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The Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types. Can you help me on this IELTS 1?

2 - Give a more defined description of the table. Indicate the number of rows and columns as these will help...

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IELTS writing practice test review - enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office

3 - Actually, your opening is too general, you need to specify it clearly. Which kinds of inquiries include??? Review grammar...

Writing Feedbackdaydreamer - May 17, 2021uyenmy0025 - May 31, 2021
It is often said that that songs help to connect others around the world. Do you agree?

3 - First of all, you should check your writing thoroughly so that you won't lose marks on Grammatical Range and...

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Education is the key to opportunity - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?

2 - This is a good draft. You show clear personal and professional reasons for your course choice and institution. The...

Graduateeternal1703 - May 16, 2021Holt - May 17, 2021
Writing Task 2 - Climate change and individuals responsibility

2 - Good response and thesis statement but, it is still missing the element of the measured response (to what...

Writing Feedbackmikengo - May 16, 2021Holt - May 17, 2021
The rate of crime committed by teenagers is increasing throughout the world. Reasons and solutions.

2 - What made you use the word " remarked" ? That word is used incorrectly in this presentation along...

Writing Feedbackyuca - May 16, 2021Holt - May 17, 2021
Write about an unforgettable experience in your life. Could you give me comments on my paragraph?

6 - "But deep inside [...] elapsed really slow." These lines are really vague and do not properly convey what you...

Undergraduatetuitenkhoi2005 - May 16, 2021techmind20 - May 23, 2021
Benefits of Early Childhood Education. Essay for ENG 102 Rio Salado

2 - What is the discussion focus of this essay ? There is a lack of concerning topics at the start...

Research PapersTiffanylane7 - May 16, 2021Holt - May 16, 2021
Printed media will be a thing of the past. Others say that these forms of media will never disappear

3 - Some sentences of your essay is quite confusing, but I'll just point out the strangest ones. - "I am...

Writing Feedbackhoaxdrikimaru - May 15, 2021Normie - May 21, 2021
Essay about the environmental responsibility of governments and civilians

2 - Provide at least 3 sentences for the prompt restatement. Avoid using long sentences that combine 2 ideas in one....

Writing Feedbacklinhpro - May 15, 2021Holt - May 16, 2021
Motivation letter to do Phd in Education at ETH Zurich after Engineering and MBA

2 - This is the strongest and most solid motivating factor for your application. Make this a part of the...

Lettersdurgesh_pradhan - May 15, 2021Holt - May 16, 2021
TASK 2: An increasing number of people are choosing to watch international television shows and ...

2 - Your restatement should have stopped at this point. she next part of this sentence is notpout of the...

Writing FeedbackCuteLove - May 15, 2021Holt - May 16, 2021
People's opinions vary as to whether team study is more useful than individual study for pupils

3 - I think you should go a little more in depth about "individual study cannot expand their knowledge". It doesn't...

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TASK 2 IELTS: You don't need special talent to become a good sportsperson or music player

3 - @Holt Thanks a lot for your valuable feedbacks. I will rewrite my essay and correct the format of it...

Writing Feedbacklexuanhoa123 - May 15, 2021lexuanhoa123 - May 17, 2021
Task2: In the present time in some nations, ownership of a house is more important than renting

2 - The prompt restatement is lacking. Where is the reasoning sentence? That would be a response to the question, "...

Writing FeedbackThanh Dat - May 15, 2021Holt - May 16, 2021
Essay about comparison between teenager life and adult life.

2 - You have not met the discussion requirements. Out of the 3 required topic discussions, you only discussed 2 presentation...

Writing Feedbackphatdanghocielts - May 15, 2021Holt - May 16, 2021
MY MOTIVATION LETTER FOR Msc SUSTAINABLE MANAGEMENT

2 - You can easily use this essay as a personal statement as it carries an in-depth look at the development...

Graduatedemorich - May 15, 2021Holt - May 16, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 1 - Describe a chart about average annual GDP growth

2 - *Please be advised that the reviews and advice given here will be alternate to advice given by the book...

Writing Feedbackhuy11804 - May 15, 2021Holt - May 15, 2021
Should people accept the bad situations or try to improve it?

3 - @Holt thank you so much for your comment....

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The landscape of an island when it was still a wilderness and its changes after development

NEW - The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities The given...

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Task 1 - The proportion of families owning and renting houses in England and Wales (1918 - 2011)

2 - Using what charting method? Linear? Bar ? Identify the typeof chart ownage provided. Ldon't just rely on the...

Writing Feedbackhalun1682 - May 14, 2021Holt - May 15, 2021
IELTS WRITNG TASK 2 - ONLINE EDUCATION PROS AND CONS

2 - So what?What is the point of telling me this if you cannot identify an advantage and disadvantage as...

Writing Feedbacknguyenhanh7802 - May 14, 2021Holt - May 15, 2021
Life is only a chance - Personal Statement for GKS (Global Korea Scholarship)

3 - @Holt Hi, thankyou in advance for giving me a response. Actually I wrote this essay for GKS Undergraduate Program....

Scholarshipvidyainjiela - May 14, 2021vidyainjiela - May 16, 2021
IELTS Cambridge 13 Writing Task 1 Test 1 - Compare the Maps of City Hospital

2 - You are right. Task 1 is a data reporting essay so it does not need a conclusion. However, it...

Writing Feedbackhaonguyenx - May 14, 2021Holt - May 15, 2021
Artificial intelligence engineer - Essay for bachelor's degree scholarship

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I agree with you . But they asked me in another paragraph to...

Scholarshipyesmin - May 14, 2021yesmin - May 15, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Problems posed by cities population and measures that government may take

3 - @Holt As this is the first time I wrote a task 2 essay, I haven't studied much about how...

Writing Feedbackhieuhocnlp - May 14, 2021hieuhocnlp - May 15, 2021
Many believe that the young had better pay more attention to cultural activities instead of sport

2 - Use synonyms. Avoid keeping any original keywords to help increase, rather than decrease your L R score. ...

Writing FeedbackSpiderBap - May 13, 2021Holt - May 14, 2021
The trend of city dwellers living alone or in the nuclear family

2 - The discussion instruction is quite clear. Discuss a single point of view based on the opinion that you support....

Writing Feedbackyuhle3786 - May 13, 2021Holt - May 14, 2021
Letter of Motivation- Masters of Financial Management in winter Session 2021

2 - There are more irrelevant than relevant paragraphs in this presentation. The motivation related paragraphs are numbers 1, 2, 4,...

Lettersmuddin21 - May 13, 2021Holt - May 14, 2021
IETLS WRTING TASK 2: IS IT INHUMANE TO KEEP ANIMALS IN ZOOS? WHY?

3 - overall, your essay has met the requirements for Task Achievement - discussing both view without giving your opinions. You...

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