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" It is beneficial for teenagers to receive pocket money from their parents". Do you agree?

2 - There are several problems with your opening statement. The first, is that you used a direct cut and paste...

Writing FeedbackHoang Trieu - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
IELTS writing task 2. Should students pay for their colleges' tuition fee, or government?

2 - This is highly non-academic in reference. Avoid using too much everyday English words that are informal in presentation....

Writing Feedbackbaudgy - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
IELTS Task 1: The price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne

2 - Two things are missing from your summary overview. The first is the number of charts. The second, is the...

Writing Feedbacknhidinh1231 - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
IELTS Writing task 2: Children with mobile phone discussion

2 - As a basic rule, you must not begin the discussion of your opinion in the prompt restatement + opinion...

Writing Feedbacksaklovesyao - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - ESSAY ABOUT ECONOMICS

2 - Your summary is well developed. It properly enumerates the markets involved and the trends that the collective comparison...

Writing Feedbackdaiton - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
The tables give information about the temperatures and daylight hours in 4 cities during same week

2 - Make it clear that the measurement was done during the same year for the same last 3 days...

Writing FeedbackZarutopath - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
Taking Initiative - UBC Personal Profile Admissions - What is important to you and why?

2 - There is a problem with your claim. While you did take the initiative to make your voice heard and...

Undergraduatekarenxmx - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
Personal Statement for MSc Finance & Accounting in Westminster

3 - I would suggest adding more achievements and making it a little more formal....

Graduateleesol - Nov 24, 2021Mehul07 - Dec 10, 2021
Large public places and parks are significant for cities' residents

2 - Do not begin the discussion of your opinion in relation to the topic in the prompt restatement + opinion...

Writing FeedbackHarry Yang - Nov 24, 2021Holt - Nov 25, 2021
Tell us about your expectations for the SECCLO programme, career aspirations, relevant experience

3 - @Holt Thanks for the feedback...

Scholarshipiska - Nov 24, 2021iska - Nov 25, 2021
GENERATION GAP IN LIFESTYLES, VIEWPOINTS AND BEHAVIOURS

2 - The question was , "To what extent?" The extent is missing in this response. You should have stated...

Writing Feedbackkirarara - Nov 23, 2021Holt - Nov 24, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Adults and students are working and studying from home

2 - Wrong reasoning. This question tests your knowledge of current events. How you relate the pandemic, Covid - 19,...

Writing Feedbackdanh55162 - Nov 23, 2021Holt - Nov 24, 2021
Should we encourage the youth to engage in unpaid community work?

2 - There is a difference between ordinary community work and free community service. The difference is basesd on remuneration....

Writing Feedbacktenhquameo - Nov 23, 2021Holt - Nov 24, 2021
The chart below show the average proportions of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in meals

2 - We do not rate the essays based on the IELTS considerations for free. For sectional scoring and assessment, you...

Writing Feedbackhana146 - Nov 23, 2021Holt - Nov 28, 2021
Essay about should the goverment funding for school fees

2 - This is a very elementary form of word usage and referencing. This is not the way a college...

Writing FeedbackJean Jatarin - Nov 22, 2021Holt - Nov 23, 2021
GENDER - Writing Task 2 - Several renowned organizations are headed by men

3 - @Holt @Hana146 Thanks for your feedback! This is my first essay IELTS Writing Task 2 and I made a...

Writing Feedbackhunnguyenle - Nov 22, 2021hunnguyenle - Nov 23, 2021
Nowadays people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games

2 - The techonology is not changing, which is the meaning of "alteration". Rather, the techonology is "developing" from the...

Writing Feedbackquynhanh200832 - Nov 22, 2021Holt - Nov 23, 2021
IELTS 1 - Next year developments in an airport are illustrated in the maps provided

2 - Please get out of the compressed idea presentation per sentence mindset. The more information you try to add to...

Writing FeedbackQuang Bao - Nov 22, 2021Holt - Nov 28, 2021
Children's success depends on their parents

2 - To provide a stronger thesis statement. Indicate your agreement with a sense of reasoning. Rather than saying "for...

Writing Feedbacknavy8303 - Nov 22, 2021Holt - Nov 23, 2021
The unlimited possibilities of engineering. Accomplishment that sparked a period of personal growth.

3 - @Holt ok, thank you, i will take a look....

Undergraduatematemrtnez - Nov 21, 2021matemrtnez - Nov 22, 2021
Hungaricum Stipendium Master Scholarships; this writing as a proof of my interest and motivation

3 - I think you should also add why you should be chosen from this scholarship that stands out from the...

Scholarshipsenasena - Nov 21, 2021kenna007 - Nov 22, 2021
The activity of cycling is admittedly no longer popular. How to change this trend?

2 - Good discussion with a few grammar and cohesive discussion problems for you to take note of. The errors stem...

Writing Feedbackthunthun - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
Employers should give longer vacations to employees ( writing task 2)

2 - The prompt restatement + opinion is incorrect. It does not contain the original reference points for the topic basis....

Writing Feedbackirvan - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 28, 2021
Motivation letter for Ph.D. in Max Planck School of Cognition (Cognitive Psychology & Neuroscience)

3 - @Holt Hi, thanks for the review. I'll try to focus on one achievement per paragraph. This is a PhD...

Lettersnie007 - Nov 21, 2021nie007 - Nov 29, 2021
Essays about Causes of stress in modern society and ways to reduce this problem

2 - The essay presentation is actually good, if I were not to consider the scoring requirements of the task 2...

Writing Feedbacknguyenminhhuyen - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
Essay about replacing Art, Sport and Music subjects with subjects such as Information Technology

2 - You are referring to this essay in terms of task 1 wording. This is not good to use...

Writing FeedbackWintermarchen - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 28, 2021
NOWADAYS, SOME PARENTS PUT A LOT OF PRESSURE ON THEIR CHILDREN.

2 - This is not a part of the orginal topic presentation. The writer must keep his opinion to himself...

Writing Feedbackashley_pham - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
A prediction that drivers would be unnecessary in the future due to the development of technology

2 - Wrong word usage. The negative representation of merit is demerit. Contrasting features is not a normal representation for...

Writing FeedbackLamahaf - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
Allowing to visibly carry a gun in public places

2 - Why? The discussion response is complete, but the thesis outline is messing. Clue in the reader as to...

Writing Feedbackdanghaneh - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
All youngsters should do volunteer work in their leisure time to support the community?

2 - This is an incorrect response. The provided discussion instruction pertains to the extent of your (dis) agreement with...

Writing FeedbackMing Fuong - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
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