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[GKS Scholarship] Language Study Plan - AR/VR Technology

4 - Imo, it will be good if you can divided your plan into two parts, Like before coming to korea...

Scholarshiptatamalfoy - Mar 11, 2022 / narezng - Mar 18, 2022
GKS Personal Statement- Public Relations and Advertising major

2 - Try to bring up a more impressive motivation for your interest in public relations without having to go back...

Scholarshipnarezng - Mar 18, 2022 / Holt - Mar 18, 2022
Personal Statement - Fashion Design. Family and Education background, extracurricular activities

3 - thank you for the advice, but it's only the quote i placed there thats not originally mine. everything else...

ScholarshipMunirat - Mar 17, 2022 / Munirat - Mar 17, 2022
Pioneer trailblazing research in several fields - Essay for UK Scholarship Application

2 - The writer can do better than to simply present an extended bullet form of his accomplishments. Having read the...

ScholarshipGarryLyon400 - Mar 17, 2022 / Holt - Mar 17, 2022
Statement Of Purpose (my study and self introduction) for POSCO scholarship

3 - @Holt thank you for your feedback . i will try my best to fix it...

ScholarshipNishi1977 - Mar 16, 2022 / Nishi1977 - Mar 16, 2022
Personal Statement for International Health Management

3 - @Holt Good day Thanks for the feedback Can you help fine tune my personal statement? - please contact us...

ScholarshipCepkorby - Mar 15, 2022 / Cepkorby - Mar 15, 2022
Organizational Effectiveness and Performance -How will the proposed study contribute to your career?

3 - @Holt Thank you so much. Your response is very much appreciated. I will take your advice....

Scholarshipjkitawal - Mar 13, 2022 / jkitawal - Mar 13, 2022
Genetic Engineering - GKS-Undergraduate- Future plan

2 - You are getting ahead of yourself. The masters course you plan to take up is not yet relevant at...

Scholarshipamn1234 - Mar 11, 2022 / Holt - Mar 11, 2022
Learning and class schedule - Korean/English language study plan

5 - @adriennguyen thank you so much. i will make the necessary changes to it...

ScholarshipMunirat - Mar 3, 2022 / Munirat - Mar 10, 2022
The contribution of the proposed study to your career as a geoscientist - AAS

3 - Thankyou for your help in reviewing my essay. I will do your suggestions to make my essay stronger. Tahnkyouu...

Scholarshiplemonade97 - Mar 5, 2022 / lemonade97 - Mar 6, 2022
Study plan - Fashion, Textile or Designer GKS - 2023

4 - @rafaellarodri I think you don't need to write year-to-year plans in point form, write year-by-year plans in paragraphs form....

Scholarshiprafaellarodri - Feb 23, 2022 / milaniawati - Mar 4, 2022
STUDY PLAN GKS 2022_Graduate_Radiologic Imaging Technology

3 - @Holt Thank you for your advices, i will fix it ....

Scholarshipmilaniawati - Mar 4, 2022 / milaniawati - Mar 4, 2022
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR GKS SCHOLARSHIP 2022_GRADUATE_ ARTS AND DESIGN

3 - @Holt thank you for the advice. I will work on it....

Scholarshipharshita - Mar 4, 2022 / harshita - Mar 4, 2022
MSC IN IMPACT ENTREPRENEURSHIP

3 - Hi Holt. Thank you for your help. However, I do not think that we are talking about the...

Scholarshipjeoo - Mar 1, 2022 / jeoo - Mar 2, 2022
GKS Personal Statement/ Master's Degree in Counseling Psychology

4 - maybe you can focus more on why you choose that major and why in korea, coz as i understood...

Scholarshipkappk - Feb 25, 2022 / slyny - Mar 1, 2022
GKS-G Personal Statements Clinical Psychology ; University Track to Yonsei University

3 - I think you need more organization within your letter. Try to connect every paragraph with the predecessor in order...

Scholarshipaisy12 - Feb 26, 2022 / Julyffff - Mar 1, 2022
My paintings and sharing. An attempt to think or do things differently

3 - i just wanna a real experience...

Scholarshipladybird123 - Feb 27, 2022 / ladybird123 - Feb 28, 2022
About my stay in Sweden - SI Scholarship letter of motivation

3 - Thank you very much for your comment, I will adjust the test accordingly!...

ScholarshipXorelle - Feb 25, 2022 / Xorelle - Feb 25, 2022
NTU SCHOLARSHIP Values and beliefs you hold strongly. How you have demonstrated these.

2 - There is no personal insight in this response. These are mere observations provided as generalized references to the question....

ScholarshipGaurikkaa - Feb 25, 2022 / Holt - Feb 25, 2022
Health workers - knowledge gained from your master studies to contribute to your home

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for going through the work. I will put in the necessary recommendations. Thank you....

ScholarshipAlh - Feb 22, 2022 / Alh - Feb 24, 2022
A Bridge Between Two Countries - Global Korea Scholarship - Personal Statement

2 - This is a truly personal statement that has disregarded the graduate focus of the applicant. It is more about...

Scholarshipaspb2022 - Feb 23, 2022 / Holt - Feb 23, 2022
Insurance company and accounting - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR APPLYING GKS

3 - Helped me It also feels a little on the short side. Try to use more of the...

Scholarshipnitakajole - Feb 14, 2022 / aspb2022 - Feb 23, 2022
In your opinion, how would an SI scholarship for master's studies in Sweden be valuable

4 - @Scholarship I believe this is not detailed enough. It looks like it was written by the applicant and then...

ScholarshipScholarship - Feb 15, 2022 / felixtobi - Feb 23, 2022
Serving for health - GKS graduate degree program, personal statement

3 - @ll12 Your paper is good, but it lacks some details about your traits of character, own achievements, and so...

Scholarshipll12 - Feb 15, 2022 / LLIMITT - Feb 16, 2022
Study Plan to improve Foreign Languages (Korea and English degree course) before and after you come

5 - @Renu1973 I think the outline that you want to deliver is good enough. However, I suggest you to wrote...

ScholarshipRenu1973 - Feb 4, 2022 / helloitsme - Feb 15, 2022
Designing, assessing, economic policy - Letter of motivation for Erasmus Mundus EPOG+

4 - I'm not an expert in writing the motivation letters, statements of purpose, etc., but your paper looks good enough....

ScholarshipNhilist - Jan 28, 2022 / LLIMITT - Feb 14, 2022
OKP scholarship, study Master of Public Health (MPH): Health Systems Policy and Management track

2 - The infomation provided is a bit scattered in approach. The writer needs to focus the writing in a chronological...

ScholarshipAhmedd - Feb 14, 2022 / Holt - Feb 14, 2022
Melbourne University Personal Statement for finance: 500 words maximum

3 - @tientran I think it is good, it needs some modifications....

Scholarshiptientran - Feb 9, 2022 / Ahmedd - Feb 14, 2022
GKS - PERSONAL STATEMENT URBAN PLANNING/ENGINEERING

2 - The personal statement is weak as it does not present information in relation to the professional experience of the...

Scholarshipbeestory - Feb 13, 2022 / Holt - Feb 14, 2022
KGS Language Study plan (Hangul) - before and after you come. Remarkable milestone in career path

3 - @lkjhgfdsa0303 You do your preparation very well and its a good point for writing it in the first paraghraph...

Scholarshiplkjhgfdsa0303 - Feb 7, 2022 / nitakajole - Feb 13, 2022
SOP on Field Robotics (outlining your reasons for enrolling in the program. The letter should clear)

2 - The reviewer is not interested in the opinion, observations, and views of non applicants. Do not highlight other...

ScholarshipRexe - Feb 12, 2022 / Holt - Feb 13, 2022
IISMA 2022 Study Plan: how are we able to find the equilibrium between economic growth, social well-

3 - @Holt thankyou for your assistance!...

Scholarshipalyssa2036 - Feb 9, 2022 / alyssa2036 - Feb 10, 2022
Personal Statement | Fulbright Scholarship | GIS & RS for Forest fire issues

2 - The essay is engaging and effectively uses the various practical experiences that applicant has had in life, in relation...

Scholarshipfarhan_avicena - Feb 10, 2022 / Holt - Feb 10, 2022
Aastha means faith - KGSP Personal Statement Graduate

3 - Thank you for your feedback...

ScholarshipRenu1973 - Feb 5, 2022 / Renu1973 - Feb 5, 2022
Essay on Scholarship Contribution to Human Resource Development Needs

2 - All you did was provide your work background, which is a good basis for the response, but you...

Scholarshipwahidr - Feb 5, 2022 / Holt - Feb 5, 2022
Studying hanguel - I am writing this laguage study plan for gks

3 - Hi there! It's great to see someone who is applying for the same program I tried to apply for...

ScholarshipBear26 - Feb 1, 2022 / alyssa2036 - Feb 2, 2022
How can I write UCW personal statement prompt considering its missions and values

2 - It is important that you do not waste word count on useless opening sentences that merely repeat the...

ScholarshipFreDrick Mwepu - Jan 27, 2022 / Holt - Jan 28, 2022
Farming interest - Describe the world you come from

3 - Thank You very much for your advice...

ScholarshipOmaxJnr - Jan 26, 2022 / OmaxJnr - Jan 26, 2022
World Wide Web infrastructure. PTDF STATEMENT OF PURPOSE ON CYBER SECURITY

2 - The applicant has failed to make a connection between his interest in cybersecurity and the Petroleum and Oil industry...

ScholarshipVictorehiks - Jan 25, 2022 / Holt - Jan 26, 2022
Beliefs you hold strongly to. I'm determined to dedicate myself to the academic rigours of STEM

2 - The response that the student has created does not meet the prompt requirements at all. The essay that was...

Scholarshipsmolfish - Jan 19, 2022 / Holt - Jan 20, 2022
Msc Food Science and Technology Engineering University of Szeged

2 - The questions you are being asked to respond to all connect to a central theme. Have you really thought...

Scholarshipblackray - Jan 11, 2022 / Holt - Jan 19, 2022
Patna resident - Study Plan to improve foreign languages (Korean, English, etc) for KGSP

3 - @Holt Thanks for your feedback and suggestions. I'll improve it....

ScholarshipAlok19143 - Jan 14, 2022 / Alok19143 - Jan 15, 2022
Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Motivation Letter / Electrical Engineering at Debrecen.

6 - tks a lot for ur feedbacks, i've did some adjustments from ur suggestions as well as myself too and...

Scholarshipcongthanhp - Jan 14, 2022 / congthanhp - Jan 15, 2022
Morocco and engineering - HUNGARICUM SCHOLARSHIP

4 - @UKdoesntexist (don't copy-paste) Hello bro i prefer in this paragraph that you don't mention any name of any...

ScholarshipUKdoesntexist - Jan 12, 2022 / sdiri19 - Jan 14, 2022
"My academic objectives, long-range goals & why particular college". --- College Scholarship Essay

2 - The academic objectives are too vague. These need to be more specific to your progessional goal upon graduation. The...

Scholarshipvjst399 - Jan 11, 2022 / Holt - Jan 11, 2022
SOP FOR PTDF SCHOLARSHIP - CYBERSECURITY; proposed study reasons, relevance and impact

2 - The discussion is too broad in concept. It must be narrowed down to the relevance of the proposed study...

Scholarshipwilliam42 - Jan 11, 2022 / Holt - Jan 11, 2022
Stipendium hungarcum motivation lettre -masters's computer science

2 - The application is weak. It is focused on academic and training skills development as an undergraduate. It does not...

ScholarshipManomanoar - Jan 11, 2022 / Holt - Jan 11, 2022
MOTIVATION LETTER - pursuing the BSc Earth Sciences program under Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - The first paragraph is only flowerly language that does not move your application along with useful information. It is...

Scholarshipglimmerafter - Jan 10, 2022 / Holt - Jan 11, 2022
Stipendium Hungaricum motivation letter - MSc of Cognitive Neuroscience less than 400 words

3 - Big thanks for your questions and review. Those made me think a lot!...

Scholarshiptrancuongk17 - Jan 9, 2022 / trancuongk17 - Jan 11, 2022
Motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum - BSc Computer Science

2 - Since this is your only opportunity to impress the reviewers with the importance of your goal, be definitive...

Scholarshipriinas - Jan 10, 2022 / Holt - Jan 10, 2022
Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Master in Economics of Globalisation and European Integration

3 - Thank you so much for your help, i'll definitely take into consideration all of your observations....

ScholarshipMorikeHamid - Jan 9, 2022 / MorikeHamid - Jan 10, 2022
Topik level - Language Study Plan for GKS G

2 - This is an event that is still to happen. Change your time frame reference to future tense presentation....

Scholarshipcucumberoom - Jan 9, 2022 / Holt - Jan 9, 2022
Stipendium Hungaricum motivational letter - The magic and beauty in Mathematics

2 - This line is what should set the tone for your motivational letter. This compresses both the academic and...

Scholarshiptuanb2610 - Jan 8, 2022 / Holt - Jan 8, 2022
ERASMUS MUNDUS LETTER OF MOTIVATION ON INTERNATIONAL LAW OF GLOBAL SECURITY PEACE AND DEVELOPMENT

2 - Please review your prompt requirements. There is a missing element in your motivation. The foundation of your interest in...

Scholarshipamnanasir77 - Jan 7, 2022 / Holt - Jan 8, 2022
Academic objectives and Computer engineering

5 - @Somebody3 Hello, I only finished my bachelor's several months ago, so please take my answer with a grain of...

ScholarshipSomebody3 - Jan 5, 2022 / Diahr - Jan 7, 2022
How do you think you will be able to apply what you learn in workshop in your current position

2 - The most applicable aspect of this response is the fact that you see yourself applying what you will be...

ScholarshipThang Dang - Jan 7, 2022 / Holt - Jan 7, 2022
Next Korean wave - GKS Personal Statement for Animation master

2 - Regardless of the divorce your father had made a contribution to your character development. Offer a few sentences...

Scholarshipbarblesiv - Jan 6, 2022 / Holt - Jan 7, 2022
Computer Science - Applied for Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship

6 - Just take it in consideration what @Bo I mean, take into consideration what @Holt has written. What are...

ScholarshipNoureddinehf - Jan 5, 2022 / Mullah - Jan 6, 2022
Motivation Letter for Matriculation and for ICP scholarship

3 - Many thanks for your reply and your guidance. Unfortunately, the scholarship has not provided guidelines on how to...

ScholarshipMullah - Jan 6, 2022 / Mullah - Jan 6, 2022
Human and professional - Erasmus Personal Statement: GLOCAL Global Markets and Development pathway

3 - I am not sure whether they have provided a guideline on the length of the motivation letter, kindly check....

ScholarshipGhof97 - Jan 5, 2022 / Mullah - Jan 6, 2022

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