ryan31
Oct 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / Why agricultural land become less productive? The highest total land degradation is in Europe [2]
hai reski
I have some suggestions for you
I hope it helps
... agricultural land of worldwide, while The table gives information about (avoid repetition in one paragraph) illustrates the number of land degradation ...
Overall, it can be seen that there ... <<< [b]( the complex sentence is followed by V1)[/b] causes of agricultural land becomes less productive (...) degradation for 3three regions are Europe.
... over-grazing which is causes of less ...
The second reasonswhere is the first reason ? which cause of worldwide...
On the other hand, there was the biggest percentage of total .
there is so many which in your essay try to avoid using same words or we called it paraphrase
thanks
good job
keep writing
hai reski
I have some suggestions for you
I hope it helps
... agricultural land of worldwide, while The table gives information about (avoid repetition in one paragraph) illustrates the number of land degradation ...
Overall, it can be seen that there ... <<< [b]( the complex sentence is followed by V1)[/b] cause
... over-grazing which is causes of less ...
The second reasonswhere is the first reason ? which cause of worldwide...
On the other hand, there was the biggest percentage of total .
there is so many which in your essay try to avoid using same words or we called it paraphrase
thanks
good job
keep writing