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Effects of science on the food we eat

2 - This is not an academic sounding phrase. Since the writer is practicing to write academic papers, informal English...

Writing FeedbackManaro - Jun 17, 2022Holt - Jun 17, 2022
Vietnamese eating habits from the past and now

2 - It is incorrect to use 2 successive punctuation marks. One cannot use a comma and ellipses successively, or any...

Writing FeedbackManaro - Jun 17, 2022Holt - Jun 17, 2022
Too much money has been used in conserving wild animals - IELTS test

2 - Do not overemphasize the opinion presentation unless asked to do so in an extent essay. Always ensure that the...

Writing Feedbacklilxlys022007 - Jun 17, 2022Holt - Jun 17, 2022
Students should know the science of food? IELTS TASK 2 - Discuss opinion

2 - This is nota true or false discussion. There is no need to claim that one point of view is...

Writing Feedbackkhalepro - Jun 17, 2022Holt - Jun 17, 2022
In this era, while choosing the job, money has inevitably been the most essential component

2 - This essay has several problems that will lead to a failing score. The first of which is the over...

Writing Feedbackyousha64 - Jun 16, 2022Holt - Jun 17, 2022
Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever?

2 - The prompt restatement totally messes the point. When the mention of "rule of law" was committed in the rewording,...

Writing Feedbackdanielsmith - Jun 16, 2022Holt - Jun 17, 2022
Today, there are more men's than women's sports on TV. Why? Should TV give equal time for them all?

2 - Good topic restatement. It shows a good English comprehension skill. I wish that this skill in English thinking was...

Writing Feedbackthinh3110 - Jun 16, 2022Holt - Jun 17, 2022
Some people claim that doing the same things is a way to keep a good habits. Others, however..

2 - The original prompt does not indicate any controversy surrounding the given topic. This is an unwarranted exageration that altered...

Writing Feedbackphamminhchau - Jun 16, 2022Holt - Jun 17, 2022
Living in a horizontal city is probably the best option, but others tend to live in a vertical city

2 - Give a clear reason why you support the latter opinion in your personal point of view statement. By adding...

Writing Feedbackthanhtu - Jun 16, 2022Holt - Jun 16, 2022
A reflection essay about crowds effect

2 - This is actually a paper about group social behavior rather than crowd behavior. The title of the paper maybe...

Writing Feedbackteamatcha - Jun 15, 2022Holt - Jun 15, 2022
Glass recycling - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - PROCESS

3 - This introduction is way to short for me. Try to paraphrase the topic. The process is quite confusing....

Writing Feedbackpth_12345 - Jun 15, 2022ridzkiekky - Jun 22, 2022
People going to cinemas - Writing task 1: Bar chart

3 - Looking at the graph in more details, as far as Monday, Saturday and Sunday were concerned, they born resemblance...

Writing FeedbackTran Phuong Thuy - Jun 15, 2022ridzkiekky - Jun 22, 2022
Foods shipping from afar - IELTS score

2 - The opening sentence presents an opposite meaning from what the writer actually meant. The sentence indicates that the country...

Writing FeedbackDavid Tran - Jun 15, 2022Holt - Jun 15, 2022
Describe which single activity/interest represents your most meaningful commitment and why

2 - The first sentence is unnecessary. Introductions are not necessary when writing a character count sensitive response. Just mention the...

Scholarshipjenny7 - Jun 15, 2022Holt - Jun 15, 2022
The ancient outlooks IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 2

2 - There are 2 opposing points of view in the original prompt that refer to specific groups. These groups must...

Writing Feedbacksandranguyenanh0 - Jun 15, 2022Holt - Jun 15, 2022
Contributions to both countries after scholarship?

2 - Where is the focus on how you will contribute to the relationship of Mynmar and Japan? The focus is...

Scholarshipeimyat - Jun 14, 2022Holt - Jun 14, 2022
Technology has made man dumb

4 - @Holt I think there is some misunderstanding here, this is not an IELTS essay! It is an ACCUPLACER essay...

Writing Feedbackanmolwrites - Jun 14, 2022anmolwrites - Jun 15, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Framed pictures and photo sharing websites

2 - Do not focus on over-explaining the reasoning paragraphs. Remember that the 40 minute task only allows foI the following...

Writing Feedbacknhmt - Jun 14, 2022Holt - Jun 14, 2022
WT 1: (Pie Charts): Enrollment in different fields of study at a particular universities in 2021

4 - 1. The year is in the past so you need to put the grammar all in past tense ex....

Writing Feedbackgiangngoc - Jun 14, 2022beckaa - Jun 23, 2022
Writing Task 2 - Problem and Solution - Young people live in major cities.

2 - This is an essay was written without the benefit of time constraints. Had the writer practiced with a timer...

Writing Feedbackquynhtotrd - Jun 14, 2022Holt - Jun 14, 2022
Some people think we should have one job, but others think we should do more than one job.

2 - The writer needs to provide a more detailed prompt restatement and personal opinion presentation. This first paragraph does not...

Writing FeedbackTopmo - Jun 14, 2022Holt - Jun 14, 2022
Damage due to Hurricane Katrina

2 - Word capitalization rules were not followed in the writing of this statement. A capital letter cannot follow a comma...

Writing FeedbackBHUMIK_DEV - Jun 13, 2022Holt - Jun 13, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Pie charts - transportation to travel to a university

3 - not a professional but you can improve by using advannced phrase: upward/ downward trend,... balenced 2 pas...

Writing Feedbackieltslover_1 - Jun 13, 2022johnny sins - Jun 13, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 The amount of money spent by british parents on their children's sports

2 - The summary overview is quite confusing to the reader. It fails to clearly state the number of line graphs...

Writing Feedbackahmadsalim - Jun 13, 2022Holt - Jun 13, 2022
It is said that punishment is essential to discipline children at an early age

2 - The writer does not offer a related topic paraphrasing nor a relevant extent response in the first paragraph. It...

Writing Feedbacknajaeminamerican - Jun 12, 2022Holt - Jun 12, 2022
Report on services provided by health centers

2 - Where is the list of services for comparison in the summary? The reader has no idea what you begin...

Writing FeedbackAxis0019 - Jun 12, 2022Holt - Jun 13, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - paper, wood pulp and sawn good

2 - The summary overview is not off to a good start. It is missing important elements such as the measurement...

Writing Feedbackisls_1 - Jun 12, 2022Holt - Jun 12, 2022
Japan. Trigger for having interest in this country?

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your advice. The scholarship asked me to write three essays and the next...

Scholarshipeimyat - Jun 12, 2022eimyat - Jun 13, 2022
"Path of Fire"- Common App Personal Essay Prompt

2 - There are several common apps available. Each with a specific character driven response focus. The questions are meant to...

UndergraduateZerox - Jun 12, 2022Holt - Jun 12, 2022
Use animals as food - Writing task 2 - opinion essay. for your time.

4 - @Axis0019 thanks you so much <3...

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