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|I have a close relation to the Latin word "Mores" - FSU Admission Essay
NEW - In comparison to the motto of Florida State, "Vires, Artes, Mores", I believe I have a close relation to...
Undergraduatejordanelizabeth - Sep 28, 2008 / — -
|Addictive tendencies - family history, culture, or environment
NEW - For UCF. I think it sounds really awkward and I have already had to rewrite it a few times....
UndergraduateKillings - Sep 28, 2008 / — -
|Miami Rowing Club; MY activities
NEW - 154 words, help!! also,***please edit**** A thousand and one doubts floated through my head as I anxiously sat...
Undergraduatealeinad - Sep 28, 2008 / — -
|Cultural diversity is important to our American culture; UofM diversity
NEW - ok, i have most of it written...this stupid liberal diversity essay (sorry if i offend anyone in that). I...
UndergraduateLedPorcupineToo - Sep 28, 2008 / — -
|Intern for Barack Obama's campaign ; EXTRACURRICULAR
UndergraduateDamselfly - Sep 27, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
|Personal Statement- meaningful experience ("Antonio stung my heart")
2 - You've got a unique premis here, but it could use some more personal details from you to really make...
Undergraduate4ever2bleed - Sep 27, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
|"strong morals are necessary in today's society" - FSU Admission Essay
2 - I think you have a great essay here. You explain how this characteristic affects your life and give great...
Undergraduatejkrusemark1 - Sep 27, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
|'multifaceted culture' - Rutgers Undergraduate Admission; a vibrant community
7 - By "showing" you use adjectives, metaphors, and similies frequently but not too frequently in your writing. By being concise,...
Undergraduatekotak07 - Sep 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
|Palm beach County's Zero Tolerance policy - UF essay
Undergraduateredfishh2 - Sep 27, 2008 / — -
|Orlando's beauty/internship and employment opportunities; WHY CHOOSE UCF?
Undergraduateekinkler90 - Sep 27, 2008 / — -
|"Next up, from New Jersey" - do you think I've answered the question?
2 - Good evening. Grammatically and mechanically the essay is clean. If the word count allows, I suggest adding a...
Undergraduateekinkler90 - Sep 26, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 26, 2008
|'pelagic domain' / 'white uniform' / 'Russian math' - 3 UC Essays - Comment
2 - Good evening. In regards to the first essay, I believe your text answers the prompt effectively. You use...
Undergraduatesgrockergirl - Sep 26, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 26, 2008
|the gregarious young man to be - admission essay
UndergraduateJaguarKing100 - Sep 25, 2008 / JaguarKing100 - Sep 26, 2008
|Accomplishment essay (skiing Tiger the most difficult slope @ Boston Mills)
Undergraduatemihirmj - Sep 25, 2008 / — -
|FSU essay---desire to major in pre-law. suggestions for improvement?
3 - thank you thank you thank you!!! i really appreciate your help :) but i do have one more question......
Undergraduateccw_20 - Sep 25, 2008 / ccw_20 - Sep 25, 2008
|Education and my parents - Ucf admissions essay
2 - My parents' influences in my academics is personified through me everyday; however, my loving sisters are responsible for my...
Undergraduatemcsmike - Sep 24, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
|"traditions which I can relate to as a student" - fsu essay
2 - I'm not really sure if your essay answers the prompt. You define tradition very nicely and illustrate examples of...
Undergraduatejaw7000 - Sep 24, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
|Obstacle, family history, uniqueness - UCF essay
NEW - UCF We ask that you respond to two of the topics below. Your personal statement should be no longer...
Undergraduateccw_20 - Sep 25, 2008 / — -
|'Unexciting homework' - Common Application Activity Essay
UndergraduateAndrea09 - Sep 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
|FOGANA, Indian cultural dance competition - common app activities essay
Undergraduatemihirmj - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
|Essay about the cause of me choosing my career path
2 - Good afternoon. The prompt asks for the causes of your choice. Is it just the thought of making...
Undergraduateconchonho - Sep 24, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 24, 2008
|Libraries, the gym, the student union on-campus communities ; WHY UCF?
Undergraduatemegan1407 - Sep 23, 2008 / megan1407 - Sep 24, 2008
|UCF Admissions Essay- how my environment has influenced who i am today.
Undergraduatexomisskirstinox - Sep 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 24, 2008
|UCF Admissions essay - one obstacle I've overcome- NEED to cut A LOT out.
3 - Good morning. "An obstacle that I have overcome in my personal life was the loss of my mom when...
Undergraduatexomisskirstinox - Sep 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 24, 2008
|My life devoted to the art of music - FSU Admissions Essay
Undergraduatebandgeek669 - Sep 21, 2008 / bandgeek669 - Sep 23, 2008
|"The day when I get my report cards" - UCF Admission essay
2 - Watch your tense; you switch back and forth between past and present tense, which creates very disrupted writing which...
UndergraduateShaenat - Sep 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|"mathematics affinity" - FSU essay on values Vires, Artes, Mores
2 - The Florida State University motto "Vires, Artes, Mores," challenges students to have strength, skill, and character. Nice job;...
Undergraduatekm0416 - Sep 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|My parents' divorce; U Florida - MEANINGFUL CHALLENGE
3 - Good afternoon. How will this experience influence the kind of student you will be at UF? The main...
Undergraduatekm0416 - Sep 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|"Skill or craft" ; FSU - "Vires, Artes, Mores"
3 - For several base reasons it is Artes I identify with the most. Artes, by my definition, is reaching a...
Undergraduatesrqking - Sep 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|"My most life-altering experience under my nose" - admission essay "Vires"
NEW - My most life-altering experience occurred right under my nose, as I was making my routine dominations on the soccer...
Undergraduatebhagan11 - Sep 22, 2008 / — -
|'wheelchairs and blankets' - Common application elaboration on one of your activities
Undergraduatecelestialxx - Sep 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|People controlling their lives - UCF admission essay
UndergraduateYellowRoses - Sep 21, 2008 / — -
|Individual background, experiences, identity - UF College Essay Help
UndergraduateAtom - Sep 21, 2008 / — -
|"... everyone was proud to be a Golden Knight" - UCf admissions essay
NEW - Why did you choose to apply to UCF? Every year thousands of students arrive at the same question,...
Undergraduatemcsmike - Sep 21, 2008 / — -
|Shaping our lives - Common App personal Essay
4 - You're welcome. Let's see: I especially enjoy when the children have a show to perform for their...
Undergraduatevid2sean - Sep 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 21, 2008
|Values as components of our lives - Florida State Admissions Essay
Undergraduatesjj315 - Sep 21, 2008 / — -
|Vires is the one that stands out the most; FSU Esssay
NEW - "All of these values are easily reflected in my life, but I feel that that Vires is the one...
Undergraduatecollegeicntwait - Sep 21, 2008 / — -
|'Hard work should pay off' - UF Essay - Meaningful experience
Undergraduateabcspaceships - Sep 21, 2008 / — -
|My parents shaped me into the man I am today; UT (impact/important person)
Undergraduatepthrowed - Sep 20, 2008 / — -
|ART is anything that requires skill, ingenuity,imagination; FSU-Vires, Artes, Mores
Undergraduatebhangra369 - Sep 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 20, 2008
|"The diamond is the hardest gemstone" - admission essay
NEW - I apology for plagiarizing several sentance from other sources. actually I plagiarzed from my gemstone collection book. and I...
UndergraduateKimbab - Sep 19, 2008 / — -
|"A painful truth" - SIGNIFICANT EXPERIENCE
Undergraduatemihirmj - Sep 19, 2008 / — -
|Admission Essay Personal story - being friendless
4 - You're welcome. As long as it's a story that illustrates and answers the prompt, it is a successful...
Undergraduatelaughx3smile - Sep 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 19, 2008
|Concepts that are reflected in your life - FSU Undergrads admission essay "Artes"
2 - "Sitting in the pub within my church, focused on the superintendent announcing a call for a new youth leader,...
Undergraduatejasun17 - Sep 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 19, 2008
|fsu essay, my moral strenght comes from Christ
2 - Good afternoon. Good start. What about Artes? You include it in the philosophies, but you do not talk...
Undergraduatemkm - Sep 18, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 18, 2008
|Marching band; BC Extra curicular activity
NEW - During my years in high school, I have participated in many extracurricular activities. My favorite one has been the...
Undergraduateswooshnic21 - Sep 17, 2008 / — -
|'the touchstone of my life' Essay about a Turning Point
3 - Thank you for editing my essay Gloria. I really appreciate it, especially how fast you replied! Other than...
UndergraduateAdmantina - Sep 17, 2008 / Admantina - Sep 17, 2008
|what unique characteristics help add to the UCF family
Undergraduategiuretig4 - Sep 17, 2008 / — -
|UCF admissions essays, Why did you apply? what characteristics do you have?
3 - In college I think that qualities such as, caring, love, and genuine kindness could go a long way in...
Undergraduatezaz - Aug 19, 2008 / giuretig4 - Sep 17, 2008
|The creation of something original, something to call your own - UF
4 - During the past three years of high school (Remove comma) I put myself through one of the most rigorous...
Undergraduatedman0227 - Sep 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 17, 2008
|A passion for performing in front of people - Personal Statement Essay
NEW - I am writing a personal essay statement and I just wanted someone to read it ad critique it for...
Undergraduateshan00ts - Sep 17, 2008 / — -
|St. Thomas - meaningful contribution you have made
NEW - Prompt: Describe a meaningful contribution you have made through school, church, or community service St. Louis Dream Center...
UndergraduateAndrea09 - Sep 16, 2008 / — -
|'My boyfriend is moving' - UF: experience & affect your college experience
NEW - Little did I know that a "For Sale" sign would test my strength and perseverance. Fettered by youth, doubt,...
Undergraduatedlb1670 - Sep 16, 2008 / — -
|Common Application Essay: Balance
NEW - Here is what I have, any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thank you! I can feel the eyes...
Undergraduatemas61691 - Sep 16, 2008 / — -
|'New York City's China Town' - Vires, Aates, Mores essay...
3 - it should be intellectually in the 2nd sentance instead of physically, and the last sentance in the first paragraph....
Undergraduateswooshnic21 - Sep 14, 2008 / swooshnic21 - Sep 15, 2008
|Driving force in life - FSU undergrad essay
NEW - FSU prompt: Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life...
Undergraduateashcakes - Sep 15, 2008 / — -
|My first summer in high school, camp counselor position - essay
NEW - The auctioneer bellowed out: "Going Once!" I looked at my Dad, he looked at me. The tension was rising!...
Undergraduateraf - Sep 15, 2008 / — -
|Common App Essay: Either obstacle to overcome or Other
Undergraduatewwr - Sep 14, 2008 / wwr - Sep 14, 2008
|'his island of Puerto Rico' - FSU Essae
3 - FSU Essay second draft Growing up in a family with parents who didn't have much formal education, I...
Undergraduateyenesco - Sep 13, 2008 / yenesco - Sep 14, 2008
|'a gymnastics routine' - FSU Admission Essay
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