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Computers are believed to be smarter than humans by several scientists in no time

5 - You have an inaccuracy understanding the topic. Thus, i think you can change "On top of that" ==> "Moreover"...

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It is believed that money is the key to happiness. One can still feel happy regardless of being rich

2 - Name 2 specific factors as required by the 2nd direct question. Your response to each question must stand...

Writing FeedbackHarinn - Jun 11, 2021Holt - Jun 12, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - SAVING ANIMAL SPECIES

4 - You are expressing an unclear opinion, you both agree and disagree. You should choose one side and explain with...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2_SELF-DRIVING SYSTEMS FOR VEHICLES

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With increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up

2 - For TA opinion scoring purposes, try to be more specific. Based on this writing, the clearer option would...

Writing Feedbacknguyenpham88 - Jun 10, 2021Holt - Jun 11, 2021
IELTS Writing task 2 : Gyms and Sports clubs

3 - I think that you need to search for some model sentences in the opening as well as the way...

Writing FeedbackChanh - Jun 10, 2021Samt Lee - Jun 11, 2021
WRITING TASK 1 : The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050

4 - "From 1950 to 2050" is different from "between 1950 and 2050." In other words, "between...and" and "from...to" should...

Writing Feedbackthanhtrang - Jun 10, 2021niesaysi - Jun 14, 2021
The role of computers and teachers in education

2 - Be specific about the areas where computers matter more. There is a direct qquestion provided ffor which a...

Writing Feedbackamietran - Jun 10, 2021Holt - Jun 11, 2021
Despite cars damage the environment, their manufacture and their use continue to increase

2 - Respond directly to the 2 questions to help outline you reasoning paragraphs. In 2 sentences, give your subject...

Writing Feedbackduyenb1602679 - Jun 10, 2021Holt - Jun 11, 2021
How to write a comparison essay about shopping online and shopping at stores

2 - These are rhetorical questions that you don't really addless in the rest of the writing. so keep your...

Writing FeedbackLinyPham - Jun 10, 2021Holt - Jun 11, 2021
With the help of advanced technology, the qualities of people's life has improve. However...

2 - Your prompt restatement is highly confusing to understand. Only a single prompt was provided for this writing but, you...

Writing FeedbackGoldenfish - Jun 10, 2021Holt - Jun 11, 2021
WRINGTING TAKS 2 - NATURAL TALENT OR BEING TAUGHT?

3 - I think that you should put your own opinion in this essay instead of talking in generall like this....

Writing Feedbacklehoanglam1501 - Jun 9, 2021Samt Lee - Jun 11, 2021
What household chores do you usually do ?

2 - I am not sure about how I can help you. You did not give any writing instructions to give...

Grammar, Usageanan173 - Jun 9, 2021Holt - Jun 10, 2021
The chart illustrates the figures of five cities in Australia in terms of the habit of the citizen

2 - Do not just copy the image definition from the instruction. That is how you end up mis-identifying the...

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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country

2 - Wasn't the country specifically mentioned? This is good. It can be improved further by adding a...

Writing FeedbackKim0303 - Jun 9, 2021Holt - Jun 10, 2021
Writing task1, Expected city visits by country of origin for 2018

3 - In the third paragraph:The second message is uncessary or even wrong because the chart depicts information in 2018, while...

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The line graph illustrates the percentage of people who owned cars in Britain

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Greetings from the President

2 - Ancestors did enjoy the group but, didn't they found/establish the group before enjoying it? Maybe you would like...

SpeechesSBG - Jun 9, 2021Holt - Jun 10, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Compare two maps - development in the layout of a university campus

3 - The second message in overall paragraph, you should use linking words such as : also, besides,.....

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IELTS TASK 2: should government encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas?

3 - @Holt Thanks you for your wholehearted help. I will try my best to improve my skills, especially the CC...

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IELTS Writing Task 2 about the trend of buying things from famous brands

2 - Wrong reference term. The brand is connected with the manufacturer (correct term), not the business. The...

Writing FeedbackClarkNg - Jun 8, 2021Holt - Jun 9, 2021
Writingtask2: Society could not function if there were no rules and laws, agree or disagree.

2 - Based on what reasons? An opinion presentation is never complete without one or two supporting reasons. If you...

Writing Feedbackdaddylevismine - Jun 8, 2021Holt - Jun 9, 2021
Discuss wealthy or developing nations should provide financial support to poorer countries

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Writing Feedbackngphwlnh - Jun 8, 2021Holt - Jun 9, 2021
The graph indicates the number of Canadian using several social networking sites in 2014 and 2015

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Writing Feedbackannaestriste - Jun 8, 2021Holt - Jun 9, 2021
The pie chart illustrate what seniors in Beaufort, Westmont and Whitford High School invested on

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IELTS Writing task 2_tourism could endanger local inhabitant and environment

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The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades.

3 - @Holt I do not intend to capitalize the first sentence, maybe it's my mistake when I post my writing....

Writing Feedbackyhai9959 - Jun 7, 2021yhai9959 - Jun 10, 2021
IELTS task 2: COMPULSORY TAX PAYMENT (agree or disagree)

2 - So you totally agree? You did not frame your response in an extent manner so you did not...

Writing FeedbackPaul16 - Jun 7, 2021Holt - Jun 8, 2021
Critical review: Education technology and the future of the classroom

2 - Based on what thesis? What were the discussion topics you believed to be valid? How Was his article...

Writing FeedbackThuymac - Jun 7, 2021Holt - Jun 8, 2021
There is an opinion that social networking sites have an adverse effect on people and the community

2 - This does not offer clear supporting reasons for your opinion. Try to offer a summary of your discussion...

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