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|'Orville and Wilbur were brothers' - Scholarship essay.
2 - The b rothers often came with exotic ideas that were considered as frivolity from other penguins. Once, after...
Scholarshipobivan - Jan 14, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 16, 2012
|"Who wants to pray?" - Case Western Schoarship Essay
NEW - Topic: Describe your potential to be a leader. How do you envision yourself making a difference in the world....
Scholarshipemily9587 - Jan 16, 2012 / — -
|'I lived in New Jersey' - important life event
Scholarshipsingh955 - Jan 14, 2012 / gurecka - Jan 14, 2012
|'Music' - Your career path & how its education will improve life in the community
Scholarshipviolingrace - Jan 4, 2012 / gurecka - Jan 13, 2012
|'Studying in the UK offers the chance' - Personal - MSc of Clinical Pharmacology
3 - Thanks a bunch for your feedback jennifer.. I really appreaciate your time to read and fix my grammar issue,...
Scholarshipiepach - Jan 11, 2012 / iepach - Jan 13, 2012
|'Motivating my team to work toward the objective' - Gates Millenium Scholarship
Scholarshipbubbah14 - Jan 9, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 12, 2012
|'to be mentally healthy' - my personal characteristics and accomplishments
6 - You must show more and be more creative. Hope this will help you. You can imagine that you're...
Scholarshipvalsaviera - Jan 7, 2012 / BTDTXXDY - Jan 12, 2012
|'when I listen to the Vietnamese-Americans in my city' APIASF Community's Needs
2 - All of my Vietnamese friends speak Vietnamese with an American accent, and joke about the bad quality of Vietnamese...
Scholarshipmaianh94 - Jan 11, 2012 / EF_Susan - Jan 11, 2012
|'I rarely take notes in class' - GMS Essay - Subject I excel in
Scholarshipgotpho - Jan 11, 2012 / maianh94 - Jan 11, 2012
|'far from traditional road to college' - SOP for Communication Studies Grad Program
2 - I liked how you turned your life around, and I don't seem to find any grammatical errors with this...
Scholarshipcoyote2012 - Jan 11, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 11, 2012
|(Life in Japan / New people / Indonesia / Company / Grades up / Self) for scholarship
Scholarshiphappygirl - Jan 11, 2012 / akari - Jan 11, 2012
|'my visionary mindset' - Cloisters Art Museum Internship
NEW - The summer internship I'm applying for at The Cloisters Museum in NYC (a branch of The Met Museum) involves...
Scholarshipekim226 - Jan 11, 2012 / — -
|'mathematics and science' - GMS Scholarship subjects which one has excelled
7 - You would have been fine! but its okay,there's many other fish for you in the sea. Thanks for your...
Scholarshipmisskkf - Jan 10, 2012 / misskkf - Jan 11, 2012
|'Peer pressure connotation' - ASPIAF Scholarship Personal and Educational Goals
Scholarshipmaianh94 - Jan 10, 2012 / misskkf - Jan 11, 2012
|(Liberal art / China life / a Puzzle cube) - Skidmore essays
3 - Your second essay is a great topic, because diversity certainly influences outlook. But it can be better improved through...
Scholarshipanpan - Jan 10, 2012 / saurabh93 - Jan 10, 2012
|'a middle class Indian family' - Story about my life
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|'Ecuadorian culture' How has your Hispanic heritage influenced your academic goals?
3 - really? I thought writing about the environmental issue in ecuador would demonstrate how my goal to study environmental law...
Scholarshipemptythoughts - Jan 9, 2012 / emptythoughts - Jan 9, 2012
|'sociology degree' - personal statement for US Scholarship
2 - I have faced problems in attaining education that are probably not typical to students pursuing a linear academic path....
ScholarshipUsman Ahamd - Jan 9, 2012 / Essay_Writer - Jan 9, 2012
|"I can do" mindset - I deserve this scholarship ! [Scholaships for Japan intl uni]
5 - "...It's like if I used to eat with an ordinary spoon then someone offered me a silver spoon. Thus,...
Scholarshipciiins - Jan 3, 2012 / ciiins - Jan 9, 2012
|'my enthusiasm for medicine and science' - Application for NIH internship.
ScholarshipPots - Jan 8, 2012 / ericao2010 - Jan 8, 2012
|'interactive clubs at my school' - subjects in which you excel or have excelled
Scholarshipessay1234 - Jan 3, 2012 / essay1234 - Jan 8, 2012
|'money management skills' - on gap in formal education
Scholarshipmorrm23 - Jan 8, 2012 / Essay_Writer - Jan 8, 2012
|'the ending of the month Ramadan' - a leadership experience, how and why? Gates.
3 - Intention of the leader should be sincere, serve the community righteously despite of all hardship . I volunteered...
ScholarshipDesirePerfectio - Jan 8, 2012 / zanzy - Jan 8, 2012
|'new places and new people' - About Self Scholarship Essay
Scholarshipdustygalaxy - Jan 7, 2012 / dustygalaxy - Jan 8, 2012
|'volunteer at Doctors Hospital Nursery Department' - Ron Brown Scholarship
4 - I think you could be more descriptive of the activities you did over the summer. The Baby Department job...
ScholarshipCollegeconfused - Jan 7, 2012 / collyguy - Jan 7, 2012
|'my goal of becoming a doctor' - short and long-term goals. Are some of them related?
3 - Thank you so much! Do you do grammatical editing? If you do I would really appreciate it (:. This...
ScholarshipNana12 - Jan 7, 2012 / Nana12 - Jan 7, 2012
|'Mozart, Schumann, Bach, Chopin' - Gates Scholars Essay
NEW - Discuss the subjects with which you had difficulty. What factors do you believe contributed to your difficulties? How have...
Scholarshipfrazzledbrain - Jan 6, 2012 / — -
|(work=travel / animals / life options) Why is a college education important to you?
2 - I liked intro #1 ... just change up the wording a little bit on the first 3 sentences... combine...
Scholarshipearynnm - Jan 5, 2012 / castro17 - Jan 6, 2012
|'English' - Gates Millennium Scholars Prompt: Subjects You Excel in.
3 - The essay is very well thought out. You shouldn't talk about how you don't like a subject because you...
Scholarshipmayeoli21 - Jan 4, 2012 / earynnm - Jan 5, 2012
|'I asked my mother about my father' - experience that affected you -SCSU scholarship
ScholarshipRAN13 - Jan 5, 2012 / RAN13 - Jan 5, 2012
|Education and career plans - Starting an essay of 300 words for a scholarship
6 - They also asked to describe my personal characteristics and achievements, here is a test and look forward to your...
Scholarshipvalsaviera - Jan 4, 2012 / valsaviera - Jan 5, 2012
|'Chemistry' - Essay on achievement of which you are proud (ISU)
3 - I thought you talked about the experience too much instead of about yourself. For example, you talked about what...
ScholarshipSydney23 - Jan 2, 2012 / chowkiepowder - Jan 4, 2012
|'human right law' - Open Society Foundation Scholarship
Scholarshipapidjakfar - Dec 22, 2011 / apidjakfar - Jan 3, 2012
|USEFP essays - how to start? (interest / objectives / goals / reasons)
2 - First you want to pick a topic that you feel strongly about. That always makes your writing better. Make...
Scholarshiptaimoor47 - Jan 2, 2012 / Pottergirl19 - Jan 2, 2012
|More Pain Mightier Gain .. ! (NTU Scholarship Essay)
Scholarshipabhi12ravi - Jan 2, 2012 / avantika joshi - Jan 2, 2012
|'geometric settings' - fulbright resarch essay
2 - This is an extremely long sentence. You should work on its structure a bit. And you don't "confront with"...
Scholarshipsrks - Dec 30, 2011 / AbsoluteBliss - Dec 30, 2011
|Hispanic Scholarship Fund extracurricular activity essay: Giving back to the HYI
7 - Also do not use contractions, those really hurt your essay. Furthermore, like the previous have already stated, talk a...
ScholarshipTheN3094 - Dec 29, 2011 / Chopeful - Dec 29, 2011
|Goal in life/medicine scholarship essay
ScholarshipRyanVi16 - Dec 28, 2011 / desertautumn - Dec 29, 2011
|(involvment and contributions to your community) BILL GATES MILLENIUM SCHOLARSHIP
5 - very good and unique, I haven't read any quite like it. Despite some comma errors, the topic was very...
Scholarshipsoufianelaouad - Dec 28, 2011 / ashatan - Dec 28, 2011
|'raised speaking english and spanish' Discuss the subjects in which you have excelled
Scholarshipcbrizuel - Dec 28, 2011 / Prettywings - Dec 28, 2011
|"Live" - An Essay for a Scholarship demonstrating financial need and leadership.
2 - Overall I think it is a good essay but maybe include how your fathers wrath made you feel. The...
ScholarshipWhatsthatjacket - Dec 27, 2011 / Rene00 - Dec 27, 2011
|'Before I came to America..' - the need and how to contribute to living environment
5 - You really need to go over your grammar because you still need to express your story while also proving...
Scholarshipsantoryuu - Dec 25, 2011 / blynnleon - Dec 27, 2011
|Essay about the importance of completion post secondary program
Scholarshipsantoryuu - Dec 27, 2011 / SeniorMel - Dec 27, 2011
|My continuing struggles and achievements as an Artist and College student - Essay
2 - Your responses really answer the scholarship questions. Your troubles and personality comes through....
Scholarshipkmurray1 - Dec 27, 2011 / SeniorMel - Dec 27, 2011
|ESSAY on Entrepreneurial Leadership Discovery Program
ScholarshipRamy_elking - Dec 27, 2011 / EF_Susan - Dec 27, 2011
|UNCF Scholarship : an internship with United Water
3 - Honestly, I got bored rather quickly and didn't finish reading it. It didn't really grab my attention....
Scholarshipdeleakinola50 - Dec 25, 2011 / karissa_a16 - Dec 26, 2011
|'different answers to the career interest' - Why Swarthmore essay
Scholarshipwatermark - Dec 23, 2011 / watermark - Dec 26, 2011
|'I admire the educational opportunity' - APISAF scholarship
ScholarshipTanjina93 - Dec 25, 2011 / Tanjina93 - Dec 26, 2011
|'A Beneficial Opportunity' - Housing scholarship
Scholarshiplittleone - Dec 23, 2011 / littleone - Dec 24, 2011
|Bigger car engines? Nah, how about water engines? Cornell Essay!
3 - I love the essay. You are also brief and direct to the point and answering the questions as asked....
Scholarshiptehfunkicookie - Dec 23, 2011 / watermark - Dec 24, 2011
|'a hardworking and passionate person' - Why I Deserve This Scholarship
Scholarshipmshalom55 - Dec 11, 2011 / apidjakfar - Dec 22, 2011
|'a forensic field, or something similar' - NSF - My Education and Career Goals
Scholarshipsmtz88 - Dec 18, 2011 / smtz88 - Dec 20, 2011
|Odenza Marketing Scholarship: choose a city that is ideal for your prospective career
NEW - Can anyone help me with this essay, it must be under 500 words, have proper citations (endnote, footnote, or...
Scholarshipdeveonrose - Dec 20, 2011 / — -
|My Life and Math - an essay for Singapore Scholarship
Scholarshipvinskatan - Dec 19, 2011 / vinskatan - Dec 19, 2011
|'I Want to be a Nurse' - fleshing my essay out
Scholarshipmorrowramon - Dec 16, 2011 / sohaibsiddiqui - Dec 16, 2011
|'I studied Economics-Accounting' - statement of purpose for scholarship
3 - hey laalinibhogadi! thans for ur advise...yea, i guess i need to put more details about what i do in...
Scholarshipimeldamf - Dec 16, 2011 / imeldamf - Dec 16, 2011
|'unique Puerto Rican heritage' - Hispanic heritage influenced your goals?
Scholarshipemanic - Dec 14, 2011 / Daybreak - Dec 14, 2011
|'Medical health care' - GMS Question #4 Essay
3 - Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep working it, though I thought I expressed my reasons clearly via the first...
Scholarshiplhuynh94 - Dec 14, 2011 / lhuynh94 - Dec 14, 2011
|'if you expect to fulfill your professional goals..' - Purdue Scholarship
3 - Thank you very much those little grammar problems always pass by me when I'm reading it. Thanks again...
ScholarshipKallefwich - Dec 11, 2011 / Kallefwich - Dec 14, 2011
|'not content with what I have achieved' - Leadership GMS Question #5 Essay
NEW - Discuss a leadership experience you have had in any area of your life - school, work, athletics, family, church,...
Scholarshiplhuynh94 - Dec 13, 2011 / — -
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