Writing Feedback / The percentages of Bulgarian people who wished to live abroad [5]

Level of education of Bulgarian planning to leave Bulgaria (Task 1)

The given bar chart gives the information about the percentages of Bulgarian people who wished to live abroad through three different education stages over six years. It is clearly seen that mostly secondary education wanted to live in other countries, and the least on the level of higher education.

In 2002, secondary education reached 65 % of people who obsessed in studying abroad in Bulgarian. The next four years, it looked decrease 4 % than its percentages before then became 59 percent at the end of 2008. Although this second education level decline gradually, it remain the highest level of education of Bulgarian people intended to stay abroad.

On the other hand, higher education and primary and lower education were the lower percentage of condition Bulgarian people wanted to live outside Bulgaria. 17 % of Bulgarian people in higher education tended to love to other countries in 2002. Unfortunately, it decline significantly to 9 % in 2009. Primary and lower education showed only 18 % of Bulgarian planned to leave Bulgaria, however it rocketed into 32% at the end of 2008.

Writing Feedback / Some people believe that healthy life implementation is easy to be started [2]

WRITING TASK 2
Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.

Discuss both those views and give your own opinion.

Maintaining health for everybody has been realized as paramount important thing to be applied, even now it has done by some people, and the other people still think that healthy lifestyle is not that easy to be implemented. There are arguments on both sides of this issue and I will discuss them now.

Some people believe that healthy life implementation is easy to be started. It depends on people intention in changing it into habitual. Controlling daily intake, keeping fit by taking an exercise everyday are easy things if it had been a kind of habit. Even though they may face some difficulties at the beginning they intent to start it, due to their big ambition in applying active lifestyle, they will enjoy it. People who doing healthy diet believes that by having healthy life many advantages that they get, such as prevent obesity, food addictive, and food poisoning.

Conversely, those who think that in this globalization era, so hard to have a healthy life. It refers to some factors, such as many kinds of fast food are available everywhere. It makes them prefer to consume substantial meal because of the rush hours they have, hence no time to waste think about food. Additional factor is people's difficulties to find the right time to take an excise. It encourages them to have unhealthy and sedentary lifestyle which is bad for their physical and psychological condition in the years of come.

Overall, I feel that there is no undoubtedly reason states that healthy lifestyle is not important. Each person has their own way to enjoy healthy lifestyle. Things we need to do are be patient of what we had decided and enjoy the process step by step until it becomes a beneficial habit.

Writing Feedback / Dating with schizophrenia - an experience about living with this condition [2]

This summary is extracted from an article published on the New york time, on June 2015. The original title is " Dating with schizophrenia".

Michael Hedrick shared his experience about living with woman who suffer schizophrenia. Hedrick is a writer in Boulder, Colo. His love story began through the soul mate website called match.com. He made a long conversation with the girl he finally loved after they meet. Actually Hedrick is a kind of man who is easily to fall in love. Although this memorable relationship should be ended due to the fact that Hedrick was paranoid of being insulted by other people. He states that the biggest difficulty living with schizophrenia is a rather crazy feeling that comes from his paranoia, moreover when he also gets too much pressure about his job, it supports him feel more stressful. Now, Hedrick prefer to be 'mantra', a kind of person who do not chase any girl but just stay cool to impress the right girl.

Writing Feedback / The percentages of two different surveys outcome about the essential communication skills [2]

The presented table provides the percentages of two different surveys outcome about the essential communication skills in internal and external area over 9 years. As it can be seen that mostly all the communication aspects was slightly increased, only selling a product or service went down than all the items of communication skills.

Knowledge and particular products or services was the highest enhancement in external communication. Followed by dealing with people that rose 5 % from its result before. Advising or caring for customers or clients showed its percentage in 1997 was 36 percent and by 2006 it had peaked into 39 %. 24 percent was displayed in 1997 by selling a product or service, although by 2006 it had gone down 3 % and made its position was the lowest improvement in external communication skill.

Internal communication which consisted of six items showed a dramatic enhancement from 1997 to 2006. Listening carefully to peers rocketed to 47 % in 2006. Next, analyzing problems together with others was 26 %, instructing or training people was 30 % and persuading or influencing others was 21 percent in 2006. Continued by making speeches and presentations rose 4 % than in 1997 and planning the activities of others was the lowest item with 1 % improvement that had showed by the end of 2006.

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Writing Feedback / Summary_article 'recommended anti-aging' [4]

This summary is extracted from an article published by cosmopolitan.com, on September 2016. The original title is "Would You Spend Rp495 ribu To Look 15 Years Younger? This Shocking New Wrinkle Remover Does Exactly That - Botox Doctors Are Outraged By Her Breakthrough!".

Many anti-aging treatments had been tried by a billion women in the world. They had spent much time and much money to be looked younger in their ages. Many products from many brands just sounded the same result from the reviewer and it made some other women thought that it just a kind of impossible thing to be true. In fact, it was not like that, a story came from Lauren di Flores, a 71 years old grandmother form Bandung, Indonesia. She gave a review about the most tiring period she felt to erase the wrinkles and fine lines on her face and the product that she used was ridiculously expensive. Until the day she found Bellavei, a kind of anti-aging product which the price can be reached by many women, furthermore it gave the amazing and undoubtedly results in 14 days. In addition, Bellavei gave her 100 % guarantee and will return her money if the treatment did not work, Lauren said.

Writing Feedback / Electronic media has changed the way people relate one another [3]

WRITING TASK II
The use of electronic media has a negative effect on personal relationship between people.
To what extent do you agree / disagree ?
Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge of experience.

Electronic media had influenced people's daily life in doing many things. Nowdays, media of electronic such as facebook, instagram, messenger, and twitter had changed the way people do communication and it is the bad thing for some people. However, I convince that communication through electronic media will not give any unbeneficial effects on personal relationship between people.

The significant improvement of utilizing electronic media gives a sense of worry for some people. They believe that since social media boomed some years ago, people preferred rely on their smartphone or other electronic devices to connect with other people. In other cases, a group of people that hang out together but still hold their mobile phone will focus on their cyber world than real world that clearly seen in front of their eyes. Talking or texting through electronic media are looked more modern than talking face to face. In addition, the other bad effect of electronic media is forgetting responsibility, to illustrate, an employee who has to finish his job in time, but because he enjoys his life on social media too much, it makes his leader disappointed.

On the other hand, the growing of internet that supports the better quality in using electronic media becomes a positive side that should be thankful by some people. Communicate through media of electronic makes people easier to be connected one another. The cost is the first reason people like to use social media, it is affordable that they need to spend much more money to meet. It can be a way to use the time more effective.

The power of social media also can be the solution for the users who life far away from the other users. They can be connected by skype or line and doing life chat, hence the feeling is like meet the person directly with the family or friend they talk to. Additionally, people can keep in touch regularly by many kinds of features in their smartphone such as sharing picture, video, and voice note. The opponents believe that bad effect of social media can occur if the users misuse the function of electronic media. Electronic media will be so much helpful if we use it in the right way and the right time. It depends on the particular person itself.

To sum up, social media is medium that helps us to connect with other people. By becoming a wise user, we can prevent and decreas the negative effects made by misleading of the using of electronic media.

Writing Feedback / The benefits and drawbacks pertaining to experience a workplace before continuing study [4]

WRITING TASK II

Some suggest that young people should take a jo for few years between school and university.
Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might for people who do this.
Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge of experience.

It is become apparent in recent years that many people recommend the teenagers to have a job before they enter in university. This essay aims to elaborate the benefits and drawbacks pertaining to experience the workplace before continuing study in the college.

Young people who decide to work before come in university because they want to stand alone. The revenue that they got in their job can lighten their parent's financial to pay the university fund. The other advantage is improving skills, students will be independence and assertiveness, it supports them to learn about time management. In addition, skills that they have will lead them to get a better career in the years of come.

On the other hand, teenagers should focus on studying in their age. Taking a part in a particular job, whether in voluntary or business that interests them will make them feel the comfort zone, a personal satisfaction of getting financial support, hence to make them not to continue their study anymore. The next downside is different sense of study. A student who keeps studying after senior high school to university is used to with the condition and situation of campus than a student who had postponed their education for a few years to work, they will need time to restart the feeling of being student. In addition, student who had felt a greater career before become a collegian enable them to think that education is not a priority anymore.

In conclusion, teenager will be much better to continue their education in university than find a job. Due to the fact that they need the same sense of studying and avoid personal satisfaction if they had had a job before. Hence, make them believe that education is always number one.

Writing Feedback / The comparison of relations between workers and their supervisor, and workers among their colleagues [3]

Relationship in workplace (Writing task II)

The presented pie charts give information about the comparison of relationship between workers and their supervisor, and workers among their colleagues from 2005 to 2009. It is clarly seen that the most of the employees feel the exellent relationship with their co-workers than their career leader over four years.

Between 2005 and 2009, employees who stated had a very good relation with their fellow workers increased from 63% to 70 %. Good relationship that was felt by them decresed 3 % from it's percentage in 2005. Next, fair connection showed 7 % in 2005, but it declined to 3 % in 2009. The workers who had no colleagues rose 1 % and who associated poorly with their work partners was not found in 2009.

On the other hand, the relation between workers and their supervisor showed an absolutely great relation was 61 % in 2005 and it had risen 4 % by 2009. Good relation that was experienced by only 26 % of employees in 2005, and it dipped to 22 % in 2009. Then, fair connection with the executive had decreased 2 % by the end of 2009, and poor relationship was remain unchanged. The last, the workers who did not have supervisor jumped from 1 % to 4 % over four years.

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Writing Feedback / "Mentor is not always those one who still alive" - TED Summary by Tai Lopez (The law of 33%) [2]

TED Summary by Tai Lopez (The law of 33%)

Tai Lopez told us on his TED show about how important our life is and gave us the law of 33 %.
Make our life more useful by servicing people; all we have to do is socialize with other people. Associate with 33 % of people who were younger than us, hence we can mentor them about the things that we know. Next 33 % with our peers, the same age with us, thus we can share about anything. The last but not least was 33% with elderly people or people older than us.

It is all about getting the master to mentor us. If we want to know how to have a million dollar company, we need to find someone who had 10 million dollar company to learn with. "Mentor is not always those one who still alive, even if they had passed away, they still can mentor you, by guiding you through their biography, all of them are in my library" said Tai.

Reading book is something that people ignore since it makes them boring. Tai suggests treating our books like friends.

I would like to write down Tai's statement that really amazed me. "If we want a good life, we need to follow the rules, be humble, persevere, read more, and tough enough to get a good life".

Surely it would be that hard, but 'hard' will make it 'great'

Writing Feedback / 10 things we need to apply in the way we talk to other people without feeling bored [2]

Ten ways to have a better conversation by Calste Headlee (TEDsummary)

What the amazing performance by Caleste Headlee, a girl who taught us 10 things we need to apply in the way we talking to other people without feeling bored and wasting our time, even if those people are the one we do not like and attract us.

Let me point them up :
1. Be focus. When we talk to other people, do not playing your smartphone or everything else that will disturb your concentration.
2. Do not talk too much about yourself. The big reason is, you talk to someone else to learn something from them since everybody is master of different field.

3. Begin with 5W+1H question. It is to make the gradual conversation.
4. Let it flow. We just need to talk all the things that come out your brain.
5. Be honest. When you talk to someone, then you do not know something, say it truly that you do not know.
6. Do not talk the experience that makes you focus on talking all about you.
7. Try not to repeat yourself as it will make people you talk is getting bored.
8. Forget the details about you because do not care about the details of you such as when were you born, when was the last time you got a present, or something else.

9. This is the most important one that many people always ignore it, listen. The problem that people never realize is, they listen to reply not to understand.

10. Be brief and be interesting.

Through her presentation, she told us to go out and find someone to be talked with as talking is not that hard.

Writing Feedback / Article review _ Are crocodiles warm or cuddly mothers? [2]

This article was written by Nina Strochlic. Based on the report and photograph of Nicolas Mathevon, a biologist and crocodilians, who explained how the mother crocodiles treated their newborns.

Mathevon said that actually the hard-hearted animals were the loving mothers. Crocodile is one that can illustrate this situation. In fact, among the baby crocodiles that is still in the eggs have the particular signals that they send to their mother when they are ready to crack the eggs. Mathevon then played the recording of the particular signal that he had saved before. He played it around the mom crocodile, and it made the mom directly back to its nest and dig out the sand where it put the eggs. Then, when the recording played around the eggs, the baby thought that it was a signal from its siblings to hatch.

By the time baby crocodiles grow, the mother that was full of affection turn to be fraught because of offspring's call.

Writing Feedback / Writing Task II , Relocating giant industries to regional area [2]

In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

The giant cooperation is getting larger in the city cent re. One of the solutions given by the authority is to relocate their buildings outside the downtown. While this policy would cause several demerits in relocation point, I do believe that moving the industries to rural area has many advantages than disadvantages.

Pollution is one of the drawbacks when some industries move to remote area. Innumerable vehicles surely will pass outside the city and the high risk of cars and motorcycles pollution makes the quality of fresh air is hard to be found. The increase of population is another demerit of this issue, and the gradual problem will be the increase of crime rate in rural area same as happened in metropolis. Finally pollution and population will be the possible effects if relocation of business and industries dislocated outside the downtown.

Despite this, there are several advantages of moving the giant corporations to remote area. One of the prominent/major benefits is the infrastructure will be developed in regional area such as public transportation and gas station. In addition, displacing big industries to backwater will add many job opportunities for the inhabitants. To illustrate, the local dwellers can apply for a job in the particular organisation that had moved to their place, or even they can make their own job field such as building restaurants and mini markets. Moreover, by taking policy to dislocate industries outside the city centre by the government will ease unbalanced population between the downtown and remote area.

All in all, I do believe that the policy maker should displace such a giant industries to regional zones which it can enhance the living standard of the rural inhabitants and increase the economical earnings of those areas.

Writing Feedback / Games can harm children concentration in studying, but also help them improve their cognitive skills [2]

Some people think that online computer game is useful for children, while others claim is bad. What are advantages and disadvantages of online computer game for children?

The number of children playing games through internet has increased slightly over the years. While such games can wander children concentration in studying, this also helps students improve their cognitive skills.

Playing games causes the children spend much of their time in front of the computer or smartphone and as the result they neglect their homework. Children or even teenager who addict in playing online games will ignore their subject which should be their top priority. It can be noticed that children spend at least two hour in finishing their games which actually they can spend those time to review their materials. In addition, playing games can be such a bad role model for them. Many games contented with bad actions like destroying and fighting, hence it is worried children can imitate it in their daily life.

On the other hand, games also can be an alternative to train children brain. Due to the reason that games are full of strategies to be finished. Playing games can enhance the working of children's brain and teach them to be more creative through problem solving case. Besides, games are the fun way for children to learn foreign language. Most of online games using international language thus force them to understand the language indirectly. Additionally, games influences the way children understand about the enhancement of technology which they do not get in the school.

To recapitulate, online games make the children do not focus totally on their study and imitate the action showed on the games. However, playing games can give a great deal in brain development language acquisition of children.

Writing Feedback / Writing Task II, Contributing factors of working in the same company [2]

Do you agree that money is the only motivation at work why people prefer working in the same company for many years?

It is often said that salary of the particular company is one of contributing factors making the workers work in the same organisation. In my point of view, there are many other reasons for this trend, such as a comfortable feeling with the colleagues and executive, and the rule applied applied in that company.

It is often accepted that being convenient with the co-workers and the boos is is one of main reasons the employees are loyal to work in the same place more than a decade. Working together with their partners helps them to reach their job prospect well. For instance, people who enjoy working in their workplace encourage them to reduce the great pressure on their work even though they face the huge problem. The present of loyal friends and understanding executive in the organisation is the virtual factor to create loyalty of the employees.

Rules that are applied in the company are the other aspect that helps the jobholders find their soul to work in the same company. Many kinds of flexible law make the interested in their job, such as retirement funds and the free time or holiday. To illustrate, the organisation who gives their workers the constant holiday can be the way for the employees to spend more time with their family. The given clear regulations by the companies are the great motivation to make the workers comfortable with them.

In conclusion, financial reward is not the only part to motivate the employee to be loyal. Humble executives, enjoyable work fellows, and the unburden laws are possible to be the other aspect encourages the people keep working in the same enterprise more than a decade.

Writing Feedback / Children are better to spend their golden age by seeking knowledge and not earning money [2]

In many countries, children are engaged in some kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it as a valuable work experience.

children taking a paid work are in the increasing rate in many countries. some people believe that it will be useful for their life in the years of come, whereas other people say that it should not be allowed. while a valuable experience will be obtained by the pupils, i am more likely to emphasize that children is much better to spend their golden age by seeking knowledge as earn money should not be their responsibility.

It is often said that children working while they are studying would gain much more experiences. this is because they are involved with various activities which are highly beneficial for their future life. They have known how to find the solution of their expenditure because they had been a part of it. Besides, children doing a paid job will meet new people who had much worth experience where children can learn from them. In addition, children will gain other precious learning about life such as create the sensitiveness of their surrounding since they know that money is not that easy to be earned, hence it makes them more appreciate for every single things of their life. The under age children will be so influenced by their paid job experience in the years of come.

On the other hand, some people believe that in children age, they should not do any kinds of job as their parents are the one who should earn money for them. In addition, children age should be the stage for them to socialize with their peers by going to school or playing games. Children who working even for part time surely will not focus on their study due to the reason their mind should think about their job which had become their other priority. Child development should be used for seeking knowledge for them to be more preparing about their future as an educated people.

It seems to me that having a job for children is totally unacceptable. Working is not suitable for their age since the working risk will affect their health. In addition, children's mentality should not be forced to think hard , thus resulting in stress suffered by them. Therefore, it is true that children should be encouraged to study solely.

Writing Feedback / TED Summary, Draw your future by Patty Dobrowolski [2]

DRAW YOUR FUTURE

BY PATTY DOBROWOLSKI

Drawing your future is one way show that you take control of your life. By illustrating your own future life will create movement, pull it your hearts, and unite nation. All you need to do is drawing; even you do not know how to draw well. Draw your life now and your life will be then put on the colours and emotions to make you feel that it will be real someday. Everyday when you wake up, you see your picture and you feel hypnotize to do something better, it trains your brain to believe it. As we know that left brain thinks about critics and right brain thinks about imagination, thus you need to see your picture of your currently condition and sent the critics to your left brain hence your right brain attract to imagine something to be more creative. Your brain knows you perfectly well, but you need to guide it by yourself to be straight with your wish.

Three workable steps that lead your wish to be in reality are look at your picture, then believe it that it is surely will happen, and act on it

Writing Feedback / Smokers should find other places to smoke, thus have respect to non-smokers [3]

In some countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that smoking in the public is such a disturbing activity for other people. I firmly agree that smokers should find other places to smoke since this is a respective behavior and it would reduce the risk of people to suffer smoke-related disease.

The smokers should have the big awareness when they intend to smoke since the smoke of their cigarette upset other people. They get to realize that in the public, everybody has the same right to do what they wish. It is obviously seen in the crowd place, when a smokers start to smoke, other people around them start to stay away or close their nose because of the uncomfortable feeling caused by the smokers. The respective behavior to leave the building for the smokers who will flame their cigarette is really needed to help their surrounding breath freely.

Another reason why the smokers should be banned to smoke in the crowd place as to help inhabitant keep fit without suffering any disease related to the smoke such as lung cancer and asthma. The bad effects of cigarette smoke not only harm the active smokers, but also the passive smokers. In addition, people who already suffer lung cancer or asthma make their disease getting worse when the smokers smoke in the same building with them. The diseases affected by the smoke is one of the worrying effects felt by the citizen, hence the smokers should help to reduce the gradual affect by smoking in the right smoking area.

In conclusion, I am completely support in letting the smokers find another place to smoke since it is surely a kind of respective manners towards passive smokers and a risk to suffer smoke related disease will be decreased.