Writing Feedback / How Did a Blind Man Climb Yosemite's El Capitan in a Day? [3]

The first blind climber ever was Erik Weihenmayer in El Capitan in a day On 26th September 2016. Elite team of climbers and mountaineers accompanied him, including Hans Florine, who had a record 177 times to climb El capitan. The team chose the route of East Buttres, the shortest one to el cap with 11 pitches and 1,500 vertical feet.

He was not worry about the duration. He and team set a blistering speed and passed another climbers on the road and reached the top in a short time at 3 Pm. It was around eight hours after they started. Weihenmayer had trained and enhanced his technique to chose the suitable approached and learned on Aconcagua that someone walked over though snowy.

He mittigated the potential damage for himself by walking in single way between two teammates who guided him in front of him. He kept one hand on that bags' friend. It was really struggle for him, so he never come up with this idea.

Writing Feedback / Hurricane Matthew due to hit Haiti with 210kph winds today [3]

Haiti faces a flsh flodds and wind storm extremely which was a terrible hurricane. Tha 4 categories of hurricane approach with maximum stable winds 201 kilometres per hours. This is hoped can pass without damaging the east areas of jamaica and then cross over to near by the south-western tip of haiti on Monday local time.

The National Hurricane Centre in Miami stated that the storm is forecasted to beat a little number of population in eastern of Cuba on Tuesday afternoon. The forecasters said the metres of rain could fall on several restricted areas of Haiti, blow up the fears of death and flood in the high level of deforestation country.

The warning of the hurricane is announced in Haiti, Jamaica, and parts of Cuba. The continous rain in part of jamaica cause flood and sink homes. The forecaster said that the sourthen haitian village would be in worst damagely.

Writing Feedback / Christina Warinner: Tracking ancient diseases using ... plaque (TED) [3]

Chritina Warinner, an archeological genetist at the center for Evolutionary Medicine at the University of Zurich, hope to well-understand abou evolutionary vulnerabilities of our bodies that we can enhance to mantain our health in the near future. She explained that there are different ways to approach it with extracting Human DNA from old bones and from this, she reconstructs the human genome at differents points for changing that might be related to adapt, risks factors and inherited diseases.

However, the most vital health challenges face the complex form and dynamic rather than just mutation of our genome. It interplays between genetic variation, diet, microbes and parasites. These disease revolute to complex component. In order to understand these disiases, we need to lear about the pas study of human genome and more holistic approach to human health in the past.

So, there are several numbers of challenges that we face today. We have to continue and research about this unique phenomenon research.

Writing Feedback / HAWAI'I VOLCANOES NATIONAL PARK [3]

A giant Volcanic crater named caldera on huge island in Hawai was formed by hot searing activity. The bottom of the caldera, there were lava and steams. Kilauea located in Hawai's Volcanoes National Park. Mauna Loa is another volcanoes in Hawai tha well-known too with hig geological activity. Hawai's Volcanoes was discovered in 1916. Nowadays, this park becaome the most visited with over 1.5 million visitors per year.

Kilauea was one of the most active volcanoes in the world since 1983. The visitors can have a look the eruption directly when they come there from a safe place. To see Kilauea's summit, the tourist can walk across the field which full of lava and this land is created by cold lava process as well as beatiful green scenery such as Lush rain forest.

Finally, volcanoes are not the only one center of interest in Hawaai to encourage the number of tourists. Little zoo such as the nene goos, carnivourus caterpillars and delighted face spider. So, there are a lot of activities that we can enjoy in the Hawaai's Volcanoes National Parks

Writing Feedback / Camille A. Brown: A visual history of social dance in 25 moves [3]

Camille said that dance is language that can emerge and express a society. It not just a dance but, it is a choreographed by anyone who want to make a sequent body movement. Lots of people should realize that dance need a crativity both individuals and creative identity because social dances named Bubble Up changes and spreads like wildfire.

We have to remember about history of dance. In American-African dances how they could be influenced by history. These are fully adapted by creative movement in the present. We need a huge emotional spirit to create a choreography as like the Cakewalk, the dance that parodied by mannerisms of Southern high society. A mad thing about this dance is performed for the masters who never suspended of being fun.

In the 1980s and 1990s this trend countinued with the emergence of hip-hop, african-american social dance that more vixible that long last past. Camille end his TED's talk with "We speak a common language. We exist and we are free".

Writing Feedback / The World's Best Towns for Outdoor Thrills [3]

Areas of beauty are always the best choice for outdoor activity especially for campers. We need a guide and plan for exploring strange areas. Here one of the top 9 Towns with Best outdoor activities. Moah, Utah. It has easy acces since it is in central acces point with beautiful parks in the United States. We will be ssurrounded by Rocks of arches National Park with a hundred mile green canyon. The visitors can climb in Alpine Forest.

There are several numbers of bike activities such as trail rides, technical rides etc tha can be the most favorite place for bikers. This a favourite route for advanced experience of cycling in Porcupine Rim.we can down-hill 200-foot cliif overlooking and turn in through the Juniper Woodland and pine Forest with artificial technic to drop along the way.

Outdoor events can be handle by local entrepreuners such as Bike shops and outdoor stores. Local community shoud tackle the position to increas selling goods in this whole area.

Writing Feedback / Rebecca MacKinnon: We can fight terror without sacrificing our rights [2]

The biggest issue for our democracy is how we reduce terrors without sacrificing and violating a human's right. Rebecca MacKinnon became several workers in journalist, researchers etc, she concluded that our democracy do not double down on securing and defending human rights.

Take Tunisia as the example, It was a succesfull country to revolute to be democracy country but five years after that, they got serious invasion by ISIS recruitment and the citizens ask the governement to take them safe with everything. Iyad el-Bagdhadu, an activist who make a joke of ISIS on Twitter and he got his account suspended because he shared about the leader of ISIS.

So, these social network companies has a vital role to discourse the public. They have to fix this problems to avoid inadequate way of people see now in the particular media. They need to be tranparrant to the Users about their mechanism. Rebecca believes that, finally, we can tackle the cutting-edge empowered network of extrimist to be more peaceful world in the future.

Writing Feedback / A record audience is expected to watch tonight's presidential debate [2]

Over 100 million inhabitans are hoped presenting the firts presidential open debate beetwen Hillary Clinton and Donald Trump. Most spectators will fulfill the capacity of the place where it will take place. In 1960, the firts debate in television between John Kennedy and Richard Nixon were wtched by 70 million US citizens.

According to kennedy, the debate was the condition to find out and breakthrough. The most valuable issue was a compulsory of televission growth. Nixon was estimated by listeners of radio to be better candidate, who the best candidate for the US Citizens. He regulate a rule of debates when he became candidate again in 1968 and 1972. After that the pattern of the debate this candidates used again in 1976.

Recently, the debate as the center of president campaign. The debates beetwen baragck Obama and Mitt Romney was watched around 67 million spectators and became the most favorite debate in 20 years. If this debate(beetwen Hillary and Trump) is attended by 100 million people, it will be a powerfull viewing figures.

Writing Feedback / Bill Gates finding about effective method of teaching [3]

Everyone need a coach to enhance our quality of doing something. Every people need a feedback, that is the way we improve . however, only a few group of people almost know a sistematically feedback to help them to do their job better. Trake teachers as the example, over 90 per cent teachers always give particular feedback in one word, "satisfactory".

When the teachers say it was satisfactory, Bill Gates said that he had no hope to be better. Our teachers deverse better and how we can help teachers to ehance their skills and performance. C hina is the best rank in reading proficiency because they give a adequate feedback and measure properly to the teachers as well as, of course, the teachers give feedback to the students.

Why it was so important? Because there are so many factors, teachers has their asses and evaluate their tudents to give a feedback to set up the best curriculume as methods in teaching.

Writing Feedback / Going to Mars Could Mess Up the Hunt for Alien Life [3]

America make a great celebration of Its Independence Day with moment properly by landing several thousand rovers on the surface of Mars in Twenty Years ago. The firts touch down that Pathfinder sapcecraft in northen-lowland called Planitia on July 4, 1997 with carrying a small rover named Sojourner.

They found a large number of stowaways in the form which has similarly microbes in Earth. However, scientist trusted that it would be not easy to susatin and cultivate life on Mars. The facts currently, the scientist have pointed out more than a dozen factors that make March as unsustainable for organisme to survive.

In 10 years by gone at NASA, conley had face several difficulties in job to keep Mars and set up prevention aliens organise for declining the quality of Ecosystem on Earth as well as human to seeding in other planet. In addition, scientis was always worried about security of planetary at the very beginning of spage time. Sputnik launched in 1957 seemed only about time before USA and The Soviet Union woul d start

Writing Feedback / Nadia Lopez: Why open a school? To close a prison [2]

When Nadia Lopez opened school, Mott Hall Bridges Academy in 2010, she had a straightforward purpose: Open school to Close prison. I think, She has a coarageous idea. The location of the school in Brooklyn which one of the most slums area in New York city.

She faced numerous problems such as finding teachers who were simpaty with sort of problems, funding for amenities, low parental attention ang badly neighborhood. This school started with 45 pupils with special need and live behind the poverty. She needed a more classroom which could be provided to them. However, now, at 98 per cent graduation rate and be going to several of the most competitive high scholls in New York City.

They start to revolute the education with mature who conduct love, structure, support and knowlegde. There are several things that inspire children to become more useful in the future. However, it is not easy duty. Several educators collaborate as a team to determine the best curricullum. It can be very helpful. They prepare the nest leader of the future to connect a success.

Writing Feedback / Learn to understand of ourselves [2]

Most people strongly believe that they do not know well about their selves. In fact, the more we obtain knowledge of ourselves, the more we will realize that lack of insight into ourselves as well as the perspective of others about us. Benjamin Franklin was right when he wrote: "There are three things extremely hard: steel, a diamond, and to know one's self." Human has no interesting to become a dull with intervention about what their prove of their own life.

If we are able to see our potential and tallent which influenced by our behaviour and environment. Human should tend to perform their selves at daily life. Research into the great unique indicates that we are particularly fake when it arrives to judge the nature we take account into about most. The consideration about high hoped-for or undesirable. The study from university of california found that pupils' self-assesment of intelligence drill almost uncorrelated to IQ test Result. Those the vital thing that ocuured was overestimated their ability.

Writing Feedback / Arctic ice melt is killing birds and will leave caribou stranded [3]

The increasing loss of sea-ice whic caused by melting ice in Artics victimize the local ecosystems. Recently, artic se-ice is the second lowest sea-level during thi summer. Thus, species which ihabitant in sea-ice acquire the direct impact of this change, such as Ivory gulls.

Other species, Seabird and huge Zooplankton species will decline in warm climate. As concequences of melting ice will be seriously damage and Artic Animals will move to another island with well-climate. In canadian Islands, many animals also remain in citical ecosystems surounding. Sea-ice mak an genetic exchange which influence their productivity and diversity of these populations.

The connectivity among island declined and set to gain more worse condition in the near future, Jenkins said. Therefore, the animals there may become extinct. Lack of ice may also reduce the variety of the plants dooming them to become endangered. If we could not prevent or stant the sea-ice melting. It could not be easy to predict the future after this.

Writing Feedback / TED Pete Alcorn: The world in 2200 [3]

Pete Alcorn used to be a Malthusian. He has a mindset about model of the world: blowing up population and small planet is going to be a bad for inhabitans. The U.N's population data displayed that the trend of population in the world are going to decline. The economist see the decline with stagnatin and depression, but the dwindle of the population have two advantages economic impacts.

Firts of all, a few people need a few land to live in, so, it can reduve land use of slums areas in big cities. Cost of land will dropp and it begins to decline the rate of property. Secondly, a declining population means that job vacancy will incline because the number of population less that the vacancy.

After passing the declining phase, we wiil settle in and start adequate future. The transitions are dangerous phase to pass when the land owners lose their money and labor demand more salary. We carry on the bright future.

Writing Feedback / Quantum Teleportation over 7 kilometres of cables smashes record. [2]

World record for quantum teleportation have broken by Two team which can send quantum information 7 kilometres of fibre optic networks. In order to set a long teleportation need to exchange quantum cryptopic keys for encoding through fibres.

Quantum transportation is partical's travelling to another place with particular distance without phsycal travelling between them. We need three participants with one way teleportation: Alice, Bob, and Charlie, for instance. To make an exchange between Alice and Bob need cryptographic keys with setting up the storage for teleportation using charlie's help.

in outstanding, Alice transmits a particle (A) to Charlie. While Bob establishes a pair of entangled particles (B & C), then, sends B to Charlie and withstands on C. Charlie accepts both A and B, and assesses the particles in such a way that It is not Possible to tell whic particle was sent by Alice or by Bob. This is called Bell State Measurement result in quantum state of particle A is tranferred to particle C, whic is with Bob.

It can shorten the distance conceptually and become shortest one now with transmitting the particle particularly.

Writing Feedback / Bastian Schaefer: What do we know about future? Difficult question, simple answer: nothing. [4]

Bastian Schaefer: A 3D-printed jumbo jet?

What do we know about future? Difficult question, simple answer: nothing. Said Bastian Schaefer. He continued that we can not predit the future and only can create a vision of the future. Ideas always grow in our mind as a human. What imagined people in the past can be gradually pursued by the next generation.

For instance, the vision of the early 20th century said that they designed an ocean plane the future which takes only one and a half days cross the Atlantic Ocean. Recently, this dream didn't come true but we can make it better with our largest airplane which we have, the Airbus 1380. So, we have created our vision abaout more sustainable future of aviation.

Let's compare the old world with the new one. He shows the bracket of a380 crew rest compartment. It takes the classical designe rules. In another hand, with this 3D printing, the equal bracket was completely different and lifter. So, the aircraft designe for the future will be more easily grow and sustain that we never imagine before.

Writing Feedback / Several Ways Technology stops crime againts enadangered animals [4]

Wildlife, as natural habitat of endangered animals need to be conserved by human. Incline of hunting and the illicting trading animal suc as Rhinos, Elephants, and sharks toward extinction need to be reduced. The criminal networking are getting more sophasticated than even before. So, cutting-edge technology approaches should be developed for conserving and identifying them. Wild crime should be prevented with particular technology, here are 5 of 11 the most promising leading-edge technology tool for detecting wildlife crime, nabbing poachers, and stepping up law enforcement.

1.DNA Analysis
DNA analysis is the one of wildlife crime investigation. Samuel Wasser, DNA analisys of ivory compared with DNA-based mapping of elephant populations and focus in high-risk area.

2. Acoustic Traps
Using sensor which act using network of recycling cell phones with solar panels and antennas. When there were an illegal activity, such as plane or truck engines, chainsaws, explotions, and gunfire will be recorded and tranmitted sound into the phones.

3. Thermal imaging
The researchers are trying to check up the thermal imagery cameras to remote illegal activity into parks and conservation areas.
4. Spatial monitoring and reporting tool (SMART) and CyberTracker
This technology has uesd in 120 protective areas in 27 countries, the data are integrated from ranger patrols and will be analyzed if there were a local proachers.

Writing Feedback / Too much, too young should schooling start at age [4]

How old the children shoul begin their education? It can be disputed. England stated that 4 years old is the answer with several other countries. On the other hand, 130 early chilhood education disprove it and recommend England to postpone formal education for middle chilhood up to 7 years old. Thet added that children must be nurtured with Pre-school .

The UK minister of Education still advocate earlier formal teaching. Anthropological, psychological, neuroscientific and educational studies have identified that Eraly Human enabled to be powerful learners and problem-solvers. In addition, Neuroscientific studies espouse this view that play as a central mechanism in learning.

Developtment psychologists have pointed out inti two mental processes that underpin this relationship between play and learning. First, most children that pretending a paper to pretend as a real ship. It can nurture to underpin language, drawing and mindset pattern. Second, all sorts of pshycal, constructional and social play make children more aware, control their pshycal and mental activity.

There is another vital and strong proof. In 2004, a study of 3000 children diplayed that an extended period of play-based pre-school education made a rapid variety to learn and well-being through the elemantary school years.

Writing Feedback / How to raise successful kids - without over-parenting by Julie Lythcott-Haims [2]

Over-parenting is still most parents do for their children. Is it good enough? Not really, because if we do such a thing to over-doing and over-ptotecting will be unadiquate for the children. Eventough we force our children to become what we want with a perfection. We seem to behave in and make them follow our mind.

Harvard Grant Study said that happiness in life comes from love, not love of work, love of humans: our spouse, our partner, our friends, our family. So, Childhood needs to teach our kids how to love, and they can't love others if they don't first love themselves, and they won't love themselves if we can't offer them unconditional love.

This statement is really make us barinstrom briskly. Why? Because we start everything with wrong mindset. We do everything in wrong way, including nurture our children. So, start from now on, we have to change our mindset to bear in mind and broaden the mind for educate our children.

Writing Feedback / To prevent and overcome chilhood obesity [2]

For tackling obesity in children, The UK government has some critical to reduce it. It is a vital program to make British healthier than before. These have become under critism, so, this strategy still postponed. Others strategy is incline active role in their school and encourage food companies to reduce sugar foor their good.

What is it caused? Sugar is the one of influence obesity in children such as cereals, yoghurt and bread whic ingredient by 20 per cent. Government should concern about it to make regulation for the Food Companies with sugar standard for food.

In addition, school must take responsibility to make pupils more active with exercise at least 60 minutes in a day. It really work to reduce apetite and elliminate children's overweight. School has its main role to halt obesity with always give them healthy food. It should make a campaign to force junk food in the school and replace all the food which suitable with children.

Writing Feedback / Oil pipelines project has been protested by Native American [3]

It is very compulsory to enhance our quality of environment around us. Especially, for our next generation. Wayde Schafer of the North Dakota branch of environmental organisation the Sierra Club said that the native Indian intend to leave clean water for their great-grandchildren.

The pipelines that link several oil field of North Dakota to an existing pipeline in Illinois was protested by The Native because it can establish more damagely for their environment. They worried that the pipes are going to bother culture sites and threaten water supplies to several areas.

The government has the project halted to avoid the environment damage. The Corps should halted their activity to continue dig and put the pipeliens around Lake Oahe. Sacres Sites will be the concerned area that must be the holy site without any agreement.

Tribal sovereignty and water quality become the populer issue that make another country intended. The indian need to permanently look after their sacred sites and water.

What do you think?

Writing Feedback / How to Live Passionately by Isabel Allende-TED. [2]

Nowadays, aging is the most common problem that people face in their life. It is undeniable. Every single people realize that they are going to grow old in the following days. Issabel Allende teach us and point out that we have to reward friendship with age. How can It be?

People start aging at birth, not after 65s. So, that's why Issabel Allende try to make out our mind to change our way to see aging. She intend to assure us that spirit of life is never aging. Olga Murray inspire Her for living passionately.

It is okay to loss everything in our life, but, Firstly, we have to be freedom from our superego to back off. Secondly, feeling ligther with careless of everything that ride our mind. Ultimately, gaining spiritualit to be peaceful without any hesitation about everything. Just let it flow and feel passionate. We need to be patience to train to be passionate.

Jubilation and celebration are the final way to pursue the passionate life.
"Start to live passionately!" , She said.