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ESSAYS ABOUT PUBLIC MUSEUMS AND ART GALLERIES (are they still needed?)

3 - Hi, In your first reasoning paragraph, your topic sentence mentions that:"... public museums and art galleries had better be...

Writing FeedbackDonfil - Aug 12, 2022lexuanhoa123 - Aug 13, 2022
If a product is good enough or it meets people's needs, advertising is unnecessary. Opinion essay

4 - Yes, I also think you made a mistake about "fish source" instead of "fish sauce", which then causes the...

Writing Feedbackarthur123 - Aug 12, 2022Nhat Ha - Aug 15, 2022
Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones (school day). Both views

3 - I think you should divide the second paragraph into 2 parts so as to make it easier to follow....

Writing Feedbackanhkhoa257 - Aug 12, 2022Nhat Ha - Aug 15, 2022
Big salary is more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

2 - When writing the prompt estatement do not indicate "several reasons" when it cannot be referred to in the original...

Writing Feedbackmileyno - Aug 11, 2022Holt - Aug 12, 2022
Letter of intent for Business Administration. Business is a matter of passion for me

NEW - Letter of intent for Business Administration Business has become one of the most important aspects of our life...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: IS MONEY THE MOST IMPORTANT FACTOR TO MOTIVATE PEOPLE TO STAY IN THE WORKFORCE

3 - I agree with the consultant that your conclusion is a little too short while your introduction is quite detailed,...

Writing Feedbackgradient - Aug 11, 2022Nhat Ha - Aug 15, 2022
Questbridge National College Match: Proudest Achievement Short Answer Question

2 - Well, this is certainly a character building explanation if I ever read one. Martial arts disciples are known for...

Scholarshippweets - Aug 11, 2022Holt - Aug 11, 2022
How I became a curious person - personal statement for GKS-U 2023

3 - @Holt thank you so much for your review, I will try to improve those aspects....

Undergraduateana03 - Aug 10, 2022ana03 - Aug 17, 2022
Shortage of physical exercise is a prevailing situation among citizens

2 - A review of the original prompt indicates that the writer should have provided reasoning topics for the questions provided....

Writing Feedbackhdklntt - Aug 10, 2022Holt - Aug 11, 2022
In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why? Is it a good thing?

2 - The essay is still 23 words over the suggested word count. The writer is relying on overwriting to help...

Writing Feedbackcherryblossom - Aug 10, 2022Holt - Aug 18, 2022
IELTS 1: The changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent for housework.

3 - I think there should be a short introduction in the second paragraph. Besides, there is no change trend...

Writing FeedbackJori - Aug 10, 2022wjc74751 - Aug 16, 2022
Workforce motivation - IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - AGREE OR DISAGREE

2 - The writer has not provided an originally worded prompt topic restatement. He used a clear cut and paste phrase...

Writing Feedbacknghkmth - Aug 10, 2022Holt - Aug 11, 2022
METAL/COVALENT-ORGANIC FRAMEWORKS FOR ELECTROCHEMICAL ENERGY STORAGE APPLICATIONS

3 - Your response is appreciated. This is a letter of motivation for a PhD application in chemistry.....

GraduateYemmy82 - Aug 10, 2022Yemmy82 - Aug 11, 2022
Globalisation and cultural identities

2 - It is advisable to avoid statements of fact such as "It is obvious" since there are no such claims...

Writing FeedbackDuyanh120197 - Aug 10, 2022Holt - Aug 11, 2022
"I want to be a superhero" - Gks-u personal statement

3 - Thank you so much for your valuable time and review. I will correct the mentioned things....

ScholarshipTan18 - Aug 10, 2022Tan18 - Aug 10, 2022
The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attract

2 - The summary overview should have been divided into 2 sentences + the trending statement. The 2 sentences should have...

Writing Feedbackchaminh306 - Aug 10, 2022Holt - Aug 10, 2022
The questionnaire about opinions of club members and general public for the new theater in one town

2 - The writer did not perform a proper analysis of the table provided. the representation of the image should have...

Writing Feedbackjane_00 - Aug 10, 2022Holt - Aug 10, 2022
Ielts Writing Part 2: Criteria for schools to choose student.

3 - @hklinh2792001 -"Firstly, students, who get a good mark throughout the process of learning, are usually considered ..." --> I...

Writing Feedbackhklinh2792001 - Aug 9, 2022Thuy Tran 07 - Aug 10, 2022
Vision and Science - Leadership and influence / Chevening Scholarship Application:

2 - The problem is that the applicant has discussed only the theoretical aspect of his leadership and influencing skills. This...

ScholarshipMohammedoat - Aug 9, 2022Holt - Aug 10, 2022
Government should not spend money on international aid when they have their own disadvantaged people

2 - There is no reference to a timeline within the original presentation. Therefore, including a timeline mention in the rewrite...

Writing Feedbackjane_00 - Aug 9, 2022Holt - Aug 10, 2022
IELTS TASK 2 : the media empowering too much attention to the celebrities' personal life

3 - "empowering too much attention to". "follow the breaking news" I think these collocation does not exist. Your limited understanding...

Writing Feedbacklenannhien - Aug 9, 2022jasmine4 - Aug 10, 2022
What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

2 - The essay is definitely too short to receive a passing mark since deductions will apply for writing only 223...

Writing FeedbackStellar365 - Aug 9, 2022Holt - Aug 9, 2022
Undergraduate Admission Essay - "Happy in a Surprising Way" - First Draft

2 - The discussion presented is more of overcoming an accidental challenge posed by you and encouraged by someone else. It...

Undergraduatelithomascarene - Aug 9, 2022Holt - Aug 9, 2022
Undergraduate Admission Essay - "Tell us your story" - Revision

2 - The essay clearly indicates that the story has to apply to you, the applicant, in singular form. So why...

UndergraduateGeorge Sander - Aug 8, 2022Holt - Aug 9, 2022
Task 1: The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows

3 - I just to want to suggest you reread your essay for these errors: "Next in ranking ... with is...

Writing FeedbackIloveielts - Aug 8, 2022Pore - Aug 18, 2022
Technology is affecting family relationships in many ways. What are advantages/disadvantages?

2 - The writer should refrain from presenting a personal opinion within an advantage or disadvantage prompt presentation. That is because...

Writing FeedbackLinh Luong - Aug 8, 2022Holt - Aug 9, 2022
Should school-aged kids be compelled to partake in local volunteer projects without payment or not?

3 - unpaid community services should be a compulsory subject -> community service is not a subject -> simply " should...

Writing FeedbackNguyenviet - Aug 8, 2022cherryblossom - Aug 10, 2022
UIC Admission Personal Statement - Diversity and why my personal traits would stand out

3 - Thank you so much for the comment! I will add some more social activities, and maybe I will try...

Undergraduatebkhnhch - Aug 7, 2022bkhnhch - Aug 8, 2022
The graph below gives information from report about consumption of energy in the USA

4 - when you give the background information, the period of time should be placed at the end of the sentence....

Writing Feedbackquandz - Aug 7, 2022Nguyenviet - Aug 8, 2022
What is LIAISON OFFICER ??

2 - In a company, there is a department that handles promotions and client interaction. A liason officer facilitates or assists...

Student TalkPhearum - Aug 7, 2022Holt - Aug 8, 2022
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