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|Earthquakes, tornadoes, Did you feel it?
3 - EF_Kevin I will make sure about small mistakes. Thank you for your compliment. I am really happy after three...
Scholarshipalina967 - May 4, 2010 / alina967 - May 8, 2010
|"Describe your career and educational goal" - Need help on my scholarship
4 - i think sussan gives u the best answer .question yourself of what you want to be .what are your...
Scholarshiptramnguyen0385 - May 4, 2010 / natacha - May 7, 2010
|"Discuss personal and family Financial Need" UTA scholarship
4 - You can pack all the sentences power into a quick punch: I remember when I was an elementary school...
Scholarshiphtranx - May 5, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 6, 2010
|Primary health care and nursing scholarship essays
3 - ...in the U.S. and internationally. Not only am I a triplet, I am full-blooded Lebanese. --- what does...
Scholarshipjojojetplane - May 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 3, 2010
|Describe how you have demonstrated leadership ability both in and out of school.
4 - i didn't read the whole thing, i just wanted to mention that it is spelled 'pursue', not 'persue'. always...
Scholarshipjorgem09 - Apr 2, 2010 / phenomanand - Apr 30, 2010
|[Education] International school scholarship application essay
NEW - Hi guys, I'm new here. I'm applying for an international school and I had to write an essay covering...
ScholarshipDave - Apr 27, 2010 / — -
|Management Consulting: Is this essay ok for Scholarship in MS degree?
Scholarshipdavoodhayati - Apr 20, 2010 / davoodhayati - Apr 21, 2010
|Scholarship essay for Msc International Business and Corporate Social Responce
2 - Needless to say, there is some profit in these activities, which they will reap, one way or another. ---...
Scholarshipjosie - Apr 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 17, 2010
|"always standing in front of brick walls" - Scholarship Essay and Autobiography
ScholarshipSarareh - Apr 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 17, 2010
|Community service: This is an essay for the nordstrom scholarship
3 - It should probably all be capitalized: Make A Wish Foundation The desire they have to continue on living...
Scholarshipdiana255036 - Apr 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2010
|The Changing Tourism Industry and How I Fit
5 - haha, that is great, thanks! And long sentences are not so bad! But add some short sentences sometimes...
ScholarshipPrinnyS04 - Apr 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 9, 2010
|"I'm afraid to fail", essay about myself
12 - EF_kevin. thank you for your advice. i will fix it thanked again for helping me cute angle- yes,...
Scholarshipazwi - Apr 5, 2010 / azwi - Apr 8, 2010
|Why do you want to attend St. Bede academy?
4 - Yes, this needs to be developed some more. When you write, try to share a unique insight. This is...
Scholarshipirishgirl - Apr 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 8, 2010
|"People who live in simplicity vs. results" - scholarship introduction essay
4 - Yeah, I was thinking this meant: People who live in simplicity do not necessarily bring about simple results....
Scholarshipsyikkin - Apr 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 8, 2010
|Why are you a good candidate to receive this award?
Scholarshipsalvy09 - Apr 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 4, 2010
|"a maturing point" (experience/achievement/risk) - Scholarship Program essay
ScholarshipGio93 - Mar 29, 2010 / Gio93 - Apr 2, 2010
|Scholarship interview essay to introduce myself
ScholarshipdemonLEMON - Apr 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 2, 2010
|Accounting Scholarship Professional Goals Essay
Scholarshipliangiee - Apr 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 2, 2010
|Natural Hazards conference attendance scholarship - looking for clarity
Scholarshiporchid227 - Mar 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 1, 2010
|The Big Picture: Community Service essay
5 - Thanks Kevin! These are good tips, I've spruced the essay up a little and turned it in. Thanks again!...
ScholarshipTimMill - Mar 28, 2010 / TimMill - Apr 1, 2010
|"finding advanced technologies that work on safe energy"-Statement of Objectives
ScholarshipDana123 - Mar 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2010
|describe my career aspiration and personal attributes
2 - Hi Sunisa, I think your topic should depend on your strategy. If you were the reader, how would...
ScholarshipcH0co - Mar 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 30, 2010
|The Mandalay Bay Shark Reef trip, scholarship prep essay
Scholarshipaustintaceous - Mar 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 29, 2010
|Community Influence Scholarship Essay; 'Coaching has greatly affected my life'
4 - This is fantastic! I think this essay clearly portrays not only your literary intelligence but also your warm-hearted compassion....
Scholarshipmariah - Feb 24, 2010 / hfox - Mar 25, 2010
|"my degree in actuarial science" - scholarship essay
3 - Hello Sakinah, Your essay inspiring me, and I thinks it's perfect. Maybe just a suggestion, be consistent in...
Scholarshipsakinah - Mar 20, 2010 / firmanq - Mar 24, 2010
|An exceptional achievement, essay for NUS undergrad scholarships
3 - ...on look out for opportunities. --- I really like your use of this phrase. It could be like a...
Scholarshipzendra - Mar 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 24, 2010
|Sports Scholarship Essay (What does basketball mean for me?)
4 - A mere kid' s game, or something more? ...racing through basketball courts , donning jerseys and feeling the euphoric...
Scholarshipthisismynewuser - Mar 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 23, 2010
|Research objective for PhD Scholarship in Material Chemistry
NEW - I am trying to write my Essay, but I am not really sure with the grammar. Please anybody help...
Scholarshipfirmanq - Mar 22, 2010 / — -
|A brief autobiography (strengths and challenges, work experience, volunteering)
6 - his conveys a creative, confident personality... impressive stuff. A few years ago, I discovered that marketing is another...
Scholarshipkate86 - Mar 18, 2010 / yahyabluecat - Mar 20, 2010
|Multicultural Scholarship and how I helped the community.
4 - This paragraph needs more sentences. It needs a few examples, too. Right now it is incomplete. Write about...
Scholarshiptheonejosue - Mar 17, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 18, 2010
|A career in Urban Redevelopment Authority (URA)
3 - have always been enjoying building things.--- This is a little awkward. How about this: have always enjoyed building things....
Scholarshipbilibolobala - Mar 17, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 18, 2010
|A scholarship to study Regional Planning, help in an essay to Master Program
Scholarshipborisfunes - Mar 16, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 18, 2010
|My character and life event - scholarship character essay
Scholarshipqueensuri - Mar 16, 2010 / queensuri - Mar 18, 2010
|I'm interested in computer field. Scholarship essay.
5 - Hi friend, The content seems find. From your essay, I can feel your passion for Comp Science. Here...
Scholarshipconheomap - Feb 25, 2010 / bilibolobala - Mar 17, 2010
|"Once I have a dream" - An autobiography for exchange students scholarship
Scholarshipsmilely - Mar 13, 2010 / bilibolobala - Mar 17, 2010
|Mom, Guitar, Heritage -3 factors that have shaped me and changes to my community
2 - The one about your mom needs some concrete examples. Many people could write the same essay about their moms....
ScholarshipAllTimeLowYo - Mar 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 17, 2010
|My Biographical Statement and Proposed Program Plan in Game Development field
NEW - Hi, everyone. I, like others who post the threads in this forum, intend to apply for a grant of...
ScholarshipionSB - Mar 17, 2010 / — -
|"I excelled in my STPM exam" - NTU scholarship application
4 - Your essay is interesting and well written! I just found a few things; For fifteen years, I had...
ScholarshipGully - Mar 15, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 16, 2010
|indicate my educational & professional goals, describe my current & future plans
5 - FIRST ESSAY: I found another problem with the first one: I plan to first earn a BA in Biology...
Scholarshipqueensuri - Mar 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 15, 2010
|SOP for exchange students scholarship (COGNITIVE NEUROSCIENCE)
2 - I don't think this is right: are surrounded by a more elaborated environment. I think it has to be:...
Scholarshipsmilely - Mar 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 14, 2010
|role of women changing in lifetime, Why should i be awarded this scholarship?
ScholarshipWilmarie - Mar 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 10, 2010
|OAS academic scholarship essay - 5-year plan to bring about change in your field
2 - The idea behind this project is to renew and modernize Arg entine sociology, dismantled in past decades by authoritarian...
ScholarshipGorila09 - Mar 8, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 9, 2010
|Intro for scholarship essay :My chosen field of study is English...because
2 - It eventually became my best friend, in which I shared all my secrets, opinions and thoughts, that just couldn't...
Scholarshipt1292 - Mar 7, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 8, 2010
|Why do you deserve this scholarship? serious attitude towards study
6 - Thank you very much, Kevin. At first, I thought showing my strong affection for the school a good thing...
ScholarshipAriel - Mar 2, 2010 / Ariel - Mar 4, 2010
|"Role in America" (advice,opinions, suggestions needed)
ScholarshipLuvdance16 - Mar 2, 2010 / Luvdance16 - Mar 3, 2010
|Help--Dyslexic, struggled with learning disabilities
3 - Kevin, Thank you so much for taking time to help me! I REALLY REALLY REALLY appreciate it. Yes,...
Scholarshipambajean - Jan 28, 2010 / ambajean - Feb 28, 2010
|"criminal justice field" - educational and career goals-7500 character limit
2 - You need raw material that you can turn into original ideas about law enforcement; do some web research. ...
Scholarshipjuancuevas92 - Feb 26, 2010 / EF_Susan - Feb 27, 2010
|Essay about Italian pride -scholarship
2 - Your essay is awesome, and definitely the best I've read of any essays containing the word 'pride'! I did...
Scholarshipshortyi3 - Feb 26, 2010 / EF_Susan - Feb 27, 2010
|"The customers" : Subway Part-Time Job/ Topic of Your Choice
4 - Thanks Kevin! I'm sending my application in on Monday, and hoping for the best. Hopefully I can make...
Scholarshipnotylerhere - Jan 10, 2010 / notylerhere - Feb 27, 2010
|I would try to take a similar route as James Rhio; Scholarship Essay
NEW - Modern Medicine and Cancer Healing I remember clearly the breakfast we had on the morning that my father...
Scholarshipmichaeldruiz - Feb 26, 2010 / — -
|Olshansky Award for Originality - Original Poem
2 - The poem is beautiful and profound; I'll comment on the essay! On the first day... Instantly I...
Scholarshipmariah - Feb 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 26, 2010
|James Rhio O'Connor ("diagnosed with leukemia")
NEW - My Leukemia Illness Challenge I was diagnosed with leukemia when I was eleven years old. My parents decided...
ScholarshipAlma Rodriguez - Feb 26, 2010 / — -
|Linda Lorelle Scholarship Fund.
3 - Good, well you do seem to know what to write next, because this small hurdle REPRESENTS something. It...
Scholarshiplilangel1626 - Feb 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 25, 2010
|Scholarship Question: Why Did you leave school, why are you coming back?
3 - ...expectations of my contemporaries.---- contemporaries is not the right word here. I think you could use "teachers" or "the...
Scholarshipafurgeson - Feb 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 23, 2010
|Scholarship letter for my high school's college scholarships- engineering
4 - To advocate for something is to speak on its behalf. You should write: I advocated opted for the...
ScholarshipAyshaya - Feb 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 22, 2010
|Studying mathematics - trying to get a intership and need revise
3 - This would be more impressive if you specified which degree you want: ...to approach a degree with both the...
Scholarshipmahoganye07 - Feb 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 20, 2010
|Info about activities - how to answer without making it into an activity list?
3 - Definitely not. They are asking for your "whole person" here. They want to know everything you have done....
Scholarshipchat - Feb 4, 2010 / Ayshaya - Feb 20, 2010
|career as a Pharmacist, scholarship Essay
8 - In times where sickness fills the earth -perhaps a little overdramatic. :) Why do you feel you should...
Scholarshipyung - Feb 12, 2010 / Ayshaya - Feb 20, 2010
|Coming up with ideas for diversity essay prompts (personal interest, diversity)
4 - yah, many people might write about that, but if you make your genuine-ness and passion come through, it will...
Scholarshipggc340 - Feb 15, 2010 / Ayshaya - Feb 20, 2010
|Speech in Stockholm during Nobel Prize Oxford Scholarship:Course/Scholarship's impact
2 - Eighth grader for clarity, put these 2 together: My friends dreamed of becoming James Bond, but I envisioned...
Scholarshipdinhhoang0802 - Feb 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 20, 2010
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