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|"No culture can live if it attempts to be exclusive" - Scholarship/ Int Diversity
ScholarshipnicktheB - May 26, 2013 / — -
|What constitutes a challenge?; The James Rhio O'Connor Scholarship
2 - This was a very good essay, but I think you need to answer the question "What constitutes a challenge?",...
Scholarshipjosepz - May 18, 2013 / Didgeridoo - May 25, 2013
|"Practice makes perfect"; Academic achievements,merits, become ambassador,plans after
2 - I think these answers are pretty solid. For #2, just make sure that you've covered all of the...
Scholarshipmazumazu - May 19, 2013 / Didgeridoo - May 25, 2013
|Courage to Grow. The Essay wants to know why i deserve the scholarship. Max 250 words
5 - This is a good start, but there are some things that need more explanation, as well as some things...
Scholarshipkingandre17 - May 23, 2013 / Didgeridoo - May 25, 2013
|I lived a dream of studying abroad;Why you need funds?Why you want this scholarship?
Scholarshipnguyenhuong92 - May 23, 2013 / dumi - May 23, 2013
|COMMONWEALTH SCHOLARSHIP PLAN OF STUDY
NEW - Kindly read my plan of study below for Community Development and assist. Describe (in no more than 200...
Scholarshipmisswin - May 21, 2013 / — -
|MEXT Japanese scholarships 2014 / Need Ideas
2 - In my opinion, an introduction is a way of grabbing reader's attention. But make sure its not too long....
Scholarshipyoussefhassab - May 15, 2013 / Sapodils - May 20, 2013
|I want to serve all Colombians outside the country; Future prof goals/Scolarship
Scholarshipluisis129 - May 14, 2013 / luisis129 - May 18, 2013
|Research experience/Financial constraints/Modernizing industries; SCHOLARSHIP
NEW - Please demonstrate any notable academic success or other significant personal achievements. Undoubtedly, one of my major scientific achievements has...
ScholarshipPahlevanNTN - May 18, 2013 / — -
|Starting your own business is not easy;RMIT Vietnam University - Bachelor of Commerce
5 - Thank you. That is all mistakes of the first paragraph, right? What about the others? Do you think it...
Scholarshipblack_white2706 - May 14, 2013 / black_white2706 - May 14, 2013
|College experience made me open-minded & out of the box thinker; Scholarship App
Scholarshipmaneyes - Apr 28, 2013 / maneyes - May 7, 2013
|ASEAN YOUTH EXCHANGE PROGRAM-Why are you interested in participating?
7 - ... Last but not the least, I love to experience the beautiful Myanmar, a country with a rich...
ScholarshipShwe Sin - Apr 24, 2013 / dumi - May 6, 2013
|How to express financial need? - a scholarship essay.
12 - Hai ! Please read the below links... wikihow/Write-a-Letter-Asking-for-Scholarship-Money youthempowerment/HowTo.aspx Please read some samples and you will...
ScholarshipErique - Nov 18, 2011 / isai - May 3, 2013
|My dream is to work with and take care of people; Nursing career/ Scholarship.
4 - .... Towards the end and From the beginning :) From the beginning of my high school career, I...
ScholarshipBearcat2017 - Apr 27, 2013 / dumi - May 1, 2013
|Aerospace engineering is the field that most piques my interest; Sandisk Scholarship
Scholarshipbandara - Apr 27, 2013 / dumi - Apr 30, 2013
|I have shown consistent performance;Cardiff International Scholarship Application Q&A
3 - Thanks for the response. I was wondering if you would want to tone down the answers a bit.? I...
Scholarshipvishnu21 - Apr 28, 2013 / vishnu21 - Apr 30, 2013
|Ausaid scholarship for Master in Professional Accounting
6 - Well... I don't have such samples. But you can certainly find similar essays if you google or even...
Scholarshipchurkut - Apr 8, 2013 / dumi - Apr 26, 2013
|The dream of most students; Scholarship essay
4 - Obtaining a scholarship is a dream of many students, especially the ones who live in developing countries like...
Scholarshipmuizzkhan - Apr 22, 2013 / dumi - Apr 25, 2013
|I'm from Baluchistan; my autobiography/ SCHOLARSHIP to study in America
3 - I am Javed Ahmed Khan from Pishin, a district of Baluchistan, which is far from an economically developed...
Scholarshipjaved kakar - Apr 19, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|Adapting to High School, becoming well-rounded. --Lehigh Appeal.
3 - Nice approach and it's very well presented.... Why don't you name the students as X and Y instead of...
Scholarshippetemess95 - Apr 18, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|Scholarships for Indian High School Students
2 - .... the phrase "Native American students" is getting repeated too soon. Specific grants and scholarships are available for...
ScholarshipCalvinBrave - Apr 23, 2013 / dumi - Apr 24, 2013
|Scholarship Essay, what makes me right.
Scholarshipmanjot - Apr 20, 2013 / manjot - Apr 23, 2013
|"Why I want to be an International Affairs major" CHCI Scholarship Essay
3 - ... you need that punctuation (comma) . Recently, one Hispanic organization of which I am a member, hosted...
Scholarshiprubirodriguez - Apr 14, 2013 / dumi - Apr 18, 2013
|I have a plan to major in advertising or journalism; Scholarship/ Personal Statement
ScholarshipRAYE - Apr 16, 2013 / dumi - Apr 18, 2013
|I have financial constraints for pursuing a tertiary education; SCHOLARSHIP/ Reasons
Scholarshipchibi sakura - Apr 9, 2013 / chibi sakura - Apr 18, 2013
|More than one career choice/ Social worker+My own business; Career Goals(SCHOLARSHIP)
ScholarshipKweenKween - Apr 17, 2013 / KweenKween - Apr 17, 2013
|Mind/body medicine; What are your educational goals? / Goddard College
Scholarshipcblove9632 - Apr 11, 2013 / dumi - Apr 16, 2013
|Questions about writing a scholarship essay
7 - Scholarship Essay Hi everyone. I would like to know something about writing a scholarship essays.I am writing a...
Scholarshipkusanagi1981 - Apr 24, 2012 / kusanagi1981 - Apr 16, 2013
|Plan to encourage students to pursue a higher education degree; SCHOLARSHIP
2 - ... I think it's better you qualify the students who are eligible for pursuing a degree because not...
Scholarshiptakea - Apr 16, 2013 / dumi - Apr 16, 2013
|I want to read for a PhD in mechanical engineering; Scholarship/ GOALS
Scholarshipfsolano94 - Apr 14, 2013 / dumi - Apr 15, 2013
|Study abroad is difficult without sufficient funds; Reason applying to scholarship?
2 - .... This sentence is way too long and does not flow well. First organize your ideas and then...
Scholarshipcoka2011 - Apr 15, 2013 / dumi - Apr 15, 2013
|Canada Univeristy Scholarship/ Leadership & Service/ Lesson learned
4 - Thanks Shaddy! Anyone else? Please I would really appreciate more help. Harsh criticisms are welcomed!...
Scholarshipdi10di - Apr 14, 2013 / di10di - Apr 15, 2013
|God has bestowed each of us a skeleton & a limited life;SCHOLARSHIP/ Microbio+Biotech
3 - Dear, dumi [Moderator] Thank you very much for your response. I will incorporate your suggestions in my essay. Regards,...
ScholarshipDastogeer - Apr 9, 2013 / Dastogeer - Apr 13, 2013
|Social Media's Impact: Personally and on the Future Generation. Scholarship Essay.
4 - There are over a billion active users per month on Facebook, the most popular social network in the...
ScholarshipIntelligentS - Apr 5, 2013 / dumi - Apr 11, 2013
|Research on Jacalin plant; Study Objective for Fulbright - Pharmaceutical Sciences
NEW - Hi! this is my essay for applying scholarhip from Fulbright to pursue master degree in the US. Indonesia...
ScholarshipBreezeblocks - Apr 9, 2013 / — -
|Multi-Use Scholarship Essay/ What is important to you and why?
3 - So for the second sentence, I could write "Like many others, I have many interests I love, but I...
Scholarshipryoga - Apr 7, 2013 / ryoga - Apr 8, 2013
|Career goals-short and long term and how will training help me/SCHOLARSHIP
6 - " I was prompted to start inquiring about nutrition and self healing modalities"... this sounds a little robotic and...
Scholarshipcblove9632 - Mar 31, 2013 / biologyloser789 - Apr 8, 2013
|"We know why we're here" ; Goals/ Scholarship
2 - Obtaining excellent academic credentials as well as gaining hands on experience through internships are my current priorities. ...
Scholarshipwethediana - Apr 5, 2013 / dumi - Apr 6, 2013
|"Essence of economic and religious liberties in America" - Scholarship Prompt
4 - ... I wish you changed the presentation; The economic and religious freedom of Americans stems from the the...
Scholarshipeagledrafter - Apr 1, 2013 / dumi - Apr 4, 2013
|HOW THE LSBU VC SCHOLARSHIP WOULD MAKE A DIFFERENCE ON MY FUTURE CAREER
NEW - I am applying for a postgraduate scholarship at the London South Bank University. I am supposed to submit a...
ScholarshipKwame - Apr 4, 2013 / — -
|I know I'm not perfect! ; NTU Scholarship - My Values and Beliefs
2 - Therefore I would love to consult opinion of my elders, friends and seniors who have a better exposure...
ScholarshipVisheshS - Mar 29, 2013 / dumi - Mar 30, 2013
|"Power of Money"; SCHOLARSHIP- Field of Study and what has influenced mydecision
Scholarshipdellday23 - Mar 14, 2013 / temptprovidence - Mar 28, 2013
|If I could trade places with any superhero or villain for a day, who would I choose a
Scholarshipcblove9632 - Mar 24, 2013 / Guest - Mar 28, 2013
|I can do justice to the field ; Why I deserve Zion International Graduate Award
3 - .... I feel this is not so strong as your opening paragraph, especially the ideas... I don't see...
Scholarshipdante - Mar 18, 2013 / dumi - Mar 28, 2013
|I link my career with reservoir Engineering; Scholarship in Petroleum Rng
4 - Wow, that's a lot of editing. I'll focus on a little for now... Such reservoirs are reported to...
ScholarshipDaniyar Doskali - Mar 26, 2013 / chessman567 - Mar 27, 2013
|Questbridge College Prep Scholarship: Violin/Band/Daily commute/safety/drowning
ScholarshipCalabala - Mar 26, 2013 / iluvchocalate13 - Mar 26, 2013
|Quest for Excellence Awards:Science and Technology Award
Scholarshipiluvchocalate13 - Mar 26, 2013 / Calabala - Mar 26, 2013
|My Mom/ Origami/My dad's stroke; Questbridge College Prep Scholarship
5 - Thank you dumi! (: That was really helpful...Thanks to everyone else who commented as well! ^^...
Scholarshipiluvchocalate13 - Mar 24, 2013 / iluvchocalate13 - Mar 26, 2013
|My values and beliefs and how I demonstrate them through my actions
ScholarshipDespereauxdejoe - Mar 26, 2013 / dumi - Mar 26, 2013
|Coffee,the most important commodity in the Cental Highlands; SCHOLARSHIP
Scholarshipchalotte - Mar 12, 2013 / dumi - Mar 25, 2013
|Bodybuilding/ Asthma & Music/ Being a Muslim; Questbridge Prep Scholarship
4 - No problem! And maybe you could include a little of that explanation in your paragraph, just to clarify. But...
Scholarshipnothingto - Mar 25, 2013 / Didgeridoo - Mar 25, 2013
|I still cherish my failures; Singapore Government Scholarship
3 - congragulation because of your excellent essay . i have learned new words and good sentences. please check my essay...
Scholarshipjinified - Mar 24, 2013 / abcdefgh - Mar 24, 2013
|Need your assistance - (reasons for receiving the scholarship)
Scholarshiptabularasa - Apr 20, 2008 / carpenoctem - Mar 23, 2013
|Dreaming to be a successful business manager;Motivation letter- SCHOLARSHIP,Economics
2 - In the letter of Motivation, it is very important to talk about your professional goals; Rather, you need to...
Scholarshipwinner123 - Mar 21, 2013 / dumi - Mar 21, 2013
|resolve challenge of central Highland- SCHOLARSHIP
2 - So, I together with other members in our research team prepared project proposals such as using enzyme...
Scholarshiptranthamha - Mar 21, 2013 / dumi - Mar 21, 2013
|Cacao is the main crop of Central Highlands; Australia Scholarship
3 - .... since you used the word "main", I assume there are paragraphs prior to this one that talk...
Scholarshiptranthamha - Mar 20, 2013 / dumi - Mar 21, 2013
|The motivation to continuously study food biotechnology ; Why study in Australia?
Scholarshiptran ha - Feb 25, 2013 / tranthamha - Mar 21, 2013
|I'm a 4th year student in Microbiology; Motivational letter for phd scholarship
Scholarshippopydevnath - Mar 15, 2013 / popydevnath - Mar 17, 2013
|Questbridge Prep Scholarship - Short Answers
2 - .... there's something awkward about that part. This is my suggetion; For me, bodybuilding has very little to...
Scholarshipnothingto - Mar 16, 2013 / dumi - Mar 17, 2013
|Extensive field experience/Starting my own software company; Fellowship/Scholarship
Scholarshipeliaspirayesh - Mar 11, 2013 / dumi - Mar 16, 2013
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