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Writing #1: The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010

3 - hi @yiwenwen The structure of this task should have at least 3 parts: Introduction, Overview and Body. You...

Writing Feedbackyiwenwen - Jun 15, 2021morce183 - Jun 30, 2021
Scientists use living animal to carry our research. Some people think it is interesting.

2 - While the topic is controversial, the presented discussion, which asks for your opinion to be presented, leans more...

Scholarshipducklaconvit - Jun 15, 2021Holt - Jun 16, 2021
Toefl Independent Writing - "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and working for own goals

3 - @Holt Thanks for the feedback....

Writing Feedbackackit - Jun 14, 2021ackit - Jun 16, 2021
Children should be encouraged to play outdoors games that require physical activity?

3 - I try to focus in the first paragraph of your essay. (The) ... by the youngsters at...

Writing Feedbackphucnguyen0409 - Jun 14, 2021Ali20 - Jun 16, 2021
Task 1: Relationships at work with supervisors and companions (survey of workers 2005 and 2009)

2 - Relationships with whom? Refer to the groups in this section first then repeat later. This is...

Writing FeedbackSally_Dao - Jun 14, 2021Holt - Jun 15, 2021
Reasons why adults pursue education at their age and how their education costs should be allocated

2 - You missed the minimum word count by 4 words. The standard is 150 - 200 words, you wrote only...

Writing FeedbackLE THI QUYNH NHU - Jun 14, 2021Holt - Jun 15, 2021
The benefits of social skills and qualification skills to the company

2 - The phrase still refers to the original key phrase. LR scores are only increased by your alternate word...

Writing Feedbackthao van - Jun 14, 2021Holt - Jun 15, 2021
Different types of activities in the American senior citizens' leisure time from 1980s to 2010s

3 - Thank you for giving me a feedback. It is really helpful for my improvement. Hope to get more feedback...

Writing Feedbackkimcat2207 - Jun 14, 2021kimcat2207 - Jun 18, 2021
Popularity of fish and three kinds of meat including lamb, beef and chicken in a European country

2 - [ Make this sound more professional. You could say; "The line chart shows the comparative consumption..." to...

Writing FeedbackHarinn - Jun 14, 2021Holt - Jun 15, 2021
In many cities more and more people are living alone. Is this a positive or negative trend?

3 - There are some replacement needed: paraphrasing carefully about the question so you can have a better view and range...

Writing Feedbackcongbeo95 - Jun 14, 2021phucnguyen0409 - Jun 15, 2021
Learning about the past IELTS task 2

2 - There is no collosal issue being presented. Merely a difference of belieffs. You are trying to use a...

Writing FeedbackPaul16 - Jun 14, 2021Holt - Jun 15, 2021
A breakdown of male and female inhabitants passing the driving test in a particular Asian nation

2 - It would be better for your LR score ilt you use the phrase " in no particular Asian...

Writing Feedbackhuyenhoanglekhan - Jun 14, 2021Holt - Jun 15, 2021
Traditional newspapers are believed to hold the most vital position among news readers

3 - You just need to paraphrase the statement: Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers...

Writing Feedbackmorce183 - Jun 13, 2021niesaysi - Jun 14, 2021
Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? Any solutions?

5 - In this sentence, you have incorrectly restated the idea from the topic (Bullying is a big problem in...

Writing FeedbackMinh Hang Le - Jun 13, 2021niesaysi - Jun 14, 2021
Many think that artificially intelligence robots will do all jobs eventually. Do you agree or not?

2 - This is an opinion essay. It is not an extent response writing task. Your answer is not in...

Writing Feedbacknam2662004 - Jun 13, 2021Holt - Jun 14, 2021
The budgets should be centered on illness prevention services by fostering a healthy lifestyle

2 - When you say"to a certain extent ", that indicates a limitation to your agreement. While saying " I...

Writing Feedbacknhinguyen2611 - Jun 13, 2021Holt - Jun 14, 2021
The bar chart compares the number of crimes in five different countries of the world (1930-1980)

2 - A properly analyzed task 1 essay must be completed within 20 minutes and between 175 - 200 words. Though...

Writing Feedbackreginaphalangee - Jun 13, 2021Holt - Jun 14, 2021
IELTS writing: the most common mistakes that students make when translating Vietnamese into English

2 - You should have included a clear reference to the fact that the info is based on collated opinion...

Writing Feedbackquynhhoang2k - Jun 12, 2021Holt - Jun 13, 2021
IELTS task 2: EDUCATION-TEACHERS (both views and opinion)

2 - You are the author right? Why are you referring to yourself in 3rd person when your opinion should...

Writing FeedbackPaul16 - Jun 12, 2021Holt - Jun 13, 2021
Should countries around the world establish close connections regarding culture and business?

2 - You need to better reference your restatement of the 2 ideas that were provided. Long sentences such as these...

Writing Feedbackimahunnn - Jun 12, 2021Holt - Jun 13, 2021
Write a paragraph (110 - 150 words) about what job would you like to choose in the future.

2 - You do not really prove that your father's occupation and your exposure to it influenced you to become a...

Writing Feedbacklck283 - Jun 12, 2021Holt - Jun 13, 2021
It is said that children are able to get their goals if they try their best to do it

2 - The first 2 sentences in your restatement paragraph do not reflect a version of the original. Rather, it is...

Writing FeedbackTrinh Mera - Jun 12, 2021Holt - Jun 13, 2021
People being monitored are often unaware that this is happening - what you think about this?

2 - No such word. The word is simply "unaware", specially when describing an ongoing action. Wrong word...

Writing Feedbackunknown vn - Jun 12, 2021Holt - Jun 13, 2021
Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security.

3 - You should look over your essay because there are some basic mistakes like: "I tend towards the viewpoint...

Writing Feedbackmoe0 - Jun 12, 2021Paul16 - Jun 14, 2021
Task 2: It is argued that newspapers are an optimal way to learn news - what's your opinion?

2 - I cannot accurately review your paper as you wrote less than the 250 word requirement. Presenting an examiner with...

Writing FeedbackMekonguyen - Jun 11, 2021Holt - Jun 12, 2021
Some people believe that adverts are conducive to economic development, but others disagree

3 - @Holt Thanks for your suggestions....

Writing FeedbackAlexander Hu - Jun 11, 2021Alexander Hu - Jun 12, 2021
Computers are believed to be smarter than humans by several scientists in no time

5 - You have an inaccuracy understanding the topic. Thus, i think you can change "On top of that" ==> "Moreover"...

Writing FeedbackVyvy201197 - Jun 11, 2021phucnguyen0409 - Jun 15, 2021
It is believed that money is the key to happiness. One can still feel happy regardless of being rich

2 - Name 2 specific factors as required by the 2nd direct question. Your response to each question must stand...

Writing FeedbackHarinn - Jun 11, 2021Holt - Jun 12, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - SAVING ANIMAL SPECIES

4 - You are expressing an unclear opinion, you both agree and disagree. You should choose one side and explain with...

Writing Feedbackstevenlxag - Jun 11, 2021Paul16 - Jun 12, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2_SELF-DRIVING SYSTEMS FOR VEHICLES

3 - Thanks for your advice !...

Writing FeedbackSamt Lee - Jun 10, 2021Samt Lee - Jun 11, 2021
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