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|CLIMATE CHANGE AND GLOBAL WARMING
2 - I think you did a good job of addressing all of your points. Do you need an introduction before...
Writing Feedbackmrice4 - Jan 26, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Jan 26, 2013
|Adolescence - Are parents the best teachers? No they are not.
Writing FeedbackEnhsaruul - Jan 26, 2013 / dumi - Jan 26, 2013
|strict rules of children's behavior, children are allowed to do anything they like
2 - The strict education of behavior means that --> The strict education system shows that which contributes to the...
Writing Feedbackgsisland - Jan 25, 2013 / devabe2005 - Jan 26, 2013
|Governments should ban smoking in all public places and also build some places for smokers there
9 - Dear friends, Thank you for your taking a time to read my essay. English is not my native language....
Writing Feedbacknomad22001 - Jan 23, 2013 / nomad22001 - Jan 26, 2013
|What difficulties do you foresee in living away from home? Essay.
2 - Reading the prompt over, I feel like they were asking for your own personal experience rather than asking what's...
Writing FeedbackSchoolWorkHard - Jan 25, 2013 / megciso - Jan 26, 2013
|GOVERNMENT SYSTEM; Important thing I want to change in my country
2 - If i could change one important thing about my country, it would be a proverty. Poverty is a a...
Writing FeedbackXAVI XAVY - Jan 26, 2013 / sadammar - Jan 26, 2013
|Which kind of friendship and respect is required?
Writing FeedbackXAVI XAVY - Jan 23, 2013 / XAVI XAVY - Jan 26, 2013
|BODY PARAGRAPH OF SINGLE SEX VS CO-ED
2 - in my opinion, co-ex education is much better. About the distraction between girls and boys is too old-fashioned. Right...
Writing Feedbackmissdee - Jan 25, 2013 / lily41628 - Jan 26, 2013
|TOEFL - Contribution of young people to their communities is not sufficient.
Writing Feedbacklily41628 - Dec 12, 2012 / lily41628 - Jan 25, 2013
|IELTS - Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from the prison. Cause
6 - Dear devabe2005, Well, your writing is ok. There are some grammar mistakes, but you can sort them out...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 24, 2013 / Agustin - Jan 25, 2013
|GOVERNMENT SHOULD BARE THE COST FOR SPECIAL UNDERGRADUATE COURSE
Writing Feedbacknida khan - Jan 25, 2013 / nida khan - Jan 25, 2013
|Laughter is the best medicine. Keeping everyone's happy makes us happy too
Writing Feedbackanjali1 - Jan 11, 2013 / anjali1 - Jan 25, 2013
|SAT; Always essential to tell the truth? Or should lie under special circumstances?
NEW - Is it always essential to tell the truth, or are there circumstances in which it is better to lie?...
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|IELTS; Children should learn science in school or not?
3 - Good introduction. Pleas start your sentences with capital letters because it is a distraction for us to follow what...
Writing Feedbackcaoxue - Jan 25, 2013 / dumi - Jan 25, 2013
|( IELTS essay) Doing jobs for a long spell ; Good or bad..?
3 - he is doing a very high salary job --> working is better vocabulary -->he is working in high salary...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 25, 2013 / devabe2005 - Jan 25, 2013
|IELTS-Elder people should be looked after by family members or professionals?
7 - Hai... Dumi, Dev and Han, Hai Dumi.. Thanks for the site id.. It was filttered from here, but...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 22, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 25, 2013
|Art Management; Colleges and universities should offer Job preparation training
Writing FeedbackAseaDai - Jan 24, 2013 / dumi - Jan 25, 2013
|RAPID ECONOMIC DEVELOPMENT RESULTED HIGHER LIVING STANDARDS IN TOWNS, NOT IN VILLAGES
6 - Well... you should not be worried... With practicing you can improve a lot...There's a tip that EF_Kevin used to...
Writing Feedbacknida khan - Jan 24, 2013 / dumi - Jan 25, 2013
|Safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today
3 - I am in favor of the argument: safe alternative to fossil fuels should be our global priority. ......
Writing Feedbacknida khan - Jan 24, 2013 / Pahan - Jan 25, 2013
|IELTS - Many countries spend large amounts of sports events. Agree or Disagree
4 - Hi Devraj / Tessy / Duminda, I got my IELTS results. Listening - 7.5 , Reading -7.5, Speaking -...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 24, 2013 / Arun0506 - Jan 24, 2013
|Qualified people moving from poor to rich countries _Ielts
3 - hai... you have some good points ... Try not to copy the words from the question, use other words.....
Writing Feedbacksalmav - Jan 24, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 24, 2013
|( IELTS essay) Globalization:Negative sides should not be forgotten.
5 - Hai..Dumi, dev and Sayed.. Hai Dumi.. Thanks for your comments and time especially for the tip...): Thanks...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 21, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 24, 2013
|advantages & disadvantages of high rise apartments - (IELTS essay)
5 - Hai Katrina... Thanks for the comments.. I specially mentioned in my essay a point that if it is...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 23, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 24, 2013
|Do we behave differently in different clothes? Well, It is a complex issue
NEW - DO we behave differently in different clothes? Well, It is a complex issue and there is no straightforward answer...
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|IELTS-Do children behave better when they are rewarded or punished? Discuss both view
5 - I think you have an interesting idea and the structure is well organized but with mistakes. I think you...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 23, 2013 / ritared - Jan 24, 2013
|Career in today's world; Chances for a good job
2 - Your essay sounds like an IELTS or TOEFL one. But without the prompt, it is difficult to understand for...
Writing Feedbackorkhan - Jan 24, 2013 / dumi - Jan 24, 2013
|Number of Japan tourists travelling abroad within 10 years
2 - This sentence is too long. Avoid very lengthy sentences because they require your examiner to remember too much...
Writing Feedbackaayaan - Jan 21, 2013 / dumi - Jan 24, 2013
|IELTS - making money would never replace a teddy bear for a child
Writing FeedbackChilie - Jan 23, 2013 / ritared - Jan 24, 2013
|Book vs Experience; Which is more important?
4 - dear Dumid. I appreciate your comments. They are really helpful for a non-native speaker like me. However I don't...
Writing Feedbackducanhhut - Jan 23, 2013 / ducanhhut - Jan 24, 2013
|What would I prefer- long hours more money or short hours less money-critique
Writing Feedbackriyak - Jan 21, 2013 / riyak - Jan 23, 2013
|(IELTS essay) inborn talents vs trained talents.
Writing Feedbackash5005 - Jan 19, 2013 / ritared - Jan 23, 2013
|Higher petrol price solve growing traffic and pollution problems-- IELTS
Writing FeedbackCallie0202 - Jan 23, 2013 / dumi - Jan 23, 2013
|( IELTS essay) Money spent for in.national sports events /sports training to children
6 - hai... Dumi, pahan, cuong, syed, and Dev.. Hai... dumi and pahan... Thanks for your valuable correction.. Hai......
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 21, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 23, 2013
|Machinery stuffs vz hand made stuff? Which is better?
Writing FeedbackEverytime - Jan 22, 2013 / Everytime - Jan 23, 2013
|'quite arguable question'; should kids begin learning foreign language early?
Writing Feedbacktjtajinder - Jan 22, 2013 / tjtajinder - Jan 23, 2013
|iELTS Spending a lot on holding wedding celebrations are waste others are oppose
5 - hi joythblessy Show their status and to get respect from others ---> i missed to explained about respect...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 22, 2013 / devabe2005 - Jan 23, 2013
|IELTS Task1 - Pie chart and table;Why agricultural land becomes less productive?
Writing Feedbackmcuong01 - Jan 22, 2013 / dumi - Jan 22, 2013
|IELTS 2: Living in high apartments : Advantages and Disadvantages
5 - For example, a house woman may need to drop her children at school or go for shopping, but every...
Writing Feedbacksanaqvi - Jan 22, 2013 / Callie0202 - Jan 22, 2013
|TOEFL: "I cannot wait back to my job"- social life vs job happiness
Writing Feedbackritared - Jan 22, 2013 / dumi - Jan 22, 2013
|IELTS-Wealthy nations should share wealth among poorer? Yes, but in a feasible manner
3 - This is pretty good, but it is even better if you state your opinion in the introduction itself....
Writing FeedbackBasha101 - Jan 22, 2013 / dumi - Jan 22, 2013
|IELTS - Weather forcats (Graphical presentation)
3 - Your essay is well rounded... I would prefer if you said It is also extremely helpful for drivers when...
Writing Feedbackashrafamin45 - Jan 22, 2013 / New1234 - Jan 22, 2013
|What could be the best job in the world?
5 - I feel these sentences sound a bit out of topic. You should always keep your writing well aligned...
Writing Feedbackhieupm - Jan 21, 2013 / dumi - Jan 22, 2013
|How my dad influenced me; Narrative essay (INSPIRATION)
Writing FeedbacksusiQ - Jan 21, 2013 / jxenge123 - Jan 22, 2013
|Social life rather than job can offer me the true happiness
Writing Feedbackgleam - Dec 28, 2012 / ritared - Jan 22, 2013
|Essay Practice-Should Fast Food Companies be held responsible for obesity in children
2 - .... I wish if you said this idea differnetly; The parents too should be more responsible for...
Writing Feedbackmisscutiepie - Jan 22, 2013 / dumi - Jan 22, 2013
|Can online education replace the role of traditional education ?
2 - methods provide/ method provides This line has a few issues; grammar/ clarity of your idea/ sentence structure :(...
Writing Feedbackmisscutiepie - Jan 22, 2013 / dumi - Jan 22, 2013
|TOEFL : Television distances friends and family from us
Writing Feedbackmuhannadmatahen - Jan 22, 2013 / dumi - Jan 22, 2013
|Different maniacal types in cultures
4 - Well... as per your prompt, your introduction sounds a bit out of topic. This topic is specific to the...
Writing Feedbackaqeel - Jan 20, 2013 / dumi - Jan 22, 2013
|Watching or reading? - People can learn more from watching television
Writing FeedbackAseaDai - Jan 21, 2013 / AseaDai - Jan 22, 2013
|IELTS-should universities accept equal number of both genders ?
Writing Feedbackvietukr - Jan 18, 2013 / vietukr - Jan 22, 2013
|The Sociological Theories of Healthcare
Writing FeedbackSML9385 - Jan 19, 2013 / misscutiepie - Jan 22, 2013
|Is it good for teenagers to work? Yes, it's a Good Idea
Writing Feedbackriyak - Jan 20, 2013 / anant kumar - Jan 22, 2013
|Relationship between congestion/air pollution and increasing number of private cars
2 - Nowadays, many nations are facing massive traffic congestion in their megacities. This both makes travel difficult and causes environmental...
Writing FeedbackMehdi1982 - Jan 21, 2013 / riyak - Jan 21, 2013
|[TOEFL WRITING] Agree/Disagree? People would be happier if they had fewer possessions
Writing Feedbacklingling94 - Jan 20, 2013 / lingling94 - Jan 21, 2013
|IELTS-Is it important to allocate part of school resources for & music education ?
6 - Hai sahar.. Overall good attempt. I like your essay especially, introduction and conclusion. One small correction.. ...
Writing FeedbackAtalla - Jan 20, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 21, 2013
|what job do you want? high salary but have to leave your family or the contrary.
Writing Feedbackhywb2 - Jan 21, 2013 / dumi - Jan 21, 2013
|IELTS-Some think that giving a weekly allowance to children face less problems
5 - Weekly allowances helps children understand how co-ordinate their expenses and this practice would certainly be beneficial for them...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jan 21, 2013 / Pahan - Jan 21, 2013
|( IELTS essay) education can reduce the number of criminals?
13 - Hai Dumi... Thanks for your support and replay. when i took the essay, i planned to start it...
Writing Feedbackjoythblessy - Jan 19, 2013 / joythblessy - Jan 21, 2013
|Science VS Religion - what is best for the people?
14 - you can also include , "Science without religion is lame, religion without science is blind." by Albert Einstein...
Writing FeedbackPahan - Nov 29, 2012 / cheetha - Jan 21, 2013
|IELTS T-2: Write Pros and Cons of crime prevention in society, give your opinion
17 - I've put the question statement before you, what do you suggest... What questions asks for??? How would you...
Writing Feedbacksanaqvi - Jan 16, 2013 / sanaqvi - Jan 21, 2013
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