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IELTS TASK 2 ACADEMIC - TOPIC: EDUCATION; In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary

2 - The first sentence of your prompt restatement is unnecessary. You need to be more focused on presenting the actual...

Writing FeedbackLinh1601 - Aug 14, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Write essay about consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007

2 - Always present a complete summary. Your information is good, but lacking one vital piece of information. You did not...

Writing Feedbackckhanb - Aug 13, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Newspapers, books? Internet offers people satisfying methods to get unlimited access to information

2 - Try to limit the presentation to 300 words. Keep track of how many words you can actually write within...

Writing FeedbackLENGUYENHONGPHUC - Aug 13, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
A topic of interest regarding the money for building the roads rather than new railways

2 - The prompt for this essay asks you to discuss "To what extent do you agree or disagree?" You are...

Writing Feedbackminh23102006 - Aug 13, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Advertising has become an inevitable part of our lives.

2 - You have used an incorrect discussion format in this instance. Since you opted to use the 3 opinion discussion...

Writing Feedbackjason hoang - Aug 11, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Consumers being overwhelmed with commercial advertisements since fierce competition among companies

2 - The promot restatement is acceptable but, the writer's opinion is not. You did not directly respond to the extent...

Writing Feedbackhaonhien15 - Aug 11, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
A controversial topic if governments should invest on railways rather than on roads

2 - The first sentence is unclear in reference. What is people's repair? It is a reference that does not connect...

Writing FeedbackNguyen Tan Hieu - Aug 11, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
IELTS Writing task 1 the number of people eating more than 5 portions of vegetables and fish per day

2 - The first major deductions to this essay will be applied to the GRA score. Please note that you are...

Writing FeedbackThanh John - Aug 10, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Students desire to study other courses beside their majors

2 - The prompt restatement is a bit confusing. If there are only some students claiming something, then why is there...

Writing Feedbackmolisa - Aug 10, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Writing IELTS Task 2: These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries

2 - While I do commend your effort in writing this essay, and you did do a good job in writing...

Writing Feedbackmaiannh - Aug 10, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
The number of magazines sold per person

2 - You should have taken the time to identify how the countries were enumerated in the presentation. That way...

Writing Feedbacktradauvantue - Aug 10, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
The two maps below describe a number of alterations which took place on a small offshore island

2 - You should not be referring to the positioning of the images on the screen. The examiner is assumed...

Writing Feedbacktrytoget7score - Aug 9, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Traffic and accommodation problems increasing, the government encourage some businesses move rural

2 - This is an advantage and disadvantage comparison essay. When writing such an essay, you are not asked to...

Writing FeedbackThuminh - Aug 9, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Skills and knowledge gained from study by an individual aspiring to become a healthcare professional

3 - First of all, my first choice program is the University of ... You will need to reconstruct this...

Scholarshiplingling4 - Aug 9, 2023FrimpsCobby - Aug 22, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - The chart below shows the depth of snow (cm) in a particular ski resort

2 - This is a 20 minute writing task that should be allotted no more than 200 words for the full...

Writing Feedbackserebi2704 - Aug 9, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Some people think that schools should teach/enroll students according to their academic abilities

2 - Do not lose sight of the writing time allowance for the task. Your presentation is hyperfocused on vocabulary, which...

Writing Feedbackvuongthaolinh - Aug 8, 2023Holt - Aug 20, 2023
Some people say that aging population cause problems, others see benefits of it. Discuss both views

3 - @roadto8writing The writing is also a bit too passive. For an argumentative essay, I think you need to present...

Writing Feedbackroadto8writing - Aug 8, 2023kokosi - Aug 17, 2023
Respect for educators and criticism for their teaching methods

3 - @Ta Nhi I think you should talk more specifically about the meaning of "two-way communication". The best method is...

Writing FeedbackTa Nhi - Aug 8, 2023thanhbui64 - Aug 17, 2023
Are advertisement directed children?? (IELTS task 2)

4 - @thaoly2007 Your paraphrasing in the introduction part is good, but there is not your opinion. That is a crucial...

Writing Feedbackthaoly2007 - Aug 8, 2023thanhbui64 - Aug 17, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] The news media should show equal amount of good and bad news

2 - You have failed to justify your opinion in this essay so it will not get a passing score. The...

Writing Feedbackhinam74 - Aug 7, 2023Holt - Aug 16, 2023
[ IELTS WRITING TASK 1] The percentage of people going to the cinema once a month according to ages

2 - You failed to do a complete identification of the image for the summary overview. You need to specify the...

Writing Feedbackhaibinh20 - Aug 7, 2023Holt - Aug 16, 2023
Juveniles should receive the same punishments as the adults. To what extend do you agree or not?

2 - Be careful with your word usage. The wrong word can decrease your LR, GRA, and C+C scores. Rejevenating...

Writing FeedbackMaeve111 - Aug 7, 2023Holt - Aug 16, 2023
Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. Why? Effects on society

2 - This is an empty thesis statement. There is no basis for this discussion presentation. What reasons relate to...

Writing Feedbacktieuthanh - Aug 7, 2023Holt - Aug 16, 2023
WRITING TASK 2: People are spending less time with their families. What are the reasons + effects?

2 - Part of the preliminary scoring process is based on your ability to present summary responses to the given...

Writing FeedbackAdamClaus - Aug 7, 2023Holt - Aug 16, 2023
Young people are required to work without pay in their free time to help the local community

2 - This is a comparison essay that is based on the advantages v. disadvantages of the given topic. The overall...

Writing FeedbackNhun - Aug 6, 2023Holt - Aug 16, 2023
Many museums, historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not by the locals - IELTS WRITING

2 - The writer's opinion could have used a clearer reference to the questions being asked instead of merely repeating the...

Writing Feedbackchauphan224 - Aug 6, 2023Holt - Aug 13, 2023
In the chart the proportion of women employed in the USA, Korea, Afghanistan and France

4 - I love the way you describe the given data in the chart. But the final paragraph you connect the...

Writing FeedbackKbang - Aug 6, 2023selenakieu - Aug 14, 2023
Who do you think should fund medicine and treatments researches: individuals or the government?

2 - It is nice to know how you plan to write the essay. The problem is, you were being...

Writing FeedbackZen - Aug 6, 2023Holt - Aug 13, 2023
Advertising in social media such as Facebook or Youtube

2 - Since you are self studying, Ic an understand why you will tend to write less than the minimum word...

Writing FeedbackNhatnotop - Aug 6, 2023Holt - Aug 13, 2023
The use of social media and effects on individuals' mental health

3 - Your discussion has been well organized and there is also much clarity. However, to thoroughly discuss this, you will...

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