IvanMS027
Nov 7, 2016
Writing Feedback / THE CEMENT MAKING-PROCESS AND HOW TO USE IT as the component of buildings [5]
Hi. Here are my suggestions for you:
First of all, don't forget to upload the data/graph.
... limestone and clay as the raw materials are crushed by a crusher ...--> (the powder is the result of the crushing process)
The last process thatis grinded the raw materials is grindedthenuntil be formed the cement powder are formed before the packaged packaging (when you are talking about process, use the V-ing rather than past participle) process.
try to find the similar meaning of percentage. for example you can write "50 percent" as "a half"
Goodluck and Keep Spirited.
Hi. Here are my suggestions for you:
First of all, don't forget to upload the data/graph.
... limestone and clay as the raw materials are crushed by a crusher ...--> (the powder is the result of the crushing process)
The last process that
gravels as the most component maybe 50% ...
try to find the similar meaning of percentage. for example you can write "50 percent" as "a half"
Goodluck and Keep Spirited.