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|Suggestions and grammar check for the APIASF Scholarship Essays
2 - Well....what is the contribution of this sentence to describe your short or long term goals? I feel this...
ScholarshipHayRi - Jan 9, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 13, 2014
|MOTIVATION LETTER - I realized my passion for marketing
ScholarshipJanPham - Jan 8, 2014 / JanPham - Jan 12, 2014
|Learning SPANISH; Subjects in which you excel
Scholarshipjroseg - Jan 8, 2014 / dumi - Jan 12, 2014
|'Work hard, keep your head up' Describe participation in extracurricular activities essay
2 - Good job! I really liked it. One minor suggestion: I get that working hard at an early age helped...
Scholarshipelterrible - Jan 9, 2014 / Shpresa - Jan 11, 2014
|I wanted to devote my life helping others; Self-introduction - KGSP Scholarship
6 - So you're saying I should shorten my sentences in order to not confuse the reader, aren't you? I tend...
Scholarshipimats - Dec 11, 2013 / imats - Jan 11, 2014
|My MOTHER; How goals have been influenced by my Hispanic heritage? Scholarship
2 - Life was grim, for she left everything she ever had like her family... My mother maymight have...
Scholarshipls682 - Jan 8, 2014 / niesaysi - Jan 10, 2014
|Is this a good motivation letter?
Scholarshipnatali_ay - Jan 8, 2014 / Cavinstrivehard - Jan 9, 2014
|I felt special knowing sign languge; Why this university, major &how scholarship will help
Scholarshipstufify - Jan 6, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 9, 2014
|Academic/career short & long term goals and how hispanic heritage influence them essay
Scholarshipldiazve - Jan 5, 2014 / ldiazve - Jan 8, 2014
|I can understand English; Discuss the subjects in which you have had difficulty
NEW - Discuss the subjects in which you have had difficulty. What factors do you believe contributed to your difficulties? How...
ScholarshipHugo_Maximus - Jan 7, 2014 / — -
|Discuss a leadership experience you have had in any area of your life
3 - Really, i believe that leadership is the god-gifted power....i always maintenance my whole family and friend circle...like as a...
Scholarshipmaria1995 - Jan 5, 2014 / ahqaf - Jan 7, 2014
|Advice for Motivational Letter Scolarship
2 - With this letter I would like to express my strong interest in participating at the abc programme in...
ScholarshipDaniel333 - Jan 6, 2014 / Pahan - Jan 6, 2014
|Moving from Mexico to the United States; Academic Challenge Description.
Scholarshipgguzman - Dec 10, 2013 / dumi - Jan 6, 2014
|I have accumulated all of my hopes and dreams; A personal obstacle
2 - I understand that your mother's cancer and fracturing your tibia made you want to pursue your biomedical engineering career...
Scholarship340livinglife - Jan 4, 2014 / maria1995 - Jan 5, 2014
|My dream is to study performing arts; INTERNATIONAL SCHOLARSHIP UWC ESSAY HELP
NEW - Hello, thats my essay for uwc scholarship... it isnt finished , actually its only a draft... Please help me...
Scholarshipcoppelia - Jan 5, 2014 / — -
|I was inspired by the "Summerhill School"; Motivational statement for Erasmus Mundus
NEW - Hello everybody! I am applying for Erasmus Mundus scholarship Masters course in Education Technologies. For this I need to...
ScholarshipNastasi - Jan 5, 2014 / — -
|SPEAK YOUR LIFE- a rich kid brought up by poor parents
Scholarshipfatimasirajfs - Jan 4, 2014 / fatimasirajfs - Jan 5, 2014
|In what areas (non-academic or academic) have you acquired knowledge or skills? How?
Scholarshipgracefraustoo - Jan 3, 2014 / Asiak - Jan 4, 2014
|A narrative on what I learned or Something I encountered
3 - I find this writing is too abstract at the beginning. You signed up what? Then again you talk about...
ScholarshipJulieRose - Dec 5, 2013 / dumi - Jan 4, 2014
|'I am the first of my family...' Academic/career goals. Scholarship essay 400-600 words
3 - Good essay overall! I do agree with the person above, however -- transitions (such as connection sentences with "and"...
Scholarshipjmr213 - Jan 3, 2014 / 500daysoftrisha - Jan 4, 2014
|I enjoy Math; GMS essay 1- Best Subject
2 - There are some grammatical and spelling errors, as well as 2 or 3 run-on sentences. Be careful with those....
Scholarshipbruckw1 - Jan 2, 2014 / jmr213 - Jan 4, 2014
|Strategy of cultural contents planning - Self Introduction Essay for KGSP scholarship
NEW - Help please!! -Your course of life, your view of life, study background, your hopes & wishes, etc -Your...
Scholarshippimoshka - Jan 3, 2014 / — -
|Being a proactive Nigerian - Gates Millennium
6 - In the first paragraph, there was no consistency between the object " a person's" and the pronoun "they", and...
Scholarshipmeatheadmanny - Dec 27, 2013 / Ekeson - Jan 2, 2014
|Motivation letters for Erasmus Mundus scholarship
NEW - Hi all, the following is my letter of motivation to apply for Erasmus Mundus scholarship. Please help me revise...
Scholarshipduynh07 - Jan 2, 2014 / — -
|"Did you just roll your eyes at me young lady?"; Humorous story
Scholarshiplilycook_73 - Dec 15, 2013 / Lillie - Jan 1, 2014
|Learning is like sailing against water current ; MSP SCHOLARSHIP
3 - What do you hope to achieve for your organisation by doing this course? Max. 200 words According to...
Scholarshipbillelsob - Dec 29, 2013 / billelsob - Jan 1, 2014
|Football and Leadership go hand in hand-Gates Millennium Essay
2 - "I obviously wasn't just picked at random at to be a captain, I was selected by the coaching staff...
Scholarshipmeatheadmanny - Dec 30, 2013 / boston1002 - Dec 30, 2013
|perusing a Biomedical Science.. Scholarship essay for UCF's faculty and staff association
5 - Thank you!...
Scholarshipenique94 - Dec 29, 2013 / enique94 - Dec 29, 2013
|Our family was menaced by a group named Guerillas
Scholarshipmaria1995 - Dec 26, 2013 / maria1995 - Dec 29, 2013
|Olin College provides a tuition scholarship!
5 - I don't think you should mention tuition and scholarship at all. It comes off as if the biggest reason...
Scholarshipwnsgud4030 - Dec 21, 2013 / MBLTheNumbaOne - Dec 27, 2013
|HISTORY; Gates Millennium- subjects in which you excel or have excelled
Scholarshipmeatheadmanny - Dec 14, 2013 / an_nie - Dec 27, 2013
|I STRUGGLED WITH MATH ; Gates Millennium - difficult subject
Scholarshipmeatheadmanny - Dec 14, 2013 / meatheadmanny - Dec 27, 2013
|Math and valuable teachers - subjects in which you excel or have excelled
3 - There are three parts of writing essay. -first paragraph is about introduction. -Second is about details of subjects you...
ScholarshipJimenezS - Dec 26, 2013 / something - Dec 27, 2013
|My First essay - How to concentrate while studying .
2 - I think you should structure your essay. This looks like a bunch of bullet points. Also, a little unfocussed....
Scholarshiphesoyama - Dec 26, 2013 / reluctantmuggle - Dec 26, 2013
|Commitment to delivering outstanding results; Intertek's mission & business; Scholarship
3 - Dear Tia, I've already received too many feedbacks that one of the worst openings could be your childhood dream,...
Scholarshiptiacbolden - Dec 22, 2013 / mhdsaboori - Dec 24, 2013
|I feel sympathetic when I see the cancer patients; Career goal
ScholarshipIonKim - Dec 8, 2013 / niesaysi - Dec 23, 2013
|The clear glass award ; LEADERSHIP
3 - Your prompt is "What have you learned from your various leadership experiences?". In your intro, the gist of...
Scholarshiptarrance17 - Dec 8, 2013 / niesaysi - Dec 23, 2013
|Professor Hoax - Nursing Student Scholarship - Why you are a qualified candidate?
ScholarshipPrinz18 - Dec 22, 2013 / admission2012 - Dec 23, 2013
|NTU ESSAY SCHOLARSHIP, -BREAKAWAY MY COCOON
NEW - One of the big choices I made was choosing my senior high school; A brand-new school that located far...
Scholarshipecneics - Dec 22, 2013 / — -
|He's gonna lead me to it; NTU / Person who had a significant influence
Scholarshipvalyanurfadila - Dec 21, 2013 / alstera - Dec 21, 2013
|How my Hispanic Heritage has influenced my goals; SCHOLARSHIP
4 - Brilliant essay! However, in the last paragraph I think you should expatiate on the Hispanic traditions stating exactly how...
Scholarshipmj2794 - Dec 7, 2013 / Marsbar - Dec 21, 2013
|Additional Essay: Being a Military Brat and still succeeding
Scholarshipgabriellemuniz - Dec 17, 2013 / marijkelandon - Dec 21, 2013
|Struggling for a better tomorrow.
3 - I feel these two lines do not contribute much value addition to your response because these are general...
Scholarshipanabarrera - Dec 14, 2013 / dumi - Dec 19, 2013
|MY EARLIEST ROLE MODELS; Cornelius Vanderbilt Scholarship
Scholarshipthartistoo - Dec 15, 2013 / thartistoo - Dec 19, 2013
|Won the admiration of many ; Intro Scholarship Essay
NEW - And she kissed me. Brimming with innocence, I pushed her away and jumped back into the soccer game which...
ScholarshipPrinz18 - Dec 17, 2013 / — -
|What makes you unique and why do you deserve this honor?
4 - Just remember this, they have THOUSANDS of people applying (no pressure lol) so they want you to pick...
Scholarshipjadelyn_4 - Sep 18, 2012 / gabriellemuniz - Dec 17, 2013
|Policy-maker: motivation letter for MA in advanced social work
NEW - Hello there! I'm writing a motivation letter for Erasmus Mundus masters program in advanced social work. One year of...
ScholarshipKatarina123 - Dec 16, 2013 / — -
|I want to become an athletic trainer; Life Goal
2 - You touch on solid ideas, but they seem a little bland and broken up. Try combining sentences in some...
Scholarshipashleydavis35 - Dec 15, 2013 / thartistoo - Dec 15, 2013
|Changing curriculum was an academic challenge for me
Scholarshipmj2794 - Dec 14, 2013 / dumi - Dec 15, 2013
|Letter Of Appeal for IMPORTANT Scholarship (assistance to complete my three years)
2 - I would perhaps write it like this: To members of the PRISM scholarship committee, Given my engagements...
Scholarshiptiacbolden - Dec 12, 2013 / Ubcappin - Dec 15, 2013
|'My best on everything' - NTU Scholarship Essay
Scholarshipkyakyakya - Dec 14, 2013 / mchrome - Dec 14, 2013
|DATING SCIENCE & psychology - NTU
Scholarshipmchrome - Dec 12, 2013 / mchrome - Dec 13, 2013
|NTU Scholarship Essay - 'What My Wushu Coach Has Taught Me'
5 - Hey ppucinos, I agree with the others. You should jot down more informational background about yourself, e.g. your accomplishment...
Scholarshipppucinos - Nov 2, 2013 / Angie_Felicia - Dec 12, 2013
|Making Amends with My Reflection- NTU Scholarship Essay
5 - Perharps you can elaborate more on how accepting your condition has changed your life for the better. It...
ScholarshipAngie_Felicia - Dec 12, 2013 / mchrome - Dec 12, 2013
|"Me, Einstein, and Thinking" - NTU Scholarship Essay
5 - Thanks for your feedback Allen! I really appreciate it. Looks like I need to do a lot of correction....
Scholarshipgangsaur - Dec 8, 2013 / gangsaur - Dec 12, 2013
|"Business plan project"; SOP- Junior Fellowship Program
ScholarshipGvantsa - Dec 8, 2013 / Gvantsa - Dec 12, 2013
|Academic/career short-term, long-term goals,and Hispanic heritage influence on these goals
2 - Instead of using 5, 6, try using "five...six" I think you should take out "is really difficult"...
Scholarshipnicoleguzmanx3 - Dec 11, 2013 / michael_brand1 - Dec 11, 2013
|'No work until you graduate' - How do i overcome an obstacle in life; SCHOLARSHIP
Scholarshipkaster10 - Oct 31, 2013 / dumi - Dec 11, 2013
|Flying! What it means to me is; Scholarship
5 - WOW!!! What an amazing Idea but unfortunately I already submitted the essay in but could you tell me what...
ScholarshipFuturepilotkid - Nov 27, 2013 / Futurepilotkid - Dec 11, 2013
|'SERENE THOUGHTS' - personal and academic goals
ScholarshipFeenahluv - Nov 21, 2013 / dumi - Dec 10, 2013
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