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Essay about should creative artists have their freedom for whatever they do?

2 - The prompt restatement iss acceptable. However, the extent Uspouse clarity was affected by the improper sentence structure: ...

Writing FeedbackJena Tran - Jun 22, 2021Holt - Jun 24, 2021
Governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views, give your opinion.

2 - The prompt restatement is lacking in opinion presentation. Both public opinions must be interpreted for the presentation prior to...

Writing Feedbackarlenne - Jun 22, 2021Holt - Jun 24, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Homework should be given by teachers?

3 - @Bot It's frequently It is thought that homework ..., however, there're they are proponents who ... In my...

Writing FeedbackBot - Jun 22, 2021HelenN - Jun 25, 2021
The diagram presents six stages in the life cycle of the honey bee (the diagram is on the internet)

2 - The presentation does not meet the minimum word count of 150 words. This immediately disqualifies the writing from a...

Writing FeedbackHoHoang - Jun 22, 2021Holt - Jun 24, 2021
[IELTS Writing task 2] Building houses in existing cities, or to develop new towns in rural areas?

2 - The prompt restatement and response is on target. There is a clear understanding of the topic and the reasoning,...

Writing Feedbackthuytien700 - Jun 22, 2021Holt - Jun 24, 2021
Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar

2 - The prompt does not require an emotional response because it is not an extent essay (To what extent...) Use...

Writing Feedbackanachan143 - Jun 22, 2021Holt - Jun 24, 2021
IELTS Task 1: The maps below show a coal mine and its redevelopment into a visitor attraction site.

2 - The essay is over-written at 226 words. It cannot be completed properly within 20 minutes. The writer will cut...

Writing FeedbackHelenN - Jun 21, 2021Holt - Jun 22, 2021
The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses.

2 - The topic restatement does not use enough alternative word references to be considered an accurate rewrite. It can still...

Writing Feedbackduongbonbon12 - Jun 21, 2021Holt - Jun 22, 2021
Films Production, Digital Technology

2 - This is a single opinion essay. The writing requirement is that off a single choice response due to the...

Writing FeedbackVuongHoaiThanh - Jun 21, 2021Holt - Jun 22, 2021
IELTS task 2: ADVERTISING AND ADOLESCENTS (both views and opinion)

NEW - persuading children to buy things Some advertisers have increased the amount of money they spend trying to persuade...

Writing FeedbackPaul16 - Jun 21, 2021 -
Writing task 1: the percentage of male and female teachers in 6 types of educational setting (2010)

2 - In the summary, there is a mention of etypes but without proper listing of the 6 in relation to...

Writing Feedbacknoname268 - Jun 21, 2021Holt - Jun 22, 2021
Universal Background Checks

2 - I am not sure if it will be acceptable to you professor to have you writing this paper from...

Research Papersmhallums02 - Jun 21, 2021Holt - Jun 22, 2021
To solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners and invest in public transport

2 - The prompt does not require a true or false response from the writer. Therefore, a statement of validity is...

Writing Feedbackabcdefg123 - Jun 21, 2021Holt - Jun 22, 2021
Why is studying at traditional schools better than studying at home by using technology?

2 - The essay kicks off with a deducted TA score due to insufficient word count at 239 / 250 words...

Writing Feedbackmai091206 - Jun 20, 2021Holt - Jun 21, 2021
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] IS GLOBALIZATION A MAJOR PROBLEM THESE DAYS?

3 - @nicole I think I see your writing before. Instead of using proverb, you can simply write a general...

Writing Feedbacknicole_jp - Jun 20, 2021HelenN - Jun 25, 2021
Study Plan for GKS-G Scholarship - Study Plan - Computer Science Undergraduate

3 - @Holt Thank you Very much for your opinion...

Scholarshipjunhao820 - Jun 20, 2021junhao820 - Jun 20, 2021
What sorts of food do you like eating most

2 - Try to consolidate your background description in relation to the topic. Prompts like there have to be written insteps....

Writing FeedbackTTFameTT1 - Jun 20, 2021Holt - Jun 20, 2021
Task 2: Some people think that sports play an important role in the development of society

3 - Hi @Daisy23 There is an argument I think you can use present perfect here, it is not an...

Writing FeedbackDaisy23 - Jun 19, 2021HelenN - Jun 21, 2021
Whether taking part in a team sport is preferable is still an argumentative issue

2 - She prompt restatement is selective and incomplete. A proper paraphase covers a representation of both topics presented, inclusive of...

Writing Feedbackkimchi220800 - Jun 19, 2021Holt - Jun 20, 2021
Plan a problem and solution essay for the issue that you chose, explaining what should be done about

2 - When the prompt was created, the writer neglected to create an introductory or preliminary paragraph that focused on deforestation....

Writing FeedbackVander - Jun 19, 2021Holt - Jun 20, 2021
A claim that people should find an approach to live with global warming instead of preventing it

2 - There is no need to say" However" before presenting the disagreement. It does not fit the sentence structure. Since...

Writing Feedbackmimimeo - Jun 19, 2021Holt - Jun 20, 2021
Complaint letter_complaint about service of online shop

2 - The letter clearly follows the prompt requirements with regards to content. The sentiment is clear and offers clear demandsto...

LettersBellis - Jun 19, 2021Holt - Jun 20, 2021
IELTS TASK 2: Individuals have changed their way in interaction

3 - As Holt had mentioned, affect (V) and effect (N) are different and misusing the correct word harms your clarity....

Writing FeedbackDoris1712 - Jun 19, 2021Paul16 - Jun 21, 2021
People believe that the government should make college free. AGREE OR DISAGREE?

2 - There are 2 schools of thought provided for this prompt and yetonly one is reflected in the restatement. The...

Writing FeedbackLina nguyen - Jun 18, 2021Holt - Jun 19, 2021
The given diagram illustrates the complex procedures required to produce liquid chocolate

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback...

Writing FeedbackHelenN - Jun 18, 2021HelenN - Jun 19, 2021
1. Some people think that it is better to work for different organisations during the career

2 - Donot turn the discussion intea controversy. That statement is unnecessary as the writer is altering the original statement presentation....

Writing Feedbackmaichi13 - Jun 18, 2021Holt - Jun 19, 2021
Global product and economy - CAMBRIDGE IELTS 10 Test 3 Writing Task 2

3 - @Holt Thank you so so much for your reply. Honestly, this is my first essay at this forum so...

Writing FeedbackMinhnek4 - Jun 18, 2021Minhnek4 - Jun 20, 2021
One thing that makes me happy this week.

2 - This essay is meant to be a deep reflection of your relationship with your sister. If should cover at...

Writing Feedbackeffiechen22 - Jun 18, 2021Holt - Jun 19, 2021
Agriculture and Pest Management - Personal statement for commonwealth scholarship

2 - Save for some researched information, this essay is devoid of any actual content that relates to the given prompts....

ScholarshipNana_Kwabena - Jun 18, 2021Holt - Jun 19, 2021
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] WHETHER COMPUTERS ARE THE MOST SIGNIFICANT INNOVATION...

2 - Let's be clear, a reference to the "last century" means the most recent 100 years (20th century). The reference...

Writing Feedbackphcnguyen - Jun 18, 2021Holt - Jun 19, 2021
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