Degree Civil Engineering - Embassy Track

2 - Your first paragraph is too busy. You compressed information that should be discussed at length using individual paragraphs. The...

Scholarshiphhksm - Jan 7, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
A personal life experience with the lessons and experience you gained from it; scholarship essay

2 - The first sentence needs to be revised. Clarify that you mean the environment of a person, a group situation,...

Scholarshiptriplej - Jan 7, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Write about your hero. Identify who the person is, and why he or she is your hero...... CBEST

2 - You are over dramatizing the situation. Keep it logical and based within the realms of reality. The scream of...

Writing FeedbackNorbsidy - Jan 6, 2024Holt - Jan 11, 2024
Waterloo AIF (Admissions Information Form) Response

2 - You have given a list far too long of the things you wish to accomplish at Waterloo. While you...

Undergraduateshusaku - Jan 6, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
KU Leuven 2024 Bachelor of Philosophy Mot. Letter.

3 - @Holt Greetings, Halt. The fact that you said that this text was made with the help of an AI...

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Hungary and Uganda - Stipendium hungaricum scholarship letter

2 - Since you lost your mother at birth, you were still incapable of experiencing the changes that you indicated...

Scholarshiphuzaifahmuhammad - Jan 6, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
IELTS 16:The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane

2 - The essay should be 3 paragraphs long. This writing barely meets the word count minimum, which indicates that the...

Writing FeedbackPhuonglynnh - Jan 6, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Stipendium Hungaricum Motivational Letter - BSc Biology in University Of Debrecen

2 - A motivational letter focuses upon the applicant's interest in pursuing his interests in the field of his potential profession....

Scholarshipsrakin - Jan 6, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
TASK 1: LINE GRAPH - Comparison of the number of 13-year-olds learning French and Mandarin

2 - Examine the graph presented. It clearly indicates that the measurements are applicable up to the present date. It...

Writing Feedbacktrucly182 - Jan 6, 2024Holt - Jan 12, 2024
Supply chain disruption - UBC Sauder commence personal profile: How you responded to a problem.

2 - This is a strong narrative explanation for the prompt. The fact that you based it in your personal experience...

Undergraduaterachelxu1106 - Jan 6, 2024Holt - Jan 12, 2024
TASK 2 was it good? :)Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier

4 - @Kaypea The ideas are all clear and useful, but you should consider more abt your writting construction, which you...

Writing FeedbackKaypea - Jan 6, 2024Linhw - Jan 23, 2024
Developing a YouTube automation bot - UBC Personal profile - How would people describe you?

2 - Your personal statement does not work for the prompt provided. This is not a first person opinion of you...

UndergraduateAlfie12 - Jan 6, 2024Holt - Jan 10, 2024
describe your favorite place in your hometown. How does it contribute to your life experience?

2 - Your description of West Lake seems to be lacking. You are describing the roads but not the specific place....

Scholarshiphuyenan - Jan 4, 2024Holt - Jan 10, 2024
TASK 1- PROCESS: Describe the process of the water cycle

3 - Hi Julie11, While expanding on the information shown in the diagram is necessary, I would suggest to refrain from...

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[IELTS Writing task 2] Countries are becoming more and more similar

3 - I think your ideas are a little seperated. Instead of listing different reasons, try to elaborate on only one...

Writing Feedbacksnackara - Jan 4, 2024Lyth - Jan 13, 2024
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE - PARSONS NEW SCHOOL - MFA Fashion Design and Society

2 - Your background as it relates to your desire to complete this program is not well developed in this presentation....

GraduateRIA0512 - Jan 3, 2024Holt - Jan 10, 2024
LETTER OF MOTIVATION FOR MASTERS IN SUSTAINABLE FOREST AND NATURE MANAGEMENT

4 - @sankook Thank you so much, I appreciate your honest review. I know all this, but the word limit restricts...

LettersEmDee - Jan 3, 2024EmDee - Jan 10, 2024
Studying Public Policy - Cornell Essay

2 - The first thing you have to understand is that there are no right or wrong answers to these essays....

UndergraduateMoonlight1689 - Jan 3, 2024Holt - Jan 9, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Management of Technology at TU Delft

3 - Hi DandyFabian, offering my two cents on your essay: 1. One part that I find unique from your...

LettersDandyFabian - Jan 3, 2024himca - Jan 12, 2024
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR MASTERS IN PUBLIC HEALTH FOR GKS

3 - @Holt Thank you so much. I felt is not very necessary to explain in details, but I know better...

ScholarshipGlorychi - Jan 3, 2024Glorychi - Jan 13, 2024
Motivation letter for masters in psychology of global mobility, inclusion and diversity

2 - I do not feel that you have a very strong professional representation in this motivational letter. You have mostly...

LettersEduneeds4me - Jan 3, 2024Holt - Jan 9, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2-work-based training's advantages outweigh its disadvantages

2 - Explain your opinion. What is the basis of your explanation in the earlier sentence? Give a summarized representation...

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