Writing Feedback / The pie charts gives information of survey result in 2005 and 2009 about employee and their bosses [2]

Writing Task 1: relationships at work (2005 and 2009)

The pie charts give information of survey result in 2005 and 2009 by asking employee about their relationshis with their manager and partner workers. Overall, the percentage of respon from relationship between workers and their supervisors also their workers experienced change with the different number.

Relationships with manager in 2005 and 2009 have contrast variation about percentage of respon is very pleasure for working with the manager. Three of employee answer sample rise in a number percentage. The precentage in the amount of respon called very good is 61% and 65% in different years. Beside that the precentage is decrease in the amount of respon called good is 26% and 22%.

On the other hand, Relationships with co-workers in 2005 and 2009 have slightly different about percentage of respon the question. Two of employee answer sample increase in a number percentage. The precentage in the amount of respon called very good is 63% and 70% in the first and last surveys. Meanwhile the percentage is drop in the amount of respon called good is 28% and 25%.

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Writing Feedback / Nowadays, young people need guidance from adults. Should they take a job before go to university? [2]

Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university.

Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages be for people who do this.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, young people need guidance from adult. The reason is prevent them from negative effect. They can learn to focus for their future. They have to continue their education which are study at University. It is better than take a job.

The leasure time that student still waiting to enter university. They can go to work and get money from their job. For example, young people work at coffee shop. It make them get many experience to meet people. In addition, they feel good for the job and forget about their education. As far as, the job make them not exited to continue their education. Beside that, the result from their work that can increase the income in family.

On the other hand, student can get a diffucult problem for not doing anything between their free time. For example, they cannot focus for the future. It is better than they prepare to pass university whice are take a course that related from their major also can increasing their ability. It make their time effectively to stay focus on. They can increase their knowledge by many ways which are get many information for studying in university. Therefore, they not fell shocked that first time to enter college. In addition, if they work before enter college it can spent much more time useless in daily activity.

In conclusion, young people should continue their education because it is important for them and people around them. They age is productive to learn and memorize. Education also will raise their status and make them easily to get job.

Writing Feedback / The air circulation into and out of the house, resulting in a loss of heat from inside the house [2]

The diagram below shows how heat is lost and energy wasted in a house because of air getting into and out of the house.

Summarise the information by reporting the main features and make comparisons where appropriate

The diagram illustrate about circulation of air in the house. It is make effect of using tools inside the house. The effect can produce heat weather.

The house consist of bathroom fan vent, plumbing stack vent, kitchen fan vent, electrical outlet, dryer vent and outdoor faucet. There are different type of cycle air. Air leaking out the house through bathroom fan vent, kitchen fan vent and attichatch. The others is air leaking ino the house with access from electrical outlet, dryer vent and outdoor faucet. Turning the location which the heat wheather is result for using the tools that provide energy. For example, washing machine and kutchen stove. While there are several ventilation holes and small gap between rooms. In other part there is light from above kitchen that other factor for produce heat weather. The upper house have many spot than bottom house. In contrast, many tools in house that produce energy make the athmosphere inside the house different with outside house that can reduce by holes around it.

Writing Feedback / Dealing with people is the most important aspect in a job, comparing to other communications skills [2]

The table gives the results of two surveys, in 1997 and 2006, in which people were asked which communication skills were essential in their job

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent

The table gives information about the result of two surveys in 1997 and 2006. Overall, communication skills which essential are in the job is dealing with people it comes from external part and listening carefully to colleagues it comes from internal part.

In 1997 the percentage of dc about 60 percent. After six years the percentage increased by 5%. On the other hand, in 1997, selling a product or service about 24%. It is the lowest percentage in the external part. Next, in 2006 the percentage decrease by 3%.

However, in 1997 the percentage of listening carefully to colleagues about 38% and experienced to rise by 9%. This is the highest percentage in internal part. Meanwhile, in 1997 making speeches or presentations about 7%. It is the lowest percentage in the internal part. Finally, in 2006 the percentage rised by 3%. The trend of the two parts in communication have an increased percentage in the next year.

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Writing Feedback / Summary Article : Biggest radio telescope on Earth ready to receive alien signals [3]

The largest radio telescope in the world is located in China. It is look like Five-hundred-metre Aperture Spherical Telescope that start to observe on outer space.

This tool is located in the remote mountainous areas of Guizhou Province in Southwest China, which can help to protect peoples from interference of radio waves, which are signals sent by a mobile phone and Wi-Fi.

Construction began in 2011, spurred the relocation of a small village. The telescope can go through stages of testing and improvement before full operation began, according to the Chinese Academy of Sciences.

The telescope, named for the size of this tool is about 200 meters wider than the rival, the Arecibo Observatory in Puerto Rico, built in the early 1960.

That means that it will be able to see fainter objects from Arecibo telescope also the function can detect, said Michael Nolan at University of Arizona in Tucson

To avoid problems in this tool, FAST mirror panels and receivers designed to move directly, allowed scientists to create a bowl-shaped parabolic pointing at any part of the sky under observation.

Writing Feedback / Two billion people, at least in America, India and Southern East Asia, learn English worldwide [2]

TED Summary : The world's english mania

The topic for this is mania. Many aspect people get form Media. People can see the news update which are they love about something, it can make people feel crying and screaming. There are several ways to express the something people like, which are supporters from football offer their favourite clubs.

In addition, the other thing which are mania about religion. Make people close enough to God. For example, mania can be good, also can be endanger also can be deathly.

The world has many mania about something which are learning english, listening chinese student practice their english by screaming to something.
How many people learning english worldwide?
2 billion of them, at least in America, India and Southern East Asia. Most of all in China. If you live in china that you must studied from 3 grade. In the future china will be the largest english speaking country.

Why english?
On othe hand, there are many aspect which are opportunity for better life, a job, to be able the favourit school. The people in china studied 12 a day for three years. 25% of their grade is based on english language. Intensity of learning english is an almost In the city.

However, english mania affected which are good or bad, english is world second languages part of the wider conversation, a global conversation which are climate change,hunger disease and universal language. English is language of problem solving because it can communicate and unify with the others. English represent hope for better future.

Writing Feedback / In modern era, there are many ways to keep body healthy. It depend on the people [3]

Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to healthy and fit if they want to be.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In modern era, there are many ways to keep body healthy. It depend on the people who want to stay fit. For example, in the office peoples can do some exercise at the free time. Although the others prefer to stay for doing nothing.

The office workers have little time because of their job in every day. It can effect for their healthy that they just sitting every time. In addition, they also find the fast food rather than nutrition foods, because the fast food more delicious than healthy foods. The taste is salty. Subsequently, they prefer using escalator than stairs. It make their body not produce sweat because they do less activities. Next, people use their cars instead of walking to arrive in the work office.

In other hand, employee can use their separate time to do many exercise. It can effect for their healthy nd focus. However, They can bring packed meal which are the nutrition foods, such as fresh fruits and vegetables that contain less oil and flavourin. Next, they can go to sport centre and make schedule to exercise because it is important. Although, it is look harder but if the people do the activities regularly, they can keep their body healthy. In addition, they can choose to walk instead using vehicle because it make their body be active.

Recently, i think many peoples have plan about their activity which are doing exercise but in fact they just need good start. If people can do it regularly, they can want to do it again.

In conclusion, for being healthy it is difficult because there are many way to reach that. People just need healthy lifestyle become habit. Unfortunately, the people think it is difficult to get fit, in fact it can be very easy.

Writing Feedback / TED Summary : Teach every child about food [4]

Causes of death, people need revolution for make them healthy like usual. Food revolution need for better future, because of the food many teenagers suffer an obesity. It made them cannot go anywhere. In addition, there is a massive problem that many places provide fast food. For example, the food like pizza. The food is not fresh, because of the time many student eating non-healthy foods at every time which are early morning, afternoon and night. Many children do not know about kinds of vegetables and fruit. They can be taught from home or school. Small children should drink two bottles of milk before going to school. There are some materials that are worse as much sugar in there. There are other foods that contain much sugar. Sugar can effect longer if children always drink it, just form milk the impact for the future become dangerous. People need fresh foods with dishes made from home. While, with the help of government by limiting refined products fast food, it would be good for the future.

Writing Feedback / The grade of school of Bulgarian students who were anxious to leave their country and stay abroad [2]

The chart shows the grade of school of Bulgarian student who be anxious to leave and stay in abroad in 2001, 2006 and 2008.
The greatest grade for student who live abroad is the category of secondary education. The percentage of people in this domination is 65% in 2002. A percentage of student in 2006 have little differences at 4 %. However, only 59% of the category in 2008.

The most grade for student about primary and lower education is thirty two percent in 2008. A percentage in the 2006 have 19% also in 2008 there is slightly differences at 1%.

Significant percentage seen in the last category about higher education have lowest percentage at 9%. Student in 2006 have the highest percentage at 20%. On the other hand, in 2002 have number percentage at 17%.

In conclusion, all the group experience the same categories to some extent, the domination about secondary education have the higgest percentage from the others.

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Writing Feedback / Do you think that people can only be happy if they have a job really enjoy? WRITING TASKS 2 - IELTS [2]

Some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing. Others say that other factore are more important.

Do you think that people can nly be happy if they have a job they really enjoy?

The necessities of life over the years has increased, especially the cost. Costs can be searching by worked. From the results of people working can earn a lot of money to completed their necessity. The money can be used also for luxuries which are watching our favorite games and staying at a resort.

Therefor, due to people hobby that makes money that they get two advantages. First, the hobby and money make profit. For example, becoming a football player, actor, singer. They do it because it can usefulfor their activity. Actually, many people who prefer this way. Thus, people can do whatever that they wants. Inhabitans can spent their time with living into the standards above the average. Although, people will not be satisfied with it and continue to find a happiness.

On other hand, pleasure not always about money, but there are people who get pleasure from other factors. For example, they can find another people that nee some help around them. Thus, people do small things but often which are exercising, listening to music, hanging out with many friends. That effect will be effected with the others people and give feedback too. It can useful for them to communicate each others. Next, simplicity would be made their life different.

In conclusion, depending on each person personally about their pleasure but mostly people prefer to find their happiness from wealth. Some people are still able to life with simple thing. Thus they enjoyed their life. For most people, other factors are far more important.

Writing Feedback / Every person has take the control and responsibility for the type of life that he wants to lead. [2]

TED Summary : How to make work-life balance work

Nigel Marsh has ben having seven years experienced with studying and writing about worklife balance. First, progeress is most important to use effectively time with familiy. Second, government and corporation became the most important elements. They have solution for this issue for us. Every person has take the control and responsibility for the type of life that they want to lead. If you don't design your life, someone will take the control from others people. Although people need the idea to balance. Its particularly important, that people never put the quality of their life in other hand of the commercience proportion. Third, carefully with the limit time as a friend that people choose. Thus, detail step by step that description ideal balance. Approach the way in the balance purpose, that small things matter being more interesting effect for dramatically to the people in their life. With the smallest investasion in the right place people can get many aspects which are transform quality relationship and life.

Writing Feedback / Hans Rosling took on the task to teach global development for an undergraduate student. [5]

TED Summary : Debunking third-world myths with the best stats you've ever seen

Hans Rosling, he took on the task to teach global development for undergraduate student. He having spending about 20 years at african institute. Has country the highest children mortality? he put them together for the compare the data, so each of country has twice chance mortality for the others. It is bigger of the different uncertainty of data. When he was compared the result, it has differented that result came from many countries. For the example, he put facilities surroundings, number per children per woman, 1-8 since 1962 in all families from all country. Industrial country have a small country and long life. Although, developing country have large country and short life. The slide show illustrate about the increase over the years. However, we don't look just in the data, we find something unusual that chance in asia which one of the reason from the social or economical chance. Another data came or income from people in the world. A new dimensional from social value. For example, huge development variation in Africa, South Asia but different with Afganistan etc. Finally, we have databases to linking the data, produce animation, liberate and search function.

Writing Feedback / Nowadays, an individual can access information easy, because there is the Internet. [2]

The internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern era, technology is computer network which connected to all of the world. Internet is role for the communicate media. It can apply to each person for the daily activites. For example, they use the internet for collect information.

In the past, people get information from the specific area like library. Then, there were books available. Thus, person can increase their konwledge. However, it is spent more time to go there. For example, people must find the books that related to their job. Therefore, it make them read more until the end of the books and remember about the subject also make a summary. On other hand, the books can find hardly cause they must to bought or borrow. Then, there are a few people who sold the books.

Nowadays, individual can access information with easily, because there are an internet. The easiest way for people to finished their daily routines. For example, employment who need the information about their job also college student which do their task. They do not have to find book, because people just use internet and get that they need. People can collect many information. It useful for them to find work. In contrast, it changed people lives that they prefer to stayed at home because they can browse latest news for every days.

Overall, I think there is an internet make different existence for people. When people get many information easily it will be make their life. Finally,this is significant to be better life.

Writing Feedback / According to Snowden, the right to privacy of data is not a political issue. [4]

TED Summary : How We Take Back the Internet

Shown from a distance using a robot, Edward Snowden spoke about surveillance and internet freedom. The right to privacy of data, according to him is not a political issue, but people need to rethink fundamentally what the role of the internet in our lives and the laws that protect them.

Thus, many aspects from the internet which are kind of internet people want, the kind of relationship between people and society. After that Consultant NSA provides an example of the NSA's activities include eavesdropping and security. NSA intercepts to including which are telephone, Internet communications, radio communications, and other communications that can be tapped.

One thing can people do is being together to solved the problem through the government.
Boundless informant is hidden by NSA program from Congress which already implemented.

Therefore, even companies that cooperated with the NSA, which at least compelled to do legally, the NSA is not satisfied with it, and finally, people need the companies to working hard. It has ensured that they will be represented to the interests of users, and also supports rights user.

Writing Feedback / Is it worth to move around in several different places during our lifetime? [2]

Staying in one place became a common situation in the past. However, revolution era, make people moved to another place. It has advantage and disadvantage for both conditions.

Some people say that there were several interesing in the current locations. People who live in their hometown have close families. It influences people helped each other more. They are accustomed to managing their daily activites that became positive. Then, the effect for family can helped in house. In contrast, there were disadvantages as well. People got bored because the same activity every day and would not have been many work chance, because, there are a little field of employment.

I think there are more possible advantages of being people who move from place to place much more. People can learn more from new destination to lived. Then people got many new friends there. From both situations, It can useful for their knowledge. For example, people can share it to their parents and give the information about variation place. After that, people have a chance to got of quality jobs. In my opinion, the main disadvantages are that people will be infrequently to met their family. Therefore, people must set aside their time for parents. For example, people can contact their close family by phone every day.

Overall, i think there are more advantages if people move from place to place. People had more experienced to develop their life and got many friends. Thus, that has positive effects for their future. On the other hand people must remember where they have came from.