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Writing task 2: Should violent criminals' personal information be made available to the public?

3 - Regarding the introduction, it is my view that you should not mention your personal opinion since this essay is...

Writing FeedbackHeo Nguyen - Jan 28, 2023Camtu25 - Feb 4, 2023
Writing task 1: Percentage of adults of different age in the UK

3 - Thanks for your checking...

Writing Feedbacklethacquang - Jan 28, 2023lethacquang - Jan 28, 2023
MBA (Entrepreneurship and innovation) Personal Statement

2 - Please do not include an autobiography of your interest in the personal statement. While the discussion with your father...

Graduatezahrareza7828 - Jan 27, 2023Holt - Jan 28, 2023
General writing task 1: A formal complaint to retaurant

3 - @Holt Thanks for your comment, your points are critical and I realized I do missunderstood the topic requirements on...

Writing Feedbackbbqguy - Jan 27, 2023bbqguy - Jan 29, 2023
Motivation Letter for Master Degree Consumer Science at TU Berlin

2 - Thank you for your kind words. I hope I can help you with this post of yours as well....

Letterstumtuma - Jan 26, 2023Holt - Jan 27, 2023
The best way to teach children to cooperation is through team sports

2 - The response you have used in this presentation is incorrect. While it appears that you are giving a degree...

Writing Feedbacktrinhxuanbach - Jan 25, 2023Holt - Jan 25, 2023
Writing task 2 : Working from home is more efficient than travelling

2 - Rather than referring to the opinion you support as "it", use a more specific term based on the keyword...

Writing Feedbackdjjockey1205 - Jan 24, 2023Holt - Jan 25, 2023
Personal Statement for GKS-G 2023 - Social Welfare major!

3 - As Holt said above, you have no apparent motive. For a person who already has an academic background, there...

ScholarshipFitriws21 - Jan 20, 2023crlian - Jan 24, 2023
Commitment to contribute, Study Plan, and Contribution after graduated

2 - Do not deviate from the actual focus of the essay which is the improvement of Science teaching in the...

Scholarshipdanijaya08 - Jan 20, 2023Holt - Jan 21, 2023
Passion for the environment - Statement of purpose admissions essay appreciate

3 - 1- Never quote negative things in your essay if it is not to bring a positive reaction in your...

Undergraduateah9087 - Jan 18, 2023crlian - Jan 24, 2023
Fluent in English, Chinese and Malay - GKS-G Language Study Plan.

2 - The language study plan only concerns English and Hangul. The mention of Malay in this response is unnecessary. Also,...

Scholarshipjyfang1999 - Jan 18, 2023Holt - Jan 19, 2023
Affinity for mathematics - Why Waterloo

2 - The passion for the actual Math application is missing. The reviewer could View this response as lacking in actual...

UndergraduateGyroZepelli - Jan 18, 2023Holt - Jan 19, 2023
TASK 2: Benefits of the use of technology at school (only body)

2 - The task 2 essay requires a 2-3 body paragraph depending upon the writing instructions. It appears to me that...

Writing FeedbackConann - Jan 17, 2023Holt - Jan 18, 2023
WRITING IELTS TASK 2: oral communication is more effective than written word

2 - Your prompt restatement is accurate as it refers to an opinion stated by someone else as a fact, rather...

Writing FeedbackCamtu25 - Jan 17, 2023Holt - Jan 18, 2023
Management and Economics - Letter of Motivation Masters Program

2 - A proper review and advice for this motivational letter cannot be provided as the essential information has been removed...

Letterskalleanka321 - Jan 17, 2023Holt - Jan 17, 2023
Motivation Letter for Bachelor's program in Biomedical Sciences

4 - @Holt Hi, sorry to bother I have just taken a closer look at the requirements of the Motivation Letter,...

Lettersngochieu29 - Jan 16, 2023ngochieu29 - Jan 18, 2023
Blessing of God - UBC essay what is important to you and why?

3 - I think other than the content, making your essay more cohesive would make your thoughts come up better to...

Undergraduateapricotmoss - Jan 15, 2023rudraksh - Jan 22, 2023
"Cool kid" - UBC Tell us about yourself essay

2 - The response to this prompt cannot be of the collective opinion kind. That is what you have written here....

UndergraduatePony4590 - Jan 14, 2023Holt - Jan 15, 2023
Clinical Epidemiology - Statement of Purpose for Graduate studies

2 - While your word usage is highly engaging and descriptive, I cannot say that it helped depict a clear purpose...

Graduateiamappiagyei - Jan 14, 2023Holt - Jan 15, 2023
Four cities erasmus scholarship - Letter of Motivaion

2 - There is no connection between the history, goals, and objectives of 4CITIES with the statement you have created. It...

ScholarshipChampionL - Jan 14, 2023Holt - Jan 14, 2023
Motivation letter for MSc in Material Science Engineering

2 - It is very difficult for me to review this essay due to erased information which could have helped me...

Lettersanto_who - Jan 13, 2023Holt - Jan 17, 2023
UBC ACTIVITIES AND ACCOMPLISHMENTS part

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. Actually, I wrote a pretty long explanation but had cut down thinking it...

Writing Feedbackjkarmie - Jan 13, 2023jkarmie - Jan 13, 2023
Software engineering and computer engineering - Waterloo essay

3 - @doris101 I have to agree with Holt as well. The more specific you can be, the better. Show that...

Undergraduatedoris101 - Jan 12, 2023kokosi - Jan 13, 2023
25 Random Things about Myself

2 - 1. If you haven't mentioned how your parents are employed in any other essay, add the information here to...

GraduateAmanrathoddd - Jan 12, 2023Holt - Jan 12, 2023
Writing task: Learning right or wrong and punishment of the children

2 - The first major reason that this essay will fail is that you did not follow the writing requirements. You...

Writing Feedbacknerdypmns - Jan 11, 2023Holt - Jan 12, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 2 - The salary is not the only key thing to consider when choosing a job

2 - The prompt itself does not ask you to consider the truth behind the presented discussion point. Therefore, to do...

Writing FeedbackJohndavisvu - Jan 11, 2023Holt - Jan 12, 2023
"Writing to escape"- Common App Prompt

2 - The way you approached this writing and what it reflects of your personal character, insights, and hobbies lead me...

Undergraduatenamuvior - Jan 11, 2023Holt - Jan 11, 2023
The misconception of beauty and power; a personal life experience with particular significance

2 - This is most certainly a personal experienced focused on learning self Iove and the true value of a person...

Scholarshipnataliasadhwani - Jan 11, 2023Holt - Jan 11, 2023
Motivation letter - 4 Cities Msc. Urban Studies (max. 2 pages)

3 - @Holt Thank you for your help, I will improve my motivation letter including your suggestions....

Letterselisautzig - Jan 10, 2023elisautzig - Jan 11, 2023
LBS MBA Personal Statement; what would you contribute to your cohort? Using degree for the future.

3 - @Holt Thank you so much. Let me work on your very useful feedback right now....

Graduatekokosi - Jan 10, 2023kokosi - Jan 10, 2023
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