Writing Feedback / Donald Trump's Team Won't 'Rule Out' and not Planning to Create a Muslim Registry [3]

The establishing of registry based on religion, particularly Muslim, wouldn't go to rule out and not planning on it too, but the Donald Trump's team will say to some people who radicalized have to be prevented from coming into the US country. Moreover, The "extreme vetting" in Trump campaign will always defense, and it is one reason the creation of Muslim registry based on the National Security Entry-Exit Registration system

Source : Time

Writing Feedback / Sea water is the Resource of Mining Mineral Industry [2]

The environment produced the amount of minerals which is accumulated by bacteria during an hour of the period. If it is occurring, the fulfillment of clean drinking water in other countries will deficiency. One of the best ways to solve this problem to produce the clean is called desalination process which water take out water from seawater with remove the salt before by reverse osmosis (RO) technique.

This membrane filtration technology takes the seawater, then spread on the pressure to force it through a membrane and this process will result in energy to produce clean water which reduces the salt from seawater. This process is known reverse osmosis. Because this process is very expensive, finally it doesn't use by many countries. Also, it is resulting brine which pumped back out into the sea and it damages the local sea ecology. The future desalination place will build in 2060 and it has target produce 900 million liters per day of desalinated water.

This project is researching about the number of metals, particularly calcium, potassium, and magnesium from out of desalination brine, which defiling the Earth. This research is beginning of mining industry in harmony with nature which is occurring in a test tube.

Writing Feedback / The Relation of The Amount of Money and The number of Book Club Members [4]

The line graph shows the amount of money which have donated by the Council and the number of book club members who had joined. Overall, the two graphs have increasing in third year significantly.

The first line graph informs about the money which has given by the Council that has the highest number in third year above 40 thousand pound. The extremely increase by 15 thousand pounds in second to third year. The graph not only always increase in each year, but also decrease in fourth year at 35 thousand pounds.

The second line graph shows the number of members who had joined in club book. The graph always increases in each year from second to fourth year. The highest number of book club members had resulted in fourth year about 12 thousand people. The opposite said that the lowest number had given at approximately 5 thousand members.

Writing Feedback / The Fish Caught Result and The Fishing Boats that is Used in Westhaven [2]

The first chart informs about the number of the fish kind that is caught in near Westhaven. The second chart shows the kinds of small water vehicle that used in the same place. Overall, the number of Tuna and Swordfish that are caught as many as fishing boats that are used in Westhaven.

Firstly, the above chart talks the highest number of Tuna fish that is gotten at 110 thousand in 2011 and it has different total with three years before by 30 thousand. The opposite said that in 2008 is the lowest total of Tuna that is approximately 90 thousand. The catching of Tuna always increases from 2008 to 2011 with different total about 10 thousand. Secondly, the another data talk about the highest number of Swordfish which is caught always increasing trend, except is decreasing in 2010 at approximately 70 thousand. The highest number of Swordfish is resulted in 2010, same with the number of Tuna about 100 thousand. Not only the Swordfish has the highest value, but also it has the smallest number between 60 and 70 thousand.

The small vehicle water, fishing boats, that is used to catch the kind of fish, mainly Tuna and Swordfish, shows the lowest number of total of fishing boats which used in Westhaven about 40 thousand in 2010. The opposite said that the biggest number about 70 thousand in 2011. The three data before, from 2008 to 2010, have no different significantly in each year.

Writing Feedback / Watching and Visiting Methods that are Used to Learn About Country [2]

Aboard traveling is the most famous journey recently. Many people take on their view that learning of the other culture of each country is unique experience that not the all of people can get it. Watching is easy method that to get more information about the another country in the other places, and also there is different way to know anythings about the country that called is visiting the place.

Firstly, the method that needs low cost, easy to do, and has flexible time doing it by are watching television programs, films, or videos. Nowdays, the programs give more information about anythings, mainly the life of other of countries, such as culture, food, destination, or education. This choice only need low cost because we just watch it in house, park, or wherever and whenever that we can do it. Also, many devices which support to get more information about other countries only by watching, such as our handphone that has many features particularly youtube. We just type the keyword of our information of country that we need and finally we can get much informations about it.

Secondly, the another way to learn about the country is actually visiting this place. The traveling option make certain learning for everyone who study a real situation of the state. We can see and enjoy the situation or building evidently. Also, we may make interaction with local inhabitants and learn the culture of life or education too.

In my view, the conclusion is watching that easy and flexible method to learn about the country, but the visiting method is too important thing that can use to get more information about the country on visual sense and maybe unavailable in programs on television, video, or film.

Writing Feedback / The Main Feature to Get Happy Life is Depending to The Around Factor of Self [4]

Happy is the most important and main feature which be necessary for life today and the next too. Some people be happy because anythings, mainly job factors. However, the area where someone living or working and also there are people who cherish with us which other factors is more important too.

If someone has a job which they love doing, the people will be happy. The life always has many jobs that must be finished very well. On the other hand, some people have to enjoy it in order to be happy. For the example, every day, the students have some tasks, such as science, math, english etc, finally we must do it with the best way to get high score else. If the students loving do this task, they will finish the work successfully and be satisfy. Furthermore, if the students unsatisfied with the job, they will be stress and more lazy to do else.

The other factors are more important in order to someone be happy that are the environment where they living or working, and also there are people who cherish with us. The surrounding of life or work has main factor that make the someone be happy. In my view, the area will give many influences, well positive or negatif impact for someone get their happy. If our area is not support, we will not finish the task very well. The opposite said that if the area is espouse us, we will give the best task else. Furthermore, the people are main important factor which need by needed by someone to be happy. The people who cherish with us will give positive energy for our self and the our brain respon with it, finally we can be happy automatically.

The conclusion is many factors will make some people be happy which depend to love something that we do, the place where are life or work, and people who support us.

Writing Feedback / The Launching of 'Post-Truth' Concept in Oxford's Word of the Year for 2016 [3]

The one method to keep the English-speaking public's mood and preoccupations that are the selection of the word by Oxford's editors. The reason of to create this concept is increasing of social media and self-belief on our self that precise purpose to improve language skill, mainly in English word, has been discovering the linguistic footing for some time. The list of the word is adulting, alt-right, brexiteer, chatbot, coulrophobia, glass cliff, hygge, latinx, and woke.

Source : time

Writing Feedback / The Rare Phenomenon of deliquescetion of Polar Iceberg [4]

The polar snowflake, particularly in Antartica, is about 200 ft. out of the water that is melt be glaciers and it's the amount almost slightly. The liquefaction of the icebergs can result much of meneral in water which come from this polar ice. The average of polar ice is very young which is above one hundred thousand years old.

Source : ted

Writing Feedback / Teenagers Training for High School Candidate [4]

The new invention dedicate to build training ground that is to change the Honors be Regulars. The purpose of this training is creating the young people to be lead people and can be followed by the other people. Nowdays, the school has many systems, like homework, read textbook, taking test are make stressful, so this training must ignore to and trow the trash or unimportant things of this education system.

Source : TED

Writing Feedback / The New Forecast which is Predicted After Earthquake in New Zealand [3]

The New Zealand island is surrounded by ocean and consist of many coastal areas, like Kaikoura town where there are almost thousand tourists and habitants. The next disaster has been occurred in New Zealand, mainly in Northern Canterbury and southern Marlborough regions that are consist of 313 quakes in 13 hours and caused soil erosion approximately 100,000. The local business owner, Nick Shewring, talked about the Wellington, the capital of this country, ensued earthquake and flooding too. The others can predict that after 30 days the earthquake, there is the earthquake with bigger than before, almost 7.5 tremblor. Furthermore, the coastal area habitants have to evacuate to safety another place. Meanwhile, the scientist talked that this prediction not true thoroughly because it unconnected with week's supermoon phenomenon.

Source : TIME

Writing Feedback / The Early Baby Dragons Comes From Incarceration That Related with Young Range [2]

The young range is the most difficult stage of their life which changed from the elusive pink aquatic salamanders that hatched inside Slovenia's Postojna Cave about four months ago. Finally, it can conclude that the only one which known about the civilization is the baby dragons. It can be explained that they life range until 100 years old and the laying process is once or twice a decade, which their life in small community and in contaminated water.

Source : newscientist

Writing Feedback / Mathematic and science as the main features in the industrial revolution era [3]

Mathematic and science are as main feature in industrial revolution era like now. TIMSS, or Trends in International Mathematics and Science Study, is researching to 9-10-year-olds and 13-14-year-olds from more than 50 countries every four years which to know about the comparison ranking on mathematical and sciencetific knowledge. The result shows students in western Western be left behind in mathematic and science field from their coeval in countries like Singapore and Japan. This is caused by many reason which unapposite in their place.

Firstly, the education in college in western was included in common average and better than many developed countries. Secondly, the correlation of test scores and future economic success that it isn't decide the measurement of success ways. But, the true of affluence is determined from innovative skills, mainly in mathematic and science field, not only by education rank of their school. The government must be evaluate the standart of curriculum collage, especially in mathematic and science and revolutionary the common test in order to tend to be world based of standart test.

Source : newscientist

Writing Feedback / The Building of Recent English Words in Our Brain [4]

The English language is international tools of communication to another people in the world. As far as world revolutionary, the words in english is evolute too be new words. The making of the new English word only to make more easily in understanding in our brain. The establishment of new English word can be adopted in many ways. Firstly, the stealing of other languages in the world. For the example is from France, Japan, etc. Secondly, the compounding skill is sequishing the more than one word in English together to form new word, such as heartbroken is come from two word that are heart and broke. Another example is bookworm and sandcastle. Thirdly, blend the english word, fourtly the functional shift is which by changing how they operate. The final way is to take the first letter of something and squishing the words together, like OMG and other example of new word.

Source : ted

Writing Feedback / The community can come from villages or cities. Merits and demerits of Living in a Small Community [3]

The community can come from villages or cities. The range of community can be determined on their environment. For the example is small community which has advantage and negative impact for their area.

Firstly, the advantage of small community is everyone who know everyone else. It can build some spirit to help other people solving many problems, such as building project on school, mosque, or irrigation systems. Secondly, the other advantage is giving fast respon to other people when there are many problems in community.

Different to advantage aspect, the small community also has negative impact or disadvantage. It can be looking for information receiving for the example. In technology and information era, we cant't leave any information because the information had been main necessary in our life. We can update always about what happen today in our place or another place with another culture too. The information can be gotten from our community. If the range of community is small so our information that we got less information too. Finally we cant't increase our knowledge else. The feature of information can be come from large community than small community, because it has many information to sharing on another person in this community.

In the conclusion is the small community can give positive and negative influence to our self. The choice based on our self to join in small community or not, because it can be determine the future life too.

Writing Feedback / The Relation of Kind of Vehicle and The CO2 Emission is Illustrated on The Given Data [2]

The table shows the percentage and the average age of travellers which is based on the kind of vehicle. Meanwhile, the various forms of transport are CO2 emissions source which is explained in the bar chart. Overall, the car is the most popular transport is used and also result many CO2 emission in the environment

People who use public transport or share car travel for the work. The most commonly used transport by car. By comparison, the cycling or walking is the least common of the vehicle which is used. The group of travellers have the highest average age which used by train or bus, and the cyclists are the lowest average age group of travellers.

CO2 emission comes from various forms of transport. The cycling or walking cause little or no pollution and the car with no passenger causes the most pollution in the environment.

Writing Feedback / The Human Speech Origin was Learned from Old Fish Sound [2]

The 400 million-year-old fish shows the base of the brain where the neck allied with the head. The neurobiologist from Cornell University in Ithaca, New York, Andrew Bass, told that the all of social life in any animal was include in making and hearing sound, and also their world cames from the sound. The using of actually timed and coordinated muscle movements were used by vertebrates to make their sounds. The control these movements in animals was studied in the brain regions of animal. The cells in neurons is the region responsible to make sound in animal, because it coodinate the muscle controlling the fish's bladder. The forming of vocalisation is using the fundamental signal which come from the collection of neurons in animals. This region can result unique sound on others animal. But the evolutionary told that some old or early vertebrates commonly have same basic pattern of their vocal pacemakers.Meanwhile, the humans have other areas in the brain which linked to cognition and language. The defect on vocal pacemakers, nerves for the example, is making the negative influence in our communication skill. Finally, the conclusion is the human speech comes from old fish sound.

Writing Feedback / The Developing on Human Genetic Research [2]

The genetic is the main feature in human body especially which determined character, personality, physic like eye and hair color of someone. This genetic is decide of ancestry in health and illness potential, and Each someone has unique genome else. The sequencing of the genome is important for people to provide the new technology of to indigenize genome sequencing because it is commonly the genome sequencing in the laboratory. and also the genome sequencer at the moment is using mobile and internet access This instrument is called nanopore-based sequencer which to develop in genome technology sequencing from collaborative activating and empowering indigenous community as the citizen scientist. The indigenomics is genetic research to improve minority health through methods that respect indigenous knowledge. The purpose of this approach is science for the people by the people, starting with a tribal consultant resource, focused on educating indigenous communities on the potential use of genetic information