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|The final input came from my brother-in-law, cardiologist - why did you choose this career?
Scholarshipfuzzy - Mar 7, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 22, 2009
|NUS Scholarship App Essay - Achievements & academic interests
3 - My interests in economics, business and finance have been long standing. Since youth , I have always been particularly...
Scholarshipkids_jessy - Mar 21, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 22, 2009
|Explain why you feel you merit consideration as an applicant for an award or scholarship
Scholarshipmolzeeee - Mar 1, 2009 / sharkbait09 - Mar 17, 2009
|Career Goals Essay for scholarship -- Love of numbers leads to accounting
NEW - I need help with a scholarship essay... I need to know what one thinks of this essay.. What can...
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|Philip A. Hart Scholarship
ScholarshipJohnBabyDoe - Mar 14, 2009 / isgluska - Mar 15, 2009
|'The perfect way of voicing my opinion' scholarship essay (everyone has an opinion)
3 - Thanks so much for the feedback and peer-editing, it really helped, and yep it's for questbridge, so wish me...
Scholarshipmila_girl - Mar 8, 2009 / mila_girl - Mar 13, 2009
|"Education is an admirable thing" - Scholarship Essay
3 - The pain of discipline was tough, at times, but it was more welcoming than the pain of regret I...
Scholarshipsharkbait09 - Mar 12, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2009
|In my own words: Why is a scholarship important to you?
Scholarshipneonnelson - Mar 1, 2009 / neonnelson - Mar 10, 2009
|Scholarship Essays - Volunteer job and Education. (Deadline March 09)
8 - The dream sequence was really very well done -- you should be proud of it. Good job, and good...
Scholarshipkofpower2411 - Mar 7, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 9, 2009
|Scholarship Personal Statement (my dream of becoming a doctor)
9 - Just remember that you need to convey the idea that you desperately need the scholarship while simultaneously showing the...
Scholarshipscholargirl - Feb 11, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 2, 2009
|Scholarship Essay - degree vs a positive contribution to society
Scholarshipscholargirl - Feb 11, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 2, 2009
|Scholarship Essay, a love of writing and education
4 - Your writing involves a high level of diction, which is good, and general grasp of grammar and appropriate academic...
Scholarshipmckyle - Feb 20, 2009 / EF_Sean - Feb 21, 2009
|Scholarship application essay - demonstrating outstanding ability to lead
3 - No, don't trash the first part! But get rid of that weak first sentence. Then, start by telling: ...
Scholarshipsweethypnotic - Feb 8, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Feb 9, 2009
|Scholarship essay, person I admire (my dead Uncle)
6 - Ha ha, I was going to say that is a cool idea, because the most influential person could indeed...
Scholarshipsuehatesyou - Feb 6, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Feb 8, 2009
|Short write-up on internship application Qn
Scholarshipultraman365 - Feb 2, 2009 / EF_Sean - Feb 5, 2009
|Scholarship Essay: education and experience at OIT and my goals.
3 - You have a fairly strong first draft here. Revising for conciseness is always a good idea. Of course, that...
ScholarshipJay - Feb 1, 2009 / EF_Sean - Feb 2, 2009
|'calculus and statistics analysis' - Scholarship essay for Babson College
Scholarshipmingzhuliu - Jan 23, 2009 / mingzhuliu - Jan 25, 2009
|'I listened to the lyrics' - 100th page of my autobiography
8 - this is a really good essay, beautifully written. it gives the reader a good sense of who you are....
Scholarshippiggytails626 - Dec 30, 2008 / jh3492 - Jan 3, 2009
|"Dream specialist" - Scholarship essay, experience at OIT
Scholarshipamaranta - Dec 28, 2008 / amaranta - Dec 29, 2008
|I've been constantly instilled the idea that one should make use of what he/she has learned.
5 - Well, for the first one: "Chinese education is wrongly viewed as consisting mostly of theoretical, rather than practical instructions"...
Scholarshiprayc0702 - Dec 21, 2008 / EF_Sean - Dec 22, 2008
|Need explanation on a scholarship question?
Scholarship4ever2bleed - Dec 19, 2008 / 4ever2bleed - Dec 20, 2008
|HEOP ESSAY SCHOLARSHIP
6 - you can make it flow better by reading your essay out loud to yourself...it removes any awkwardness and make...
Scholarshipfelixs07 - Dec 11, 2008 / fastracker91 - Dec 15, 2008
|I hope I could help the poor in Indonesia - Singapore Scholarship
4 - I always think that my parents are huge contributors to my environment and that they play a meaningful role...
Scholarshipangann29 - Dec 12, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 13, 2008
|'economics and business complete' - Jp Morgan scholarship essay
Scholarshipmetsfan2044 - Dec 10, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 11, 2008
|Major in either psychology or Pre-Medicine; VCU Scholarship- educational goals
2 - My primary educational goal is to exceed standards while majoring in ... I currently study Psychology in high...
Scholarshiplasershot91 - Dec 7, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 7, 2008
|Extracurricular Activity Essay for CommApp- Scholars' Bowl
2 - "Let's get this question", I thought. My team's stoic attitude was immediately replaced by pure exultation, and I...
Scholarshippartooz - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
|"VCU scholarship essay" - Compose Page 87 of your autobiography
Scholarshipskaterkane - Nov 22, 2008 / skaterkane - Nov 29, 2008
|How Will This Scholarship Help Me Attain My Career Goal essay.
2 - Good evening :) Mechanically, make sure you are only capitalizing proper nouns and the first words of sentences;...
ScholarshipBenunu - Nov 25, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
|Important activity+motivation for making application-UT Honors Short Essays
NEW - I have two essays that I have completed and I want to make sure each are grammatically correct and...
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|The National Merit Scholarship Essay - UF Essay Help
7 - Congratulations on National Merit. Oddly enough, I just applied to National Merit and I'm writing my UF letter...
ScholarshipAlbo - Oct 12, 2008 / Liist - Oct 14, 2008
|Essay for scholarship - Master of Architecture in Deakin University in Australia
6 - I have one more question. I need some kind of heading. What do you think about: "My motivation...
Scholarshipsabrina - Sep 20, 2008 / sabrina - Sep 25, 2008
|Essay for fulbright scholarship in computer science
2 - Great job! A few subject/verb confusions, but other than that you've got a pretty good draft. Your content is...
Scholarshipdjellel - Aug 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
|Application - why you think you should get a textbook scholarship
2 - Excellent work; I almost found myself applauding at your conclusion! Just a few mechanical errors, but I think you've...
Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - Jun 27, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 27, 2008
|ESSAY ON PARTIAL SCHOLARSHIP TO STUDY PUBLIC HEALTH
3 - Thank you so much for a great job done.Ma I have made necessary adjustment but I need to edit...
Scholarshipajayemisi - May 2, 2008 / ajayemisi - May 3, 2008
|Arts Administration Internship Essay
Scholarshipalic - Apr 28, 2008 / alic - Apr 28, 2008
|Pencil and Paper - Scholarship Essay
ScholarshipPheonix - Apr 20, 2008 / Pheonix - Apr 21, 2008
|unique learning experience/ independence; What this scholarship would give me?
4 - Greetings! I think you've improved it! Here are some more editing tips: Receiving a scholarship would give...
Scholarshipxdarkr0se - Mar 24, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 26, 2008
|'a job as a construction manager' - career goal essay for scholarships
2 - Greetings! I think you've written a good essay! I made some changes for you; see what you think:...
Scholarshiprneff - Jan 30, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 31, 2008
|Malagasy culture and traditional family - SCHOLARSHIP
Scholarshipstreetracer - Dec 15, 2007 / streetracer - Dec 20, 2007
|Personal Essay for Scholarship... is it too funny?
Scholarshipswimfin - Dec 2, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 3, 2007
|Impact Essay (significant experience, achievement, risk)
2 - Greetings! Annoying? No way! That's why we're here! Your excellent essay needs very little work; just a few...
Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - Sep 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
|Chilean /Steady Grades; Personal life&Aspirations - Biography(SCHOLARSHIP)
2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: "Study my girl, or...
Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - Sep 29, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 30, 2007
|Eligibility, financial need background, community involvement - Scholarship Essay; Graphic Designer
10 - Great! Thanks...
Scholarshipkmendez - Jun 27, 2007 / kmendez - Jul 10, 2007
|SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY ABOUT WHAT I WANT TO DO with MY EDUCATION!
Scholarshipflorezstephanie - Jun 19, 2007 / mikeyearof08 - Jun 27, 2007
|The world will get more riddled with war - scholarship essay
Scholarshipsammie1981 - Apr 2, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 20, 2007
|I am a person with clear goals; MEDICAL SCHOLARSHIP
2 - Greetings! Great essay! I have just a few suggestions: but my dad told me fascinating stories about...
Scholarshipflorezstephanie - Jun 19, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 20, 2007
|the Art Institute of Seattle, Scholarship essay statement?
4 - Greetings! I like what you've added, explaining your skills. One thing I might suggest: I have already...
Scholarshiparacid - Jun 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 10, 2007
|Influx of foreign-born workers are a solution for labor shortage; Scholarship Essay
5 - I am still overlooking my essay, but here's what I have written so far. Could someoen help me edit...
Scholarshipsammie1981 - May 22, 2007 / sammie1981 - May 27, 2007
|AMNH Internship Essay
2 - Greetings! I think you've written a very good essay! There are just a couple of suggestions I would...
Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - May 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 4, 2007
|the most advanced education, Essay for Scholarship!
4 - Greetings! I think you've done a very good job of answering the three questions! It also seems like...
Scholarshiphahieu - Apr 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 14, 2007
|List and describe the 5 factors that shaped who you are
4 - Greetings! What a great essay! I absolutely love your opening paragraph! I have just a few small editing...
Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - Mar 31, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Apr 1, 2007
|"Why furthering your education is important to you" - scholarship
2 - Greetings! You have written a very persuasive essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: "But why...
Scholarshipsunfsh89 - Mar 23, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 23, 2007
|What specific goals do you hope to achieve? - Scholarship Essay
NEW - The question is, What specific goals do you hope to achieve at Western Oregon University to help you succeed...
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|Howard Community College, Essay for scholarship application
Scholarshipryan - Jan 19, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jan 20, 2007
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