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Academic Preparation, Open-Ended Response

2 - Greetings! What great essays! I only have a few suggestions: "Taking courses at College of San Mateo...

Undergraduatepadillan94 - Nov 27, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Nov 28, 2006
'a science television show' - University of California Admissions Essay #2

2 - Greetings! Oh, there aren't that many errors! Just a few minor changes and your essay will be ready....

Undergraduateaznshorty1900 - Nov 28, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Nov 28, 2006
Music- Competitiveness, stress, relief, expand wonders- UC / Potential to contribute

2 - Greetings! This is a fine start. I have just a few suggestions: "all my life ever since...

UndergraduateRcrash89 - Nov 26, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Nov 26, 2006
I had come upon a force that I could not understand; Academic Preparation

2 - Greetings! If the question is designed to allow you to tell about events that shaped your academic preparation,...

UndergraduateRcrash89 - Nov 26, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Nov 26, 2006
Interpreter in a Howard County event; ACTIVITY of importance

7 - Thank you! Yes, it helps! I will add this to my paragraph....

Undergraduateyr_0331 - Nov 21, 2006 / yr_0331 - Nov 24, 2006
'A normal person can make a difference' - HARVARD - Diversity & Uniqueness

2 - think your essay does a good job of conveying the type of person you are, and how you have...

Undergraduatetefi - Nov 20, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Nov 21, 2006
'AP biology midterm / Stubborn parents and NYC'(2 essays)

2 - Greetings! You have written a couple of very fine essays! I'm impressed by the quality of your writing....

Undergraduatesneezie - Nov 20, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Nov 20, 2006
Expository Essay question - choosing and re-writing my essay?

16 - Greetings! Yes, I am very impressed with your progress indeed! You have vastly improved the grammar, punctuation, and...

Undergraduateeconsangel - Oct 20, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Nov 6, 2006
How to Revising a Story into an Expository Essay?

4 - Greetings! These are some very good questions. I've never heard of an "implicit thesis statement." While that doesn't...

Undergraduategekokujyou - Nov 4, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Nov 5, 2006
'counting my steps' - OCD paper

NEW - One, two, three, four; one, two, three four; Why can't I stop counting my steps? The "demon" that caused...

Undergraduatearkaudio123 - Nov 3, 2006 / — -
AVIATION ; ACADEMIC INTEREST & CAREER GOALS; BSC

9 - If they don't specify a particular format, I wouldn't worry about it. And yes, as far as abbreviating the...

Undergraduateinck243 - Oct 27, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 31, 2006
'The cynic is one' - UA Essay

5 - Greetings! I have to say, your writing is utterly enjoyable to read! I think BOTH your essays show...

UndergraduateViracocha - Oct 11, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2006
"military analogies" - UC Admissions Essay

4 - Greetings! I might suggest that the first two sentences are a little repetitive -- you use "describe" twice....

UndergraduateArmand - Oct 23, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006
FSU Admission Essay (confidence and leadership)

4 - Greetings! Yes, it is better -- it is very good! (You may have overlooked "aggression" in the last...

UndergraduateConfusedmiamiboy - Oct 17, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 17, 2006
Story telling topic; essay based on an interview with a member of your family

12 - Greetings! Your story is definitely progressing and getting better every time you work on it! First, I'll answer...

Undergraduateeconsangel - Oct 11, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 15, 2006
Paper on an econ. concept that help u understand an issue in ur life

10 - Greetings! You are certainly working hard to improve your writing; that's great! I have to say, I have...

Undergraduateeconsangel - Sep 26, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 3, 2006
English is necessary to everyone; three important essay subjects

3 - THANK YOU!!! I'll apply your suggestions into my essay!...

Undergraduatejanice - Jul 28, 2006 / janice - Jul 29, 2006

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