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Application for the math program of the university of Waterloo - AIF form essay

7 - With a limited number of characters, maybe you can answer more directly to what they ask so that you...

Undergraduateremy - Feb 10, 2021Umbu Richy - Mar 5, 2021
Becoming a doctor while my trans girlfriend becomes a woman - transfer essay

2 - You covered most of the required elements in this discussion. While it is all compelling and up to date...

Undergraduatehaileybugj - Feb 10, 2021Holt - Feb 10, 2021
Students Working Part-time - IELTS Writing Task 2

5 - I do recommend you to use transition words (therefore, furthermore, additionally) at the beginning of your paragraphs to be...

Writing FeedbackTpG2006 - Feb 10, 2021teddyz - Feb 15, 2021
Some believe that computers are the most valuable invention in the late 20th and early 21st century

2 - You absolutely agree with the statement without giving a thesis statement to support your point of view. That makes...

Writing FeedbackCrazy Snake - Feb 10, 2021Holt - Feb 10, 2021
ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS - rising sea levels and excessive use of plastic bags

2 - Oops! You did not only use memorized phrases in your presentation, you totally altered the discussion topic as well....

Writing Feedbacksongthaonguyen - Feb 9, 2021Holt - Feb 10, 2021
IELTS: Do you believe that professional athletes make good role model for young people?

4 - In paragraph 2, I suggest using " First of all" or "On the one hand" because in paragraph 3...

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The Trip - Global UGRAD Program application essay - Why Participate?

2 - This is not really a leadership experience within a community. There is a lack of physical interaction on a...

Scholarshiplemeigeni - Feb 9, 2021Holt - Feb 10, 2021
Forms of teaching - school should choose students according to their academic abilities

2 - This is a compare and contrast essay with a personal opinion presentation. You have not followed the required discussion...

Writing Feedbackstormiiii - Feb 9, 2021Holt - Feb 10, 2021
Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD program? Powerful vision and effort.

2 - The scholarship program always bases its first consideration of the applicant based on his community leadership skills and abilities....

ScholarshipAlvaro - Feb 9, 2021Holt - Feb 10, 2021
The programming process - Q1 Waterloo AIF - "Why I applied to Waterloo Software Eng and Comp Sci"

2 - Since this is a character limited essay, you should not use irrelevant opening sentences such as the one you...

UndergraduatewannaB - Feb 9, 2021Holt - Feb 9, 2021
[Writing task 1] - Household income and spending on food and clothes in UK

5 - As far as I am concerned , in the last sentence of the 3rd paragraph, "while" is used with","...

Writing Feedbackvungocf1417 - Feb 8, 2021lan82 - Feb 15, 2021
IELTS ESSAY TASK 2: Young people in the modern world seem to have more power

2 - The original presentation uses the word "seem", which means that the claim is questionable. Therefore, you should not be...

Writing Feedbackheyatafroz - Feb 8, 2021Holt - Feb 9, 2021
IELTS writing task 2: Each year, a number of languages fade into extinction

4 - @LadyOfClockwork As adding one comment in terms of Holt's comment, I can see there is one possibility to correct....

Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Feb 8, 2021coheny - Feb 13, 2021
Psychology Argumentative essay about anxiety disorder

2 - You should start by doing your homework. Find out the meaning of anxiety disorder. While you read the reference...

Essaysm_vanhorn - Feb 8, 2021Holt - Feb 8, 2021
Master's Programme in Mechanical Engineering with Automotive Engineering specialization

2 - The motivation for choosing the university is too superficial. It is based on commonly known information and what you...

GraduateSam96 - Feb 7, 2021Holt - Feb 8, 2021
IELTS writting part 1 bar chart practice: Female Unemployment rate in 4 countries of the UK

3 - @Linhmely Your overview: Overall, it could be clearly seen that there are some negligible differences between the statistics...

Writing FeedbackLinhmely - Feb 7, 2021Crazy Snake - Feb 10, 2021
Personal Statement for GKS's graduate studies in Communication Design University track

5 - Hi, I like your essay. However it is better for you to mention another area in arts and culture...

Scholarshipmadrisheva - Feb 7, 2021fiannyfia - Feb 24, 2021
Personal statement for KGSP scholarship Master program in English Linguistics

5 - Just so you know the requirements for the personal statement have changed as follows! - Motivations with which...

Scholarshipaigerim87 - Feb 7, 2021oahr93 - Feb 14, 2021
My academic success - The Global UGRAD Program^ why am I a great participant?

3 - Thank you very much. I'll try to fix the last paragraph and focus more on what I get...

Scholarshipiroda_bekmur - Feb 7, 2021iroda_bekmur - Feb 24, 2021
Personal Statement for GKS's graduate studies in Visual Communication Design

2 - Your personal statement is not based on the proper information requirement for the presentation. The personal statement for the...

Scholarshipfranbrown - Feb 7, 2021Holt - Feb 7, 2021
Ielts Writing Task 2 about the designation of newly constructed building

2 - The first sentence in your presentation does not make sense. It is trying to be impressive in presentation by...

Writing FeedbackTongkhangte - Feb 7, 2021Holt - Feb 7, 2021
Motivation letter - Master's degree in Neuroscience

3 - @Holt Hello, thank you so much for your insightful remarks, I will work hard on editing the second paragraph...

Lettersmeri_amii - Feb 6, 2021meri_amii - Feb 7, 2021
To serve my country - UGRAD exchange program why am I a great participant for this program

2 - The first part of the presentation makes you sound like a beauty pageant contestant. You may want to rethink...

Scholarshipmariami_77 - Feb 6, 2021Holt - Feb 7, 2021
People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors.

4 - @LadyOfClockwork Your ideas are great, but there is a contradiction in the first body paragraph. The first and...

Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Feb 6, 2021Crazy Snake - Feb 10, 2021
The proportion of people who used the Internet in three countries between 1999 and 2009

3 - i think you should go for this structure with the introduction, the overview and the 2 detailed paragraphs...

Writing Feedbackkhadong - Feb 6, 2021Linhmely - Feb 9, 2021
My paragraph for applying for a scholarship about experience in Sweden

2 - Do not divide the information in the presentation. Either focus on your company or focus on the UN 2030...

ScholarshipHena - Feb 6, 2021Holt - Feb 6, 2021
Innovation and technology projects - GKS Program - Study Plan

2 - There are several paragraphs that need to be removed from this presentation. The first 2 paragraphs do not help...

GraduateThyciane - Feb 5, 2021Holt - Feb 6, 2021
Masters' in Environmental Science and Engineering - Statement of purpose for GKS program.

2 - The other half of the paragraph 4 content belongs in the study plan. Remove all references to the study...

Scholarshipbonsena - Feb 5, 2021Holt - Feb 6, 2021
Personal Statement for Master of Science in Human-Computer Interaction

2 - I wish I had a copy of the prompt requirements that your personal statement has to respond to. As...

Graduateazio - Feb 5, 2021Holt - Feb 5, 2021
Participation in cultural activities in Scotland

2 - I cannot properly asses the validity and task appropriateness of your writing without the image to compare it to....

Writing Feedbackchinharu - Feb 4, 2021Holt - Feb 5, 2021
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