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IELTS Writing Task 2 - Governments should make universities free for everyone

2 - Did you review the response requirement for the essay prior to drafting it? If you did, then you would...

Writing Feedbackmayajuststart_0 - Sep 21, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
You want to sell the televesion. You think a friend of your might like to buy it from you.

2 - There are several discrepancies in your letter that affect the clarity of the information. 1. You have not...

Lettershnhung308 - Sep 21, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
IELTS Writing task 2 - The excessive use of smartphones in free time

2 - The summary paraphrase and writer's opinion are unacceptable. The writer does not meet the passing preliminary TA score requirements...

Writing FeedbackEnglishwithakat - Sep 21, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
MSc program in Physics at The University of Queensland - AAS

2 - You have to revise the whole response. You need to choose at least 2 institutions in Australia to apply...

ScholarshipOUDOM - Sep 20, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 2 - about artificial intelligence

2 - The response is not aligned with the expected format. You gave a basic response instead of the expected measured...

Writing FeedbackPatsy Chan - Sep 20, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
Chameleon of Roleplay - Questbridge personal statement

2 - Okay, the reviewer would rather get to know you without the constant reference to other characters. I understand that...

Undergraduatehayebal - Sep 20, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
IELTS WRTING TASK 1 - TABLE: INTERNATIONAL STUDENTS IN CANADA AND USA

NEW - students in canada by their country of origin The table delineates the number of foreign students in Canada...

Writing Feedbacksonbiee - Sep 18, 2023 -
Although families have influence on children's development, factors outside the home do too.

NEW - influence on child development It is a common belief that children are primarily affected by household members nurturing...

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying online?

NEW - studying online pros and cons What do you think of studying online? It is popular with its convenience...

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The chart below shows the aid from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008-2010.

NEW - funds for some developing countries The chart shows the number of financial aid from different nations to help...

Writing FeedbackThithi777 - Sep 18, 2023 -
The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of education

NEW - the share of male and female teachers in the uk The chart below delineates the porportion between male...

Writing Feedbackhoanglongsss - Sep 18, 2023 -
Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild

NEW - Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals...

Writing Feedbackbabaya - Sep 18, 2023 -
A sample of dream interpretation

NEW - Just a mixture of creative, what is on my mind essay. Dream is a manifestation of the subconscious...

Writing Feedbacktomluciano123 - Sep 18, 2023 -
Celebrities complain about the way the media publicize their private lives. Agree/disargree

NEW - the private lives of Celebrities Recent years have experienced a proliferation of opinions that celebrities' should endure the...

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Challenges of Academic Writing for International Students in UK Universities

NEW - academic writing is a challenge for foreign students Studying in the UK is a dream for many international...

Writing Feedbackdavidthomas69 - Sep 18, 2023 -
War in Iraq English Draft

NEW - War in Iraq If the average American was given the choice to go to war based on the...

Research PapersY21524 - Sep 18, 2023 -
AS WELL AS MAKING MONEY, BUSINESSES ALSO HAVE SOCIAL RESPONSIBILITIES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE ?

NEW - SOCIAL RESPONSIBILITIES OF BUSINESSES There is an argument that companies have social consicences, not to mention accomplishing money....

Writing Feedbackduynn - Sep 17, 2023 -
[IELTS]College students to live in schools better than live at home with their parents.Agree or not?

NEW - students choice to live in a dormitory Living with family at the age of a college student or...

Writing Feedbacknalpnguyen - Sep 17, 2023 -
Essay on Why are you an ideal candidate for MSc in Business Analytics and how program will help?

2 - Do not use this reference. It is too vague for you to be believed by the reviewer. The...

GraduateLove478 - Sep 17, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - TEACHING SITUATION / DISAGREE OR AGREE ESSAYS.

2 - Your overall response to the original prompt is incorrect. There are 2 reasons for this mistake: 1. There...

Writing Feedbackvieta06 - Sep 17, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter

2 - The word count of this essay could prove to be a huge problem for you during the actual test....

Writing FeedbackTramy245 - Sep 17, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
QUESTBRIDGE SHORT ANSWER RESPONSES!

NEW - Hi! Incoming senior here applying to Questbridge. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to give feedback on...

Scholarshipathenalee - Sep 16, 2023 -
"gks-u 2024 "media and communication:my interests and motivations" personal statement" @holt

2 - Try to provide more of a backgrounder on your family as required by the prompt. You are not mentioning...

ScholarshipHITZYBITZYTYTY - Sep 16, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Statement of purpose for MS in Computer Science programs. I'm not sure how I should structure it.

3 - @Holt That makes sense, thanks for the reply! I'll take your advice into consideration and see how to...

Graduateanu_mh - Sep 16, 2023anu_mh - Sep 29, 2023
COMMON APP ESSAY REVIEW (essay on personal growth)

2 - The essay tends to be a bit confusing as you move from the plant experience to your personal experience....

Undergraduateyurii06xx - Sep 16, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Uganda's economy - Common wealth scholarship

2 - The essay lacks a clear focus on Uganda and how you plan to develop the local and national interests...

ScholarshipDianish kiconco - Sep 15, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Mobile and technology essay paper

2 - The essay is too long. It is so long that it has created a clear image in the examiner's...

Writing Feedbackminhtuan2006 - Sep 15, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Task 1: The chart shows the percentage of males and females with higher education qualification

2 - This is not a specific image identifier. It does not help the reader get a mental picture of...

Writing Feedbackhongtham2002 - Sep 15, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Is this full of babbling? GKS 2024/ Undergraduate Scholarship - LANGUAGE STUDIES BEFORE AND AFTER

3 - Your essay is quite good. I don't know that why you are writitng the language plan ( whether for...

Scholarshipjennide - Sep 14, 2023sushiii - Oct 14, 2023
This diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting

NEW - Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant The pictorial chart...

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