RAY93
Oct 8, 2016
Writing Feedback / People have different views about the decision-making to sentence the crime action nowadays [2]
... to sentence the crimeaction PERPETRATORS nowadays.
.., I believe thatadjudication ADJUDICATORS have to consider (...) an individual crime CRIMINALS when deciding the punishment. OR ... I BELIEVE THAT ON ADJUDICATION PROCESS, THE REASON BEHIND EVERY CRIME SCENES/ACTS SHOULD BE CONSIDERED BEFORE THE PUNISHMENT DECIDED.
OVERALL, GOOD INTRODUCTION
With regards to fixed punishments for every type of crime, there are some advantages of this system. [BY WRITING LIKE THIS, THE QUESTIONS ARE MORE LIKELY TO BE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF FIXED PUNISHMENT. YOU MAY NEED TO A LITTLE BIT CHANGE YOUR SENTENCES SO THAT IT WILL BE ABOUT WHY PEOPLE THINK FIXED PUNISHMENT SHOULD BE ENFORCED]
... time to solve some reportS of criminal cases.
... are able to performing their duties ...
In addition,the THIS system can give early ...
.., so they willbe more consider THINK TWICE to (...) which breakS the rules.
... inappropriate action are caused BY urgent conditions such as ...
... poor old womanbe arrested and be convicted for 10 months imprisonment due to steal FOR STEALING three sweet potatoes which growth (...) to feeding her grandchild who have ...
Finally THUS, law worker still need (..) before sentences the criminal suspects.
.., a judgehave HAS to consider the motivation when deciding IN ORDER TO IMPOSE a proper punishment.
... equal is not always MEANT fair, it is important (...) for all CIRCUMSTANCES
OVERALL, i find your writing is well-structured with sentences that easy to understand. Good luck
... to sentence the crime
.., I believe that
OVERALL, GOOD INTRODUCTION
With regards to fixed punishments for every type of crime, there are some advantages of this system. [BY WRITING LIKE THIS, THE QUESTIONS ARE MORE LIKELY TO BE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF FIXED PUNISHMENT. YOU MAY NEED TO A LITTLE BIT CHANGE YOUR SENTENCES SO THAT IT WILL BE ABOUT WHY PEOPLE THINK FIXED PUNISHMENT SHOULD BE ENFORCED]
... time to solve some reportS of criminal cases.
... are able to perform
In addition,
.., so they will
... inappropriate action are caused BY urgent conditions such as ...
... poor old woman
.., a judge
... equal is not always MEANT fair, it is important (...) for all CIRCUMSTANCES
OVERALL, i find your writing is well-structured with sentences that easy to understand. Good luck