Writing Feedback / Summary NewScientis "Plants 'see' underground by channelling light to their roots" [2]

The growing plants can increase with transfer sunlight directly down into underground roots. It supports with many light receptors in stems, leaves, and flowers of the plant. But we must notice that light receptors in the roots are not function in dark soil. The researches of Seoul National University in Korea, Hyo Jun Lee, was report that stems act of the plants have a function as fibre-optic cable that conducted to phytochromes which known is receptors light in the roots. The researches is using the A.thaliana speciments for this experiment.

The comparison of the evidence of light source and chemical signalling use to optimation of growing plants. This show that the light have more benefit such as light transfer directly than chemical signalling. But we must warn especially that the longer wavelength light can be obstruct the bactery in photosynthesis process.

Finally, we can conclude that light signalling would be faster than chemical signalling because theee was little light mobilization in between a stems and roots, anf finally it can use light signalling for mobilize that..

Writing Feedback / The Natural Exotic Flying Park on The City [4]

Transportation is important aspect to mobilization the people from one place to another place in the city. Train is one of kind land transportation which many use with people in the world. The train has line in the sky with 30 feet of height, is called high line. But in this modern era, the train has under line in underground of the city. It is because about one person in a mounth that is killed and run over, so the train in high line was elevated.

The consequence of this case is many high line of train leave unattended in the city. Because aesthetic function, the high line must be collapse but it is not solving problem and need cost too much for it.

Finally, the other solution is changing the high line of train in many city into park city to towards beautification of the city. The design of this park was inspired by the wildscape. The purpose of this project is saving high line from demolition working from government and the citizen can enjoying the city building. To make this project become real, it need one hundred dollars to built in over 20 years tim period. It can take from increasing of taxes in the city.

Writing Feedback / Negative Impact of Plastic Pollution In the Sea World [3]

The birds is one of carnivore animal in the world, which is hunting a fish as daily food for live. Birds make one of body part, called their noses, to catch many fishes in rivers, ocean, or lakes. Another function of their noses is dangerous sense. But now, pile of plastic in the sea especially is cause apprehensive problem for the environment and sea birds mainly.

The amount of plastic in the sea is more than 5 trillion pieces floating around world's seas. It can offend the way of food chain. Another negative impact of this pollution is resulting sulphure compound which it can threatent many marine plants and animals, such as algae, crustaceans, and seabirds also. To evidence this hypothes, the researchers is using 13.350 birds in 55 experiment. The result is sulphure compound from plastic make the seabirds sniff out to search for food quickly. Because the smell of plastic same like a food for the seabirds.

Finally plastic in the ocean make negative aspect for the environment, then also it can make the seabirds is using the sight and the scent to eating trash as their food normally.

Source : newscientist

Writing Feedback / High Education for Arabic Woman is Rare Phenomenon [6]

Education is important aspect toward high standard life for the human. But this statement still rare in Arabic country, especially for the woman. For according from the result of Arabic woman interview, The higher education just for men not for the woman. The woman just to married in younger age to built a family with her husband, then she also manage a utility of family and her kids.

In this research, we tried to interview many arabic woman that backing to education or still staying position to get more high education. They are come from politic activism among university student, teacher, or wife of household. She is telling about the motivation to get higher education still now that is getting independent life and not always on depend to men for their life. She believes that the education can control a better life for her. Finally the higher woman from Arabic countries wants becoming the role model for another Arabic woman mainly and to influence the other women's life in the world.

Source : ted

Writing Feedback / The Developing on Human Genetic Research [2]

The genetic is the main feature in human body especially which determined character, personality, physic like eye and hair color of someone. This genetic is decide of ancestry in health and illness potential, and Each someone has unique genome else. The sequencing of the genome is important for people to provide the new technology of to indigenize genome sequencing because it is commonly the genome sequencing in the laboratory. and also the genome sequencer at the moment is using mobile and internet access This instrument is called nanopore-based sequencer which to develop in genome technology sequencing from collaborative activating and empowering indigenous community as the citizen scientist. The indigenomics is genetic research to improve minority health through methods that respect indigenous knowledge. The purpose of this approach is science for the people by the people, starting with a tribal consultant resource, focused on educating indigenous communities on the potential use of genetic information

Writing Feedback / The Human Speech Origin was Learned from Old Fish Sound [2]

The 400 million-year-old fish shows the base of the brain where the neck allied with the head. The neurobiologist from Cornell University in Ithaca, New York, Andrew Bass, told that the all of social life in any animal was include in making and hearing sound, and also their world cames from the sound. The using of actually timed and coordinated muscle movements were used by vertebrates to make their sounds. The control these movements in animals was studied in the brain regions of animal. The cells in neurons is the region responsible to make sound in animal, because it coodinate the muscle controlling the fish's bladder. The forming of vocalisation is using the fundamental signal which come from the collection of neurons in animals. This region can result unique sound on others animal. But the evolutionary told that some old or early vertebrates commonly have same basic pattern of their vocal pacemakers.Meanwhile, the humans have other areas in the brain which linked to cognition and language. The defect on vocal pacemakers, nerves for the example, is making the negative influence in our communication skill. Finally, the conclusion is the human speech comes from old fish sound.

Writing Feedback / The Relation of Kind of Vehicle and The CO2 Emission is Illustrated on The Given Data [2]

The table shows the percentage and the average age of travellers which is based on the kind of vehicle. Meanwhile, the various forms of transport are CO2 emissions source which is explained in the bar chart. Overall, the car is the most popular transport is used and also result many CO2 emission in the environment

People who use public transport or share car travel for the work. The most commonly used transport by car. By comparison, the cycling or walking is the least common of the vehicle which is used. The group of travellers have the highest average age which used by train or bus, and the cyclists are the lowest average age group of travellers.

CO2 emission comes from various forms of transport. The cycling or walking cause little or no pollution and the car with no passenger causes the most pollution in the environment.

Writing Feedback / The community can come from villages or cities. Merits and demerits of Living in a Small Community [3]

The community can come from villages or cities. The range of community can be determined on their environment. For the example is small community which has advantage and negative impact for their area.

Firstly, the advantage of small community is everyone who know everyone else. It can build some spirit to help other people solving many problems, such as building project on school, mosque, or irrigation systems. Secondly, the other advantage is giving fast respon to other people when there are many problems in community.

Different to advantage aspect, the small community also has negative impact or disadvantage. It can be looking for information receiving for the example. In technology and information era, we cant't leave any information because the information had been main necessary in our life. We can update always about what happen today in our place or another place with another culture too. The information can be gotten from our community. If the range of community is small so our information that we got less information too. Finally we cant't increase our knowledge else. The feature of information can be come from large community than small community, because it has many information to sharing on another person in this community.

In the conclusion is the small community can give positive and negative influence to our self. The choice based on our self to join in small community or not, because it can be determine the future life too.

Writing Feedback / The Building of Recent English Words in Our Brain [4]

The English language is international tools of communication to another people in the world. As far as world revolutionary, the words in english is evolute too be new words. The making of the new English word only to make more easily in understanding in our brain. The establishment of new English word can be adopted in many ways. Firstly, the stealing of other languages in the world. For the example is from France, Japan, etc. Secondly, the compounding skill is sequishing the more than one word in English together to form new word, such as heartbroken is come from two word that are heart and broke. Another example is bookworm and sandcastle. Thirdly, blend the english word, fourtly the functional shift is which by changing how they operate. The final way is to take the first letter of something and squishing the words together, like OMG and other example of new word.

Source : ted

Writing Feedback / Mathematic and science as the main features in the industrial revolution era [3]

Mathematic and science are as main feature in industrial revolution era like now. TIMSS, or Trends in International Mathematics and Science Study, is researching to 9-10-year-olds and 13-14-year-olds from more than 50 countries every four years which to know about the comparison ranking on mathematical and sciencetific knowledge. The result shows students in western Western be left behind in mathematic and science field from their coeval in countries like Singapore and Japan. This is caused by many reason which unapposite in their place.

Firstly, the education in college in western was included in common average and better than many developed countries. Secondly, the correlation of test scores and future economic success that it isn't decide the measurement of success ways. But, the true of affluence is determined from innovative skills, mainly in mathematic and science field, not only by education rank of their school. The government must be evaluate the standart of curriculum collage, especially in mathematic and science and revolutionary the common test in order to tend to be world based of standart test.

Source : newscientist

Writing Feedback / The Early Baby Dragons Comes From Incarceration That Related with Young Range [2]

The young range is the most difficult stage of their life which changed from the elusive pink aquatic salamanders that hatched inside Slovenia's Postojna Cave about four months ago. Finally, it can conclude that the only one which known about the civilization is the baby dragons. It can be explained that they life range until 100 years old and the laying process is once or twice a decade, which their life in small community and in contaminated water.

Source : newscientist

Writing Feedback / The New Forecast which is Predicted After Earthquake in New Zealand [3]

The New Zealand island is surrounded by ocean and consist of many coastal areas, like Kaikoura town where there are almost thousand tourists and habitants. The next disaster has been occurred in New Zealand, mainly in Northern Canterbury and southern Marlborough regions that are consist of 313 quakes in 13 hours and caused soil erosion approximately 100,000. The local business owner, Nick Shewring, talked about the Wellington, the capital of this country, ensued earthquake and flooding too. The others can predict that after 30 days the earthquake, there is the earthquake with bigger than before, almost 7.5 tremblor. Furthermore, the coastal area habitants have to evacuate to safety another place. Meanwhile, the scientist talked that this prediction not true thoroughly because it unconnected with week's supermoon phenomenon.

Source : TIME

Writing Feedback / Teenagers Training for High School Candidate [4]

The new invention dedicate to build training ground that is to change the Honors be Regulars. The purpose of this training is creating the young people to be lead people and can be followed by the other people. Nowdays, the school has many systems, like homework, read textbook, taking test are make stressful, so this training must ignore to and trow the trash or unimportant things of this education system.

Source : TED

Writing Feedback / The Rare Phenomenon of deliquescetion of Polar Iceberg [4]

The polar snowflake, particularly in Antartica, is about 200 ft. out of the water that is melt be glaciers and it's the amount almost slightly. The liquefaction of the icebergs can result much of meneral in water which come from this polar ice. The average of polar ice is very young which is above one hundred thousand years old.

Source : ted

Writing Feedback / The Launching of 'Post-Truth' Concept in Oxford's Word of the Year for 2016 [3]

The one method to keep the English-speaking public's mood and preoccupations that are the selection of the word by Oxford's editors. The reason of to create this concept is increasing of social media and self-belief on our self that precise purpose to improve language skill, mainly in English word, has been discovering the linguistic footing for some time. The list of the word is adulting, alt-right, brexiteer, chatbot, coulrophobia, glass cliff, hygge, latinx, and woke.

Source : time