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[Ielts 1] The proportion of school boys, based on two groups of age, who took part in various sports

3 - I'm not an expert but I think there are some major errors in this report 1. The data is...

Writing Feedbackceewlz - Feb 23, 2023Sachin341 - Feb 24, 2023
Writing task 1 : top ten countries which have the highest number of Internet users

2 - This is not a part of the image presentation so the reference to China's actual population is not...

Writing FeedbackPanjasrose - Feb 23, 2023Holt - Feb 26, 2023
TASK 1 the percentage of people of different age groups who watched a movie in cinema once a month

5 - @claireorg Though your response is somehow meeting the task requirement, I think you need to work on the...

Writing Feedbackclaireorg - Feb 22, 2023aurangzaib517 - Feb 24, 2023
WRITING TASK 1: The graph below shows consumers' average annual expenditure on cell phone, national

2 - Try to stay under the 200 word count for the task 1 essay. The last thing you would want...

Writing Feedbackpigchienn - Feb 22, 2023Holt - Feb 23, 2023
IELTS Task 1 The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media

2 - You are prone to using word fillers in your reporting essays. This is not a positive thing when it...

Writing Feedbackrishabhk4896 - Feb 22, 2023Holt - Feb 26, 2023
Sugar-based drinks trend in mordern life

3 - From my experience , you have a grammar and vocabulary knowledge but you need to use more connect words...

Writing FeedbackKieuVan - Feb 22, 2023Panjasrose - Feb 23, 2023
Select one thing you have focused on the most from the time you entered high school until now.

2 - You are using a personal insight to respond to what should be a community and social skills development response....

Undergraduatearisuw - Feb 21, 2023Holt - Feb 22, 2023
The charts below show the proportion of expenditure by students, on average, at one university

4 - The essay presented a clear overview and analyzed some primary points. There are a few grammatical errors and I...

Writing Feedbackrishabhk4896 - Feb 21, 2023andrepr1 - Feb 27, 2023
Ecommerce, fiance, management - GKS - G Personal Statement (MBA Student)

3 - @Holt Hello, Please don't get me wrong. Actually I failed last time that's why I'm trying to write good...

ScholarshipOkjanu10 - Feb 21, 2023Okjanu10 - Feb 22, 2023
Growing up in the Solomon Islands - why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?

2 - This is not an appropriate response to the writing query. These are considered vague, nonganswers to the question. You...

ScholarshipPED65 - Feb 21, 2023Holt - Feb 21, 2023
The benefits for Vietnam as a member of international organisations

3 - From my experience ,Your essay do not go straight to the main point but the content is good ....

Writing FeedbackNguyencki - Feb 20, 2023Panjasrose - Feb 22, 2023
IELTS 1: Number of visitors to Louvre, Vatican Museums, London Science Museum, and Shenzhen Museum

3 - There are some serious issues with your essay in my opinion.... 1. This line ..... Looking at the details...........to...

Writing FeedbackDat Nguyen - Feb 20, 2023rishabhk4896 - Feb 21, 2023
IELTS WRITING PART 2: the importance of homework for children

4 - Hi @Holt Thanks for the frank feedback. I noticed that my restatement is inaccurate and can cause a...

Writing Feedbackandrepr1 - Feb 20, 2023andrepr1 - Feb 27, 2023
GKS-G Doctoral in Media and Communication - Goal of Study and Study Plan (Embassy Track)

2 - You guessed right. You somehow managed to write a personal statement / motivational response rather than a goal of...

Scholarshiphzal - Feb 19, 2023Holt - Feb 20, 2023
Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime

3 - Okay so there are many errors in your essay but most significant are these: Spelling errors.. these can cost...

Writing Feedbackdaidang869 - Feb 19, 2023rishabhk4896 - Feb 20, 2023
TASK1: The given line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions per person, 1967-2007

3 - I feel the main problem with this report is underdeveloped and incorrect data. Example of undeveloped data..It moderately increased...

Writing FeedbackDat Nguyen - Feb 19, 2023rishabhk4896 - Feb 20, 2023
"Depression" - An experience that has shaped my character

2 - Who placed the call? I know you are going for dramatics here but, dramatics without proper buildup just...

Writing Feedbackthaonhhi29 - Feb 19, 2023Holt - Feb 19, 2023
IELTS: Parents responsibility of making their obese children fat. Should they be punish for it?

6 - The essay is quite brief and needs more supporting ideas. It is also founded several grammatical errors. I must...

Writing FeedbackKrystal Tran - Feb 18, 2023andrepr1 - Feb 28, 2023
TASK 2: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems,

3 - You used " on the other hand" twice in two different paragraph. It might lead to misunderstanding...

Writing Feedbackduonghien - Feb 18, 2023Dat Nguyen - Feb 19, 2023
Ielts writing task 2: Economic growth, environment damage

2 - The first paragraph is not completely developed. You did not present your clear opinion, either in support of one...

Writing FeedbackAndrew198 - Feb 18, 2023Holt - Feb 18, 2023
2023 GKS-G STUDY PLAN - VETERINARY MEDICINE MASTER'S DEGREE

3 - @mvorti Write in as much detail as possible and explain how you learned Hangul, step by step. As you...

Scholarshipmvorti - Feb 17, 2023Okjanu10 - Feb 21, 2023
IELTS WRITING PART 2: buy product made in other countries

2 - The prompt restatement will receive a failing score as it is not a prompt restatement but rather, the beginning...

Writing Feedbackzth - Feb 17, 2023Holt - Feb 18, 2023
In the near future, car without drivers can be created. Do you think this development is positive?

2 - This essay would normally receive an automatic failing score because it does not meet the 250 minimum word count...

Writing FeedbackPanjasrose - Feb 17, 2023Holt - Feb 18, 2023
Vaping as an alternative to traditional smoking

2 - The introduction is simple enough and creates an interest on the part of the reader to learn more about...

Research Paperspranavanil47 - Feb 17, 2023Holt - Feb 17, 2023
People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink

2 - Although you have managed to achieve a good word count in the essay, I am afraid the final score...

Writing Feedbacklinaa121 - Feb 17, 2023Holt - Feb 17, 2023
Motivation Essay for studying MS in Architecture - Building Technology, TU DELFT

2 - When applying to an MSc program of this type, the reviewers will always prioritize candidates who have a professional...

Lettersmanikagarg - Feb 17, 2023Holt - Feb 18, 2023
IELTS WRITING PART 2: Printed newspapers - some people say we don't need them anymore

2 - The prompt restatement and writer's opinion is well developed. The thesis statements are clear to the examiner and fully...

Writing Feedbackmatchanh - Feb 16, 2023Holt - Feb 17, 2023
Social vs academic qualifications - Ielts task 2

2 - The writing task gives you a full 1 hour to complete your tasks. 20 minutes for the first task,...

Writing Feedbackredchild - Feb 16, 2023Holt - Feb 16, 2023
The main factors causing less productive agricultural land, and how it affects three world regions

2 - This is an automatic fail essay based on the 138/150 word count. When the word count minimum is not...

Writing Feedbacknguyenthiminh180 - Feb 15, 2023Holt - Feb 16, 2023
The pie chart below shows the share of Oscar winners by film genre for 2003 and 2008.

2 - The number of pie charts and what sections each pie chart represents should be a part of the summary...

Writing Feedbackharleneeee - Feb 14, 2023Holt - Feb 15, 2023
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