Writing Feedback / There are five steps and several types of equipment that can be used in the cement-making process [6]

The diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The figures give information about how to steps and equipment used to produce cement and stages to make concentrate from cement which is used for making process. Overall, it can be seen that, there are 5 steps and several types of equipment that can be used in the cement-making process, there are some percentages of material which is used to produce concentrate.

Based on diagrams 1 we can see the materials that used, which are limestone, clay, then the equipment are crusher, mixer, rotating heater, grinder, and bags. The steps of cement production are lime stone and clay are mixed in crusher, it will result powder. Powder put in mixer and then through the rotating heater. When the heater is rotate, this step must heat and then mixture between limestone and clay will be grinder and it will result cement. After that cement is put to bag.

On the other hand, there are 3 additional materials which are used to produce concentrate 10 percent of water, 25 percent sand, and 30 percent gravel. While cement is 15 percent, all of this material must be mixed to produce concentrate.

Writing Feedback / Buying furniture and equipment saw a dramatic jump from 1991 to 2001 spending by a UK school [2]

This three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.

The pie charts compare the number of spending in 1981, 1991 and 2001 at particular UK school. Overall, it can be seen that the total spending of teacher salary, furniture and equipment fluctuated in 3 years period, although there was small rose from 1991 to 2001. Spending for other workers salary and resources were decrease. And the total of spending insurance was gradual increase.

In 1981, the percentage of spending teacher salary stood at 40 percent, buying books were began 15 percent, insurance 2 percent , furniture and equipment as much as 15 percent and salary of other workers was 28 percent.

There was a large rise in total of spending teacher salary and resources like books in 1991 as much as 50% and 20%. However, this percentage was bigger than I 2001, where was the percentage slight rise 45 and 9. While spending of insurance rose 3 percent and this percentage smaller than 2001, where was 8 percent. On the other hand, buying furniture and equipment saw a dramatic jump from 1991 to 2001 at 5% to 23%. And then in 3 years period declined gradually between 1991 and 2001, where was 28 percent to 23 percent and the end 15 percent.

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Writing Feedback / Forbidding people driving or riding vehicles one by one is the best way to solve pollution problem [3]

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?

Increasing the number of people causes rising of the percentage of transportation people in the several countries or cities. This problem can make grow up dramatically of traffic and pollution in some areas. People argue that, one of the best methods to solve this problem is increase the price of petrol. Based on this situation, I disagree about this statements, I think there are another way to solve this problem.

Traffic and pollution problems are increase every year. The governments have done several ways to decrease this problem. One of method which was be doing by government is increasing the price of petrol. And people said, this was the best way to solve traffic and pollution. But I think there was important way to decline that problem, which were decreasing of driving car by one person for one car or riding a motorcycle by one people.

Making the price of petrol highest is not best way, it is just have small influence if compare with socialization and a ban on using vehicles by one person to one transportation. It will cause the number of transportation do not grow up and make traffic and pollution less. If just make price of petrol more expensive than before, it just will make the price accommodation, stuff and people need are greater than ever.

All in all, making the price petrol is higher than before do not best way to decrease of traffic and pollution problem. But forbid people driving or riding vehicles one by one is the best way.

Writing Feedback / Healthy meal is necessary for children, it contains protein, carbohydrate, vitamin, mineral and fat [2]

To learn effectively, children need to eat a healthy meal at school. How true is this statement ? Whose responsibility is it to provide food for school children?

Children periods is a time to get more attention, like what are they eat or how the study or learn at the second. Parents must know about growing their children, especially when they are go o school, parent must know the factor which make learn of their children more effective. Some people argue that, children must eat a healthy meal at school and I totally agree with this statement.

Healthy meal is food that contains protein, carbohydrate, vitamin, mineral and fat. This is have benefit for children to make them learn effectively when study, especially at the school. Healthy meal causes concentration of children better, because there are many good contain. For example: in my hometown, I have friend who like eat junk food, it is make him always sleepy when study at the school and it makes the less concentration. While, I usually eat healthy meal like milk, bread or buy fruit. It makes me always concentration when studied. Based on the case, we can say healthy meal for children make learn effective because if they eat unhealthy like junk food, it can make them sleepy and less concentration. It is caused there are bad containing in unhealthy meal.

Healthy meal which eat of children are responsibility of parents ad teacher at the school. Parents must give attention for their child and give explanation about healthy meal is important for them. Besides, they must give behavior for their children to eat healthy meal or they can prepare for their children before go to school such as, milk, fruits, or bread. However, teacher is important also to teach their student about good meal. They must give attention in the canteen at the school to sell a healthy meal.

All in all, I believe that, eating a healthy meal at the school make children to learn effectively and more concentration, because have good contain for their brain. Parent and teacher have responsibility about this, parents can make or prepare healthy meal for their children before go to school and teacher can give expalanation and make attention in the canteen of school about good meal for students.

Writing Feedback / What is the job quality of the American nation's major air lines [2]

The chart and table below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 1999, 2000, and 2007.

The chart and the table gives information about the number of satisfaction levels by costumer with the job are doing of the nation's major air lines and specific factors which make customer happy when fly with air travel in the US in 1999, 2000, and 2007 there was gradual rise in satisfaction level of customer and there were 5 aspects, which made people enjoy when fly with air travel, over the 3 period of years, there was slight increase of satisfaction.

In 1999, customers were happy with air lines stood at 65 percent. And then rose 69 percent in 2000. After that, there was a small increase as much as 72 percent of satisfaction levels in 2007. On the one hand, there were 5 factors which made people satisfaction when using air travel, which were courtesy of flight attendants, courtesy of check-in, price of tickets, schedules and comfort of seats. Based on the table between 1999, 2000, and 2007, the percentage of aspects always grew up were courtesy of flight attendant from 88-92, and the price of tickets 45-65. While, the percentage of gate agent aspects fluctuated from 87 to 89 percent and the end 88 percent. And about schedules factor there was slight grow from 75 to 79 in 1999 to 2000 and the end the percentage was 79 percent in 2007.

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Writing Feedback / Celebrities are wearing luxury clothes, most people however, tend to buy much cheaper textiles [6]

Some people say that the clothes people wear are the most important indication of what they are like. Others, however, say that people should not be judged by the clothes they wear

Clothes are important thing for everyone. It is become need of people, wherever they go and whenever clothes that they are wear as the point or symbol of them. Actually, using clothes as a sign of professionalism for their job or they are enjoy and like about their fashion. Some people argue that clothes people wear are the most important indication of what they are like, and others argue, people should not be judge by clothes they wear. This essay will discuss about that.

In the present, many fashionable clothes that sell, people usually buy expensive or cheap clothes because they are like. It is based on their level in live. Some people have view about expensive clothes, just for high level such as celebrity, government, businessman/business women or reach people. And cheap clothes for people who have standard level like employees. It can say that, people wear are clothes as the indication what they are like. For example usually, celebrities are wearing luxury clothes which design by famous designer. It is occur because their like and help them to show their performance to make their fans happy and enjoy when look at them. Clothes become initial and the mirror of them about life style.

On the other hand, some people argue that, we should not judge people by their clothes which wear. Because, some people are just wearing something to show their professionalism and they have different favorite fashion with others. Unfortunately, humans usually judge people which wear bad fashion or style. For example, a player music who wear punk style, for others it is not good as a public figure who have fans, because many people will follow their style and bring negative effect for other such as students or children. They are like music and sometimes having obsession to follow style their favorite artist like punk style. We cannot judge people by clothes they are wear, because it is sometime to support his appearance, we should look at they are behavior or habits with their fans, not their style or clothes they are wear.

In conclusion, people usually wear clothes what they are like, but we cannot always consider what they wear, because they just display their ability and skills to supporting their performance.

Writing Feedback / The charts below show the results of surveys in 2005 and 2009 asking workers about their relationshi [3]

The charts below show the results of surveys in 2005 and 2009 asking workers about their relationship with their supervisors and their co-workers.

The charts give information about the percentage of relationship people who have a job in a company with their supervisors and co-workers in 2005 and 2009. Overall, it can be seen that employees have very good relationship with their supervisors and co-workers in 2003 and 2009.

Relationship workers with their supervisors in 2005 is very good with the percentage is 61. Then, it is followed by good category as much as 26 percent, fair relationship is 8%. While, in 2009 the percentage was increase 65. It can be say that, very good category relation, 22 percent employees have good relationship and 65 percent is fair.

On the other hand, the percentage of relationship workers with their co-workers in 2005 and 2009 is 63 and 70, both of them is very good relation. While, others are have good relation above 24 percent. In 2005 workers have fair relation is 7 percent and 2009 is 3 percent. Just at least 1-2 percent which argue they do not have poor relation or co-workers.

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Writing Feedback / Business aim, beside of making money, means helping others to get a job and make their life better [3]

The purpose of business is to make money and they should concentrate only on this. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, business has become job of several people. It is occur because people want to develop their career and they do not become employee. For several people, they argue that business is one of job which they can make money and if they have a business, it will make them just focus in their job. But in my view, I totally disagree about this statement.

Becoming a businessman and businesswomen is the choice of people. There are advantages if people have business such as help people to get job. With the development of country, many people need job to their live and their family. Business just not about make a money or result big income but it will help other people. Opening of job fields, which help people who do not work and directly the government is helped to loss and decrease of citizens do not work. On the other hand, having business which can make people happy is the positive effect of business. Because with the improving of technology, at the present people just order and delivery their tools or material foods, clothes, or anything which make live become simple. For example other people just open their phone, search and can get anything based on what are they want.

Having a business make people can do another thing, because they do not responsibility to follow a system. Such as people who have business online. They can do everywhere and whenever they want. They just need hand phone or media electronic to promote their business like make advertisement or broadcast in social media such as shoes, bags, electronic, or anything which become need of people. So, the businessman can make other job and get additional income to develop their business and open of job field for others.

In conclusion, having a business jus not about make money but help others to get job and make their life simple and enjoy. A businessman can do another thing because they have flexible time.

Writing Feedback / Recognising the heat loss in a house is a way to save much energy [5]

The diagram shows how heat is lost and energy wasted in a house because of air getting into and out of the house.

The diagram gives information about air leaking out and leaking into the house which is causes heat is lost and energy wasted. Overall, it can be seen that, heat is lost into the house through several ways which occur by air getting into the house. And energy will be wasted through several vents in the some rooms.

Based on the diagram, in the house consist of Bathroom fan vent, Plumbing stack vent, attic hatch, recessed lights, chase, kitchen fan vent, electrical outlet, dryer vent, crawl space and outdoor faucet. The air enter into the house and several items such as light, kitchen will result heat but it will be lost through the several vent, which are Plumbing stack vent, kitchen fan vent, dryer vent. Air leaking out of the house and heat is lost.

Besides, energy will wasted in a house, because air leaking out of the house. This is happen in the dryer vent and crawl space. Air will leak out and into the house which take place below of soil.

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Writing Feedback / Electronic media have a good effect for activities of people between another people. [3]

The use of electronic media has negative effects on personal relationships between people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past, electronic media is one of things which do not much to find. People just communicate with send a letter by pos. But now, electronic media becomes important thing for their life. In this time, electronic media consist of many programs such as email, messenger, what's app, line, instagram, BBM, and other. This situation make people easy to communicate which other people. But others have view that, using electronic media can destroy their personal relationship in their life.

In my view, I totally disagree about that, I think electronic media helps people to more close with other, especially personal relationship. Because when we do not time to meet with other, we just send a text into our electronic media and we can make another meeting in another time. Electronic media have good effect for activities of people between another people. Some people can make lots of friend in social networking sites, it will affect for their career, because many colleagues from other aspects can find in social networking, directly affect for their personal relationship.

However, people do not speak to each other face or sometimes, people send massages without thinking first. But this is situation make people have many friends and close with other in other place or other jobs. Human can make other schedule if they want to meet in particular place. Without send a letter by post and it needs long time.

All in all, I believe that electronic media do not has negative effect on personal relationships between people, but it is help people more close because many application can use, if one of them is busy or in abroad, they can use video call application and can face to face through media electronic.

Writing Feedback / People argue on the fundamental external and internal communication skills, which is better in a job [2]

The table gives the results of two surveys, in 1997 and 2006, in which people were asked which communication skills were essential in their jobs.

The table compares the number of people who argue about the essential external and internal communication skills in their job in 1997 and 2006. Overall, it can be seen that the important thing in external communication is dealing with people and in internal communication is listening carefully to colleagues.

In 1997, 60 percent is the percentage of people who asked about dealing with people, it is needed in communication skill, especially external communication. Then, the same question was asked in 2006 and the percentage increase at 65 percent. Selling a product or serving are not essential enough in external communication, which is the percentage of people argue this communication skills is smaller than other, which is in 1997 and 2006 just 24 percent and 21 percent. For other skills, the number of people have view about kinds of external communication skills is under 40 percent.

On the other hand, listening carefully to colleagues is kind of internal communication skill, which is the number of people said, it is useful for their job is 30 percent in 1998 and it is increase become 47 percent in 2006. While, the lowest percentage is make speeches or presentation. People just argue that, it is 7 percent influence for their job in 1997 and 11 percent in 2006. And the other factors just have percentage smaller than 21 percent.

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Writing Feedback / The developing, modern world makes very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle [2]

Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.

In the present, a healthy lifestyle is one of need by people. Because developing of world and many more activities or jobs, people will forget to discover their bodies. Unhealthy life, can be caused by consume unhealthy food or do not time to do sport. They are so busy and it makes them consume dangerous food, such as Junk food and other instant food which is simple to eaten. They do not think about the disease which can destroy their bodies if consume unhealthy food.

These days, Junk food or instant food can find everywhere. People usually choose eat junk food because they do not need more time and not expensive. Junk food have made people unhealthy, because there is less nutrition, it will make people obesity or find some disease such as cholesterol, higher blood pressure and mere dangerous is cancer. On the other hand, because busy reason, people do not have time to do sports. It will make much fat in their body, because in a week they just work and usually have pressure which can make stress. And finally, they are lazy to sport and because they think it will make they are more tired. They do not know it is unhealthy life style which can dangerous for their life.

But with the development of technology, we can find many facilities or people who have stored healthy food and we can delivery order. So in this time, nothing reason by people to say they do not have time to looking for food and make it by self because we can order whenever we want. Besides, doing sport is one of simple to doing in the house, because we can download of example gesture, which can help to do sport in house without go out. There several sports which can do in the home such as, yoga and gym.

In conclusion, unhealthy lifestyle always there are in daily activity but we can avoid this situation with used our knowledge and technology. Because, the world have became developing, many facilities can find and help people to doing healthy life style.

Writing Feedback / A number of Bulgarians with different education, who plan to continue their live in other countries [3]

The chart below give information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information about the percentage of Bulgarians who have different education categories and having plan to continue their live in other country in 2002, 2006, and 2008. Overall, it can be seen that, people with secondary education have the highest percentage in 2002, 2006, and 2008 to leave Bulgaria. Although, there is small decrease in the percentage every category of years.

In 2002, people who have the biggest percentage to go in another country is secondary education which is 65 percent. This is become the higher one than other level in 2002, 2006, and 2008. For the higher education, there is fluctuation and become the smallest percentage in 2008 which is just 9 percent. Although, we can see that in 2006 the percentage reaches 20 percent.

Primary and lower education is the category which have gradual rise between 2002 and 2006. In 2002 stood at 18 percent and it increases at 19 percent. Afterwards, there is dramatically increase in the number of level education by 13 percent in 2008. However, the primary and lower education is always rise between 2002, 2006, and 2008, but secondary education which have the bigger percentage than other, which is in 2002, 2006, and 2008 at 65 percent, 61 percent and 59 percent.

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Writing Feedback / Parents and school as a place for children to get knowledge and friendly habits in society. [3]

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this.

Becoming parents are biggest responsibility for keep their children. One of working by parents teach their children become useful for citizens, good member and friendly with the other. On the other hand, school is one of place children to get information and knowledge how to be good people which can help other people. Some people argue that, parents should teach children how to be good member of society and other say school is the place to learn about this. In my view, parents and school are the place of children to get knowledge and habbit become friendly in society.

Parents are good teacher after study in the school. Behavior of parents are the key of children to be good people. Children will imitate the habbit their mother and father. Because of this situation, parent become teacher for their children. Parent must teach their children how to be good members for society, they must give good example and explanation the benefit to be useful for other human. For example, if there are people get problem such as their neighboar, parents will help and give explanation to their children about helping of people is important because you live always need other people. People cannot life without other people, so become good members bring advantages for life. So, parent are the first teacher in the world.

However, school is the place of children to get new experience. It will become place of children to show their ability, how to help other people, especially for their school environment. For example, if there are friend do not understand about the lesson, indirectly children must teach to help their friend to understand about the lesson or when teacher give task, they can learn together and become useful friend.

In conclusion, parents are the first teacher for children to get good behavior and school is the place to get other information how to become good members and in the school are place to applicate their habbit and behavior which give their parent. So, parents and school place of children to get knowledge and applicate becom friendly human.