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1. Some people think that it is better to work for different organisations during the career

2 - Donot turn the discussion intea controversy. That statement is unnecessary as the writer is altering the original statement presentation....

Writing Feedbackmaichi13 - Jun 18, 2021Holt - Jun 19, 2021
Global product and economy - CAMBRIDGE IELTS 10 Test 3 Writing Task 2

3 - @Holt Thank you so so much for your reply. Honestly, this is my first essay at this forum so...

Writing FeedbackMinhnek4 - Jun 18, 2021Minhnek4 - Jun 20, 2021
One thing that makes me happy this week.

2 - This essay is meant to be a deep reflection of your relationship with your sister. If should cover at...

Writing Feedbackeffiechen22 - Jun 18, 2021Holt - Jun 19, 2021
Agriculture and Pest Management - Personal statement for commonwealth scholarship

2 - Save for some researched information, this essay is devoid of any actual content that relates to the given prompts....

ScholarshipNana_Kwabena - Jun 18, 2021Holt - Jun 19, 2021
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] WHETHER COMPUTERS ARE THE MOST SIGNIFICANT INNOVATION...

2 - Let's be clear, a reference to the "last century" means the most recent 100 years (20th century). The reference...

Writing Feedbackphcnguyen - Jun 18, 2021Holt - Jun 19, 2021
(IELTS) Home schooling vs School education

2 - Proper vocabulary usage is of the utmost importance in these essays. Word references help to bring clarity to the...

Writing FeedbackCrazy Snake - Jun 18, 2021Holt - Jun 19, 2021
Researchers and travelers are now more easily able to visit remote areas such as the South Pole

2 - This 209 word essay starts at a scoring disadvantage for not meeting the 250 minimum word count. The percentage...

Writing Feedbackthutrangg - Jun 18, 2021Holt - Jun 19, 2021
Essay about if self-acceptance is the most important trait a teacher can have

2 - A teacher of the English language should have proficient English vocabulary. Lecturers are supposed to have enough English know-hour...

Writing FeedbackQL91 - Jun 17, 2021Holt - Jun 18, 2021
Allowing children to decide on matters such as food, clothes and entertainment is beneficial or not?

3 - @VictoriaVu Good idea...

Writing FeedbackVictoriaVu - Jun 17, 2021Mekonguyen - Jun 18, 2021
"the solution for using technological devices too much to organise a meeting with other peolple"

2 - The first paragraph is confusing. It does not make a logical representation of the base presentation. It appears to...

Writing Feedbackducanh123 - Jun 17, 2021Holt - Jun 18, 2021
The large number of people are drawing attention to communicating online

2 - Your prompt restatement is flawed. You opted to merely restate the discussion topics rather than completing your discussion outline...

Writing Feedbackmymyt - Jun 17, 2021Holt - Jun 18, 2021
People from some nations often attach more importance to possessing a home than having rented one

2 - The topic restatement is properly done. AIthough it would benefitted from better synonym usage for the word " rented"....

Writing Feedbackhoangtuanhthu - Jun 17, 2021Holt - Jun 18, 2021
Some people claim that studying overseas will bring considerable benefits to the country

2 - The presentation is mostly on track and relevant to the prompt. However, issues with grammar in terms of vocabulary,...

Writing Feedbackphamtamm2508 - Jun 17, 2021Holt - Jun 17, 2021
TOEFL TASK-2 Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient

2 - The first paragraph needs to represent the original prompt without changing the content. The essence of the original topic...

Writing Feedbackshivam1687 - Jun 16, 2021Holt - Jun 17, 2021
Research Essay advising individuals on how to help their loved ones to stop smoking - review

2 - Do not open with information sources. she prompt summary does not negate the need for a proper topic introduction...

Research PapersJordania - Jun 16, 2021Holt - Jun 17, 2021
IELTS WRITING PART 2 - working while studying teenagers

2 - Word usage accuracy is important when writing. Simply stating " working while studying does not carry the same meaning...

Writing Feedbackgiangninh - Jun 16, 2021Holt - Jun 17, 2021
WRITING TASK 1- the proportion total expenditure in a certain European country between 1960 and 2000

3 - Hi @stella nguyen ... on five sectors increased decreased (?) from 1960 to 2000. ... money for transportation...

Writing Feedbackstella nguyen - Jun 16, 2021HelenN - Jun 18, 2021
IELTS TASK 2: Describe causes and effects of extended working hours

2 - Okay. Put away the dictionary and stop looking up representative complicated words that do not help with the clarity...

Writing FeedbackkuroshiroP - Jun 16, 2021Holt - Jun 17, 2021
Writing paragraphs about life goals

2 - Since this is only a single paragraph, you need not lead into your explanation with "To begin with". Go...

Writing Feedbackmanchint - Jun 16, 2021Holt - Jun 17, 2021
The causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society

2 - The prompt paraphrase lacks coherence. The amount of words used in reference to the original discussion topic does not...

Writing FeedbackTrag1112 - Jun 16, 2021Holt - Jun 17, 2021
Writing Task 2 IELTS - conflicts about deciding subjects at university

2 - The validity of the personal opinion you present should be in the 3rd paragraph of the essay. It is...

Writing FeedbackTinhAnhNguyen - Jun 16, 2021Holt - Jun 17, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 about impact of social media on both individuals and society.

2 - Keep track of your word count. Always present 250 words or accept the penalties for not presenting the minimum...

Writing FeedbackAli20 - Jun 16, 2021Holt - Jun 17, 2021
The pie charts compare household expenditure spending on five different items in UK and New Zealand

2 - The summary overview is the presentation that gives you the opportunity to run down important information for the leader....

Writing Feedbackhanh_1 - Jun 16, 2021Holt - Jun 17, 2021
Bullying at schools. How to have a good structure in cause-solution writing type?

2 - There are a few things you have to remember when creating your restatement: - Don't refer to a debate...

Writing FeedbackHolan1712 - Jun 16, 2021Holt - Jun 17, 2021
Focus on traditional classes more or practical subjects more?

NEW - Some people said that school should focus more on teaching practical subjects such as car maintenence or managing the...

Writing Feedbackphucnguyen0409 - Jun 15, 2021 -
The major environmental issue of our time is the extinction of many living creatures on earth

2 - The sentence structure shows 2 connected ideas. Therefore, a comma, rather than a period should be used in...

Writing Feedbacktrangntt255 - Jun 15, 2021Holt - Jun 16, 2021
Most people try to balance between work and other parts of theirs lives.

2 - Avoid using a cut and paste of the original prompt reference. This is not good for your LR...

Writing Feedbackkhanhthu292002 - Jun 15, 2021Holt - Jun 16, 2021
The graph depicts the percentage of four different materials recycled over the period of 28 years

2 - Incomplete image identifier. What type of graph? Review and memorize the differences. Your first trending sentence should...

Writing FeedbackNalanguyen - Jun 15, 2021Holt - Jun 16, 2021
Harder to study at school.

2 - [quote=YeuRosie19]I believe that some solutions can be carefully considered to tackle with it.[/quote] The first part of this sentence...

Writing FeedbackYeuRosie19 - Jun 15, 2021Holt - Jun 16, 2021
Writing #1: The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010

3 - hi @yiwenwen The structure of this task should have at least 3 parts: Introduction, Overview and Body. You...

Writing Feedbackyiwenwen - Jun 15, 2021morce183 - Jun 30, 2021
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