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Evolution of horses' hooves. How to use vocabulary more professionally in science essays?

2 - The writer has an incorrect image identification in the summary paragraph. Rather than a diagram, a physical illustration was...

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Working and studying away from home due to affordable and available technology

2 - "Is" refers to a third person indicative reference. Person refers to singular reference. The phrase " bevy of advantages"...

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Fascination with Korean culture and psychology - personal statement for KGSP - Psychology major

3 - @Arisama Try to be professional writer don't get immersed in portraying yourself IT will sound them rude as far...

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The contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing, and business for the economy in UK

4 - To me, your writing is good enough. However, you may have missed the overview part. In case you have...

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Recommendation letter for a student specialized in electronics - undergraduate GKS Scholarship

3 - @Holt Thanks for your advice @Holt...

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Recently, more emphasis has been put on when to commence teaching foreign language to children

3 - Thanks a lot Holt, that means a lot to me....

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Preserve old buildings whenever possible or construct new buildings

5 - @huyjunnie It's very helpful for me, thanks...

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GKS-U Personal Statement for Industrial Engineering Major; build an effective and efficient industry

3 - @cosmojays Try to remove " I need " or " I want " instead use this "accomplish", don't be...

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It is argued that parents ought to be heavily punished for letting their offspring to be fat

2 - The first reasoning paragraph is obviously researched and does not meet the public knowledge or personal insight into the...

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IELTS Writing task 2: Living in a modern world brings both positive and negative outcomes

4 - keep going! it's going well! but remember all the tips @Holt told you, it will be very helpfull!...

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Car-free day is an effective way of reducing air pollution, others think there are some other ways

4 - thank you for your comments...

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ielts writing task 2: TOO MUCH OF A GOOD THING CAN BE BAD - overwhelming number of choices

2 - Some task questions tend to sound like research prompts, but they are not. These are all mere personal opinion...

Writing Feedbacksalsal0403 - Aug 17, 2021Holt - Aug 18, 2021
Global warming is increasing day by day. What are the causes of global warming and what can be done

2 - The prompt paraphrase and thesis statement paragraph will be considered too elementary in presentation. It lacks at least an...

Writing FeedbackELENA210395 - Aug 17, 2021Holt - Aug 18, 2021
IELTS TASK 2: Should countries invite foreign companies to open their branches to boost the economy?

2 - When presenting a comparison + personal opinion essay, the writer must not be seen as trying to convince the...

Writing Feedbackngtchi - Aug 17, 2021Holt - Aug 18, 2021
Cars and cycles mixed on the same roadway might cause some problems

2 - The writer has failed to consider that a major part of the globe now have bike lanes in the...

Writing Feedbackillusion311 - Aug 17, 2021Holt - Aug 18, 2021
The graph demonstrates the variation in the birth rates of two countries, namely China and the USA

2 - While China is known as Chine in some parts of the world, the country must be referred to by...

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Children are facilitated to learn the second language at the early age

2 - The question posed for this topic is: "Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?" The response of the...

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Happiness is difficult to define because it is different/distinctive to each individual person

2 - It is important that the writer does not indicate any statements of fact or truth in the topic Islaliment....

Writing Feedbackrosigenious - Aug 16, 2021Holt - Aug 17, 2021
Tourism is becoming a good source of revenue to many countries. Discuss advantages and drawbacks.

2 - The essay is 243 words and does not meet the word requirements for the task. An addition to that...

Writing Feedbackngaaaaaaaaa - Aug 16, 2021Holt - Aug 17, 2021
GKS-U PERSONAL STATEMENT - Architectural Engineering Major

2 - The reviewer wishes to get to know the applicant through lien own words. The constant use of citations in...

ScholarshipTitannxx - Aug 16, 2021Holt - Aug 17, 2021
These days, admiring celebrities are assumed to make many postitive effects on fan's living. IELTS 2

2 - The writer has offered a diplomatic response without considering that there is a scoring criteria for opinion clarity. There...

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IELTS Writing Task 1 : The average house expenses in England and its capital city – London

2 - When more than one image Is provided, the writer needs to properly identify and differentiale between the Images in...

Writing Feedbackhahalolo - Aug 15, 2021Holt - Aug 16, 2021
The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

3 - You need to add the picture of the line graph beside your essay, which will help to understand your...

Writing FeedbackLeminh23 - Aug 15, 2021skinnypeter - Aug 17, 2021
Food/drinks/tobacco;clothing/footwear and leisure/education - Ielts 1: "Table" essay

2 - The data analysis will be scored down immediately due to the lack of proper page formatting. The examiner is...

Writing Feedbacktuananhbmt012 - Aug 15, 2021Holt - Aug 16, 2021
TASK 1: The line graph compares the amount of waste produced by three companies over fifteen years

2 - The summary overview is acceptable. The information is concise enough but missing a reference to the measurement type to...

Writing Feedbackluffyonepiece - Aug 15, 2021Holt - Aug 16, 2021
Do you think that one aims of the Olympic Games is to improve relationships among countries.

2 - 207 words is far less than the 250 word minimum. The essay preliminary score will be reduced to a...

Writing Feedbackngan410 - Aug 15, 2021Holt - Aug 16, 2021
More and more students study abroad. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

2 - The indefinite article "a" is used to refer to the singular form of a word. so the word "a"...

Writing FeedbackThee - Aug 15, 2021Holt - Aug 16, 2021
Nutrition scholarship - Strength and Weakness Essay

2 - The first strength is too simple to represent a notable skill. That presentation is also one that is common...

Scholarshipnauliani - Aug 15, 2021Holt - Aug 16, 2021
Should government impose higher price on fuel for vehicles to curb environmental problems?

2 - The task 2 essay should be written with up to 300 words only, within 40 minutes. It is an...

Writing FeedbackHpvpho - Aug 15, 2021Holt - Aug 16, 2021
The advent of TV cannot make live performance loss its value

4 - You should include include the topic accurately so that the readers can know which type of essay is required....

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