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[PERSONAL STATEMENT KGSP-U] - I wonder if I'm being sentimental

4 - @Holt and @nhunggngu Thank you for taking the time to give some advices. I'm glad that I started early...

Undergraduateagusaefulloh - Jan 17, 2021agusaefulloh - Jan 23, 2021
[NTU Scholarship Essay] Values And Beliefs You Hold Strongly To - 'to start to be great'

2 - You have not responded to the task. There are certain belief and value systems associated with the character and...

ScholarshipDksDZFwC - Jan 17, 2021Holt - Jan 18, 2021
Writing task 1 IELTS Cambridge 9 about how the island changes

3 - @Holt thank you soo much for your comment. I will try my best to improve the essay. I hope...

Writing Feedbackhanggiang_1711 - Jan 17, 2021hanggiang_1711 - Jan 18, 2021
Space reasearch = waste of money? - Academic IELTS essay, task 2.

2 - You are not being on point or direct in your restatement of the original prompt. Do not insert subjects...

Writing Feedbackpoklas - Jan 16, 2021Holt - Jan 17, 2021
IELTS Writing task 1 - Line graph - Wheat exports

2 - The suggested number of words for this writing task is 150-190 words. There are only 20 minutes for the...

Writing Feedbacktreimnoisett - Jan 16, 2021Holt - Jan 16, 2021
Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home.

3 - Hi, your essay is pretty good. However, your conclusion can not summarize the general viewpoint because you mentioned too...

Writing Feedbackjeronimo - Jan 16, 2021Priscillia - Jan 21, 2021
Motivational letter for a Master's program at the Tampere University. Finnish Govt Scholarship

3 - Thank you so much Holt for your feedback. It really means a lot....

LettersJibolar - Jan 16, 2021Jibolar - Jan 16, 2021
Pharmacist - Personal Statement & for Commonwealth PhD Scholarship Application

4 - Thanks a lot @Holt & @ Jibolar....

ScholarshipKhanChughta - Jan 15, 2021KhanChughta - Jan 16, 2021
Motivation Letter for Erasmus+ EMJMD Management and Engineering of Environment and Energy+ (ME3)

2 - Dear concerned who? For a proper opening salutation, simply address the members of the scholarship admissions committee. Say, "To...

ScholarshipWaseem071 - Jan 15, 2021Holt - Jan 16, 2021
Stipendium Hungaricum - letter of motivation - What qualities make you a good candidate?

2 - For starters, you only use the term "dear" if you know who you are addressing such as "Dear Members...

LettersMORA768 - Jan 15, 2021Holt - Jan 16, 2021
Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum, Vehicle Master Degree

2 - You should first, explain how your undergraduate studies have prepared you to face the demands of the government project....

Lettersndhnif - Jan 15, 2021Holt - Jan 15, 2021
Academic objectives and indicate how these are appropriate to your long-range goals.

2 - Start off with the actual topic sentence. Reverse the presentation to kick - off with, "Being an avid technophile..."...

Undergraduatebetheguy - Jan 14, 2021Holt - Jan 15, 2021
Essay about the host of international sporting events

4 - Your introduction is vague and does not follow the 3-5 sentences for a paragraph rule. The prompt wants you...

Writing Feedbackqtrang03 - Jan 14, 2021srjvob - Jan 16, 2021
The Gala to welcome Freshmen 2020

NEW - translating a magazine This is a "present" instead of a greeting from the cohousing's SFL to the new...

Writing Feedbackchaodendinhmo128 - Jan 14, 2021 -
Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum in Engineering field - Education is the key

3 - Hi there! Nice to know you. Dear @Holt, please excuse me, I'd like to add more feedbacks on this...

Undergraduateswitnaura - Jan 14, 2021yesayagm - Jan 15, 2021
UBC PERSONAL PROFILE, WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU AND WHY? "Effort"

3 - Hi! I believe you have written a highly impressive response which is sure to reflect well on your application....

Undergraduatehighschoolstuden - Jan 14, 2021RAJVEERSODHI - Jan 15, 2021
How to write a 100 word Essay about yourself

3 - @Holt I apologize for everything I have said I was just completely lost at the time and was desperate...

Essaysuilliteratehomie - Jan 14, 2021uilliteratehomie - Jan 15, 2021
Stipendium Hungarigum Scolarship / Engineering / Motivation Letter

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your consideration....

LettersPartyAnimal - Jan 14, 2021PartyAnimal - Jan 15, 2021
Stipendium Hungaricum - Mechanical engineering

2 - - This is not an acceptable reason for the reviewer. Remember, you completed an English language course in...

Scholarshipdulguxun - Jan 14, 2021Holt - Jan 15, 2021
The Global UGRAD Program is for young leaders committed to serving their home communities

3 - I believe that you had better not use contractions like ''didn't''. Instead, just write did not. Be aware of...

Scholarshipdinoraachilova - Jan 14, 2021AbdelrahmanWal4 - Jan 26, 2021
Are you a writer or it's equivalent?

2 - Respond to this prompt by first, analyzing your personal reasons for writing. If you write only to respond to...

Student TalkSamuel12 - Jan 13, 2021Holt - Jan 14, 2021
Motivation letter - Stipendium Hungaricum - MA Tourism Management

2 - Truth be told, the essay is not remarkable, nor is it memorable. It is forgettable. The presentation does not...

Lettersnatura - Jan 13, 2021Holt - Jan 14, 2021
A competitive person - Scholarship Motivational letter

3 - Dear Holt, I would like to thank you so much for your quick response and for taking the time...

LettersZacksCodes - Jan 13, 2021ZacksCodes - Jan 14, 2021
Statement of Purpose - Masters Degree in Education Leadership, Organizations, and Entrepreneurship

2 - I am not sure if this incorrect statement of purpose will help your application to Harvard. Specially since it...

Graduatemanuelavilasb - Jan 13, 2021Holt - Jan 14, 2021
[KGSP-G] - International Trade Studies (GSIS) - Personal Statement

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your helpful comment. I will fix it according to your suggestions. Have a...

Scholarshipnhunggngu - Jan 13, 2021nhunggngu - Jan 15, 2021
The total count of girls per hundred boys took admissions at a different level of education

2 - Please do not expect a thorough and efficient review of your report essay because you forgot to upload the...

Writing Feedbacknehash - Jan 13, 2021Holt - Jan 14, 2021
The Ashram visit - a personal life experience that has had particular significance for you

2 - Being from India, you are familiar with the ashram definition. Since the reviewer is not from India, you need...

Scholarshipshreshthbh - Jan 13, 2021Holt - Jan 14, 2021
Personal Statement Masters in EnergySystems (500 WORDS) - University of Oxford

2 - There is an extreme focus on your academic achievements overall. This unusual focus has resulted in your inability to...

GraduateHafizTaimoor - Jan 13, 2021Holt - Jan 14, 2021
Waterloo AIF Advice - What could I improve? Question about educational goals, interest in program...

2 - This is what they call a non-answer. At first glance, it appears that you are responding to the prompt....

Undergraduatepnksociety - Jan 13, 2021Holt - Jan 14, 2021
Undergrad Scholarship Essay About My Beliefs and Values - "Cooperation, Diligence, and Duty"

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. It was very much needed....

Scholarshipsrjvob - Jan 13, 2021srjvob - Jan 13, 2021
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