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Sep 28, 2016
Writing Feedback / Article Summary: Aviation Emissions Are Next Target in Fight Against Climate Change [3]
A conference in Montreal will be held this week to invite all negotiators from around the world discussing and composing a framework to limit future aviation emissions. .... will be held this week inviting all negotiators from all around the world to discuss and compose a framework of future aviation emissions...
no verb . it is also a hope of all citizens ......
you may write 'invitees' to avoid mentioning 'negotiators' several times
All of those planS can not stand alone, .....
Many airlines companies also hope for
Although , this stemming emissions (...) a difficult task, however all...... [redundancy]
..... support and hope
repetitive
. All in all, all of these agreementS address to keep global ...
In the other wordS , all residentS around the globe expect the authority commitment to fight climate ...
still need to concern on several minor issues, especially in accuracy. lexical resource also needs to enhance while just like the word form chosen
A conference in Montreal will be held this week to invite all negotiators from around the world discussing and composing a framework to limit future aviation emissions. .... will be held this week inviting all negotiators from all around the world to discuss and compose a framework of future aviation emissions...
It also a hope of all citizen to lead a significant step toward the climate change.
no verb . it is also a hope of all citizens ......
All of those negotiators
you may write 'invitees' to avoid mentioning 'negotiators' several times
All of those planS can not stand alone, .....
Many airlines companies also hope for
Although , this stemming emissions (...) a difficult task, however all...... [redundancy]
..... support and hope
repetitive
. All in all, all of these agreementS address to keep global ...
In the other wordS , all residentS around the globe expect the authority commitment to fight climate ...
still need to concern on several minor issues, especially in accuracy. lexical resource also needs to enhance while just like the word form chosen