akbarmappiare
Sep 6, 2016
Writing Feedback / The pie graphs compare the proportion of average budget spent by household for 6 specific categories [13]
Hi..
These are my thoughts for your writing.
Thepei PIE graphs compare the proportion of 6 categoriesof spending by homes OF AVERAGE BUDGET SPENT BY HOUSEHOLD FOR SIX SPECIFIC CATEGORIES IN a country between 1950 and 2010. It is clear that the majority number of expenditures by ...
OVERALL, IT IS IMPORTANT TO NOTE THAT A LEVEL OF EXPENSE FOR FOOD SUCCESSFULLY SURPASSED THE BEGINNING POSITION OF EXPENDITURE FOR THE HOUSING CATEGORY. IN ANY CASE, WHILE THE PERCENTAGE OF THE EXPENSE FOR THE HOUSING AND SCHOOLS DECLINED, OTHER FIGURES EXPERIENCED A REVERSE TREND. (These are my alternative overview)
Make sure that you write more than 2 sentences in a paragraph .
I have read your writing closely. I suggest you attend the comparisons amongst the figures to boost your score..
GOOD LUCK
:D
Hi..
These are my thoughts for your writing.
The
OVERALL, IT IS IMPORTANT TO NOTE THAT A LEVEL OF EXPENSE FOR FOOD SUCCESSFULLY SURPASSED THE BEGINNING POSITION OF EXPENDITURE FOR THE HOUSING CATEGORY. IN ANY CASE, WHILE THE PERCENTAGE OF THE EXPENSE FOR THE HOUSING AND SCHOOLS DECLINED, OTHER FIGURES EXPERIENCED A REVERSE TREND. (These are my alternative overview)
Make sure that you write more than 2 sentences in a paragraph .
I have read your writing closely. I suggest you attend the comparisons amongst the figures to boost your score..
GOOD LUCK
:D