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Television advertisement should be restricted to the children.

2 - The writer provided a confusing paraphrase of the original topic. The paraphrase does not refer to advertising or the...

Writing Feedbacksaangaam - Oct 7, 2021Holt - Oct 9, 2021
Cam16-IELTS Writing Task 2-People find infos about their house

2 - The prompt restatement has deviated from the original topic, eason for the topic, and opinion statement. It has not...

Writing FeedbackIvyphuong - Oct 7, 2021Holt - Oct 9, 2021
Some people attest that team sports have more positive impacts on public health than individual

5 - @chantran Thanks bro! So in the opening and conclusion, I have to say sth like " While team sports...

Writing Feedbackgbach - Oct 7, 2021gbach - Oct 12, 2021
Sustainable Networking to enhance your Oceanography skill since juvenile - CHEVENING

4 - @geniavf Network is a two-way relationship stuff in which both parties benefit. One thing i noticed in your essay...

Scholarshipgeniavf - Oct 7, 2021Guest - Oct 13, 2021
Some people argue that college must be provided free for everyone by the authorities

2 - Good job. This is exactly how this topic should be discussed based on the given parameters. This a...

Writing Feedbackseramai - Oct 7, 2021Holt - Oct 8, 2021
The chart illustrates the long-term international migration in the United Kingdom

4 - You might use other ways to express number such as using verb (double, triple), portion (a third, nearly a...

Writing Feedbackskinnypeter - Oct 6, 2021thsi98 - Oct 12, 2021
Good Relationship Will Connect With People Who Are Going Where You Are Going - Networking Chevening

2 - Nowhere in these work experiences did you explain how you home and continue to cultivate these contacts. your response...

ScholarshipYanti - Oct 6, 2021Holt - Oct 8, 2021
Teenagers should spend their spare time on unpaid community work statements

2 - This is unacceptable. Once your opinion is provided, the reasoning summary must follow immediately to complete the opinion...

Writing Feedbackwindietran - Oct 6, 2021Holt - Oct 8, 2021
Task 1: The diagram shows the small-scale production of smoked fish

3 - You may use other conjunctions such as subsequently, afterwards, next instead of "In the fifth step", because you did...

Writing FeedbackMydan20002 - Oct 6, 2021thsi98 - Oct 12, 2021
People who live in big cities have to face many issues like traffic jams and infections

2 - You already provided an overview of the problems. Provide a summary of solutions next to complete the response...

Writing FeedbackPhuongnghi20 - Oct 6, 2021Holt - Oct 8, 2021
Bring the best of team members during apocalypse time by embracing them - Leadership ESSAY-Chevening

3 - @geniavf The role you played in your leadership essay is not really stressed. Talk more on what you did...

Scholarshipgeniavf - Oct 6, 2021Guest - Oct 11, 2021
Repeating bad habits despite the fact that these habits could be detrimental for the health

2 - Provide direct reasons. These reasons will help give your solution topic credibility in relation to the opinion response...

Writing Feedbackchantran - Oct 6, 2021Holt - Oct 9, 2021
Nobody can deny the important role of newspapers in providing information to the reader

5 - There are some things I notice: Moreover, for people who... ... it may cost quite AN amount...

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Are newspapers the best way to learn news, discuss both views and give opinion

2 - Well, of course there are strong sides to the debate. So, what is your opinion? Which is your personal...

Writing Feedbackdqnghuy - Oct 6, 2021Holt - Oct 8, 2021
Begin formal education at the very early age or at at least 7 years old. Discuss and give opinion.

2 - The point of view of the writer is well represented throughout the essay. Only that point of view. There...

Writing Feedbackphuonganh1752005 - Oct 5, 2021Holt - Oct 8, 2021
Air pollution - protect the environment - write about air pollution and how to deal with it.

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for helping me! I am self-studying and my essay isn't read by any expert,...

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Advertisement development is negative or positive?

2 - In any real time setting, the writer is allowed to have his oven opinion that is not based on...

Writing Feedbackmeowy - Oct 5, 2021Holt - Oct 8, 2021
Help me fix the essay for my IELTS test about crime topic

2 - Try not to exaggerate your paraphrasing of the original topic. Do not alter the orginal reference point. This is...

Writing FeedbackToubiii - Oct 4, 2021Holt - Oct 7, 2021
People are becoming overwhelmed by advertising and new marketing strategies

2 - Consider the original response wording and use it precisely in your opinion statement. Your current response has delivered an...

Writing Feedbackgrace1306 - Oct 4, 2021Holt - Oct 7, 2021
IELTS task 2 Topic: a well-prepared strength and fitness vs mental training in sports competition

2 - In what instance? The restatement is incomplete not having referred to the subject of the discussion which is...

Writing Feedbackqmai170804 - Oct 4, 2021Holt - Oct 7, 2021
THE IMPORTANCE OF BEING INFLUENCIAL IN COMMUNITY WORK

2 - If you meant to use this essay for the Chevening scholarship then, you made a mistake in writing this...

ScholarshipHappieFace - Oct 4, 2021Holt - Oct 14, 2021
Do you think higher education is necessary to succeed in life?

2 - What exactly do you mean by this? I believeit is a word choice error as this references an...

Writing Feedbacknguyen9999 - Oct 4, 2021Holt - Oct 7, 2021
Writing Task 2: Whether cultural traditions are destroyed by turning them into tourist attractions?

4 - @Holt Thank you for your comment and you help me realize my problems. As you said, I totally focus...

Writing FeedbackGnaight - Oct 4, 2021Gnaight - Oct 7, 2021
Chevening leadership essay/Leadership is more of responsibility than a title

2 - The reference is not applicable in the context of the essay. just remove it. you don't need to...

Scholarshipstifflane - Oct 3, 2021Holt - Oct 7, 2021
The government should prohibit the businesses to engage with the fast-food industry

4 - Try not to rewrite what has been used in the question and use conjunctions to connect sentences together. For...

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The higher fee for the foreign visitors when they come to visit the host country historical sites

4 - to treat waste in time=>i suggest ''on time'' is more suitable to the context...

Writing Feedbackmoclinh - Oct 3, 2021chichi1234567 - Oct 6, 2021
Essays on letter of REFERENCE-SISGP scholarship

NEW - I am writing for the referee (This reference is based on a civil society engagement) Please refer to...

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Your activities (up to three) to which you attached meaning and devoted yourself in high school

2 - The response to this prompt should focus an activity that challenged the applicant's skills or, helped develop character through...

UndergraduateMiha - Oct 2, 2021Holt - Oct 5, 2021
[WRITING TASK 1] Southwest Airport redevelopment

2 - There needs to be an expanded use of punctuation marks to add clarity to the paragraphs. A properly placed...

Writing Feedbackpapcaii - Oct 2, 2021Holt - Oct 7, 2021
In 250-300 words, tell us more about you and why you are considering VCU (Transfer Essay)

2 - The reviewer will be looking for reasons why you will bea good fit for the VCU student community and...

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