Writing Feedback / The Main Feature to Get Happy Life is Depending to The Around Factor of Self [4]

Happy is the most important and main feature which be necessary for life today and the next too. Some people be happy because anythings, mainly job factors. However, the area where someone living or working and also there are people who cherish with us which other factors is more important too.

If someone has a job which they love doing, the people will be happy. The life always has many jobs that must be finished very well. On the other hand, some people have to enjoy it in order to be happy. For the example, every day, the students have some tasks, such as science, math, english etc, finally we must do it with the best way to get high score else. If the students loving do this task, they will finish the work successfully and be satisfy. Furthermore, if the students unsatisfied with the job, they will be stress and more lazy to do else.

The other factors are more important in order to someone be happy that are the environment where they living or working, and also there are people who cherish with us. The surrounding of life or work has main factor that make the someone be happy. In my view, the area will give many influences, well positive or negatif impact for someone get their happy. If our area is not support, we will not finish the task very well. The opposite said that if the area is espouse us, we will give the best task else. Furthermore, the people are main important factor which need by needed by someone to be happy. The people who cherish with us will give positive energy for our self and the our brain respon with it, finally we can be happy automatically.

The conclusion is many factors will make some people be happy which depend to love something that we do, the place where are life or work, and people who support us.

Writing Feedback / Watching and Visiting Methods that are Used to Learn About Country [2]

Aboard traveling is the most famous journey recently. Many people take on their view that learning of the other culture of each country is unique experience that not the all of people can get it. Watching is easy method that to get more information about the another country in the other places, and also there is different way to know anythings about the country that called is visiting the place.

Firstly, the method that needs low cost, easy to do, and has flexible time doing it by are watching television programs, films, or videos. Nowdays, the programs give more information about anythings, mainly the life of other of countries, such as culture, food, destination, or education. This choice only need low cost because we just watch it in house, park, or wherever and whenever that we can do it. Also, many devices which support to get more information about other countries only by watching, such as our handphone that has many features particularly youtube. We just type the keyword of our information of country that we need and finally we can get much informations about it.

Secondly, the another way to learn about the country is actually visiting this place. The traveling option make certain learning for everyone who study a real situation of the state. We can see and enjoy the situation or building evidently. Also, we may make interaction with local inhabitants and learn the culture of life or education too.

In my view, the conclusion is watching that easy and flexible method to learn about the country, but the visiting method is too important thing that can use to get more information about the country on visual sense and maybe unavailable in programs on television, video, or film.

Writing Feedback / The Fish Caught Result and The Fishing Boats that is Used in Westhaven [4]

The first chart informs about the number of the fish kind that is caught in near Westhaven. The second chart shows the kinds of small water vehicle that used in the same place. Overall, the number of Tuna and Swordfish that are caught as many as fishing boats that are used in Westhaven.

Firstly, the above chart talks the highest number of Tuna fish that is gotten at 110 thousand in 2011 and it has different total with three years before by 30 thousand. The opposite said that in 2008 is the lowest total of Tuna that is approximately 90 thousand. The catching of Tuna always increases from 2008 to 2011 with different total about 10 thousand. Secondly, the another data talk about the highest number of Swordfish which is caught always increasing trend, except is decreasing in 2010 at approximately 70 thousand. The highest number of Swordfish is resulted in 2010, same with the number of Tuna about 100 thousand. Not only the Swordfish has the highest value, but also it has the smallest number between 60 and 70 thousand.

The small vehicle water, fishing boats, that is used to catch the kind of fish, mainly Tuna and Swordfish, shows the lowest number of total of fishing boats which used in Westhaven about 40 thousand in 2010. The opposite said that the biggest number about 70 thousand in 2011. The three data before, from 2008 to 2010, have no different significantly in each year.

Writing Feedback / The Relation of The Amount of Money and The number of Book Club Members [4]

The line graph shows the amount of money which have donated by the Council and the number of book club members who had joined. Overall, the two graphs have increasing in third year significantly.

The first line graph informs about the money which has given by the Council that has the highest number in third year above 40 thousand pound. The extremely increase by 15 thousand pounds in second to third year. The graph not only always increase in each year, but also decrease in fourth year at 35 thousand pounds.

The second line graph shows the number of members who had joined in club book. The graph always increases in each year from second to fourth year. The highest number of book club members had resulted in fourth year about 12 thousand people. The opposite said that the lowest number had given at approximately 5 thousand members.

Writing Feedback / Sea water is the Resource of Mining Mineral Industry [2]

The environment produced the amount of minerals which is accumulated by bacteria during an hour of the period. If it is occurring, the fulfillment of clean drinking water in other countries will deficiency. One of the best ways to solve this problem to produce the clean is called desalination process which water take out water from seawater with remove the salt before by reverse osmosis (RO) technique.

This membrane filtration technology takes the seawater, then spread on the pressure to force it through a membrane and this process will result in energy to produce clean water which reduces the salt from seawater. This process is known reverse osmosis. Because this process is very expensive, finally it doesn't use by many countries. Also, it is resulting brine which pumped back out into the sea and it damages the local sea ecology. The future desalination place will build in 2060 and it has target produce 900 million liters per day of desalinated water.

This project is researching about the number of metals, particularly calcium, potassium, and magnesium from out of desalination brine, which defiling the Earth. This research is beginning of mining industry in harmony with nature which is occurring in a test tube.

Writing Feedback / Donald Trump's Team Won't 'Rule Out' and not Planning to Create a Muslim Registry [5]

The establishing of registry based on religion, particularly Muslim, wouldn't go to rule out and not planning on it too, but the Donald Trump's team will say to some people who radicalized have to be prevented from coming into the US country. Moreover, The "extreme vetting" in Trump campaign will always defense, and it is one reason the creation of Muslim registry based on the National Security Entry-Exit Registration system

Source : Time

Writing Feedback / Bleached corals in the Pacific have started bouncing bac [3]

The scientists make a research about coral around the island of Kiritimati and proved the coral about 85 percent was dead, 10 percent was sick and bleached, but only 5 per cent was doing okay. It occurred because of hot water phenomenon from El Nino. this is natural warming which sometimes occurred in the Pacific ocean and has the influence to change weather worldwide and also made global warming effect which coral damage in the sea. Meanwhile, the coral species are able to rebound and recover their life, but it still susceptible by El Nino threat, finally need to protect the coral with any natural systems.

Source : New Scientist

Writing Feedback / 30 Days Method to Try New Something [3]

The new something can add to our life with many ways, mainly think or planning and try it for the next 30 days because this way is very effectively to support our self-do more, pressure and harder 30 days challenge and finally be much more memorable about something. We can keep thinking of self that one small thing is sustainable changes.

Source : TED

Writing Feedback / The total demand on hybrid vehicles in 2009 was twice as much as three years earlier [7]

The global sale of hybrid vehicles is showed in below chart between 2006 and 2009. The kinds of countries which participate in this survey that are Japan, US, and other. Overall, the total sales in 2009 were the twice amount of the total sales in 2009 and it includes the upward trend.

Firstly, Japan always increases the sale of hybrid transport between 2006 and 2009, which it has the highest number of sales at almost 350 thousand that it increased extremely from 2008 to 2009. Not only Japan has highest sales, but also it has the lowest number of hybrid vehicle sales approximately 50 thousand.

Secondly, Ushas up and down trend of the hybrid transport sales which it has the lowest number of sales about 250 thousand vehicles and also the US has the highest number of hybrid sales by 100 thousand in 2007 or from one year before in 2006.

Thirdly, the other countries have the gradual increase about 50 thousand transports from 2006 to 2009 which the smallest number of hybrid vehicle sales at 50 thousand, also the highest number is over 100 thousand and below in 150 thousand of the hybrid vehicle.

Writing Feedback / "Inventors are not as important to society as doctors, Agree or disagree?" [3]

The talking about the position or function of the scientist to society as same important as the doctors. The inventors or the doctors just have the different way in the society, but these work have same important to increase the good quality of society life. In my view, I disagree with the statement that the doctor is important to society and not for the inventor.

The doctor has a job description to solve other problems in the environment, particularly in the health field. The health sector is one of the big problems which occur the body of the human in their population. For example, many diseases have damaged the society like cancer, diabetes, hypertension etc. which need the medical treatment from the doctors. Therefore, the doctors have the main job to reduce the percentage of disease risk or to solve many problems only in the medic subject. However, it is different of the way to solve other problems in outer the medician, like agriculture, technology, or the environment. The doctors can't solve these problems.

The inventors have many skills to solve the problem in society which the problem can't be solved by the doctor. For example, to make many solutions to solve agriculture problem like the drought is increased the cloud seeding which has researched by the scientist in order to occur the not nature rainwater. Also, to increase eco electricity power system, so the scientist makes the outline research of wave electricity. In many cases, there is work which can't be solved by the doctor but can be done with another person, mainly scientist

Finally, the conclusion of this problem is the inventor as more important as the doctor. The inventors have many skills to solve many problems in the society which can't be solved by the doctors. I suggest that these jobs must be work together in the society.

Writing Feedback / Positive Impact on The Walking Activity [6]

One of the daily activity of some people is sitting 9.3 hours a day. This activity makes the negative influence in healthy of someone which many diseases like breast cancer and colon cancer, heart disease, and type two diabetes which the percentage are 10 percent, 6 percent, 7 percent. Therefore, the one and main solution to reduce the negative impact of over sitting is walking more in anytime and anywhere, because the fresh air will mobilize fresh thinking and finally give some new ideas in the brain, also the walking in the way make us in order to respect to others people in their environment.

Source : TED

Writing Feedback / The new appearance of The Canada transition out of coal-powered electricity by 2030 [6]

Canada has the plan to reduce the old coal-fired power in 2030 with accelerating from existing timetable that the defeating of trump's ideas to reborn the coal industry. They are two option which will give to the four provinces, Alberta, Saskatchewan, Nova Scotia, and New Brunswick, where still burn coal for power that it produces power using lower-emitting resources or using carbon capture and storage technology. Nowadays, the non-carbon emitting resource produces 80 percent of Canada's electricity and will increase by 10 percent in 2030. the use of the Canada Infrastructure Bank's public-private funding mechanism will help the Canadian government to the realization the transition out of coal-powered electricity.

Source : TIME

Writing Feedback / The Truth of Turkey and Tryptophan [9]

The turkey's meat has a bad reputation to make eaters sleepy. It contains the amino acid L-tryptophan, which produces sleep-promoting serotonin and melatonin. The opposite is the tryptophan that has the function to against sleepiness with the much of protein which can regulate insulin levels and actually combat fatigue.

Source : TIME

Writing Feedback / Children use their smartphones everywhere - it provides to the unhealthy lifestyle [2]

Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The main problem of unhealthy lifestyle happen in manny children, particularly the use of handphone which it need solving way from both educational institution and their parents. In my view, the solving way from them must do together in order to can towards the children unhealthy lifestyle free.

Nowadays, the use of handphone in information era always increase typically in children life. The children use the handphone in school and almost in their house. On the other hand, the school have the task to decrease on the handphone using when they in the school or when the children in the home, especially in their bedroom which always use their handphone. Recently, there is many school which still allow the students particularly the children to bring handphone in around school activity. Finally, will use their handphone when in the classroom or in break time. The school must not allow their student to bring handphone to the school because it will disturb the teaching and learning activity, and also it has many negative impacts to their healthy, mainly the problems in brain or their bone.

However, the children have another place too which they most wate their time in the home, so the parents are the most important to solve the problem of handphone using in the children life. If the children take more their time to interact with their handphone, their healthy will have many diseases which destroy their body, such as rematic and brain or bone disease. The parents must not allow the favorite activity of their children and they can change this activity with do these activities in the home, such as gathering with many people in watching room or family room to communicate the hoby, the today news, or the school.

Finally, the conclution of this problem is the both father-mother and the schools have main feature to help the children far of handphone using un their activity. I also suggest that the school and the parent always see and more protection to the children and always give may alternative acivities which interesting for the children.

Writing Feedback / Integration Problems for People Living Aboard [5]

The chart talks about the relation between many people living aboard and the problems which they have. Overview, the main feature of the problems consist of three factors which is sorting out finances, sorting out healthcare, and finding educational institution for their cildren which happen in people aged range. Also the finding school for their children is the less percentage of their problem.

Firstly, the sourting out finances factor always appear in over 25 percent which the highest percentage about 35 percent in range age of people is 35 - 54 years. However, the lowest percentage of this problem almost 30 percent in people over 55 years. The different between young aged and middle aged group of people by below 5 percent.

Secondly, the highest percentage of sourting out healthcare over 35 percent in people middle aged which the opposite said that the lowest percentage between 30 and 35 percent in people over 55 years. The different of this factor is not sharply which the different of value by below 5 percent or same with the different of first problem.

Thirdly, the finding school has smaller percentage of other problems before which it has the highest percentage approximately 20 percent in people aged 35 - 54 years and also it has the lowest percentage at below 5 percent in people age range over 55 years.

Writing Feedback / The process of finding English and French Language Educators in Ontario [3]

Percentage of first-year teachers with regular teaching jobs by year of graduation

The graph illustrates about the percentage of the process finding English and French Language Educator in Ontario each year of graduation between 2001 and 2007. Overall, the recruitment process of French-language teachers is bigger than English-language teachers, and also the French-language teachers show the up trend of the line graph, it means the line graph of English-language teachers shows the opposite. However, two line graphs have the same amount of starting point.

Firstly, the line graph of English-language teachers has starting point about 70 percent in 2001, the fall dramatically in two next years. For two next years again, the graph slightly increases and have the peak at between 40 percent and 50 percent in 2005. Finally, the line decreases again and has the smallest percentage at below 30 percent in 2007.

Secondly, the another line graph is French-language teachers has the same starting point in 2001 about 70 percent, then the line decreases by almost 20 percent in 2002 and also it is the smallest percentage of this graph. However, the line graph increases again in one next year, then it has the slight increase between 2003 and 2005, but the line graph decreases at below 70 percent and finally the line increases again and it means that it has the highest percentage at over 70 percent in 2007.

Writing Feedback / The media should bring more attention to commoners people news than the celebrities news. [4]

The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or football. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead

The news of celebrities always being reported in media and the opposite talks that common people show is rare in media. The phenomenon must more attention to commoners people news than the celebrities news. My point of view said that the unknown people news more essential to educate many people in other places. Moreover, the celebrity news is important else for inspiring abut new mode style, particularly in modern lifestyle.

Firstly, the entertainer news is important to entertain many people by comedian, cinema, their daily activity in modern style which it is very useful to develop our style and also to update our old fashion especially. Many celebrities have the modern style in their interior design of their house, beautiful jewelry which they have, kinds of other cosmetics that can be inspiring to use for people who duplicate their modern beauty. Also, the celebrities can entertain by their daily activity which is the humorous moment.

However, there is news which is more essential for our life which is unknown people report because, from this news, we can learn more about reality life in society and also inspire our self to do much useful something in daily activity. The ordinary people have many unique activities, such as in agriculture, culture, and education field. For the example, the farmer of commoners who lived in the rural village can create hydroponic technology to increase high result in many seasons without the use of large land media. The inspiring technology can educate many people in order to always innovation in technology towards self-production program in this developing country. secondly, many inspirations activity of common people which can become role models to introduce the traditional culture in the international area and can be known by other countries in the world. Thirdly, many innovation programs in education field which to inspire and more educating the young generation to increase the studying skills.

In the conclusion, the celebrity news is important to other people as to entertain the citizen, but the news of common people is more demanded to society life in order to towards development life. On the other hand, I suggest that the industrial must be able to decide balance between reporting the celebrity and unknown people to increase the knowledge of inhabitants.

Writing Feedback / Water Canary is Easily Future Devices [4]

The cholera is one of disease that is caused by water contaminated. The previous device to test water contaminated has many disadvantages, like after it changes, the picture of condition on the ground will be obtained and for implementation need very expensive cost. The alternative device is water canary with many advantages like it is fast because use light for the chemical reaction to take place, also it is cheap device because no need to use reagents that can run out, and finally it no need expert person to get actionable information about water contaminated. The working step to test water is inserted a water sample and within second, the device will display either the light which the red light indicate the contaminated water or the green light that indicate safety sample. Everyone can collect life-saving information and can monitor water quality condition. This device integrates with wireless networking by GPS and GSM which can read automatically transmitted to servers to be mapped in real time, so this way can prevent the contaminated water before it becomes emergencies

Source : TED