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|My experience that have elicited the most of my personal growth
4 - Akash, if you will just remove the first two sentences of your statement response, you will end up with...
Scholarshipakash54321 - Jan 29, 2017 / Holt - Jan 30, 2017
|Something that people don't necessarily know about me, but that I think they should?
2 - Akash, do me a favor and post the complete common app prompt that you are responding to in this...
Scholarshipakash54321 - Jan 29, 2017 / Holt - Jan 30, 2017
|Studies on disease prevention - MY STUDY PLAN FOR COMMON WEALTH SCHOLARSHIP
4 - Thanks a million. I am working to effect suggested corrections and I will bring it up for further review...
ScholarshipRazy - Jan 28, 2017 / Razy - Jan 29, 2017
|Influencing good behaviour on children is a rising problem
Scholarshipgayan1991 - Jan 29, 2017 / gayan1991 - Jan 29, 2017
|Why should you be considered a good candidate for a given fellowship?
9 - Ahmed, if this is the version that you feel most comfortable using with your application. Then go ahead and...
ScholarshipAhmed_Sanad - Jan 26, 2017 / Holt - Jan 29, 2017
|Electrical engineer, with strong technical background - academic qualifications and study objectives
3 - Ahmed, when you speak of your academic qualifications, just mention the course major that you completed. For example, you...
ScholarshipAhmed_Sanad - Jan 28, 2017 / Holt - Jan 29, 2017
|Short essay for merit based scholarship; your interest in the programme/field of study
2 - Surya, double check your capitalization work in the statement. You more than once failed to capitalize proper nouns /...
Scholarshipsuryadianata38 - Jan 28, 2017 / Holt - Jan 28, 2017
|Being in Oil&Gas taught me a lot. MBA Admission Essay.
2 - Ahmed, most of the information that you placed in this essay is academic in nature. Therefore, these should be...
ScholarshipAhmed_Sanad - Jan 26, 2017 / Holt - Jan 26, 2017
|My Personal Statement for a community foundation scholarship.
3 - Keoni, the way I see it, there are two missing elements in your essay. The first, is the academic...
Scholarshipxkiri - Jan 26, 2017 / Holt - Jan 26, 2017
|A short essay - of about 500 words in English - giving reasons for applying for the OFID scholarship
2 - Palma, it is imperative for your application that you manage to connect the ideals or objectives of OFID with...
Scholarshippao123 - Jan 23, 2017 / Holt - Jan 23, 2017
|Describing a study experience in pursue of Korean scholarship. Statement on Purpose for KGSP
3 - @Holt thanks so much holt.. for you critics and suggestions .. i will revise it again.. and if there...
Scholarshipthericha - Jan 21, 2017 / thericha - Jan 21, 2017
|Why Clark? I am already a Clarkie in my dream.
10 - Khusel, forget the broad prompt instruction and focus instead on delivering the requirements of the 400 word prompt that...
ScholarshipNuverte0452 - Jan 19, 2017 / Holt - Jan 19, 2017
|Essay for AAS (Australia Award Scholarship) Master Degree in TESOL
3 - Hi @Holt, thank you for the feedback. I apologize since this is my first time using this website so...
Scholarshipd2ny - Jan 18, 2017 / d2ny - Jan 19, 2017
|I am applying for a scholarship that will allow me to study master's degree
Scholarshipnotmargaux - Jan 19, 2017 / Holt - Jan 19, 2017
|Career Objective for a Scholarship in pursuing Petroleum Engineering
4 - Emmanuel, in order to write this career objective properly, you will need to find a common ground between your...
ScholarshipMinel - Jan 17, 2017 / Holt - Jan 19, 2017
|Home Benefit of Commonwealth Scholarship - Nigeria
7 - That depends. It could be more than a single paragraph depending upon the steps that are necessary to measure...
ScholarshipKnockout - Jan 10, 2017 / Holt - Jan 18, 2017
|Intended Plan of study and the kind of job you plan to seek after return
3 - Knockout, when you write a Study Plan in relation to future job opportunities, you must first consider the national...
ScholarshipKnockout - Jan 17, 2017 / Holt - Jan 18, 2017
|What you see yourself doing 5 years, 10 years after graduation.
2 - Sarah, for starters, you need to indicate the amount of time that it will take for you to achieve...
Scholarshipsarah alqassab - Jan 17, 2017 / Holt - Jan 17, 2017
|'a leader, a go-getter, down-to-earth, opportunist' Letter of Self-Introduction - 2017 KGSP Graduate
2 - Margaux, I suggest that you skip the first paragraph of your current essay and instead, open with the second...
Scholarshipnotmargaux - Jan 15, 2017 / Holt - Jan 15, 2017
|Case Western Alexander A. Treuhaft Memorial Scholarship Essay
3 - Cassie, I am not convinced that your approach to the essay prompt is correct. It appears to me that...
Scholarshipcb8156 - Jan 15, 2017 / Holt - Jan 15, 2017
|Why and what create an NGO and with who I will work
4 - Wissam, before I can help you develop this essay, I first need to know what kind of essay you...
Scholarshipwissou - Jan 15, 2017 / Holt - Jan 15, 2017
|If you are smart, you'll always be humble. NTU scholarship essay
7 - Yee, your anecdote doesn't work well with the essay because there is no clear event that portrays your belief...
Scholarshipellyyee - Jan 14, 2017 / Holt - Jan 15, 2017
|Your course of life, your view of life, study background, your hope & wishes.
12 - Thanks Holt... It is if I applying to embassy. Since my plan is applying to university, I just...
Scholarshipdigaprasiska - Jan 10, 2017 / digaprasiska - Jan 13, 2017
|Motivation letter on Urban Studies - My dream scholarship
2 - Bunheng, you have to remove the aspects of this letter that are better presented as part of your statement...
ScholarshipBunheng - Jan 12, 2017 / Holt - Jan 12, 2017
|The field of Applied Physics with specialization on Plasma Physics. STUDY PLAN for Scholarship
2 - Fauziah, when you write a study plan for your masters degree, you must present a thorough discussion of your...
Scholarshiprahmifzh - Jan 12, 2017 / Holt - Jan 12, 2017
|Bucknell University Scholarship for Creative Writing - Ray Bucknell!
7 - After searching through tons of Bucknellian archives and Linkedin pages, I found references to Fire & Ice dating from...
Scholarshipgaribari - Jan 7, 2017 / garibari - Jan 12, 2017
|UNC supplement essays, University of North Carolina - something inspiring
4 - Jiang, by definition, an elder is described as any of the following persons: 1. a person of greater age...
ScholarshipBennyoooo - Jan 10, 2017 / Holt - Jan 11, 2017
|What do you plan to do after completing your master's degree in Sweden?
3 - @Holt Thank you very much Mary. I am really grateful to received valuable comments for my essay. I will...
ScholarshipStreetwalker - Jan 10, 2017 / Streetwalker - Jan 11, 2017
|Describe leadership experience in 250 characters including spaces
6 - @digaprasiska Thank you for your feed back. I will look at yours and hopefully can give you some insights...
ScholarshipStreetwalker - Jan 9, 2017 / Streetwalker - Jan 10, 2017
|McGill: A Contemporary Figure and how does he inspire me
2 - Alex, point of warning about the title of your essay. You can't use the prompt requirement and the name...
Scholarshipalexgzm - Jan 10, 2017 / Holt - Jan 10, 2017
|'the idea of being a doctor has developed in my mind' I am writing an essay for APIASF scholarship
Scholarshipvynguyen050499 - Jan 9, 2017 / vynguyen050499 - Jan 10, 2017
|The vital role of aid assistance. Draft essay for an Australian Award Scholarship
ScholarshipChanbona - Dec 31, 2016 / Chanbona - Jan 8, 2017
|Epog program; I understand the need of education in reaching my ultimate goals
ScholarshipDinaDG - Jan 5, 2017 / DinaDG - Jan 7, 2017
|Watching the world through the lens of mathematics. SOP for EM Scholarship for MSc Mathematics.
3 - @Holt Sir, thank you for such a detailed response. All your suggestions are making so much sense. You have...
ScholarshipRa22aq - Jan 7, 2017 / Ra22aq - Jan 7, 2017
|My friend is always the one who gives big impact to my life. (NTU scholarship application)
4 - Tennor, refocus the content of your essay discussion. Rather than presenting your friend in this stand alone manner, discuss...
ScholarshipTennor - Jan 6, 2017 / Holt - Jan 6, 2017
|I feel pride in the fact that my job is to save the planet earth
3 - Saim since you completed a degree in Business Administration, there is no clear connection between the environmental studies that...
Scholarshipsaim - Jan 3, 2017 / Holt - Jan 4, 2017
|The link between my desire for contributions and my current career
4 - A creative title would be something along the lines of "I'm a Philanthropic Accountant" or "I'm an Accountant, What...
Scholarshipblueknightiris - Jan 3, 2017 / Holt - Jan 3, 2017
|"I have to go for it" - Letter of Self-Introduction KGSP - Masters Degree in Korea
3 - Ingrid, in order to create a proper letter of introduction for such a specific scholarship grant, you will need...
Scholarshipingrid_os - Jan 3, 2017 / Holt - Jan 3, 2017
|Indian and US lifestyles - there's a huge difference, but I'm ready and well prepared for it
3 - Sahana, remove the quote from Maya Angelou. I do not care who you are quoting and how relevant you...
Scholarshipsana77 - Jan 1, 2017 / Holt - Jan 1, 2017
|Academic excellence and character. Recommendation for a student to get Erasmus Mundus Scholarship.
3 - Noman, you can skip paragraph 4 of this letter of recommendation. It doesn't really serve a purpose in the...
ScholarshipHthmn - Dec 31, 2016 / Holt - Jan 1, 2017
|Great motivational principle from my father. Global Undergraduate Exchange Program 2017
2 - You have presented excellent starting points for discussions regarding your ability to become a great participant in the program....
Scholarshipkhaledmohamed - Dec 31, 2016 / Holt - Jan 1, 2017
|Lehigh university - My dream school and the best choice possible
5 - It is understood that with 145 characters you used to describe the visit should be enough to entice the...
ScholarshipOsiremiza99 - Dec 30, 2016 / Holt - Jan 1, 2017
|The greatest leader is not necessarily the one who does the greatest things - Ronald Regan
3 - Mahmmoud, your essay needs to be better focused, not on your understanding and interpretation of the words of the...
Scholarshipmahmoud18 - Dec 30, 2016 / Holt - Jan 1, 2017
|UGRAD Program will be a great chance for me to show up with new ideas and new thoughts
3 - Fatima, either you have not fully developed your essay paragraphs or you have not written the essay properly. All...
Scholarshipfatymzahra - Dec 30, 2016 / Holt - Dec 31, 2016
|Leader is the one that gets the people to do the greatest things
2 - ..., to set direction, to build an inspiring vision , andto create something new.Leadership is about mapping out where...
ScholarshipRedinkton - Dec 29, 2016 / gmuturi - Dec 29, 2016
|The earth is being harmed by human activity or human activity makes the earth a better place to live
2 - Hi, Perhaps you want to say "Deforestation is the biggest problem on earth"? But why there are two biggest...
Scholarshipnikatop1 - Dec 28, 2016 / lee144 - Dec 28, 2016
|I want to show my values and make my essay better! [Global UGRAD Program]
Scholarshipngolehuyhien - Dec 28, 2016 / Holt - Dec 28, 2016
|My dream of Logistics. I want to contribute back to my country Vietnam as well as the US society.
2 - Lana, the main problem of your essay is that you wrote it in the method of a college application...
Scholarshiplana1413 - Dec 28, 2016 / Holt - Dec 28, 2016
|I am much confident about my capacity and ability to develop the community and bring a good change
11 - Finally feeling peace at least...I thought you might become angry and will say " you came up with the...
ScholarshipShamsher sing - Dec 27, 2016 / Shamsher sing - Dec 27, 2016
|Solving problems by using the same kind of thinking we used when we created them
2 - Elinka, the main problem with your motivation letter is that you do not have a clear presentation of the...
Scholarshipelinka - Dec 27, 2016 / Holt - Dec 27, 2016
|It's the best choice I've ever made. What benefits would a UWC Education offer you ?
4 - Kirti, you do not really reflect a specific method by which studying at UWC can offer you any benefits....
ScholarshipVKirti - Dec 27, 2016 / Holt - Dec 27, 2016
|My dream and greatest opportunity - being a good candidate for UGRAD
Scholarshipmindmnd - Dec 26, 2016 / Holt - Dec 26, 2016
|A genuine leader is not a searcher for consensus but a molder of consensus. Giving back to community
4 - @alexgzm thank you so much for correcting grammar for me @Holt thank you! your advice helps me a lot...
Scholarshipmindmnd - Dec 25, 2016 / mindmnd - Dec 26, 2016
|Time-management skills and love for sharing things - Global UGRAD Program? (400-600 words)
3 - @Holt Thank you very much. I'd really appreciated about your ideas helping my essay be better. I'll review and...
Scholarshiptranguyen2105 - Dec 25, 2016 / tranguyen2105 - Dec 26, 2016
|The perfect spot - Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program?
2 - Hyunh, do not ever cross over the line by telling the reviewer that you are a perfect candidate for...
Scholarshiphuynhgialong1302 - Dec 25, 2016 / Holt - Dec 25, 2016
|Believing in dreams to accomplish great things
2 - Parahat, excellent work on indicating how you will be an asset to the program by showing the kind of...
ScholarshipParahat111 - Dec 24, 2016 / Holt - Dec 24, 2016
|When used properly, technology can absolutely skyrocket the people language acquisition
NEW - Technology contribution to acquisition a new language It expresses why I am so interested to join this program....
Scholarshipadistavolt - Dec 23, 2016 / — -
|My old friend. Reflecting on UWC's mission and values...
2 - Kan, the UWC values are based upon the following: International and intercultural understanding Celebration of difference Personal responsibility...
Scholarshipshotgun - Dec 23, 2016 / Holt - Dec 23, 2016
|Chemical Engineering. Engineers work behind the scenes to improve society's present and future.
2 - Jasmine, This is one tremendously long scholarship essay. As far as I know, most scholarships has a statement prompt...
Scholarshipjhass - Dec 22, 2016 / Holt - Dec 23, 2016
|KGSP Study Plan Part 1: How will I improve my Korean BEFORE and AFTER coming to Korea
Scholarshipthepameffect - Nov 28, 2016 / thepameffect - Dec 19, 2016
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