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Sep 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / It seems that people are very thrifty in regard to expenditures on leisure and education [3]
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That is not an overview because you only describe information about notice of the table. The overview is a summary of general trends in the table. Besides that, you have to display comparisons amongst the figures. Well, I will offer the example of overview.
OVERALL, IT IS IMPORTANT TO NOTE THAT COSTUMERS OF ALL COUNTRIES ARE MORE LIKELY TO LOCATE THEIR BUDGET TO PURCHASE OF FOOD/DRINK/TOBACCO THAN OTHER CATEGORIES. FURTHERMORE, TURNING TO EACH CATEGORY, CITIZENS OF ITALY SPENT THEIR INCOME MORE THAN THE OTHERS FOR CLOTHING/FOOTWEAR, WHILE OTHER GROUPS OF EXPENDITURE ARE DOMINATED BY COSTUMERS' TURKEY.
.., Turkey and Irelandhad HAVE (Owing to not the information about the year, it should be categorised as the fact data so that you are supposed to use simple present) the highest percentage of ...
Turkey alsohad HAS much higher percentage of (...), while THE consumer'S expenditure on clothing/footwear was IS significantly higher ...
It can be seen that Swedenhad HAS the lowest percentage of ...
Spainhad HAS slightly THE higher figure for this ...
Hi Vina..
please, you review my thoughts below for your writing.
Hopefully, these can help you to improve your skill.
Keep Spirit
GOOD LUCK
:)
Overall, it is evident that all five countries spend the majority of their consumer ...
That is not an overview because you only describe information about notice of the table. The overview is a summary of general trends in the table. Besides that, you have to display comparisons amongst the figures. Well, I will offer the example of overview.
OVERALL, IT IS IMPORTANT TO NOTE THAT COSTUMERS OF ALL COUNTRIES ARE MORE LIKELY TO LOCATE THEIR BUDGET TO PURCHASE OF FOOD/DRINK/TOBACCO THAN OTHER CATEGORIES. FURTHERMORE, TURNING TO EACH CATEGORY, CITIZENS OF ITALY SPENT THEIR INCOME MORE THAN THE OTHERS FOR CLOTHING/FOOTWEAR, WHILE OTHER GROUPS OF EXPENDITURE ARE DOMINATED BY COSTUMERS' TURKEY.
.., Turkey and Ireland
Turkey also
It can be seen that Sweden
Spain