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|About whether someone sent to prison before should talk to students about the danger of crimes
5 - - Many people believe that good residents who wasare sent to prison - before are the most suitable people...
Scholarshipwuyiaishang - Aug 16, 2015 / justivy03 - Aug 23, 2015
|Questbridge (full-ride) Scholarship Essay
4 - @Ana, I'd like to help out. - This is the reason forbehind my academic success. - Even whenWhen...
Scholarshipanaem - Aug 21, 2015 / justivy03 - Aug 23, 2015
|How can companies improve current programs or develop new programs in order to promote flexibility?
5 - I would like to give you some further suggestions on your essay. The first issue I would like...
Scholarshipgmuturi - Aug 20, 2015 / lcturn87 - Aug 20, 2015
|'Love to learning about the world' - QuestBridge Scholarship Short Answer Question: Career Goals
Scholarshipgvarela52 - Aug 13, 2015 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2015
|'The best Physician Family' - Questbridge Biographical Essay
3 - - However, because my dad wasis so hard - ..homework, but he was very inpatientimpatient . - ...with him...
Scholarshipatorres76 - Aug 12, 2015 / justivy03 - Aug 19, 2015
|Prospective medical student needs help writing a personal essay! Must be creative and individual
4 - Sage, I wrote three personal essays last year for one of my university application and it was also very...
ScholarshipSage123 - Jul 31, 2015 / Gnef - Aug 8, 2015
|Your community involvement, leadership qualities, sporting, artistic and other achievements
ScholarshipMarivanno - Aug 5, 2015 / lcturn87 - Aug 6, 2015
|How scholarship would help me, debt-free - Essay 2
4 - There is only a slight error in your essay. You quickly made the changes. This is excellent! After discussing...
Scholarshipgmuturi - Aug 5, 2015 / lcturn87 - Aug 5, 2015
|Motivation letter for scholarship in Italy - the world of art, creativity and design.
2 - Hi Yaso, your essay is good. you explain your interest very well. Yet, there are a few kinds additional...
Scholarshipyaso - Aug 4, 2015 / paddoo - Aug 4, 2015
|Narrative Letter for Diversity Scholarship Appeal (Mizzou; prompt included)
4 - Thank you....
Scholarshipphdjr96 - Jul 29, 2015 / phdjr96 - Aug 1, 2015
|Fmu Scholarship, The student's accomplishments, a statement on how the funds will impact his/her
3 - You should delete a word "graduate" that is repeating and reorganize your first sentence. Also,maybe telling a specific story...
ScholarshipDoylene15 - Jul 27, 2015 / Killeener - Aug 1, 2015
|'research skills, dedication and heart for justice' - MPH/MSW Personal Statement
3 - - ...the next generation and thus, we can predict - ...order to create a healthy communitiescommunity . - I...
ScholarshipCadalya - Jul 30, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 31, 2015
|Question on leadership in water management now or in the future?
3 - Ugo, first of all, I suggest that you don't start your paragraph with the word, "because"; - Because...
ScholarshipUgo007 - Jul 29, 2015 / justivy03 - Jul 31, 2015
|"To Teach" - What you would be in your future? Statement of purpose.
5 - I a m eager to learn more about historical, avoid contractions I believe that the turkey is an...
ScholarshipSyeda Rifa - Jul 20, 2015 / Michele9 - Jul 21, 2015
|Endeavour Scholarship and Fellowship community service essay
3 - - I volunteered to teach English on 5th grade class at the elementary school on thatin the village. ...
Scholarshipayankkit - Jun 23, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 24, 2015
|My first essay to apply for scholarships! (Graduating 2016) - Why i deserve X scholarship?
Scholarshiptiyeda - Jun 19, 2015 / tiyeda - Jun 22, 2015
|How receiving an Endeavour Scholarship or Fellowship would make a difference to your personal life?
2 - One thing that I want to share with you, when it comes to scholarship applications, you also have to...
Scholarshipsophasd - Jun 16, 2015 / justivy03 - Jun 17, 2015
|Born in the small village about 120 kilometers west of largest city in west Sudan; Scholarship app.
2 - Hallo Musnad, I am Asep from Indonesia, I would render you several suggestions. In terms of my...
Scholarshipmusnad - Jun 13, 2015 / aseprudi - Jun 13, 2015
|Calling all the SCHOLARSHIP HUNTERS! Applying for Graphic Design Department
3 - Hi, I would be more than happy to help with your essay. First, change the spelling of Turkey throughout...
Scholarshiproserosiana - Jun 9, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jun 9, 2015
|Details and evidence of voluntary service to the local community. Scholarship essay.
4 - I have provided some slight changes. Please check to see if this meets the 200 word requirement after you...
Scholarshipsophasd - Jun 3, 2015 / lcturn87 - Jun 3, 2015
|Why I want to Serve in the Peace Corps? Their service extends far beyond the works of a project.
Scholarshipeos - May 27, 2015 / aseprudi - May 27, 2015
|Valedictorian Essay (Grade 9) (Strongest Candidate)
2 - To make the readers grasp your idea more easily, it is better to introduce your idea at the beginning...
ScholarshipCeldricP - May 21, 2015 / Trias - May 22, 2015
|Learning process requires to perform tasks using both mental and physical endurance; Fulbright
2 - - ...I was quite an average grader student. -As he was also contestingbuying for admission in engineeringthe college...
Scholarshipmusaibjan - May 19, 2015 / justivy03 - May 20, 2015
|How has the situation in Mongolia affected me and my family? Why University of X?
2 - - There are fewer hospitals with equipped with enough professionals and instruments. -There are still many patients could...
ScholarshipAltaa - May 18, 2015 / justivy03 - May 18, 2015
|Topic : Discussion of your Academic Potential, work ethic, and integrity (500-2000 characters)
Scholarshipjoy1234 - May 13, 2015 / justivy03 - May 13, 2015
|Gilman Scholarship: Why I want to Study Abroad in Seoul Essay
Scholarshipmvlasuro - Feb 26, 2014 / ChristineB - May 10, 2015
|Scholarship essay for Postgraduate study in UK
2 - - AdvancementAdvance technology is painfully slow, - I chanced a glance atupon the information systems course offered...
Scholarshipconfusee123 - May 10, 2015 / justivy03 - May 10, 2015
|Scholarship and studying at a UK Higher Education Institution
4 - hi, thanks for reviewing. how does this paragraph sound? During my undergraduate study, I actively volunteered at the...
Scholarshipconfusee123 - May 6, 2015 / confusee123 - May 7, 2015
|Personal Statement for Lost Scholarship Appeal
4 - ChristineB, thank you so much for all of your help! Your thorough suggestions have really helped me get the...
Scholarshiphmbooker - May 5, 2015 / hmbooker - May 6, 2015
|I live in a place called Bentonville, Arkansas. How this neighborhood impacts on me? WOW Essay.
2 - You use the contraction it's but change it to "its" because you are referring to the town. Also, change...
Scholarshipthequeenbey - May 4, 2015 / lcturn87 - May 4, 2015
|SOS - Family and Consumer Science SCHOLARSHIP Essay
2 - it is not my Chemistry or World History classes. The last sentence of the last paragraph isn't necessary. It's...
ScholarshipEmmaRS97 - May 4, 2015 / thequeenbey - May 4, 2015
|"Know Thyself" - these simple words are the central idea of my life; Scholarship Questionaire
3 - Thank you Lcturn for your help. I am working on the changes mentioned. "invisible staircase which takes me...
ScholarshipReimann - May 4, 2015 / Reimann - May 4, 2015
|Describe in no more than 500 characters the reason for studying abroad - IELTS Scholarship Essay
2 - Hi, peppyonboard. I think you are on the right track. Here are the questions I think you should ask...
Scholarshippeppyonboard - May 3, 2015 / ChristineB - May 3, 2015
|Lost in a sea of scholarship appeals
ScholarshipMissSteve - Apr 27, 2015 / ChristineB - May 2, 2015
|Failure, or as I like to call it, the "F" word is like a curse-word for me. 'Best word' essay
NEW - Hey guys so I'm applying for a scholarship and the topic is, "What is your favorite word." I'm not...
ScholarshipEdgardoCorrea - Apr 29, 2015 / — -
|What has challenged me and convince to put my next milestone in the Master of Dietetics?
Scholarshipkenkankun - Apr 25, 2015 / ChristineB - Apr 26, 2015
|Scholarship essay granting 5th semester scholarhsip
2 - Hi, cda2013. Am I correct that your ultimate goal is psychology and life science? If so, you really need...
Scholarshipcda2013 - Apr 26, 2015 / ChristineB - Apr 26, 2015
|Summer Art Intensive Scholarship Essay
2 - Hi, paul. I think you're on the right track with your essay. When applying for a scholarship, you need...
Scholarshippaulvu - Apr 23, 2015 / ChristineB - Apr 26, 2015
|My last chance to study abroad in my life: Scholarship essays (Future, Study plans)
Scholarshipjinikimin - Apr 16, 2015 / nk1992 - Apr 23, 2015
|PG Scholarship essay highlighting my achievements and potential - Pl. review
4 - Thank you all for your insights. I have taken it into consideration and come up with a new version...
Scholarshipnk1992 - Apr 22, 2015 / nk1992 - Apr 23, 2015
|Supporting statement for AusAID Scholarship
Scholarshipstitaga - Apr 20, 2015 / stitaga - Apr 20, 2015
|supporting statement : Australia Award Scholarship
2 - How did you choose your proposed course and institution? (max 400 words) Working for the house of Regional...
Scholarshipfadlanmuzakki - Apr 19, 2015 / justivy03 - Apr 19, 2015
|Scholarship: How I improve my skills and knowledge through academic plan (Int'l Development)
4 - Hi @naritoshi :) I was workeding as an assistant for 2 years to support forto Korean government-invited international...
Scholarshipnaritoshi - Apr 18, 2015 / thutyedaniel - Apr 19, 2015
|Study objective, become a chemical engineer in one of the biggest oil producers in the world
Scholarshipcute_poison - Apr 13, 2015 / intiaiqbal92 - Apr 16, 2015
|Development plan for scholarship- MA in Marketing
7 - overall, your essay is good but, i would try correct some sentence for repairing your essay particularly its it...
Scholarshipzirtapoz - Apr 13, 2015 / irhame - Apr 16, 2015
|How have I contributed to implementing change or reform in my organization.
2 - Hi Daroth, I think your essay is good and simple..so, I suggest you make an essay more specific....
ScholarshipDaroth - Apr 16, 2015 / intiaiqbal92 - Apr 16, 2015
|How will the subject contribute to my career?
4 - Should I add a sentence to explain strength from diversity? it is building your capability through working, learning, and...
ScholarshipDaroth - Apr 15, 2015 / Daroth - Apr 15, 2015
|The products sold are not based on community needs - the companies don't care about what people wish
3 - Some suggestion for your writing: I would argue that attractive advertisement leads people to purchase the goods (why...
ScholarshipMuhammadImho - Apr 15, 2015 / AinunAlfatih - Apr 15, 2015
|"How I chose my proposed course and institution" essay for scholarship
3 - Thank you so much Justivy! that helps me a lot! :) From your perspective, do you find this essay...
ScholarshipDaroth - Apr 15, 2015 / Daroth - Apr 15, 2015
|'wanderlust in life' - My favorite word and why scholarship essay
Scholarshipshaynau2016 - Apr 10, 2015 / justivy03 - Apr 11, 2015
|The United States is labeled with a land of opportunity. My Study Objective for fulbright
2 - Hey Fadlan, Kindly find my help below; The United States is labeled (with - DELETE, REPLACE WITH...
Scholarshipfadlanmuzakki - Apr 10, 2015 / justivy03 - Apr 11, 2015
|The task to convince the selection panel; My dream is to become biochemist
3 - I don~t know.. I think that it is necessary to write them all.. I have never written something like...
ScholarshipMaria W - Apr 4, 2015 / Maria W - Apr 6, 2015
|Numbers, currencies, financial reports, data, money are the basic part of my field - GE FOUNDATION
2 - An eighteen-schools girl, a carefree teenageryou should put "verb" here before noun clause.when have to bring my decisions, especially...
Scholarshipquynhnhu1307 - Apr 2, 2015 / IqbalThemi - Apr 2, 2015
|Participating in the Global Leaders Program will equip me with the knowledge and skills needed
2 - Learning is a never ending process for me, more over related to the importance of building self development, to...
Scholarshipjohnsenong - Apr 1, 2015 / mohjawahir - Apr 2, 2015
|I have no doubt that studying in Turkey will be a wonderful experience. Letter of intent for correct
2 - Hi, student! this is some suggestion for your writing. Hello, my native language is not English and i...
Scholarshipstudent115 - Mar 30, 2015 / IqbalThemi - Apr 2, 2015
|Pen in hand, I sit poised over a blank sheet of paper, my imagination wheeling to life - Arts Award
3 - Thank you for the feedback! I was getting kind of stuck because I didn't know how to find the...
ScholarshiptinyTonbo - Mar 30, 2015 / tinyTonbo - Mar 31, 2015
|As computers are being used more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in classroom
2 - It is totally acceptable that with the invention of computers has completely changed learning process has completely changed...
ScholarshipAmmar Ansari - Mar 28, 2015 / ah_zafari - Mar 29, 2015
|I work in a bank; AUSAID Scholarship (How I intend to use my skills)
4 - Assuming that the scholarship consists solely of some bonus money for college, it wants you to tell them how...
Scholarshippelkham - Apr 4, 2013 / CollegeBoy - Mar 28, 2015
|Integrity and resilience are a few values I hold most - values and belief - NTU scholarship essay
2 - Integrity and resilience are a few values I hold most dear. I strongly believe that these values are not...
Scholarshipsober2012 - Mar 27, 2015 / ah_zafari - Mar 27, 2015
|Artificial Intelligence at one of the world's prestigious University - candidate for a scholarship
3 - However Icing on the cake is holding on an unconditional offer to pursue masters in MSc. Artificial Intelligence at...
Scholarshipnijanthan - Mar 24, 2015 / Anfalia - Mar 25, 2015
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