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ENG 102: Lesson 12: increased screen time and playing video games leads to violent behaviors

2 - Since this is a first person point of view essay, you should restate your thesis statement to...

Research PapersElizabeth812 - Mar 11, 2023Holt - Mar 12, 2023
Having more international sports events (such as the Olympics) is a good way to promote world peace

2 - You have to use first person pronouns in the presentation of your writer's opinion. That is because you...

Writing FeedbackPrisoni - Mar 11, 2023Holt - Mar 12, 2023
Educating children about laws and crimes is more effective than establishing stricter laws

2 - While this is an agree or disagree essay, it is also an extent essay. Therefore, your response...

Writing Feedbackalohabrothers155 - Mar 11, 2023Holt - Mar 12, 2023
Industrial area in Norbiton and how it is planned for development in the future CAMBRIGDE 17 IELTS 1

2 - The essay meets the word count minimum. That is good. What is bad then? The paragraph presentations are not...

Writing Feedbacksundaymay - Mar 10, 2023Holt - Mar 10, 2023
[Task 2] Educate girls and boys in separate schools or mixed school

2 - There is no real argument presented here. Just opposing ideas. It is important not to exaggerate the idea presentations...

Writing FeedbackTania9094 - Mar 10, 2023Holt - Mar 10, 2023
Essay about minority languages

2 - Make sure to not use the task 1 format for the task 2 writing test. The writer's opinion +...

Writing Feedbackksenloom - Mar 9, 2023Holt - Mar 9, 2023
Statement of Purpose for MSc Information and Communication Technology at FAU Erlangen

3 - @Eengineer999 Consider using headings to break up the content - for example, 'Why the University?' 'Why this course?' 'Career...

LettersEengineer999 - Feb 23, 2023nawaf - Mar 9, 2023
Descriptive a holiday celebration

3 - I hope everyone will have a chance to gather with each member of their family to strengthen their family's...

Writing Feedbacktrangdai - Mar 7, 2023trangdai - Mar 9, 2023
[ielts writing 2] Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree or disagr

2 - This is an unnecessary reference point in this presentation. The 2 sentence restatement and writer's opinion that clearly...

Writing Feedbackkydie0812 - Mar 9, 2023Holt - Mar 9, 2023
An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment.

2 - The essay is not doing anything. You are the writer, you are the speaker, it is your opinion being...

Writing Feedbackccts1503 - Mar 8, 2023Holt - Mar 9, 2023
(IELTS Task 2) Should people tie their companionship to only one particular organization or not?

2 - You have a tendency to use mix English words that have contradictorty meanings in your sentences. For example, assertion...

Writing Feedbackhahan - Mar 8, 2023Holt - Mar 9, 2023
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR MSC STRATEGIC MARKETING AND BRAND MANAGEMENT - UNIVERSITY OF HERTFORDSHIRE

4 - @TrangSilver29 My first thoughts on your essay was the word limits. Check and be sure of your limitations. Keep...

GraduateTrangSilver29 - Feb 27, 2023nawaf - Mar 8, 2023
[Ielts task 2] Sugary drinks should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar

2 - Why are you not offering a personal opinion as indicated by the original prompt. For comparison purposes, you were...

Writing Feedbackjason808 - Mar 8, 2023Holt - Mar 8, 2023
The reason for cosmetic surgery increasing and your view about its effect.

2 - While your discussion is somewhat related to the original prompt, it is mostly off topic in terms of discussion...

Writing FeedbackTruc Vien - Mar 8, 2023Holt - Mar 8, 2023
Group work and human resources

2 - Note that the essay prompt refers to you, in the singular in reference to the writing topic. The provided...

ScholarshipKazu01 - Mar 7, 2023Holt - Mar 8, 2023
Physical therapy and kinesiology - QUESTBRIDGE PREP SCHOLAR Q!

2 - Okay, you cannot use an exposure when you were 7 years for this prompt. What you provided is neither...

Undergraduatecelbel - Mar 7, 2023Holt - Mar 8, 2023
IELTS 2 - The unintended consequences of social media for young people and their relationships

3 - @Holt Thank you so much!...

Writing FeedbackNamta - Mar 6, 2023Namta - Mar 7, 2023
Artisanal and small-scale mining (ASM) - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

2 - You sound like you are just repeating the course description and syllabus from the university websites. You spent more...

Scholarshipnawaf - Mar 6, 2023Holt - Mar 7, 2023
The most effective method to educate children to cooperate is playing team sports at school

2 - The main issues that the discussion has directly relates to the lack of proper word usage and English writing...

Writing Feedbackpilards - Mar 6, 2023Holt - Mar 7, 2023
Is taking part in team sports the best way to educate children about cooperation in life?

2 - The essay is only 229 words. It is far too short of the required 250 minimum words. Ordinarily, this...

Writing Feedbackhailey 13 - Mar 6, 2023Holt - Mar 7, 2023
Swimming - Questbridge College Prep Scholars Program

4 - @gulfbreeze123 Hi! I'm currently doing the same application and I think for this question focus especially on the numbers,...

Scholarshipgulfbreeze123 - Mar 5, 2023celbel - Mar 7, 2023
There are contradictory opinions about hosting athletics events in a country

3 - @Holt Thank you...

Writing Feedbacknguyet299 - Mar 5, 2023nguyet299 - Mar 6, 2023
Heated debate as to whether increasing the price of petrol can address environmental problems

2 - Considering that only one point of view was presented in the original prompt, and there is no opposing...

Writing FeedbackKhanhlinh128 - Mar 5, 2023Holt - Mar 6, 2023
(Ielts Wrting Task 1) The rate of male and female candidates who passed the driving test

2 - The summary overview is confusing to read. There is too much information in a single sentence that creates confusion...

Writing Feedbackkiseki - Mar 5, 2023Holt - Mar 5, 2023
IS HISTORY MORE CRUCIAL THAN SCIENTIFIC SUBJECT?

2 - You have done an acceptable job when it comes to the prompt restatement. It shows the 2 sides of...

Writing Feedbackntcuwl - Mar 5, 2023Holt - Mar 5, 2023
Some people say government should give health care the first priorities, some others believe there a

4 - Your essay needs to make clear your opinion instead of just one sentence in the conclusion...

Writing Feedbacklanaaaaaa - Mar 3, 2023kiseki - Mar 5, 2023
Essay about public museums and art galleries will no longer be necessary because computer

3 - thanks, I am having the same topic as you but I don't know how to express my idea. Your...

Writing Feedbackedmi8band - Mar 3, 2023kiseki - Mar 5, 2023
Essay about working from home - a new trend these days

3 - So if I write it again, where will I put my new essays, in this comment? Yes, but you...

Writing Feedbackkiseki - Mar 3, 2023kiseki - Mar 5, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Socializing online or meeting one another in person?

2 - As far as the prompt restatement is considered, it is not a very good representation of the original topic....

Writing Feedbacknjmpjs - Mar 3, 2023Holt - Mar 4, 2023
As children grow, they change their social behaviour.

2 - There is a slight misrepresentation in your first reasoning paragraph. The incorrect reference to "repulsive nature" disconnects from the...

Writing Feedbackrakeshkukkar013 - Mar 3, 2023Holt - Mar 4, 2023
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